Post Reply “I LOVE YOU, GOODBYE” (my fanfic story)
Posted 3/4/08
“I LOVE YOU, GOODBYE”


Characters:
DBSK
Park Mi Youn- (fictional character)
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Chapter 1

In DBSK’s apartment….All of the members are busy…Jaejoong is preparing a dinner, Yoochun is composing a song, Junsu is playing video game, while Yunho and Changmin are surfing the internet….

-Suddenly Changmin call Yoochun….

CM: Yoochun hyung, can you translate this for me coz’ it is in English…
YC: Alright, I’m always the translator…Where is it I’m gonna read it…
CM; Here, it’s from one of my fan…

-Then Yoochun read it…

Fan: “Hi Changmin oppa…I’m one of your fan…Hope you’re alright coz’ I’ve heard that you have a cold…Don’t forget to take your medicine….Take Care always…Saranghae…

-when Yoochun finish reading it…
CM: Hyung, what did she say?
YC: Nothing she just say hello…
CM: Hello only, but why it is so long? Yah…hyung I’m not joking around…
YC: Alright…she said that you should take care coz’ she heard that you have cold….
CM; Ohhhh…..I am touched with her message….
YC: Yah…Changmin there is something you forgot to say to me…
CM: What is it?
YC: Yah…you forget to say thank you…
CM: Oh, bianhe, chongmal gomawo, hyung..
JJ: Dinner is ready…..
CM: Ah, dinner is ready…I’m so hungry now…

-While having their dinner…
YH: I forgot to tell you guys that we don’t have schedules for tomorrow…
JS: Really…..oh I can play more video games…
CM: Ah….Yunho hyung, tomorrow I’ll go to the bookstore to buy some books..…
YH: Ok, But be sure no one can recognize you…
Changmin: Araso

-After having their dinner…Yunho wash the dishes, Jaejoong is watching a drama series, Junsu is taking a bath, and Yoochun continue working in his song, while Changmin is resting in the sofa…
-Changmin is thinking about the fan that gave him a message….He want to meet that fan….Suddenly he saw Jaejoong crying….
CM: Jaejoong hyung, why are you crying?
JJ: Ah nothing… I’m just touched in this drama…
CM: Whatever..

Chapter 2


The next day, Yunho wake up early, he also wake up Jaejoong…

YH: Jaejoong hyung, wake up……hyung wake up…
JJ: Yah, its so early in the morning and we don’t have any schedules today right?
YH: Oh sorry hyung, I forgot…ok go back to sleep now…
JJ: You too, go back to sleep again…

-Suddenly Changmin get out of his room…

YH: Changmin, its so early in the morning, where are you going?
CM: Oh, I just want to have some walk and get some fresh air…
YH: Alright..
CM: Ok, hyung see you later…I’ll be back in lunch….

-Then Changmin took some walk….While he is walking, he bumped into a girl….
Girl: I’m sorry…I’m really sorry…
CM: No, its ok..
Girl: Oh ok…I gotta go now, coz’ I’m in a hurry…
CM: Ok….

-Then the girl left…
CM: The girl didn’t recognize me, well…whatever…

-After an hour, he decided to go in a bookstore to buy the new Harry Potter book…
While he is searching for the book, he suddenly bumped to a girl that holding books…
CM: Oh, I’m sorry, I didn’t mean it…
Girl: No, its alright..
CM: May I help you???
Girl: no, its alright, I can help myself..
-The girl refused Changmin but he help the girl in picking the books….
- After they pick it all…
CM: Are you going to buy all of this???
Girl: Yeah, coz’ I need it in reviewing for my entrance exam..
CM: Oh, entrance exam? Where?
Girl: I will study in Seoul National University…
CM: Oh, I think you’re really smart….
Girl: Oh..not that really….
CM: By the way, what’s your name?
Girl: I’m Park Mi Youn….and you???
CM: Oh….Ahhh…..uhmmm…..
MY: You don’t need to introduce yourself, coz’ I know you…Shim Changmin…
CM: Oh…you recognized me??

MY: Of course…so what are you doing in here?
CM: I’m searching for new Harry Potter book..
MY: Oh, there is it…
CM: Oh ok thanks…

-Suddenly a girl called Mi Youn..

Girl: Mi Youn…
MY: Oh..unnie…where did you go???
Girl: I went in the grocery store…so who’s that guy your talking with???
MY: Oh, its Shim Changmin of DBSK…
Girl: Really..oh I’ll get his autograph…
MY: No, unnie don’t do it…it’s so embarrassing…
Girl: No, its alright…
-Then the girl and Mi Youn go to Changmin…
Girl: Are you Shim Changmin???
CM: Yeah…why?
Girl: can I get your autograph??
CM: Yeah…its alright…
MY: Oh Changmin sorry for disturbing you..
CM: No, it’s alright..
MY: By the way, did you receive my UFO message???
CM: What is your username and your message?
MY: My username is Saranghae_dbsk_miyoun, my message is written in English….
CM: Oh yeah…I have read it…but actually Yoochun hyung is the one who translate it for me…but thank you very much…
MY: Your welcome…
CM: Oh, I have to go now, its already 12 pm, maybe Yunho hyung is looking for me now….
MY: Oh, alright…nice meeting you….
CM: Nice meeting you also….Bye…
MY: Bye…
- Then Changmin left the bookstore…
Girl: Yah, Mi Youn your very luck coz’ you met Shim Chngmin…
MY: unnie, he’s a very kind guy…
Girl: don’t tell me do you like him…
MY: Yeah I like him. and you know also that I’m a fan of him….










