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i kno lotz of us write poemz s0 y dun we show each other wut we wrote..

n we'll say wut we think about them ..

so0o i'll start:

Choices
Why must one have so many choices. . .. . .. . ..?
I sit, sit, and sit listening to the music
I can't ever make up my mind
I always feel myself in a bind

At times I think I know what I want
Then I realize my life is not written in that font

I go to someone and ask for advice
It seems every time it comes with some sort of price

The people I ask are the people that care
The rest of them aren't even aware

Lately there's one choice that's constantly in my head
It seems so hard, kinda like a hotel room bed

Some people think they understand
Where I am coming from its in my own hand

While all these choices are floating around
I'll just wait and think, maybe with my head in the ground

The choices are so great, the choices are so far
I figure now I'll live one day at a time, and live it up to par.

Why must one have so many choices. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . ..?



so0o wut do u think??
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wow i like this forum... unfortunatly i'm not much of a poet but i think yours is rather good.
Posted 2/20/08
niiice one , i'm gonna write the first poeme i've ever wrote
i was kinda small but i still have it in my diary

My Friend

i'm crying
what can you do?
i'm falling
what will you do?
cheer me and give me reasons
to live in all those seasons
just be my friend
don't let that end
life is not that easy
so don't be so lazy
we have to work hard
to make a better world
and give spirit to our life
then we will live safe
please don't let go of me
be always beside me
but in the end
who are you my friend?
i don't even know you
then why i want to be with you?


i'm gonna put more
and they are good ones
this was just some memories of my childhood
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ara26 wrote:

i kno lotz of us write poemz s0 y dun we show each other wut we wrote..

n we'll say wut we think about them ..

so0o i'll start:

Choices
Why must one have so many choices. . .. . .. . ..?
I sit, sit, and sit listening to the music
I can't ever make up my mind
I always feel myself in a bind

At times I think I know what I want
Then I realize my life is not written in that font

I go to someone and ask for advice
It seems every time it comes with some sort of price

The people I ask are the people that care
The rest of them aren't even aware

Lately there's one choice that's constantly in my head
It seems so hard, kinda like a hotel room bed

Some people think they understand
Where I am coming from its in my own hand

While all these choices are floating around
I'll just wait and think, maybe with my head in the ground

The choices are so great, the choices are so far
I figure now I'll live one day at a time, and live it up to par.

Why must one have so many choices. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . ..?



so0o wut do u think??


I like it, its really good
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niiice one , i'm gonna write the first poeme i've ever wrote
i was kinda small but i still have it in my diary

My Friend

i'm crying
what can you do?
i'm falling
what will you do?
cheer me and give me reasons
to live in all those seasons
just be my friend
don't let that end
life is not that easy
so don't be so lazy
we have to work hard
to make a better world
and give spirit to our life
then we will live safe
please don't let go of me
be always beside me
but in the end
who are you my friend?
i don't even know you
then why i want to be with you?


i'm gonna put more
and they are good ones
this was just some memories of my childhood


Wow everyone so far has talent in this area
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Maybe ill post one of mine sometime.
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Maybe ill post one of mine sometime. :)


yeah i'd like to read it
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well i have one up in Emos poetry group. you should join its fairly new and still need members
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Hope...

Darkness consuming,
voices calling.


Voices high,
in the sky,
beckoning like stars,
in the,
summer night.

The shadows,
drawing nearer.


Clinging to my hope,
the hope,
that the voices,
will not fade away...

Im not so gd with poems but like 2 read them, hope u liked it did it just now.. :S
Posted 2/20/08

Alquin wrote:

Hope...

Darkness consuming,
voices calling.


Voices high,
in the sky,
beckoning like stars,
in the,
summer night.

The shadows,
drawing nearer.


Clinging to my hope,
the hope,
that the voices,
will not fade away...

Im not so gd with poems but like 2 read them, hope u liked it did it just now.. :S


you're so great my dear
just keep going you're doing well

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hibaaaa wrote:

niiice one , i'm gonna write the first poeme i've ever wrote
i was kinda small but i still have it in my diary

My Friend

i'm crying
what can you do?
i'm falling
what will you do?
cheer me and give me reasons
to live in all those seasons
just be my friend
don't let that end
life is not that easy
so don't be so lazy
we have to work hard
to make a better world
and give spirit to our life
then we will live safe
please don't let go of me
be always beside me
but in the end
who are you my friend?
i don't even know you
then why i want to be with you?


i'm gonna put more
and they are good ones
this was just some memories of my childhood




its so0 nice.... n me 2 i'll put more..

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wow i like this forum... unfortunatly i'm not much of a poet but i think yours is rather good.



thxxxx alot ...

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ara26 wrote:

i kno lotz of us write poemz s0 y dun we show each other wut we wrote..

n we'll say wut we think about them ..

so0o i'll start:

Choices
Why must one have so many choices. . .. . .. . ..?
I sit, sit, and sit listening to the music
I can't ever make up my mind
I always feel myself in a bind

At times I think I know what I want
Then I realize my life is not written in that font

I go to someone and ask for advice
It seems every time it comes with some sort of price

The people I ask are the people that care
The rest of them aren't even aware

Lately there's one choice that's constantly in my head
It seems so hard, kinda like a hotel room bed

Some people think they understand
Where I am coming from its in my own hand

While all these choices are floating around
I'll just wait and think, maybe with my head in the ground

The choices are so great, the choices are so far
I figure now I'll live one day at a time, and live it up to par.

Why must one have so many choices. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . ..?



so0o wut do u think??


I like it, its really good[/quote


THXXX ALOT....................

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hibaaaa wrote:


Alquin wrote:

Hope...

Darkness consuming,
voices calling.


Voices high,
in the sky,
beckoning like stars,
in the,
summer night.

The shadows,
drawing nearer.


Clinging to my hope,
the hope,
that the voices,
will not fade away...

Im not so gd with poems but like 2 read them, hope u liked it did it just now.. :S


you're so great my dear
just keep going you're doing well




its so0o0 nice ... i lyk it ...

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ara26 wrote:


hibaaaa wrote:


Alquin wrote:

Hope...

Darkness consuming,
voices calling.


Voices high,
in the sky,
beckoning like stars,
in the,
summer night.

The shadows,
drawing nearer.


Clinging to my hope,
the hope,
that the voices,
will not fade away...

Im not so gd with poems but like 2 read them, hope u liked it did it just now.. :S


you're so great my dear
just keep going you're doing well




its so0o0 nice ... i lyk it ...



ty liked urs 2 but urs was way better ^^
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