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I hope it makes sense to you readers out there. ^___^ enjoy!!! hehehe.

The stars were falling from up in the sky,

Energy for the Angel's fighting nearby.

The ground was petrified with gaping holes and dead bodies,

While one was escaping and trying to find anybody...

She knew that this has been going for no longer than a year,

But no one bothered to listen to her pleas while shedding her tears.

The Angel ran, as if to be unnoticed,

So much violence, so much malice...

She ran into the forest where it was safe to hide.

She kept hearing the torture and cries.

Her wings were white, but her soul was black,

She knew her clan would never want her back.

She tried to fly out of that large and horrible place,

But she knew that she had to hide just in case.

There was no doubt that all the Angel's would die, one by one,

The idea was just as clear as the red sun.

The Angel then heard rustling nearby a tree,

She reached out for her weapon to hit and flee.

It was an Angel, only his wings were black,

He was facing and walking towards his back.

Her hands were shaking, while ready to aim,

He turned around and did the same.

She was confused and scared at the same time,

But why was there no crime?

The Angel started to cry,

While black tears strolled down her eyes.

The other stood in amazement,

He put down his weapon and had containment.

He smiled at her, and reached out to wipe her tears.

She was starting to feel no more fear.

He too, shed a tear, only his was as white as his soul.

She gasped, for she knew he was the one who could get them both to unfold.

The two Angel's destined to stop the war,

Combined and will win like never before.

When one falls, the other is there to help lift,

Because it's just like ying and yang...... It truly is a gift.
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Posted 2/26/08

fullnarumetal wrote:

I hope it makes sense to you readers out there. ^___^ enjoy!!! hehehe.

The stars were falling from up in the sky,

Energy for the Angel's fighting nearby.

The ground was petrified with gaping holes and dead bodies,

While one was escaping and trying to find anybody...

She knew that this has been going for no longer than a year,

But no one bothered to listen to her pleas while shedding her tears.

The Angel ran, as if to be unnoticed,

So much violence, so much malice...

She ran into the forest where it was safe to hide.

She kept hearing the torture and cries.

Her wings were white, but her soul was black,

She knew her clan would never want her back.

She tried to fly out of that large and horrible place,

But she knew that she had to hide just in case.

There was no doubt that all the Angel's would die, one by one,

The idea was just as clear as the red sun.

The Angel then heard rustling nearby a tree,

She reached out for her weapon to hit and flee.

It was an Angel, only his wings were black,

He was facing and walking towards his back.

Her hands were shaking, while ready to aim,

He turned around and did the same.

She was confused and scared at the same time,

But why was there no crime?

The Angel started to cry,

While black tears strolled down her eyes.

The other stood in amazement,

He put down his weapon and had containment.

He smiled at her, and reached out to wipe her tears.

She was starting to feel no more fear.

He too, shed a tear, only his was as white as his soul.

She gasped, for she knew he was the one who could get them both to unfold.

The two Angel's destined to stop the war,

Combined and will win like never before.

When one falls, the other is there to help lift,

Because it's just like ying and yang...... It truly is a gift.



One word: beautifull <3
Ying and yang the balans of the world, whit one part gone the other will be lost and no harmony will be found
ther will allways be light and darkness..
thats what I se in this poem
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Posted 2/26/08
thank you! ^____^ i'm glad you liked it. That is somewhat of what is the message being sent out from the poem, but there is also something else there that you need to search for, but not as hard. ^___^ kinda like a whole brain teaser. it's what the majority of my poems are....just brain teasers. hehehe
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Posted 3/1/08
Great!! that's very nice
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Posted 3/1/08
awesome!! i like it! ^^
Posted 3/2/08
I agree with deborahtomo!
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