Chapter 3
-Changmin got home in 1 pm…..all of the members have already finished eating the lunch….

CM: I’m home… Jaejoong hyung, where is my food???
JJ: It’s in the fridge…
CM: ok..

-Then Changmin eat lunch, after eating, he started to reply in UFO messages….
While he is replying in UFO messages, he saw the message of Mi Youn to him….

MY: “Oppa, I wish we can meet again”

-Then Changmin reply….

CM: “Yeah, I want to meet you again..”

-Suddenly Yunho sneak into Changmin’s pc….. Yunho read the message…

YH: Yah, Changmin, who’s that girl that you want to meet again?
CM: Oh, it’s a fan…..I’ve met her in the bookstore….
YH: Yah, you’re blushing….
CM: Me……Ahh…Aniyo!!!
YH: Are you in love???
CM: Aniyo!!
Yunho: Ahh….guys Changmin is in love…

-Then Yunho, go to the living room and shout to the members that Changmin is in love in one of his fan…….
JJ: Oh, the baby of DBSK is now a real man….Hahahaha…
CM: Yah, hyung stop insulting me…

-Then suddenly….Junsu is singing…

JS: Changmin is in love….
Changmin is in love…
Changmin is in love

CM: Yah, dolphin hyung stop singing…

-Then Changmin went to his room, he stayed there for an hour….then Yoochun went to Changmin’s room…

YC: Changmin are you angry with the 3 of them?
CM: No…
YC: If not why are you not talking w/ them…
CM: I’m just thinking something..
YC: What are you thinking about???
CM: Nothing, I’m just thinking about the girl I’ve met, Her name is Mi Youn…
YC: MI Youn? Is she beautiful???
CM: Yeah, she is beautiful and cute..
YC: Really..
CM; Ah hyung remember the message that you translate for me?
YC: Yeah…
CM: It’s from her…
YC: Oh, really…. What a coincidence///
CM: Yeah…
YC: So do you like her???
CM: maybe, I’m not yet sure….

- Suddenly Yunho called all of the members and gathered them in living room….

YH: Guys, the manager called me, we will have a performance tomorrow in an orphanage and we will also do an outreach program there…
CM: What song we well perform???
YH: I don’t know but I think that we’ll perform “Balloons” since the audience are kids…
YC: I’m excited now…
YH: So we should sleep early…
JJ: I’ll sleep now…..Yah, Yoochun and Changmin you should sleep early also coz’ you 2 are difficult to wake up…
YC and CM: Ok we’ll sleep now…

-Then all of them sleep early…




Chapter 4

- Yunho and jaejoong woke up early…..Jaejoong went to the kitchen to prepare breakfast while Yunho wake up Yoochun, Junsu and Changmin…
First he wakes up Changmin and Junsu…

YH: Changmin, Junsu wake up now….
CM: Hyung, 5 more minutes…
JS: Hyung 10 more minutes…..



YH: Ok, but if you two wake up late, we’ll eat all of the breakfast….
CM & JS: No…we’re up now….
YH: Yah, you two, you’ll always get up if you hear something about food…
CM: Hyung me and Junsu hyung are growing, we need to eat more foods…
YH: Whatever….


-Then Yunho go to Yoochun’s room…

YH: Yoochun, wake up now…
YC: Yeah, I’m up now…

- While having a breakfast..

YH: Guys we should perform well for the kids in the orphanage..
JJ: Yeah…
JS: hyung, where orphanage we are going?
YH: I don’t know but the manager said that it is in Incheon….
JS: Ohhh…
YH: So, finished your breakfast now, coz’ the van will fetch us at 9:30 am…
JJ: What! But its already 8:30 am..
YH: That’s why we should hurry up…Changmin & Junsu you two will take a bath first…
CM: ok I’ll use the 1st bathroom…
JS: No, you’ll use the 2nd bathroom…
CM: No, you’ll use the 2nd bathroom…
YH: Yah..you two stop fighting…..Changmin you’ll use the 1st bathroom, Junsu use the 2nd bathroom…
CM & JS: Araso..

-After Changmin and Junsu took a bath….

YH: Yoochun and jaejoong hyung you’re the next to take a bath….
JJ: But how about you???
YH: I’ll be the last…
JS: Hyung your be the last, but it takes you 1 hour to take a bath…
YH: Yah…Junsu stop it, just fix yourself now…

-After an hour they are all ready…..then the van came, they ride now in the van….

