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Posted 2/25/08
Heaven or hell
its a hard
and difficult to answear
you never know
before
the path is reached
its end

but
if you could
chose
what would you take
heaven
or
hell

Heaven
so pure
whit no worries
whit happines
and no sorrow
but it si really that
good?
no know
cuse no one have
come
and told
is it really
so beautifull
as they say..

Hell
so taited
whit hatred
Misery, sins
all those things
that makes us bad makes us
unworthy to heaven
tutoring our soul
as it
chains us
to all the hell
we
tried to forget
and make old wounds bleed
but is hell
really as bad
as they want us to think
is it really
the place wher
stained souls screams
fills our ears

I cant tell you
and
i cant tell myself
what I belive
and
what you belive
is differnt
or alike
who really knows

But
I think
ther is mayby
one more path
but we never
talk about that
place

Ther souls
never really knows
what they are
are they
angels
whit broken wings
or
are they
demons
that werent bad enough
they are both
that i will say
they are her lost
in our world
looking for
answears
that can make them come
to their right place

wher will we
end...
In heaven
or
in hell
or mayby the place
that dosnt have
a name

we will get
our answear
but we must wait
wait for
our path to reache
its end...

well I whanted to write somthing and I lisned to "E-Nomine Himmel oder Hölle" as i writed this ^^
I think it tourned out not so bad....I just love to write about such stuff <3
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Posted 2/25/08

Yamira wrote:

Heaven or hell
its a hard
and difficult to answear
you never know
before
the path is reached
its end

but
if you could
chose
what would you take
heaven
or
hell

Heaven
so pure
whit no worries
whit happines
and no sorrow
but it si really that
good?
no know
cuse no one have
come
and told
is it really
so beautifull
as they say..

Hell
so taited
whit hatred
Misery, sins
all those things
that makes us bad makes us
unworthy to heaven
tutoring our soul
as it
chains us
to all the hell
we
tried to forget
and make old wounds bleed
but is hell
really as bad
as they want us to think
is it really
the place wher
stained souls screams
fills our ears

I cant tell you
and
i cant tell myself
what I belive
and
what you belive
is differnt
or alike
who really knows

But
I think
ther is mayby
one more path
but we never
talk about that
place

Ther souls
never really knows
what they are
are they
angels
whit broken wings
or
are they
demons
that werent bad enough
they are both
that i will say
they are her lost
in our world
looking for
answears
that can make them come
to their right place

wher will we
end...
In heaven
or
in hell
or mayby the place
that dosnt have
a name

we will get
our answear
but we must wait
wait for
our path to reache
its end...

well I whanted to write somthing and I lisned to "E-Nomine Himmel oder Hölle" as i writed this ^^
I think it tourned out not so bad....I just love to write about such stuff <3


a really outspoken poem and from the deep pit of the soul. Awesome. I likes it. ^___^
Posted 2/25/08
AWESOME POEM AS USUAL YAMIRA!! XD
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Posted 2/26/08

kagura4 wrote:

AWESOME POEM AS USUAL YAMIRA!! XD


thank you, thank you
it allways helps to liesen to music
Posted 2/26/08

Yamira wrote:


kagura4 wrote:

AWESOME POEM AS USUAL YAMIRA!! XD


thank you, thank you
it allways helps to liesen to music ;)


YUP!
Posted 2/27/08

Yamira wrote:

Heaven or hell
its a hard
and difficult to answear
you never know
before
the path is reached
its end

but
if you could
chose
what would you take
heaven
or
hell

Heaven
so pure
whit no worries
whit happines
and no sorrow
but it si really that
good?
no know
cuse no one have
come
and told
is it really
so beautifull
as they say..

