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** Gotei 13 Member Evaluation **
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Posted 2/25/08 , edited 7/13/09
Name: Grail "tartarus" Piececraft
Age: 20
Height: 5'11
Weight: 158 lbs
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Description: A former 2nd Division Captain. Grail usually is one who would just stare at you if you ever say a joke or anything stupid. He is often funny if his in the mood. So in general, he hides his emotions and weaknesses, very mysterious indeed. Despite his looks, Grail is very honorable and truly cares for those he loves. He has a fatal temper though... ^,^


Looks like Shogo Amakusa. Said to be the descendant of the "king satan" and reborn again somewhere in Rukongai.
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History: In a dimension called "hell" there's a man who want to be a "King" but he failed to do it to dethrone the ruthless Overlord .. so the man, "the opportunist" is assassinated by his own father.. "king satan"
Thrown into the pits of hell assuming there's no life in his son's. Many years have passed. Endless dark and agony.. still the man recovered.

Meanwhile...
"The day of Judgement" the Overlord wants a new Netherworld so he began the plan.. By erasing the "good demon" in his entire hell! a Massive explosion occurred.. the Judgement has been served.. now the Overlord is making new Demons, no wonder he is a womanizer.

"The aftershock" Fire storm, hell quakes and a vortex that'll damage the dimension.. "the cracked hell"

By creating a cracked in the hell,the man the "opportunist" snuck into the world known as human world.. clueless...yet confused. Then one night, the night that change his life forever.

Former 6th squad Captain Kuchiki Byakuya and his subordinates summons to the human world coz of strange reiatsu. destination: forest.. the "opportunist" face to face with a Shinigami.. "kill me.. release me from the pain...." said the "opportunist" . "This man is struggling" Byakuya said. With no hesitation,not even knowing who's the opponent. Stab! the "opportunist" been stab to death.. "tar...ta.. rus... again...argh...." the "opportunist" said... then byakuya's zanpaktou shattered,leaving the metal fragments in "opportunist" chest.. "tartarus?" Byakuya said puzzled. Then the Hell Gate appears sucked the "opportunist"

Now Byakuya's zanpaktou is broken even he's emotion changed.. "tartarus?, who the hell are you.." Byakuya's thinking.. after that he decided to reincarnate his zanpaktou.

Many years have passed since "opportunist" who named byakuya "tartarus"
Tartarus survived again.. while he struggles to walk he saw an Orb,and keep it. Every night he experience endless nightmare.. since he kept that orb. the orb is the soul fragment of byakuya's zanpaktou exposed to hell and then reincarnated into orb, searching for the soul who's survived and has the potential to lay peace in the world. One night tartarus heard a voice "600 year's are enough to be with you,so il be reborn again" after that tartarus believed its the Overlord of the Old Hell more powerful than his father "king satan" he believed also that the hell is not a place for a good start. so he decided to go to human world and fake he's death.. when the Hell gate appears he destroyed it and open another dimension using he's zanpaktou who inherits shinigami skills.
And finally the Soul society... deep in the forest of rukongai AGAIN killed himself *no faking* XD "shinigami i thank you for releasing me from the pain back then,thank you for giving me such shinigami power" says tartarus.
in 600 years, He'll be reborn again together with his Zanpaktou "Kurow"

After 600 year's he lived ordinary in rukongai. Pure and Kind who wants peace and order. The people in seireitei recognized his talent and together with his training he improved every single day. He still inherits the fighting skills of his father but in a good way. He enjoys studying in academy so he can learn the culture of fighting in seireitei. From the former 6th squad captain to 2nd division captain he's proud of himself and with the help of his friends in 1st and 3rd division, he sworn to protect "The New Gotei 13" forever.
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Posted 2/25/08

Tartarus wrote:

Name: Grail "tartarus" Piececraft
Age: 20
Height: 5'11
Weight: 158 lbs
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Description: He is a tall,serious, and bishounen *but scary looking* man. Grail usually is one who would just stare at you if you ever say a joke or anything stupid. He is often funny if his in the mood. So in general, he hides his emotions and weaknesses, very mysterious indeed. Despite his looks, Grail is very honorable and truly cares for those he loves. He has a fatal temper though... ^,^


Looks like Shogo Amakusa. Said to be the descendant of the "king satan" and reborn again somewhere in Rukongai.

