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Posted 2/16/08
If Love was
Meant to last
If friendship
Was meant to be
Why do all those things
Break
So easy
Can I belive
That our friendship
Will last
You are my friend
You have been so long
But
I see a gape
Between us
And its growing
I see it, I understand it
We are so different
I knew from the start
That it would
Happen at last
But Im scared
I don’t want it to happen
Sinc it have lasted so long
I feel the cold darkness
Press me down

If I could
I would go back in time
And stop us
From getting
Different
Make us alike
So our bond would hold
But…
Who shall I change
Me
Or you
If I change me
To more like you
Then I would not
Be me
And
If I change you
To more like me
Then you would not
Be you

It would
Not be right
To change
Me or you
If I did
We would lose the
Real us

So I will just
Wait and see
The gape grow
I cant really stop it
I know
That this is life
But I hope
Our friendship will live
In our hearts
As
Happy memoris of me and you

not really a good poem...
another poem from my life
Posted 2/16/08

Yamira wrote:

If Love was
Meant to last
If friendship
Was meant to be
Why do all those things
Break
So easy
Can I belive
That our friendship
Will last
You are my friend
You have been so long
But
I see a gape
Between us
And its growing
I see it, I understand it
We are so different
I knew from the start
That it would
Happen at last
But Im scared
I don’t want it to happen
Sinc it have lasted so long
I feel the cold darkness
Press me down

If I could
I would go back in time
And stop us
From getting
Different
Make us alike
So our bond would hold
But…
Who shall I change
Me
Or you
If I change me
To more like you
Then I would not
Be me
And
If I change you
To more like me
Then you would not
Be you

It would
Not be right
To change
Me or you
If I did
We would lose the
Real us

So I will just
Wait and see
The gape grow
I cant really stop it
I know
That this is life
But I hope
Our friendship will live
In our hearts
As
Happy memoris of me and you

not really a good poem...
another poem from my life


I think it's really good it's cute and kinda sad...me and my friend drifted apart but at least the memories last X3 so i kinda know wat u mean..great poem!!

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I think it's really good it's cute and kinda sad...me and my friend drifted apart but at least the memories last X3 so i kinda know wat u mean..great poem!!



Thank you ^^
I just found out it was long sinc i writed somthing well I and a friend is drifing a little apart so... yeah you understood the meaning
Posted 2/16/08

Yamira wrote:


I think it's really good it's cute and kinda sad...me and my friend drifted apart but at least the memories last X3 so i kinda know wat u mean..great poem!!



Thank you ^^
I just found out it was long sinc i writed somthing well I and a friend is drifing a little apart so... yeah you understood the meaning


ur welcome =3 i haven't written 4 a while to thats why i updated a couple days ago X3
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Posted 2/18/08
kinda sad but great!! ^^
thnk u 4 make this poem.. ^^
i like it so much!! >.<
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Posted 2/18/08

deborahutomo wrote:

kinda sad but great!! ^^
thnk u 4 make this poem.. ^^
i like it so much!! >.<


Thank you
and your welcome Im glad you liked it
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Posted 2/18/08
This story is sad!!!...wow the friendship!!!...u make a good poem!!!...Sad but awsome!!!...That's why i Congratulate U
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Posted 2/19/08

david_k_belanova wrote:

This story is sad!!!...wow the friendship!!!...u make a good poem!!!...Sad but awsome!!!...That's why i Congratulate U


thank you very much
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Posted 2/20/08
It's a really good poem! ^_^ really sad too,friendship is really...can't really explain it xD' but in a good way ^_^
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Posted 2/20/08

crazyone wrote:

It's a really good poem! ^_^ really sad too,friendship is really...can't really explain it xD' but in a good way ^_^


Thank you very much
yeah friendship is really difficult to explain
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