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Posted 2/24/08
Time

Time, so delicate,
Yet we destroy it.
Time, so long,
And we waste it.
Time nonexistent,
But we create it.
Time, so painless,
And we feel its pain.
Time, passes quickly,
Yet we feel it’s slow.
Time, invisible,
And we can see it.
Time an endless journey,
But yet we have an end.
We have so much around us,
That time, we must bend.
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Posted 2/24/08
unobjectionable ,very nice
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Posted 2/24/08
thank you mucho!
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Posted 2/24/08
wow I really like it! Its so raw yet beautiful at the same time. Props to simplistic for this one!
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yay!!! thanks firefly
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