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Posted 9/14/17 , edited 1/21/18
Let your Inner Poet Be Free

I Have seen a lot of forums on the Creative corner, that are directed towards Rap songs, Art Work, Stories, Manga creations. Things like that, but have noticed that not many poetry forums exist.
On this forum, I want you too show off your poetic skills, from Haikus too Free verse too etc.


Here an Example of a poem I wrote this year.

(It has No Title for it yet)

Wicked desires sing to my soul.
Lustful thoughts rip my sanity whole.
Poison pierced my fragile heart.
Staining it dark, as if its a work of art.
Nightmares fill my every dreams.
Filling the night with wretched screams.
Demons dance with wicked laughs.
Soon to be erased into nothing more, than a photograph.


Thank for reading.

A random creepy edit I did, converted into black and white (Monochrome). (In Spoiler)
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Posted 9/14/17
Isnt rap poetry? I myself dont care for traditional poetry but i like rap i guess. I'm musically illeterate.

I clicked on the spoiler because i like pictures and it made me think of creepy pasta videos and their thumbnails.
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Posted 9/15/17 , edited 9/15/17

tipsypaipai wrote:

Isnt rap poetry? I myself dont care for traditional poetry but i like rap i guess. I'm musically illeterate.

I clicked on the spoiler because i like pictures and it made me think of creepy pasta videos and their thumbnails.



Rap is indeed a form of poetry, but I want this to be a thread where you can post any type of poetry rap included, I see a lot of forums on " I wrote a rap song". So I want on this forum for people to post any forum of poetry that they want too and to express themselves. My apologies if I confused you a bit.
Ps. I'm glad you enjoy my edit.
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Posted 9/15/17
What's up chick, damn you thick, wanna hit your walls, shit (ayy)
But wait a sec, let me check, if ya a pain in the neck (ayy)
Don't wanna hit you up, if you ain't a grown up, ya think I'm thirsty as fuck, then shit... you fucked up
What up g? Can't you see? gotta earn this fucking d if ya wanna get down wit me (God damn)
Say you got a killa pussy but I'm not impressed
Ya hear me out and say I'm an asshole but I'm not stressed
All I really want is a girl that's alive
A qt that goes deep when they dive
All I really want is to hit it from the back, give that ass a smack, make those cheeks go "clap" (ayy)

UwU
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Posted 9/15/17

Potentsaliva wrote:

What's up chick, damn you thick, wanna hit your walls, shit (ayy)
But wait a sec, let me check, if ya a pain in the neck (ayy)
Don't wanna hit you up, if you ain't a grown up, ya think I'm thirsty as fuck, then shit... you fucked up
What up g? Can't you see? gotta earn this fucking d if ya wanna get down wit me (God damn)
Say you got a killa pussy but I'm not impressed
Ya hear me out and say I'm an asshole but I'm not stressed
All I really want is a girl that's alive
A qt that goes deep when they dive
All I really want is to hit it from the back, give that ass a smack, make those cheeks go "clap" (ayy)

UwU


Oh my lord Potentsaliva, that was too adorable, has a bit of a sexual vibe too it and basically says that the intentions are "Hey I'm lonely I need a girl to basically punish me and make me feel alive", or well that how I saw it as, sorry if that came across as rude, however good job and keep up the good work.
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Posted 9/15/17

Skyelocke wrote:


Potentsaliva wrote:

What's up chick, damn you thick, wanna hit your walls, shit (ayy)
But wait a sec, let me check, if ya a pain in the neck (ayy)
Don't wanna hit you up, if you ain't a grown up, ya think I'm thirsty as fuck, then shit... you fucked up
What up g? Can't you see? gotta earn this fucking d if ya wanna get down wit me (God damn)
Say you got a killa pussy but I'm not impressed
Ya hear me out and say I'm an asshole but I'm not stressed
All I really want is a girl that's alive
A qt that goes deep when they dive
All I really want is to hit it from the back, give that ass a smack, make those cheeks go "clap" (ayy)

UwU


Oh my lord Potentsaliva, that was too adorable, has a bit of a sexual vibe too it and basically says that the intentions are "Hey I'm lonely I need a girl to basically punish me and make me feel alive", or well that how I saw it as, sorry if that came across as rude, however good job and keep up the good work.


