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Memories.

Memories, memories, memories…

She was sitting in edge of the porch of the clinic. Today was a very strange day, there only were a few patients to be attended. That’s why dr. Genzai give her the day off, so she could rest. She have been working really hard these last 3 years. Now Megumi was sitting on the porch slipping her tea. Since 3 years she’s been remember it, as if it was just yesterday. The day Sano say goodbye to her. And she can’t help cry.

In this world you tried not leave me along behind. There’s no other way, I preyed to the gods let him stay. The memories ease the pain inside. Now I know why.

As she burred her face into her lap, she cry and she remember there last kiss.

All of my memories keep you near, in silent moment. Imagine you’ll be here.
All of my memories keep you near. Your silent whispers, silent tears.


He said to her that he would be ok, that he’ll be back. But 3 years have past and still nothing.
No sign. No letter. Nothing. (maybe he’s dead) she thought. (NO!!) shaking those bad thought out of her head. “He promised me he’ll be back, so I just have to wait.” she said in a whisper only for herself to hear. Now the light of the day had died. Another day have past away. “and me trying to be strong”.
To find a way to truly happiness. “but I can’t” without you “I just can’t”

Made me promise I’d try to find my way back in his life. I hope there’s away to give me a sign you’re ok.
Reminds me again it’s worth it all. So I can go home.


Someone unexpected but yet expected, was standing in the middle of the doorway. The tall, brown hared man, was watching her sobbing. And he cursed him self becouse he knows he’s the reason of her pain. He said to her he will be back, but it took him too much time. Now he see the damage he have cause. But that’s the past, now is time to be happy. Because he also was in pain, all those endless sleepless night thinking about her, how is she? Does she still love me? Does she hate me? Remembering her smile, her eyes, her beautiful eyes . Her bared body next to his. Now the only thing what he want to do is to kiss her, touch her, feel her. And tell her how much he love her. And that he’s now here to stay.

All of my memories keep you near, in silent moment. Imagine you’ll be here.
All of my memories keep you near. Your silent whispers, silent tears.


“I don’t know what to do without you Sano, please come back to me. Please. I need you so much.” she cried out with her head still burred into her arms. “Well, if you missed me that much. And want me so damn bad, I guess I’ll better stay kitsune.” She froze. “Ssan…Sano!!! Sanosuke!!!” she trembled. “Oi, megitune did you miss me.” In a second she was in his long, warm and strong arms, in a passionate embrace, that she had longed for 3 years. “Of course my tori-atama no baka.” she replied still crying, but now of happiness. “you’re finally here, I can’t believed it I-I miss you so much, that I’m feeling that this is another dream. One of those many that I had since you’ve been gone and..-” he cut her off with a passionate kiss. They stayed so for a long time, just feeling the warm there arms. Megumi pull herself a little and looked up into his eyes. “well, I guess you have many stories to tell me, I want to now e-v-e-r-y-thing that you did does 3 years, and when I say everything I mean e-v-e-r-y-thing.” ” great what a nice welcome back! Kitsune”. “you have to be hungry do you want something to eat?”. now he was looking to her with evil eyes. Something interesting going trough his rooster head. “thinking of it I am quit hungry you now, for 3 long years. And I’m looking right at what I want.”

Without anything else to say he ? And now those 3 years of loneliness of both of them were only memories.

A/N: Not so good I know my english sucks! T.T please don't be rude with me if you didn't like it minna-san!! ^^
Posted 2/22/08
^^ *applauds* my my what a good story. I've read alot of fanfic so i know which ones suck and which ones don't ^^ and this one is a good fic ^^ kudos to you, although i can't help notice that there were a few spelling errors here and there but all the same a good fic. ^^
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Posted 2/23/08
wow i agree with tomoe-san ^__^
ive read my fair share of fanfics too and this one is good ^__^
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Posted 2/23/08
Arigatou Tomoe-san, Hiko-san ^^ i'll work hard on my spelling errors!! ^^
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i like it good job
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Posted 2/25/08
Thank you Kao-chan!
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Posted 2/26/08
omoshiroii desu...

that's how you imagine the rooster head and miss megumi's relationship eh...

jitsu ni omoshiroi
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Posted 2/26/08
hahaha yea misao-chan something like that
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Posted 4/12/08
Chibi, your story is wonderful! You have inspired me! Your imagination runs wild!
*Claps wildly* Good job! *PS, will you write more for us please?
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Posted 4/12/08

Ninjawoman wrote:

Chibi, your story is wonderful! You have inspired me! Your imagination runs wild!
*Claps wildly* Good job! *PS, will you write more for us please?


hehehe thank u so much ^^ i'll try to write more! ^^
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Posted 4/14/08

Chibi-Hitokiri wrote:


Ninjawoman wrote:

Chibi, your story is wonderful! You have inspired me! Your imagination runs wild!
*Claps wildly* Good job! *PS, will you write more for us please?


hehehe thank u so much ^^ i'll try to write more! ^^


waiting.... waiting.... waiting.... waiting.....
Posted 4/16/08
Good job! :D...I liked it lots...super entertaining...a bit how I imagined them as well!
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MYelloD wrote:

Good job! :D...I liked it lots...super entertaining...a bit how I imagined them as well!


arigatou Yello-chan ^^
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Posted 4/17/08
hmm..now i really like megumi and that rooster head to end as couples^^,...
gOod wOrk!!..Megumi-san!!..sugOi!!..
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