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ara26 wrote:


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Alquin wrote:

Hope...

Darkness consuming,
voices calling.


Voices high,
in the sky,
beckoning like stars,
in the,
summer night.

The shadows,
drawing nearer.


Clinging to my hope,
the hope,
that the voices,
will not fade away...

Im not so gd with poems but like 2 read them, hope u liked it did it just now.. :S


you're so great my dear
just keep going you're doing well




its so0o0 nice ... i lyk it ...



ty liked urs 2 but urs was way better ^^




no dude urs is so0o sweet...
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Posted 2/22/08

ara26 wrote:


Alquin wrote:


ara26 wrote:


hibaaaa wrote:


Alquin wrote:

Hope...

Darkness consuming,
voices calling.


Voices high,
in the sky,
beckoning like stars,
in the,
summer night.

The shadows,
drawing nearer.


Clinging to my hope,
the hope,
that the voices,
will not fade away...

Im not so gd with poems but like 2 read them, hope u liked it did it just now.. :S


you're so great my dear
just keep going you're doing well




its so0o0 nice ... i lyk it ...



ty liked urs 2 but urs was way better ^^




no dude urs is so0o sweet...


ty but i still think urs was better
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Posted 2/22/08

Alquin wrote:


ara26 wrote:


Alquin wrote:


ara26 wrote:


hibaaaa wrote:


Alquin wrote:

Hope...

Darkness consuming,
voices calling.


Voices high,
in the sky,
beckoning like stars,
in the,
summer night.

The shadows,
drawing nearer.


Clinging to my hope,
the hope,
that the voices,
will not fade away...

Im not so gd with poems but like 2 read them, hope u liked it did it just now.. :S


you're so great my dear
just keep going you're doing well




its so0o0 nice ... i lyk it ...



ty liked urs 2 but urs was way better ^^




no dude urs is so0o sweet...


ty but i still think urs was better




we r equal dats it ...

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Posted 2/22/08

ara26 wrote:


Alquin wrote:


ara26 wrote:


Alquin wrote:


ara26 wrote:


hibaaaa wrote:


Alquin wrote:

Hope...

Darkness consuming,
voices calling.


Voices high,
in the sky,
beckoning like stars,
in the,
summer night.

The shadows,
drawing nearer.


Clinging to my hope,
the hope,
that the voices,
will not fade away...

Im not so gd with poems but like 2 read them, hope u liked it did it just now.. :S


you're so great my dear
just keep going you're doing well




its so0o0 nice ... i lyk it ...



ty liked urs 2 but urs was way better ^^




no dude urs is so0o sweet...


ty but i still think urs was better




we r equal dats it ...



ok:P lets just say so then
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my light fades into shadows of love.
bottomless pit consumes me in darkness.
shall the bottom give me relief?
or will it bring more pain?
Posted 2/22/08

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my light fades into shadows of love.
bottomless pit consumes me in darkness.
shall the bottom give me relief?
or will it bring more pain?


nice words dear
just keep going living
i think you'll know the unswer
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I CRY...

Sometimes when I'm alone,
I cry,
Because I'm on my own,
The tears I cry are bitter and warm,
They flow with life but take no form,
I cry because my heart is torn,
I find it difficult to carry on,
If I had a pair of ear to confide in
I would cry among my treasured friends,
But who do you know that stops that long,
To help another carry on.
The world moves fast and it would rather pass by,
Than to stop and see what makes one cry,
It is so painful and sad.
And sometimes I cry,
And no ones cares why.
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Posted 2/23/08

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I CRY...

Sometimes when I'm alone,
I cry,
Because I'm on my own,
The tears I cry are bitter and warm,
They flow with life but take no form,
I cry because my heart is torn,
I find it difficult to carry on,
If I had a pair of ear to confide in
I would cry among my treasured friends,
But who do you know that stops that long,
To help another carry on.
The world moves fast and it would rather pass by,
Than to stop and see what makes one cry,
It is so painful and sad.
And sometimes I cry,
And no ones cares why.


niiiiiiiiiiiice one , i liked it
Posted 2/23/08

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this one is greaaaaaaaat i love it
so damn true
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Posted 2/23/08

Alquin wrote:


ara26 wrote:


Alquin wrote:


ara26 wrote:


Alquin wrote:


ara26 wrote:


hibaaaa wrote:


Alquin wrote:

Hope...

Darkness consuming,
voices calling.


Voices high,
in the sky,
beckoning like stars,
in the,
summer night.

The shadows,
drawing nearer.


Clinging to my hope,
the hope,
that the voices,
will not fade away...

Im not so gd with poems but like 2 read them, hope u liked it did it just now.. :S


you're so great my dear
just keep going you're doing well




its so0o0 nice ... i lyk it ...



ty liked urs 2 but urs was way better ^^




no dude urs is so0o sweet...


ty but i still think urs was better




we r equal dats it ...



ok:P lets just say so then




haha lol...
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Never say I Love you
If you really don't care
Never talk about feelings
If they aren't really there
Never hold my hand
If you are gonna break my heart
Never say you are going to
If you don't plan to start
Never look into my eyes
If all you do is lie
Never say hi
If you really mean goodbye
If you really mean forever
Then say you will try
Never say forever
Cuz forever makes me cry.......
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wow...all these poems are really good....i think Sadist-chan would have had the best poems...all he says is almost in poems lol....
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