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Posted 6/13/08
When you look at the moon what do you see?
I see a silver circle
A star of hope
A light in the darkness

When you look at the sea what do you see?
I see and endless blue canvas
A place of freedom
A dark paradise

When you look at a forest what do you see?
I see a beautiful secret just for me
A place where tree spirits roam
A place that feels like home

When you look at the blue sky what do you see?
I see and endless amount of dreams
A place to fly
A place to cry

When I look at these places
I am at peace
When I look at these places
I cry myself dry
When I look at these places
I can finally be myself
after pretending for so long
When I look at these places
I am free
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Posted 6/14/08
This is a Quote:

"The beginning might be tough the ending might be scary but it's everything in between that makes it worth living"

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Posted 6/18/08
Missing
This feeling, what is it?
It hurts, it shouts the word of "Pain"
It feels like an empty space
An empty space that will never vanish
Every time I think, my heart breaks
Could it be..?
A feeling..
A feeling of a missing person
A missing person that I can never get back...
Posted 7/10/08
For a moment I couldn't feel
For a moment I couldn't think
Just for a moment I could no longer live...

Where does the time go?
endless days
countless nights
taking me back to that place
where everything fell apart
my whole life, thinking
something so small
yet so big
can change my life forever

Remember the times we laughed
the times we cried
the times when it was just you and me
our world
no one else
just us

Remember the dreams we used to share
the memories that never fade
the past
the present
and what of the future?

Remember life as it was
the things you did
the things you said
the hope you created
in me

Blissful, unaware
nobody knows
...nobody

Remember the feeling of being alone
being scared
when my tears where shed
the empty feeling
my heart torn

I wonder if...

I wonder...

Do you remember me?

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Posted 7/11/08
Sorry for my absence in the past few days.......new poems on move! The theme is? Success...

~The Irony of Success in school....

When I'm thinking alone on a bench, in the school canteen.....
A thought came sprawling up.....
Why, when the parents hope for the impossible....
While the teachers hope for the best.....
Whereas us, the students are happy-go-lucky as ever, my friend.....
And there, stood me, in the middle.....wandering.....
Walking aimlessly in life in hope for finding.....
The said success.....


~The Meaning of Success....

Success, it's the golden point that everyone wish they could achieve....
But, many of them ended up being mediocre in their life.....
And some sadly, fall into the deepest pit of life....
But for me, one couldn't reach the bliss of success....
Until they manage to make everyone's happy......
Which is, harder to make....
Life's greatest challenge.....

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Posted 8/1/08 , edited 8/1/08
This is just on whim so it's probably not very good.

I see the starry night,
It's the same as then.
Are you seeing it?
The same sky that I see?
The bright moon
That shined upon us
So long ago.
But this time
I'm alone
The night feels cold.
Where are you?
Are you seeing it?
The same sky that I see?
Do you miss me
Like I miss you?
It's the same sky
The same as then
But without you
Beside me
Holding me
I love you still.
But even without you
The night is still there.
And it always will be.
Just like our love.
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Posted 8/25/08
"YOU"

The first time we meet, my heart beat faster like I run an hundred mile
You said "hi" and I reply "hello" wondering who you?
You said you like me and you feel comfortable by me but I doubt you,
Still I trust my feeling and reply with honesty.
I may feel fast but I have faith
You brighten my days every time I think of you,
You take me in your arm's and I feel safe and secure,
You touch my heart to fall deeply in love with you,
You hug me to take all the sadness in my heart,
You wipe up the tears in my eyes to take all the worries and fears that I feel,
You make me smile to face the world,
You hold my hand to fight our love we felt true inside our hearts,
You kiss my lips that you're always be there to love me whoever I am.
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Posted 8/25/08


HOPE YOU LIKE IT...
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Posted 8/25/08
I walk endlessly on this meaningless world...
I walk n walk n walk...
As i was nothing but a forgotten existence...
A shadow crawling in the abyss of darkness...
The cold rain came pouring down...
But i continue to walk as im just a forgotten shadow...
My existence fading...
day by day...
like a shadow waiting till its last bit...
consumed by darkness...
yet i continue to walk...
on this dark and cold road...
wondering what's it meant...
by the word light...
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Posted 8/28/08
Yay now i will follow the rules of a poem.
I Wish..
I wish the wish that you want to wish to wish.
But,if you wish the witches wishes.
I won't wish the wish you want to wish to wish. :)
Just a small poem :)
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Posted 8/28/08
Another poem whee !!!
DON"T QUIT
When things go wrong as they sometimes will,
When the road you're trudging seems all uphill,
When the funds are low and the debts are high,
And you have to smile,but you have to sigh,
When care is pressing,you down a bit,
Rest if you must-but don't you quit.
Life is queer,with its twists and turns,
As everyone of us sometimes learns,
And many a failure has turned about,
When he might have won had he stuck it out;
Stick to your task though the pace seems slow-
You may succeed with another blow.
Success is failure turned inside out.
The silver tint of the clouds of doubt.
And you never can tell how close you are
It may be near when it seems afar;
So stick to the fight when you're hardest hit-
It's when things seem worst that you mustn't quit.

