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Posted 2/25/08
well everyone, please post your composed songs or pieces here..

well, if you don't want to then, we respect your decision...

or maye we can work together here and compose our very own song..

so far, i have already composed 4 songs..the lyrics of the fourth song though is done
by a friend...haha
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Posted 2/25/08
wah...post it nikki-chan! i wanna c..heheh...XD
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HERE'S MINE...^_^

~All my life~~

all my life i have been looking for that special person
a person that will love me for whati really am
a person who will do anything to be w/ me..

when i first meet you i thought
Hey! maybe it could be you
that special person i've been looking for
unlike all those other guys before.

Chorus:

then i told you i liked you
but sad 2 say..you didn't notice me....
all i wanted was 2 be your boo
just thought for second...thati was...that it was meant to be...

but now as i know more about you
i just feel that something's wrong
yes, after some time you told me you liked me 2...
but why is it that until now, i'm not your boo?

my feeling for you just aren't the same
i'm sick and tired of playing this game
if you don't want me thenfine!
i don't care cuz' know you'll never be mine.

(Chorus)

it just sickens my heart
and it just tears it apart
cuz the best thing thatever happened to me...
was never really meant to be.....
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Posted 2/25/08
can i post the other language song????
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Posted 2/25/08
sure it'd be fine...but if you can come up with an english translation that would be even better
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Posted 2/25/08
The Japanese:-

-Star Time-

Toki wa hito ni nani wo
Ima tsugeyou to shiteru
Mamoru beki wa kono sumiwataru sora
Bokura ryoute wo hirogeteru

Inochi wo hagukunda
Ano aoi umi wo mite
Negai tachi wa mata
Kaze ni michibikareru mama
Sougen wo kakete yuku

Meguri aeta toki wo omou
Onaji kisetsu mezameru you ni


(chorus)
Hateshinai itoshisa wa kono
Kokoro ni tashika ni umareru
Kagayaki no hitotsu to shite bokura wa
Hoshi tachi no shita de rekishi wo kizamu

Hikaru mono mitsukeru
Sou kimi no hitomi ni mo
Sono kame ni mo hora
Itsumo mabushisou na me de
Hohoende kureru ne

Kimi no namae sotto yobou
Haruka kanata kioku no you ni


(chorus)
Tomedonaku afuredasu kono
Omoi wa niji wo koete yuku
Yakusoku no basho wa soko ni aru to
Boku tachi ni itsumo oshite iru

Itsuno hi ka tadoritsukeru sono toki wo
Yume ni egaki tsuzuketeru
Atarashii sekai wa
Sono manazashi no
Saki ni aru saa ikou Oh yeah


(chorus)
Hateshinai itoshisa wa kono
Kokoro ni tashika ni umareru
Kagayaki no hitotsu to shite bokura wa
Hoshi tachi no shita de rekishi wo kizamu


(chorus)
Tomedonaku afuredasu kono
Omoi wa niji wo koete yuku
Yakusoku no basho wa soko ni aru to
Boku tachi ni itsumo oshite iru

Hoshi tachi no shita de rekishi wo kizamu
Hoshi tachi no shita de rekishi wo kizamu
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The English

-Star Time-

Time is trying
To tell people something right now
What we should be caring for is this perfectly clear sky
We are spreading out our arms

We are bringing up our lives
We look at that blue sea
Our dreams
Are still guided by the breeze again
They will run through the fields

When I think of the time we met
It’s like I’m waking up to that same season


(chorus)
An endless loveliness
Was born for real in my heart
We are just one of many sparkles
We etch out history under the stars

I find something that shines
Yes, it’s in you eyes
And in you hair, look!
Your eyes always seem so bright
And they are always smiling

I will softly call our your name
Like a memory in the distant beyond


(chorus)
My endless stream of emotions
Will go over the rainbow
They are always telling us
That our promised place is there

Someday we may struggle
We will continue to paint that time in our dreams
A new world
Is right in front of our eyes
So let’s go, oh yeah


(chorus)
An endless loveliness
Was born for real in my heart
We are just one of many sparkles
We etch out history under the stars


(chorus)
My endless stream of emotions
Will go over the rainbow
They are always telling us
That our promised place is there

We etch out history under the stars
We etch out history under the stars
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Posted 2/25/08
is this your own composition?
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Posted 2/26/08
here's mine: (my favorite composition)

This Journey With You

In the beginning of time
Before you came into my life in
every path i take i would always be alone

Then you came into my life
and pulled me out from the darkness
you placed your hands on to mine
saying everythings gonna be alright

Chorus:
Hand in hand we'll walk together the path of life
Never shall we let go on this journey to forever
Hand in hand we'll prove to them that together
we're strong
Nothing can go wrong
On this journey with you

Let's go after our dreams
Wherever they take us not forgetting our
feelings at that time
In this heart if mine forever you'll remain
And we ,my friend, will always stay the same!
(Chorus)

Bridge:
In a snap time can stop
We might fall apart
But no matter what happens
I'll try my best to stay with you
(Chorus)
Posted 3/14/08
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woah................!

i envy u guys

im bad at mking..........songs or poems hehe

dats y.......? mybe u cn give me tips hahahaha
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Posted 3/30/08
hahahaha.... i only have one tip,,,,,,,,,,

alyways express how you feel....

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Posted 3/30/08
wahhh! nikki! you posted our song! i just love that! haahh...

***on this journey with you****

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