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here it the first chapter from my manga Enchantment


*Setting Yura's Dream*
"As I walked down a pitch black hallway I see shattered mirrors on the side of each wall .."
"I reached the end of the hallway and I see a dim light shining and in that light there is a woman with binds around her. This woman hair was midnight blue and her eye were covered by the binds her lips were a deep red like the color of blood and on her left cheek she had a scar shaped like a crescent moon .."

"I approached the woman as I walked closer the feeling of nostalgia came over me, with her eyes bind and hands and feet as well in binds I touched her face she stirred and spoke "

" Free me from these binds and I will show you a beautiful dream with unlimited power."

"I stepped back and I looked closely at her and two pairs of silver and black wings which were incomplete slowly regenarated on her back the choker my mother gave started to slightly burn my neck "

*Wakes up *
Today is the first day of high school I'm a 1st year at Gassan Gakuen, I made on my own for the last three years. My daily routine and living on my own with my pet Sora and having a job my life has been very peaceful but what disturbs is that dream I had last night fragmented mirrors and a dark hallway and that strange woman ...

As I kneel down in front of my mother and father alter , also Shinosuke-nii-sama alter and picture as well I thank them every day for giving me life and right now I am going to live contempt with my dream ..

The crisp fall morning and cool clean air was a given it was going to be a very good day for me . I stopped and inhale the clean air the leaves changed slowly from beautiful dark red to a sunset orange the trees was so lovely in this season .

But someone was much more lovelier then the trees it was the most popular and handsomest guy from our middle school Kenji Shirow, As I stopped and admired him from a distance my heart felt a familiar ache my face began to flush red all od a sudden he stopped and turned around and looked at me as I looked at him it felt that as if time has stopped moving for us at that moment I couldve given anything just to keep him near me, He came closer and spoke

" Good morning Yura- chan how are you today ?" Kenji said
" G..oo..d M..orning " Yura stuttered "I'm fine and how are you this morning Shirow -san ?"
No dont smile dont torture me like that you are so close yet so far away from me, please dont make my heart ache

" I'm fine but a bit nervous on my first day in high school " Kenji says with a chuckle He leans in closer and places a soft small kiss on her forehead .. Yura slowly sinks to the ground on her knees and watches Kenji walks away

Yura face was so hot that the cool fall wind didnt make her budge
"Why did you do that ?, Why did you torture me with such an innocent kiss on my forehead why?" Yura said to herself as the soft fall leaves fell around her ..

Hey guys please tell me what you think about this
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Posted 3/28/08

sama23 wrote:

here it the first chapter from my manga Enchantment


*Setting Yura's Dream*
"As I walked down a pitch black hallway I see shattered mirrors on the side of each wall .."
"I reached the end of the hallway and I see a dim light shining and in that light there is a woman with binds around her. This woman hair was midnight blue and her eye were covered by the binds her lips were a deep red like the color of blood and on her left cheek she had a scar shaped like a crescent moon .."

"I approached the woman as I walked closer the feeling of nostalgia came over me, with her eyes bind and hands and feet as well in binds I touched her face she stirred and spoke "

" Free me from these binds and I will show you a beautiful dream with unlimited power."

"I stepped back and I looked closely at her and two pairs of silver and black wings which were incomplete slowly regenarated on her back the choker my mother gave started to slightly burn my neck "

*Wakes up *
Today is the first day of high school I'm a 1st year at Gassan Gakuen, I made on my own for the last three years. My daily routine and living on my own with my pet Sora and having a job my life has been very peaceful but what disturbs is that dream I had last night fragmented mirrors and a dark hallway and that strange woman ...

As I kneel down in front of my mother and father alter , also Shinosuke-nii-sama alter and picture as well I thank them every day for giving me life and right now I am going to live contempt with my dream ..

The crisp fall morning and cool clean air was a given it was going to be a very good day for me . I stopped and inhale the clean air the leaves changed slowly from beautiful dark red to a sunset orange the trees was so lovely in this season .

But someone was much more lovelier then the trees it was the most popular and handsomest guy from our middle school Kenji Shirow, As I stopped and admired him from a distance my heart felt a familiar ache my face began to flush red all od a sudden he stopped and turned around and looked at me as I looked at him it felt that as if time has stopped moving for us at that moment I couldve given anything just to keep him near me, He came closer and spoke

" Good morning Yura- chan how are you today ?" Kenji said
" G..oo..d M..orning " Yura stuttered "I'm fine and how are you this morning Shirow -san ?"
No dont smile dont torture me like that you are so close yet so far away from me, please dont make my heart ache

" I'm fine but a bit nervous on my first day in high school " Kenji says with a chuckle He leans in closer and places a soft small kiss on her forehead .. Yura slowly sinks to the ground on her knees and watches Kenji walks away

Yura face was so hot that the cool fall wind didnt make her budge
"Why did you do that ?, Why did you torture me with such an innocent kiss on my forehead why?" Yura said to herself as the soft fall leaves fell around her ..

Hey guys please tell me what you think about this



i like it except you spell shirou like this and the kiss thing on the forehead is soo common though but i like it [: do you mind if i use this story and illustrate it?
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you cant im already turning it into a manga and i do mind
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sama23 wrote:

you cant im already turning it into a manga and i do mind


wow, thats a bit blunt.
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Here's a story that i tried to write, but quite failed. It's really bad, because it's isn't a focuses plot.


haha, believe it or not, i tried to make a manga out of it, but i was just too confused as to waht was going on, nad i couldnt picture any of the scense! but very good! it looks like u put alot of good work into it!!
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bake wrote:


lirg123 wrote:

Here's a story that i tried to write, but quite failed. It's really bad, because it's isn't a focuses plot.


haha, believe it or not, i tried to make a manga out of it, but i was just too confused as to waht was going on, nad i couldnt picture any of the scense! but very good! it looks like u put alot of good work into it!!


Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, that was very funny. I never would have thought someone would really try that.
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sorry i was blunt with my post , but im already turning my own story into an manga
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sorry i was blunt with my post , but im already turning my own story into an anime


o really, wow, tahts intresting, can i ssee it? that'd be pretty cool!
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we certainly have some very interesting stories here :)

Do you guys think a story written in form of a drama or a story written in form of a novel is more fit for the making of a manga?
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How do you guys think about my manga ideas?
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lol i suck at storylines...
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Here's another story that i Wrote. Feel free to illustrate it. hahahahahahaha, It's simpler this time.
It's call "Mrs. Lucky"
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Anyone interested in drawing a mecha based manga? I would do it myself but anything much bigger than a human kills me XD...
Basically it's an apocalypse manga in the tradition of evangelion...

Synopsis:
The story begins at the end of a normal school day, 15 yr old female lead Yuko is joking around with her friends when suddenly a beam of light zaps her and several others (including potential romantic interest and fellow classmate Shun) up into the sky!

The beam of light were apparently caused by extraterrestrial beings who had abducted a small number of Earthlings for several weeks before returning (most) of them back to Earth, mind wiped and plus one barcode style brand on the face. At first the alien abductees attracted wide media attention, but things began to go wrong when people associated with them started to sicken and die...

Fast forward three years...no one knows how to smile anymore...

Though the alien abductees themselves were immune, the disease they brought back from the aliens have wiped out 99.9999% of Earth's population. Calling themselves the 'cursed ones' the abductees have formed into small, widespread communities connected only by a wiki-style internet site called Ocean. Whilst each person deals with the grief of causing the death of their closest and dearest, it seems that the aliens are not willing to leave the remnants of humanity alone.



Main characters:
Yuko (18): Female protagonist of the story, pilots the Venus von Willendorf shaped Archetype Mother that specialises in defence. Personality wise she is determined and resourceful but emotionally vulnerable.
Shun (18):Classmate of Yuko who was abducted as well. Formerly loud and brash the tragedy of the past 3 yrs have turned him into a withdrawn and silent wraith with amnesia. Grows half of his hair long to hide the brand on his face. Pilots the shape-shifting Archetype Fugue that specialises in speed.
Shitai (23): Formerly a happy-go-lucky ronin who now views the world with a cynical and nihilistic attitude. Shitai (dead body in Japanese) is not his real name but the one he adopted after what he views to be the end of the world. Pilots the Archetype Elektra that is bristling with guns and cannons of every shape and description.
Yuta (17):Self taught computer genius who is one of the leaders of community Eden where the above 3 resides. He suffered spinal injury during the mob violence that followed the outbreak of the disease and is now confined to a wheelchair. Calm and brilliant, he is the strategist and main contributor of information from their community to Ocean.

If anyone's interested, PM me and I will fill in the details ^_^
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momogoldfish wrote:

Anyone interested in drawing a mecha based manga? I would do it myself but anything much bigger than a human kills me XD...
Basically it's an apocalypse manga in the tradition of evangelion...

Synopsis:
The story begins at the end of a normal school day, 15 yr old female lead Yuko is joking around with her friends when suddenly a beam of light zaps her and several others (including potential romantic interest and fellow classmate Shun) up into the sky!

The beam of light were apparently caused by extraterrestrial beings who had abducted a small number of Earthlings for several weeks before returning (most) of them back to Earth, mind wiped and plus one barcode style brand on the face. At first the alien abductees attracted wide media attention, but things began to go wrong when people associated with them started to sicken and die...

Fast forward three years...no one knows how to smile anymore...

Though the alien abductees themselves were immune, the disease they brought back from the aliens have wiped out 99.9999% of Earth's population. Calling themselves the 'cursed ones' the abductees have formed into small, widespread communities connected only by a wiki-style internet site called Ocean. Whilst each person deals with the grief of causing the death of their closest and dearest, it seems that the aliens are not willing to leave the remnants of humanity alone.



Main characters:
Yuko (18): Female protagonist of the story, pilots the Venus von Willendorf shaped Archetype Mother that specialises in defence. Personality wise she is determined and resourceful but emotionally vulnerable.
Shun (18):Classmate of Yuko who was abducted as well. Formerly loud and brash the tragedy of the past 3 yrs have turned him into a withdrawn and silent wraith with amnesia. Grows half of his hair long to hide the brand on his face. Pilots the shape-shifting Archetype Fugue that specialises in speed.
Shitai (23): Formerly a happy-go-lucky ronin who now views the world with a cynical and nihilistic attitude. Shitai (dead body in Japanese) is not his real name but the one he adopted after what he views to be the end of the world. Pilots the Archetype Elektra that is bristling with guns and cannons of every shape and description.
Yuta (17):Self taught computer genius who is one of the leaders of community Eden where the above 3 resides. He suffered spinal injury during the mob violence that followed the outbreak of the disease and is now confined to a wheelchair. Calm and brilliant, he is the strategist and main contributor of information from their community to Ocean.

If anyone's interested, PM me and I will fill in the details ^_^


Can I do the mecha design for the bad guys?

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