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Posted 12/18/17 , edited 12/18/17
I produced the beat.

Right her G: https://youtu.be/N31a7A86BtE
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Posted 12/18/17 , edited 12/18/17
man not to instantly hate, but I couldn't stand that.

It sounds like the drums weren't even EQ'd to the.. whatever that sub was. The eerie pads took over and not in a good way. There's not a scrap of dynamic range. I'd work a lot more on creating a cohesive instrumental before trying to put lyrics to it.

If I had to judge the lyrics, that'd be far harsher critique.
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Posted 12/18/17 , edited 12/18/17

koakoakoakoakoakoakoakoakoa wrote:

man not to instantly hate, but I couldn't stand that.

It sounds like the drums weren't even EQ'd to the.. whatever that sub was. The eerie pads took over and not in a good way. There's not a scrap of dynamic range. I'd work a lot more on creating a cohesive instrumental before trying to put lyrics to it.

If I had to judge the lyrics, that'd be far harsher critique.


Let me hear yo song
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Posted 12/18/17 , edited 12/18/17
I'm sorry, was this a thread about my songs? Heh heh heh.

https://soundcloud.com/oldoroboro

That is my current project for the season. I'm open to teaching you if you wish.
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koakoakoakoakoakoakoakoakoa wrote:

I'm sorry, was this a thread about my songs? Heh heh heh.

https://soundcloud.com/oldoroboro

That is my current project for the season. I'm open to teaching you if you wish.


U wacker than me
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Here's my project from last season, you might wanna take some lessons on dynamic range from them.

https://soundcloud.com/orobora/travis-cott-biebs-screwed-in-the-trap-s-l-o-w-screw-mix
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Get at me when you have over a handful of views to try and say that I'm "wacker than you",

must be nice, living in that delusional head of yours
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koakoakoakoakoakoakoakoakoa wrote:

Here's my project from last season, you might wanna take some lessons on dynamic range from them.

https://soundcloud.com/orobora/travis-cott-biebs-screwed-in-the-trap-s-l-o-w-screw-mix


sounds like everthang else. ain't nothin special..sound like every other wack song out there
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Posted 12/18/17 , edited 12/18/17
I tried to give you honest advice so that you wouldn't be made fun of. Fix your drum EQ, get some dynamic range up in that bitch, and seriously throw those pads way down in the mix, it might sound good in your setup but soundcheck on at least 3 devices - I thought I might have been too hasty, but after reviewing it on my MBP, my HS80s, and some throwaway iphone buds, the mix just doesn't gel right homie.

It was you who got nasty, after attempting to deflect any criticism with "well what do YOU got?" lmao.

Learn up, G.
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Posted 12/18/17 , edited 12/18/17

koakoakoakoakoakoakoakoakoa wrote:

I tried to give you honest advice so that you wouldn't be made fun of. Fix your drum EQ, get some dynamic range up in that bitch, and seriously throw those pads way down in the mix, it might sound good in your setup but soundcheck on at least 3 devices - I thought I might have been too hasty, but after reviewing it on my MBP, my HS80s, and some throwaway iphone buds, the mix just doesn't gel right homie.

It was you who got nasty, after attempting to deflect any criticism with "well what do YOU got?" lmao.

Learn up, G.


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Posted 12/18/17 , edited 12/18/17
cute defense mechanism
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cute defense mechanism


why u deleting yo comments
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Posted 12/18/17 , edited 12/18/17
making things up now..

bro do you have something you are dealing with? like some issues? Poor fella..
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making things up now..

bro do you have something you are dealing with? like some issues? Poor fella..


ion got time fo u you know i'm right about u deleting yo comments..i'm out G
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Posted 12/18/17 , edited 12/18/17
have a good day stan
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