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Posted 2/20/08
The girl i want and the girl i have, their different and yet the same.
The girl i love and the girl that loves me, the only difference is the name.
The girl i have and i have memories together and our stories never grow old.
The girl i want and i have stories in my heart but they remain untold.
I cant live with both of them and yet i cant live with just one.
One of them has my ring and the other one has my son.
One of them has my heart and the other one has my soul.
One of them makes me complete and the other one makes me whole.
I want to leave this girl and i know its not the right thing to do.
For each one of her tears that hit the ground a part of my soul goes too.
I want that girl to have and to hold and to cherish thie rest of my life.
iv known to many people in this situation and they ended it with the knife.
ill solve this problem and ill end this conflict and be happy with the road i choose.
But no matter how i walk this road and no matter wich path i take someone has to lose.

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Posted 2/23/08
wow. very nice. ^

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Posted 2/23/08
I like this one too I think it really shows how good you are at making the readers feel the emotion you are putting into your work.
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Posted 2/23/08
thanks to both of you
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Posted 2/24/08
EMMY LOVES IT!!! lol
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Posted 2/26/08
lol glad you like it emmy lol
Posted 2/29/08
U r "evil" !!!! LOL!
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Posted 2/29/08
am not lol
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Posted 3/10/08
WoW. Its as if ur the one deciding. Like nice way of transfering ur emotions, very believable. Nice.
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Posted 3/11/08
im glad you think it sounds believable since its a true story lol ................ ................ ........................ ......................
Posted 3/28/08
Ah, very nice. Your work is outstanding. Loved it ;]
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