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Posted 4/26/08

Elysian Fields

A distant dream,
A glimmer of hope;
A fallen leaf,
She has to cope;

Holding on,
Staying strong;
The days are long,
A wish is born;

A heart breaks,
No longer existent;
For her sake,
Her dreams were ashen;

Now she waits,
One of the few;
Leaving it to fate;
At the Elysian Fields;

Random stuff; from my little junkyard.
Not that great.
It was supposed to ryhme- whatever.
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Posted 4/26/08
Here's a random poem I wrote at work last summer:

The voice of myself calls from the grave
I knew him once. He was a part of me
We drifted apart many years ago
He was still a boy when I abandoned him

Left to my own devices, I cast him out
Never given a chance to flourish
Never able to live for himself
I live for me, not the dead ideal
His voice echoes still, but I will not hear
I forget that he ever existed

Humanity is too high of price to pay
Fallacy and malice, such petty things
Tears and laughter, empty indulgence
Love and passion, corruption
Excitement and fear, distortion

He wanted too much,
Felt too much, saw too much
He wanted to become too much
His oblivion stood for one thing
I was his master,
Emotion will never triumph
Over cold unfeeling reason
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Um, I am more of a novelist than anything. And poems arent really my "forte." However, from time to time i find it an interesting challange for english projects and things along that line. So I thought up this poem when i was playing this song on my piano. The real title of the song is Etude No.3, in E Major, Op.10 (By: Chopin). But I thought that would be way too long for a poem title lol (but the more poular name it goes by is Tristesse) I hope you like it.

Tristesse
Flowing delicately with emotion,
Murmuring unspoken words of my love.
Declaring my undying devotion,
My fingers moving freely like a dove.
On piano, playing my unmasked heart,
I play Tristesse for my beloved one.
Hoping this song will never let us part,
Praying he will hear before it's done.
The last words spoken, my feelings complete,
My hands fall stagnant, feeling numb and cold.
Tears fall down, the memory bittersweet.
The memory of his love I still hold.
I know he is gone, unable to hear,
But with Tristesse, I feel he is near.
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Posted 5/6/08
Here, pining
Apart, waiting
Lone, crying
Far, far away from me
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Posted 5/6/08 , edited 5/6/08
Twilight
The moon gleams bright
Lighting up the sky
It shines after twilight
Catching everyone's eye
It casts its soft rays
On all in sight
Down by the busy bay
In the still of the night
Its the opposite of the sun
But still amazing on its own
After all its done
After all its shown
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Posted 5/7/08
Stars at nite
Gleaming light,
shining bright
Shimmering away
what is it trying to say?
dark sky
so up high
contrast those light so
Why is that so though?
Stars at night
Are they so different in the end?
they shine bright
their messages being sent
You for who you are
now its your turn to shimmer high!
like that star on a night sky...

Its a think on the spot poem... hope it makes sense!
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Posted 5/7/08
I see you smile
When you think no-one's watching
Your sweet lips curve
Ever so slightly
And my heart skips a beat.



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Posted 5/21/08
take a breather
&make it last
for everyday
slowly pass
till that day
i wait for thee
for thou shall come
and seek for me


i gotta
wake up from this
nightmare
i gotta
think positive
think of the happy times
i gotta
get over this depressing feeling
before its takes over me
i gotta
find my
inner peace </3



u never thought
tat u would see,
the day i left you,
so let it be.
dont regret, juhs pay attention.
and juhs say
ur my prized possession




to guys, love is just a chapter in life.
but to girls,
its the whole book


-tammmmmy[: a.k.a me, a.k.a d0tammy


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Posted 5/21/08
when we met my heart felt as if it would escape my chest
you turned my world into something bright and new
from the moment i felt your gentle touch i knew i melt;
i immersed my spirit into yours,
i gave you all i had of me
in the midst of this loving storm you took me over
what once was sweet has become sour
i no longer feel like that innocent flower
the girl that had teh world in her grasp
i am only a piece of who i used to be
the blackness of your touch has left me blue
i am no longer me i am now you


the world we shred has shattered all,
i lost me in you as i bleed
what can be left of you without me?

-tammmmmy[: a.k.a me, a.k.a d0tammy

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Posted 5/21/08
The wind blows my soul calls
for you in the midnigth to hold
you tigth
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Posted 5/21/08
When you say you love me
I want you to mean it not just
say it because it breaks my
heart into little pices made of
ice so when I try to put it back
together it falls apart with no
shining ligth

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i hate the fact that i have feelings for you, i hate the fact how everytime you walk by me im happy, and everytime you hug me i wish you would never let go, i hate how i cant talk about it and express my feelings, i also hate the fact that im always wrong. I hate the way you make me feel, i hate the way you make me cry. i hate the fact that your perfect, i hate the fact that every song reminds me of you. I hate how we cant just sit down and talk it out, i hate the way i cant read you, and i hate how i dont know how you feel. but most of all i hate the fact that i dont hate anything about you,not even not even at all....[expand]

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Posted 5/25/08
I think Im going to like this group I have loads of poetry
heres one of them

Call me stupid, call me dumb,
call me anything you want,
call me a failure, call me a freak,
call me anything but weak.

your words they hurt,
but still I can tell,
deep down you hurt too,
you feel like you're in hell.

I see your pain,
but do these words help at all?
the pain has'nt gone away,
you're still up against that wall.

Your words cut me deep,
deeper than i'd like to admit,
but tears I do not weap,
I do not lash out and hit.

I don't cower away,
I face those fears,
I don't leave it for another day,
I don't choke back the tears.

Make your pain lesson,
make others happiness fade,
thinks this helps anyone?
only more pain have you made.

If it helps go ahead,
call me names like freak,
but take a look at yourself,
before you dare call me weak.
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Posted 5/28/08
A Dream is your hearts desire
A Dream is wish that you choose to make reality
A Dream is something only you can make true a Dream is you
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A truly kind person is not someone who chooses to be kind but someone who is naturally kind
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