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Posted 3/11/08
because of u

i'm in the dark sitting alone,
waiting for somone too hold.
you left all of a sudden,
that i could'nt reply,
you left me alone,
out there to die.
now im suffering in pain,
as my heart cracks up with disdain,
and its all because of you!
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Posted 3/11/08
Darkness

Surrounded by darkness
No where to be found
He crept up behind me
Not making a sound
My emotions run wild
Leaving me dull
My mind turns blank
I have an empty skull

I wake at dawn
To here the birds sing
Sitting by the pond
I spread my wings
I lost all thoughts
Cant remember how
I ended up here,
lost under the clouds.
And that’s when I remember the darkness of night
When I lose all train of thoughts,
and even my sight.
but now that I remember,
I would love to dream on.

Posted 3/13/08

DarkAngel_RubyEyes wrote:

because of u

i'm in the dark sitting alone,
waiting for somone too hold.
you left all of a sudden,
that i could'nt reply,
you left me alone,
out there to die.
now im suffering in pain,
as my heart cracks up with disdain,
and its all because of you!


nice try , hoping for more
Posted 3/13/08

DarkAngel_RubyEyes wrote:

Darkness

Surrounded by darkness
No where to be found
He crept up behind me
Not making a sound
My emotions run wild
Leaving me dull
My mind turns blank
I have an empty skull

I wake at dawn
To here the birds sing
Sitting by the pond
I spread my wings
I lost all thoughts
Cant remember how
I ended up here,
lost under the clouds.
And that’s when I remember the darkness of night
When I lose all train of thoughts,
and even my sight.
but now that I remember,
I would love to dream on.



i think i really like this one
just keep on writing
you're doing great
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Posted 3/13/08

DarkAngel_RubyEyes wrote:

because of u

i'm in the dark sitting alone,
waiting for somone too hold.
you left all of a sudden,
that i could'nt reply,
you left me alone,
out there to die.
now im suffering in pain,
as my heart cracks up with disdain,
and its all because of you!




its niice.....

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Posted 3/13/08

DarkAngel_RubyEyes wrote:

Darkness

Surrounded by darkness
No where to be found
He crept up behind me
Not making a sound
My emotions run wild
Leaving me dull
My mind turns blank
I have an empty skull

I wake at dawn
To here the birds sing
Sitting by the pond
I spread my wings
I lost all thoughts
Cant remember how
I ended up here,
lost under the clouds.
And that’s when I remember the darkness of night
When I lose all train of thoughts,
and even my sight.
but now that I remember,
I would love to dream on.





u kno dis 1 iz better ... i <3 it...
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Posted 3/13/08
heres one some one told me 2 put on would like to get ur opinion of it
Shattered by the rain

Life has left me behind
all thats left is the sorrrow that bounds me
cold lonliness is all i can find
a dark empty world, shattered by the rain

tragities fall everywhere
death and destrution follow like a shadow
every scrap of anything lifting has been sweept away
this cold dark place, shattered by the rain

there is one thing i can be sure of
one and only one
that one day i will be like this world
shattered by the rain
Posted 3/13/08

naruto2810 wrote:

heres one some one told me 2 put on would like to get ur opinion of it
Shattered by the rain

Life has left me behind
all thats left is the sorrrow that bounds me
cold lonliness is all i can find
a dark empty world, shattered by the rain

tragities fall everywhere
death and destrution follow like a shadow
every scrap of anything lifting has been sweept away
this cold dark place, shattered by the rain

there is one thing i can be sure of
one and only one
that one day i will be like this world
shattered by the rain


really really niiice
i did like it alooot
hope we can see more in the future
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Posted 3/14/08

naruto2810 wrote:

heres one some one told me 2 put on would like to get ur opinion of it
Shattered by the rain

Life has left me behind
all thats left is the sorrrow that bounds me
cold lonliness is all i can find
a dark empty world, shattered by the rain

tragities fall everywhere
death and destrution follow like a shadow
every scrap of anything lifting has been sweept away
this cold dark place, shattered by the rain

there is one thing i can be sure of
one and only one
that one day i will be like this world
shattered by the rain




its really ko0l n emotion ...
jst leep on writin u got talent...
Posted 3/16/08
I wish... I never had...

I wish I never had eyes.. So I wouldn't have to shed tears..
I wish I never had ears... So I wouldn't have to listen to the hurtful things they throw at me...
I wish I never had a mouth... So I wouldn't have to talk back.. because it hurts....
I wish I never had a heart... So I wouldn't have to do anything stupid...
I wish I never had a soul.. So I wouldn't have to feel anything..pain...
I wish I had never been born.. So I wouldn't have to make all these wishes....
Posted 3/16/08
Careless.....Undeserving....

