From Zero To Hero
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Posted 1/31/18 , edited 1/31/18
I posted this on here before but I deleted it. I want someone to read my story and give me feedback,
Also, THE STORY IS A ROUGH DRAFT/UNEDITED!! So, there will be changes later and stuff. Right now, I just want to write and see how far this story can take me. Listen I am not the best writer but I am certainly not the worst either, I want people to read this story and give me feedback in the comment section. Tell me what you think of the story, Be honest and critical because I need to know so when it comes time for me to edit the story I will know what to change and what to leave alone. I am not certain how many chapters I will give this story but it won't be a lot or a little. Please read this story and get back to me on how you feel about it. This is my first time surpassing chapter five and I am very nervous about how it might turn out.


Here is the link:

https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3319998/1/From-Zero-to-Hero


What do you think of it?
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Posted 2/1/18 , edited 2/3/18
I screwed up on chapters six and seven. Just wanted to let you all know that.
My mistake.


I'll fix the chapters later because right now I just want to write and see how far this story takes me.
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