Nah your fine, tho Idk how you got that message, the overall theme was that I'm horny but I don't wanna get down with a chick who just wants a hook-up/ annoying /dull. That In order to be with me you gotta go beyond just being physically attractive. I want to get down with someone who's more alive as a person, like someone who's living life with passion and is willing to go deep with things.
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Posted 9/15/17

Potentsaliva wrote:


Skyelocke wrote:


Potentsaliva wrote:

What's up chick, damn you thick, wanna hit your walls, shit (ayy)
But wait a sec, let me check, if ya a pain in the neck (ayy)
Don't wanna hit you up, if you ain't a grown up, ya think I'm thirsty as fuck, then shit... you fucked up
What up g? Can't you see? gotta earn this fucking d if ya wanna get down wit me (God damn)
Say you got a killa pussy but I'm not impressed
Ya hear me out and say I'm an asshole but I'm not stressed
All I really want is a girl that's alive
A qt that goes deep when they dive
All I really want is to hit it from the back, give that ass a smack, make those cheeks go "clap" (ayy)

UwU


Oh my lord Potentsaliva, that was too adorable, has a bit of a sexual vibe too it and basically says that the intentions are "Hey I'm lonely I need a girl to basically punish me and make me feel alive", or well that how I saw it as, sorry if that came across as rude, however good job and keep up the good work.


Nah your fine, tho Idk how you got that message, the overall theme was that I'm horny but I don't wanna get down with a chick who just wants a hook-up/ annoying /dull. That In order to be with me you gotta go beyond just being physically attractive. I want to get down with someone who's more alive as a person, like someone who's living life with passion and is willing to go deep with things.


Honestly no clue how I got that impression that just the one it gave me, each person see each thing differently and mine was in that case haha.
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Posted 9/16/17 , edited 9/16/17
This is just one of a few things I wrote when I was in a particularly bad mood. I don't know if it can be called poetry, but I guess I'll post it here regardless. Sorry if I kill the thread, in advance.

Hey, see
Come look at the sky with me
Through windows
This one here
Where sunshine's bright through clouds and the night
How unfortunate, right?
I'll close the other one, it's distracting
I'm aware light blinds as darkness does
I don't need shade to look at you, the way I hoped you'd be
So how does a flower stand in still showers just for me?
I was told I might see no more
"Good."
Now I see through an abstract blindness
I agree.
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Posted 9/16/17


Don't worry you didn't kill it, but the poem was nice it gave off a free-verse vibe anyway, and I can feel the emotions put into it. Keep up the good work, and remember that most poems come from the emotions deep within us anyway.
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Posted 9/18/17
So my man wrote his recent English Essay on me for one of his College classes. So as my thanks, I wrote him a short poem basically telling him thanks.
It has no name, however I do hope you enjoy it.

To the words I can't convey out loud.
I'll write my emotions in the cloud.
For actions can't capture my expression.
Towards the words that left such an impression.
Leaving smiles of joy with stained eyes.
You capture my heart, stealing first prize.
Giving such praise to the words said unspoken
Thank you, for showing such devotion.

- Sincerely, Skye (BB)
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Posted 9/20/17
Wow Skyelocke you have a talent for poetry.
I think poetry is best when using the fewest words with the most meanings.


First day at school I was very nervous
Felt like I didn't belong and had no purpose
As I arrive home I relax after a trip to the circus
On campus tuesday and all I hear is voices
Laughing, screaming, and clawing noises
Finally at home and I can make my own choices
Wednesday swings by so its only halfway through the week
Walking to school alone staring at my reflection in the puddled streets
Always stayed away from trouble at school, but still managed to get my A** beat.
Two more days until I'm free at-last
The worst part of my day is spending all my time in class
Thursday ends so I study for the next test to pass
Fridays here and so comes the final day
Waiting for the bell to ring so I can go home and play
Keeping to myself, but they still try to ruin my day
At last Saturday is here and I get some time to relax
Spent all Sunday watching anime and it was a blast
Again arrives monday time to go to school so they can kick my A**
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Posted 10/3/17
today i found a friend.
yesterday i hurt my friend.
tomorrow i'll pay for what i've done.
but today, i lost my friend.

tomorrow when i die,
tomorrow when the reaper cries.
because today she told me,
it was time to say good bye.

but the reaper was the only one,
to whom i had to say good bye.
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Posted 10/19/17
I guess I'll bump.


A formation, beyond trepidation
Or any anxiety, for it's here
A weight, crushing all that's dear.

Beyond the gulf, o'er grinding plates
About the everblue sea, shore's empty

Why;Me

Eroded afore, and unseen
A stumbling dead; wishing serene
Macerated unsightly, forever ensnared downrightly

I;He

Dread ye, mountain o' despair!
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Posted 11/2/17
winding streets and city lights.
burning days and peaceful nights,
comming sun with suffering and pain,
my only friends are razor blades.
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Posted 11/25/17
Memories

Tall and strong,
Flowers bloom.
Green leaves shrivel,
branches loom above our heads.

Hanging limbs,
Bleeding bark.
Autumn passes,
tree trunks stark against the skyline.

Shining stars,
Chilly air.
Morning breaks,
Wisps of hair move on a gentle breeze.

A loving kiss,
And tender smile.
Memories...
all from while she was still with me.
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