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Posted 2/18/08
i stand here waiting..
waiting to see your smile..
waiting for the day that hen
i smile i feel no pain..
but you never showed..
i stand here about to cry..
feeling this pain..
knowing that you didn't
show..
but somehow you never
seemed to notice the tear
falling down my face..

the next day you wait for me..
but i didn't come...
Posted 2/18/08
it's kinda sad ..but i like it, nice poem
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Posted 2/18/08
wow!!! O.o...that finish was sad!!!...i hope a second part!!!...hahaha...no Nice
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Posted 2/27/08
brarti telepatinya ga bagus donk
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Posted 2/29/08
Wait...I'm a little confused...did someone get the day wrong or something??
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