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Candy08 wrote:

Um, I am more of a novelist than anything. And poems arent really my "forte." However, from time to time i find it an interesting challange for english projects and things along that line. So I thought up this poem when i was playing this song on my piano. The real title of the song is Etude No.3, in E Major, Op.10 (By: Chopin). But I thought that would be way too long for a poem title lol (but the more poular name it goes by is Tristesse) I hope you like it.

Tristesse
Flowing delicately with emotion,
Murmuring unspoken words of my love.
Declaring my undying devotion,
My fingers moving freely like a dove.
On piano, playing my unmasked heart,
I play Tristesse for my beloved one.
Hoping this song will never let us part,
Praying he will hear before it's done.
The last words spoken, my feelings complete,
My hands fall stagnant, feeling numb and cold.
Tears fall down, the memory bittersweet.
The memory of his love I still hold.
I know he is gone, unable to hear,
But with Tristesse, I feel he is near.


That was an amazing poem. So warm and touching. I think you have a talent. It was awesome. You know you can make an entire story out of just that one poem.
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Posted 8/30/08 , edited 8/30/08

aasmaani wrote:


Candy08 wrote:

Um, I am more of a novelist than anything. And poems arent really my "forte." However, from time to time i find it an interesting challange for english projects and things along that line. So I thought up this poem when i was playing this song on my piano. The real title of the song is Etude No.3, in E Major, Op.10 (By: Chopin). But I thought that would be way too long for a poem title lol (but the more poular name it goes by is Tristesse) I hope you like it.

Tristesse
Flowing delicately with emotion,
Murmuring unspoken words of my love.
Declaring my undying devotion,
My fingers moving freely like a dove.
On piano, playing my unmasked heart,
I play Tristesse for my beloved one.
Hoping this song will never let us part,
Praying he will hear before it's done.
The last words spoken, my feelings complete,
My hands fall stagnant, feeling numb and cold.
Tears fall down, the memory bittersweet.
The memory of his love I still hold.
I know he is gone, unable to hear,
But with Tristesse, I feel he is near.


That was an amazing poem. So warm and touching. I think you have a talent. It was awesome. You know you can make an entire story out of just that one poem.


oh thank you^^ that was a while ago and i didnt think much of it bc i never write poetry. i am glad u liked it^^
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I want to put something up too.
Of course, I'm not too good with poetry, so forgive me if I suck..

I'll put up something in the next post.....
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A writer's greatest strength is their ability to string along words together, and create something that can be enjoyed by the people reading it. The source often comes from life experience, emotions, or the imagination, as long as you know what you're trying to write, you can create an infinite amount of things.
But one thing is true for all writers: you can't write alone, you need two to create a story...one to write, the other to listen...
So without further ado, here's a poem...
X__x;;
Again, I'm more of a story writer, not a poet...
Also I can't rhyme for crap... >_>

-Memories turn to rage-

I hate the way you smile at me.
So full of lies, and hidden truths.
We're no different, you're wearing a mask just like mine.
You are the enemy
That has been revealed to me!
When I trusted you, you betrayed me.
Left me out here to bleed, and die!
The laughs we shared, I don't remember.
The promises we made, I don't remember.
What we had...you don't remember...
You can't trust what you see.
Even now, I wear the mask to hide the demon inside.
I have become a weaver of nightmares, when my time comes
I will descend into hell.
Where I won't remember anything...
I'm still holding onto my hatred...the darkness slowly overtakes me.
And I become a demon that you created with your words.
You are my enemy.
The enemy I hate the most.
The enemy I want to see fall.
............
You try to use your venomous voice on me?!
I have grown immune to it....your words...can no longer reach me...
Can you hear me now?!
I throw away all the memories we once shared...
I cast off the chains you threw on me, remove the blade pierced through my chest...
You probably think you have a good reason to have stabbed me?
Take it to the grave, your venomous voice won't reach me anymore.
........
I'll never trust your words again, you will only betray me again...
Farewell, my first, and last love.....
The next time we meet, I will have thrown away our memories...
==================================
There...
I feel like I screwed up in so many ways. I really suck at poetry.
They'll probably end up seeing this someday, but I don't care.....
I don't need someone who stabs me in the back...
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