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Just threw it together for a video I'm making with some friends, and I need some outside opinions.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1roX9qizkGRS_VBRZtWKQoj00BIn-621o/view?usp=sharing
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It isn't public so no one can listen to it.
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Sorry about that. I changed the link, so anybody can listen to it.
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It's good like how it builds, maybe make longer by 30 seconds or so.
Also if its gonna loop maybe make the beginning little louder.
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Thanks for the feedback. I'll make some changes as soon as I can and reupload it to dirve, so you can hear it.
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I'd say that its pretty well written, and the melody is catchy, but it isn't dynamic enough. It feels like an intro more than a full song, because it really only has one part. The building is nice, but it needs a transition to another segment to make it feel full.
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Es bueno como la forma en que se desarrolla, tal vez hacer más de 35 segundos más o menos  !!!
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Thanks for the feedbak everyone. I konw I didn't previously mention this, but this song is intended to be used in a video I'm creating with freinds and it doesn't need to be a full song. I appreciate the feedback, and it has made me think about making it into a full song. Thanks again.
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I think it sounds pretty cool. Very chill
I think you should continue with what you were doing, let that reverb/ambience ring out like 4 times, then come in with your main beat. The song pusher or whatever you'd like to call it
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