Hell
so taited
whit hatred
Misery, sins
all those things
that makes us bad makes us
unworthy to heaven
tutoring our soul
as it
chains us
to all the hell
we
tried to forget
and make old wounds bleed
but is hell
really as bad
as they want us to think
is it really
the place wher
stained souls screams
fills our ears

I cant tell you
and
i cant tell myself
what I belive
and
what you belive
is differnt
or alike
who really knows

But
I think
ther is mayby
one more path
but we never
talk about that
place

Ther souls
never really knows
what they are
are they
angels
whit broken wings
or
are they
demons
that werent bad enough
they are both
that i will say
they are her lost
in our world
looking for
answears
that can make them come
to their right place

wher will we
end...
In heaven
or
in hell
or mayby the place
that dosnt have
a name

we will get
our answear
but we must wait
wait for
our path to reache
its end...

well I whanted to write somthing and I lisned to "E-Nomine Himmel oder Hölle" as i writed this ^^
I think it tourned out not so bad....I just love to write about such stuff <3



I love these type of poem so full and complete ur great this is my fav poem i have read yet
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Posted 2/27/08

tonyp19 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

Heaven or hell
its a hard
and difficult to answear
you never know
before
the path is reached
its end

but
if you could
chose
what would you take
heaven
or
hell

Heaven
so pure
whit no worries
whit happines
and no sorrow
but it si really that
good?
no know
cuse no one have
come
and told
is it really
so beautifull
as they say..

Hell
so taited
whit hatred
Misery, sins
all those things
that makes us bad makes us
unworthy to heaven
tutoring our soul
as it
chains us
to all the hell
we
tried to forget
and make old wounds bleed
but is hell
really as bad
as they want us to think
is it really
the place wher
stained souls screams
fills our ears

I cant tell you
and
i cant tell myself
what I belive
and
what you belive
is differnt
or alike
who really knows

But
I think
ther is mayby
one more path
but we never
talk about that
place

Ther souls
never really knows
what they are
are they
angels
whit broken wings
or
are they
demons
that werent bad enough
they are both
that i will say
they are her lost
in our world
looking for
answears
that can make them come
to their right place

wher will we
end...
In heaven
or
in hell
or mayby the place
that dosnt have
a name

we will get
our answear
but we must wait
wait for
our path to reache
its end...

well I whanted to write somthing and I lisned to "E-Nomine Himmel oder Hölle" as i writed this ^^
I think it tourned out not so bad....I just love to write about such stuff <3



I love these type of poem so full and complete ur great this is my fav poem i have read yet


Thank you very much ^^ yeah I love making such poems,
Posted 2/27/08

Yamira wrote:


tonyp19 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

Heaven or hell
its a hard
and difficult to answear
you never know
before
the path is reached
its end

but
if you could
chose
what would you take
heaven
or
hell

Heaven
so pure
whit no worries
whit happines
and no sorrow
but it si really that
good?
no know
cuse no one have
come
and told
is it really
so beautifull
as they say..

Hell
so taited
whit hatred
Misery, sins
all those things
that makes us bad makes us
unworthy to heaven
tutoring our soul
as it
chains us
to all the hell
we
tried to forget
and make old wounds bleed
but is hell
really as bad
as they want us to think
is it really
the place wher
stained souls screams
fills our ears

I cant tell you
and
i cant tell myself
what I belive
and
what you belive
is differnt
or alike
who really knows

But
I think
ther is mayby
one more path
but we never
talk about that
place

Ther souls
never really knows
what they are
are they
angels
whit broken wings
or
are they
demons
that werent bad enough
they are both
that i will say
they are her lost
in our world
looking for
answears
that can make them come
to their right place

wher will we
end...
In heaven
or
in hell
or mayby the place
that dosnt have
a name

we will get
our answear
but we must wait
wait for
our path to reache
its end...

well I whanted to write somthing and I lisned to "E-Nomine Himmel oder Hölle" as i writed this ^^
I think it tourned out not so bad....I just love to write about such stuff <3



I love these type of poem so full and complete ur great this is my fav poem i have read yet


Thank you very much ^^ yeah I love making such poems,

yes so do i my poems are my hell in my heart
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