History: (soon) XD also see "create a zanpaktou" section.


hey the dude from the 3rd season of kenshin!!! nice pic, seems like a very cool, angsty guy... I like him.
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Posted 2/25/08
Name: Cyrus
Age: 16
Height: 5''7
Weight: 150 lbs
Hair Color: black
Eye Color: brown
Description: hmmmm.. juz wanna have fun
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Posted 2/26/08

X-cept_your_Fate wrote:


Rai-Kage wrote:



If I can find a good pic that resembles me... I'll post it here... XD
Hope you all will actually READ IT lol I know... its a lot.. but meh! I have a good imagination! lol Enjoy =P




wow that was SICK......now mine feels like crap......and u tied in VC mike .. and captian kisei....damn.....i commend u for that...that was really awsome

and puff8806 Yours was equally good......damn...i feels so lame :(


Thanx soo much!!! lol! XD I tried to make it really good! Like Rai-kun. I have an over active imagenation! lol! You'l think of something equally good! I can't wait to read yours!!! XD
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Posted 2/26/08
Name:Sendo/Hana
Age:17
Height:6'5"
Weight: 146pounds
Hair Color:Brownish (it's a weird hair) Brown in the summer turns a lil bit of blood red then in the wither its almost black.
Eye Color:Blue with a ting of yellow when sendo is control/ yellow with some red when hana is in control
Description:Sendo is a tall slim guy that has short hair that is put into a foux hawk , has a cut over his right eye (it kinda looks like hes got a drawn line like a clown). *i will have the drawing in here in a bit but iam a bit busy and cant really put my penile to the paper >,< *

Hana is my origanal form when i was a kid (before i died) i was a small weakling always picked on. but when my perents died when i was 8 my second very violent but my present personalty came Sendo he called himself over time sendo became the controler of the body and hana became the More blood thirsted part of the body Hana became crazy and out o control so when she took over she started killing people. lots of people but in the earth days it was at the time when murdering someone was the way of life they called me a Akuma<Japanese for devil or demon> but its non recoreded how i died. thus in the after life i was a small child agian heh i thought it was a fresh start, But i trained myself to become a strong Shinigami heh when i met my zanpaktou he was mean but i became stronger with him and now iam the 8th division Taichou heheh Show some respect

*ill prolly have more info later when i have more time >,> but meh i gave it my best shot*
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Posted 2/26/08
hmmm not bad.... =P
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Posted 2/26/08

Rai-Kage wrote:

hmmm not bad.... =P


Neh neh Not bad you say ,...... lol i put major researching on that .... and why dont they have how i died ... geeez .. >,> maybe i should ask Hana .. but maaaan i dont wanna wake her up .. >,< guh whatever.. neh neh i like your Evaluation .... lol bit long but he he .. ok ill stop talking in this forum lol
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Posted 2/26/08

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wow that was SICK......now mine feels like crap......and u tied in VC mike .. and captian kisei....damn.....i commend u for that...that was really awsome

Image Image Image Image Image Image and puff8806 Yours was equally good......damn...i feels so lame Image


lol.... I'm flattered....thx!