Maybe I should stay away....
But maybe it'll go astray.....

Should get near it....
I might break....

I really wanted to have it.....
But do I really deserve it?.....

Maybe I can keep it for my own?...
But... in the end.. I was so alone..
I keep breaking it.. whenever I get near it...Why should I bother any way?...
love it's stupid....
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Fall in the sky

Fall in the sky with me
Switch the positions of the universe
The clouds will be land
And the earth will be sky
A new experience that will enter our thoughts
Something other than our usual styles

Fall into the world of fantasy with me
A distant place were no outsider can attack
Only you and your imagination
Were sense doesn’t have to make sense
A place were you make the rules
And a place were you decide what can and cant happen
A place were you can live free
Inside ones fantasy…
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Posted 3/16/08
Ten Years

Still crying for you
still grieving for you
my soul just can't let it go
ten years ago you smiled me
but now you curse me

Ten years ago I was willing to
stop the bleeding for another smile
but now the smile forces my blood
to pour out

The dark angels reunite
blood shot eyes everywhere
black wings flapping among
these crows inside the limbo
and into the gates of Afterlife

Bleeding endlessly
the newcomer keeps
suffocating in his sorrow

Ten years ago I thought
you would give a fuck
if I slit my throat

P.S.: actually, it's been two years




Razors and Broken Hearts
This blood, this wound
this blade, this scar
why is it here?
why am I holding a razor?
this cut on my wrist
did I make it?
blood keeps falling from my lips
why?
tears are on their way out
I think I remember
but the blood keeps pouring out

You made me feel alive
now your memory makes me feel hollow
with a shattered heart,
forgotten dreams,
forgotten wishes.
I still dream and
wish of holding you close to me
but I know that if I have you in sight
I will wish to sleep forever

Bleeding endlessly
by the wounds on
my broken heart
I still remember

would you remember me if I died?
would you remember every letter written to you?
would you keep them close?
would you hold me close if you see me again?
would you like to know if I'm still alive?

The angels sing songs of sorrow
the Celestial Maidden cries for seein his corruption
the Dark Angel bleeds out the light to absorb darkness
tears fall from his eyes
black feathers fall on his back
Death tells him to stop dreaming about dead
his red eyes stare to the moon
his pallbearer reflects endless sorrow.

The Darkness is Taking Me
I will rip your chest apart
to take a look at that
thing called heart

why is that you love?
do you at least know what love is?
I can assure you that it's much more
than crappy words and feelings

the Dark Angel unfolded his wings
you can see sorrow in his eyes

do you fucking know sadness?
have you ever felt sad?
you can feel sadness when
you shed a tear wishing to die
because you still love her

Dark Angel, you can feel
hatred easily
you get sad too
you'd like to feel loved

Hatred
a word used when you
love her but no longer believe in her

The Darkness is taking me...

darkness, just what is it?
does dark means evil?
I don't think so
because every being that can
feel anger can feel hapiness

why must I feel desolate every day?
you cry, you smile
you die, you feel too

Pain will take it's toll some day
for the damage inflicted on this broken heart

Love is when you shed a tear,
have a broken smile, narrowed eyes
and beg for death because she
will never hold you close.

The angels cry the lost
the vampire cries for the lost friend
the wolf howls at the moon
and you indeed hear the sorrow



P.S.: I have written like 40 something poems in school (during english class and physics lol.. if you want more just ask =) )
Posted 3/17/08

Sadist-chan wrote:

I wish... I never had...

I wish I never had eyes.. So I wouldn't have to shed tears..
I wish I never had ears... So I wouldn't have to listen to the hurtful things they throw at me...
I wish I never had a mouth... So I wouldn't have to talk back.. because it hurts....
I wish I never had a heart... So I wouldn't have to do anything stupid...
I wish I never had a soul.. So I wouldn't have to feel anything..pain...
I wish I had never been born.. So I wouldn't have to make all these wishes....


OMG , greaaaaaat so great just like always
i like it , no i love it
please don't hasitate showing us more
you're just awesome
Posted 3/17/08

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Careless.....Undeserving....

Maybe I should stay away....
But maybe it'll go astray.....

Should get near it....
I might break....

I really wanted to have it.....
But do I really deserve it?.....

Maybe I can keep it for my own?...
But... in the end.. I was so alone..
I keep breaking it.. whenever I get near it...Why should I bother any way?...
love it's stupid....


beautiful really it is
i love the poem tha words
but even if LOVE was stupid
i still yearn for it
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