it was awesome...mine has nno comparrison
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Posted 2/26/08
Name: Hasan
Age: 17
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 194
Hair Color: gray
Eye Color: blue and yellow
Description: a gray captain robe with faded blue at the bottom. eyes are yellow and blue with black exterior like a hollow. black pants with faded yellow at the bottom always carrying a black kendo stick.

~~~PAST~~~
as a young child i loved to swim. Then a tragic day came about and my parents were murdered.
In the mist of cowardess i ran away. I began to study on how to plot my revenge and manipulate water.
While studying i came across more information that allowed me to assert my revenge but it was too late.
On my seventeenth birthday i was murdered by the same man who killed my parents

As a spirt i roamed the town looking for him. When i found him there was a shinigami who performed a kunsou on me. When i reached soul society i began to research more and more things i found out. I entered the academy on of the people with the lower amounts of Reiatsu but that never stopped me. I researched and implemented all research i made in my experiments on myself increasing my reiatsu beyond the levels of class mates.

When class continued i was teased as being a geek and a nerd, yet no one would duel me. Finally an opponent showed up, i forget his name, but his eyes were like mine. We became close friends as we improved each other.

The first academy field trip was taken and there was a hollow attack. My friend was killed by a hollow. I attacked the hollow in blind rage and the attack only made the mask disperse, it was my murderer. Under no circumstances were we to release our zanpakuto but i did. The captain of the 12th division fell under my rage not expecting my release to be so powerful. I destroyed the hollow and was left alone as i returned to soul society.

~~~CURRENT~~~

Originally i wasnt going to be captain but the position was never taken. I was promoted by Toyoki Taichou because a research captain was severely needed. Now i am where i am

~NOTES~
im working on the drawing for this description
i got this computer by luck and did a buncha stuff i still prolly wont be very active
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Posted 2/27/08

zabuza212 wrote:


Description: a gray captain robe with faded blue at the bottom. eyes are yellow and blue with black exterior like a hollow. black


Captain's robes(Haori) are ALWAYS white... lol never gray.... unless you've dirtied it.. you PIG! LMAO! joking... joking...

Posted 2/27/08
i dont have a robe.......
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Posted 2/27/08
Name: Kira
Age: *in about a week* 18
Height: 5'2 *ya ya i kno im short but im also dangerous so watch out kick ass short person coming thru XD*
Weight: *how rude thats none of ur business u.u
Hair Color: Purple
Eye Color: a light-ish purple *but changes red depending on my mood* ^-^
Description: past is unknown *im a mystery*

Posted 2/28/08
Name:Tsuki
Age:19(woot!!!)
Height:5'3
Weight:uhhh... I dunno about that one. lol!
Hair Color:Brown/Blonde
Eye Color:Blue
Description: The 1st Division rules!!!! XD
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Name: Mara
Age: ...... dont wanna tell
Height: 1.60 cm (i dont really understand your scale like feet or miles...)
Weight: 53 kilos (yes spanish!!)
Hair: Black
Eye Color: between gray and brown (yeah i know is rare)
Description: see my profile..... no better put a picture


Story: I was born in soul society... that is for sure. My parents found my in the forest near seireitei and they raised me with love... My father he truly admires shinigamis for what they done for him before the soul burial thus he teaches me how to use the sword telling me that he will be proud if i get into the shinigamis school he also teaches me how to use other weapons. but I really loved to use a sword, most of the time i didnt understand what my father was talking about because i have never seen a shinigamir or a hollow, lest the human world yet; and mostly of my free i sued to spend my time with my pet a beautiful dog-wolf. So when i reached my ninth "birthday" my father took to a practice morning leaving my mother and little brother at home, we practiced for hours 'till he tired stoped the fight and said that he didnt have anything else to teach me.. that was one of my greatest moments. it was time to go home, we were near when i great noise came from the same direction where my home was, my father took off telling to stay there but i followed him... when we got there i saw many men dress in black fighting what it seems a monster. i remain quiet and amazed, father told that those were shinigamis and that other a hollow. After a while that thing was destroyed, and my father run to the destroyed house... i saw how he was talking with some young shinigami and began to cry. i understood without asking, mother and brother were dead. after that day father didnt want to get out the repaired house i began my training alone.
a few months later while i was training a meet a young boy that asked my to fight with him, he seemed kinda strange but i didnt dared to loose the oportunity to fight so i accepted; his way of fighting was unique... with a sword but mostly hand - to hand combat that i learn after truly hard work; i loved to fight and to learn from him. The aniversary of my mother and brother dead and also my "birthday", my dad was strange somehow really angry.. suddenly he began to yell and throw some stuff, so i left the house to my training place and to that boy (i used to called him just boy because he always refused to tell me his name), when i got there he had a present for my... i new sword.. i was really happy the old one that my father gave was in a really bad condition. when i thanked him, hi said that he was the lucky one when he choose me to have that fight a long time ago but everything when quiet when i sensed a hollow in the same direction as my house. i rushed to my house calling at my father, after telling the boy i was going to get back. I got in time so i was able to protect my father when a hollow was about to kill him; and somehow (i always think it was a miracle) i heard some words (read Create a Zanpaktou!! page 4) and released my shinkai; i killed the hollow at the same time some shinigamis arrived and saw me.

After the hollow disappeared i when back to the forest without hearing the shinigamis words, i wanted to tell that boy what happened, he was there smiling... that day he told me his name and that day was the last day i saw him in the forest. Because the next day some shinigamis came to my house and asked me to enroll the school and i accepted. My father was happy because i past the exam, i was thankfull to that boy because he thought me everything... my secret ambition unlike my fathers was to know the human world so i worked hard learning spell and stuff... finally i graduated after 4 years of hard work and i choose the 10th division because i admired the former taichou in some way; i reached 3rd seat soon after melody left it and well i meet her and all the division... mexime, kakashi... it has been great to be there...
the forest where my parents found me is my favorite place and lately maybe im seening that boy again...

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Name: Chloe Storm
Age: 17
Height: 5' 6
Hair Color: Black with bluish highlights
Eye Color: Blue/Green
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History/Background: During her human life, Chloe was of noble birth. She was always given what she wanted when she wanted it, and never had to work for anything. However, there was one thing she was unable to obtain in an easy fashion; that which her parents could not provide; friends. Though Chloe had every toy, gaget, and gizmo available for purchase, she never had anyone to enjoy them with. She was never taught how to behave around others, and did not fit in well with the other children. Her parents, paid her little mind and therefore Chloe grew up with an extreme loneliness.
However, one day a boy around her age for one reason or another decided to try to talk to her. Chloe was hesitant at first, however after a few minutes of talking, the two became instant friends. The void in her heart had finally been filled by her first and what turned out to be only friend. As the days went by the boy and Chloe would spend what seemed like every waking moment together. They were like twin siblings.
Unfortuneatly, this all soon came to an abrupt end. A few days after her 17th Birthday, Chloe returned home from school to find her two parents murdered. Even though they were not the best of parents, Chloe still felt love towards them, and agonzing pain consumed her. As she sat crying beside them she noticed a shadow holding what appeared to be a knife come up behind her. Chloe screamed as the knife ripped through her back. She spun around in a pain and saw that the attackers face was the same as her one and only friend. He had attacked her and her family. "Why!" she cried out to him.
The boy responded with a snicker. She soon found out the truth behind her one and only friendship. It turned out that the boy, Vallen Cross, was the son of her mother's brother. His birth was kept a secret and he was trained from childhood to gain her trust and to one day wipe out the Storm family and restore the Cross family to power. Quite literally he had stabbed her in the back. As she lie bleeding on the ground, rage and pain filled Chloe's eyes. In a last burst of life she grabbed a scared katana from the mantel and thrust it into Vallen's heart. A few minutes later, they both were dead.
The next thing she knew, she was in Soul Society with the sacred katana, Yoruuta, still in her hand. As tears swelled in her eyes, she moved forward, voweling to make a new life for herself here. People were not to be trusted, anf friendship is a joke. As she began living in Seireitei, however, she realized that her attitude would not be accepted among others and it is therefore because of this that she puts on a fake front.

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