-While in the van....Yoochun is sleeping, Changmin is listening to the songs in his Ipod, Junsu is singing, and Yunho & Jaejoong are talking…

CM: Hyung, I wonder what will happen to us in the orphanage, coz’ this is the 1st time we visit an orphanage…
JS: Maybe its going to be fun……Changmin you try to wake up Yoochun coz’ we’re almost near in the orphanage…



CM: Ok

-Then Changmin wake up Yoochun…

CM: Hyung, wake up…
YC: Where are we???
YH: We’re almost near the orphanage…Yah, Yoochun do you still know yourself???
YC: Yes…
YH So who are you????
YC: I’m Park Yoochun..
YH: Ok and do you know us?
YC: Yeah you are Yunho hyung, beside you is Jaejoong hyung…
YH: How about the 2 in the backseat, who are they??
Yoochun: The 2 in the backseat??

-Then Yoochun turn around…and point Changmin and Junsu….

YC: This is Changmin and this…
JS: What? Who am I?
YC: You are Junsu, Junsu the dolphin…
JS: Yah…are you still sleeping…
CM: No, Yoochun hyung is very awake now coz’ he called you dolphin….

-The 4 of them burst out laughing…

JS: Yah….the 4 of you…..you always bullying me….

(to be continued...)
Posted 3/4/08
-Then they arrived in the orphanage….the head of the staff welcomed them…

Head: Annyeong haseyo….
DBSK: Annyeong haseyo…
Head: Thank you for visiting our orphanage…
Manager: your welcome…we always want to help other especially the children…

-Then the DBSK went to the children that are playing….

DBSK: Annyeong haseyo…
Children: Annyeong haseyo…
DBSK: Do you know us?
Children: Neh….You are DBSK…
YH: Can we join in your game???
Children: Of Course..

-Then DBSK and the children play a game……then a girl came……
Suddenly one of the kids saw her and the kid call her…

Kid: Noona….join us….

-Then the girl waved to the kid…..DBSK turn around to see the girl…then Changmin recognized her….

CM: Mi Youn ssi…
MY: Oh Changmin you’re here…
CM: Yeah…
YC: Changmin who Is she???
CM: Oh by the way hyungs this is Mi Youn…I’ve met her a few days ago…
*Yoochun start to show his English skills*
YC: Hi my name is Park Yoochun, but you can call me Micky…
*Mi Youn reply also in English*
MY: Hi I’m Park Mi Youn, nice to meet you Micky oppa…
*they are now talking in English*
YC: So do you speak English too…
MY: Yeah coz’ I live in U.S for 1 year…
YC: Oh where in U.S
MY: In San Diego, California…
YC: Ohhhh….

Then Junsu ask Jaejoong…

JS: Hyung what are they talking about??
JJ: I don’t know coz’ they are speaking in English…

-Changmin looks only to Mi Youn coz’ he is attracted on how Mi Youn speaks in English….

CM: Hyung, Mi Youn can you speak now in Korean???
YC & MY: Ok…
YC: So Mi Youn are you a full Korean???
MY: Actually no, I’m half Korean and half Filipino…
YC: Filipino?
MY: I grew up in Philippines…
JJ: So you’re from Philippines???
MY: Neh, I was born here in Korea, but I grew up in Philippines…
CM: Your English skill is very good…
MY: Ohhh thanks…coz in Philippines, children are practice to speak in English in schools even if they are elementary or in preschool…..
YC: really,,,that’s good….

---Suddenly Yunho noticed a boy crying…

YH: Hi what’s your name???
YJ: My name is Yunjae…
YH: Oh Yunjae, why didn’t you join in the game???
YJ: I don’t want…
YH: why are you crying?
YJ: Because I miss my parents…
YH: where are your parents?
YJ: They are gone, they died in an accident…
YH: Oh sorry about that…..do you want a new parent???
YJ: Yes…
YH: Do you want me to be your father???
YJ: yes…
YH: ok from now on u can call me appa….
YJ: Ok appa….

--Then Yunho introduced her new son to the other member and to Mi Youn…

YH: Guys, I want you to meet Yunjae, my new son…
JJ: What! Your son…
YH: Yes, my son
JJ: Who is his mother?
YH: she doesn’t have mother….
JJ: Ohhh…ok…then…Yunjae do u want me to become your mother???
YJ: Neh…
YH: Yah hyung, you’re a male…
JJ: What’s the matter with that????Afterall I am DBSK’s mother…
YH: Ok whatever….

---Then a boy introduced himself in front of Yoochun and Junsu….

JC: Annyeong haseyo, I’m Juchun..
JS: Hi what can we do for you???
JC: I heard that Yunjae have a new parents now…..can you be my parents…

--Then Junsu and Yoochun look at each other….

CM: Juchun your wish is my command, from now on they are your parents, Junsu will be your umma and Yoochun will be your appa…
JC: Yeheyyy….
JS: Yah Changmin, what did you say I’ll be the mother???
CM: Yes, because you look more feminine than Yoochun hyung…
JS: Yah what did you say??? Changmin ahh, start to run for your life now…if I catch you you’re dead…

---Then Changmin start to run, and Junsu run after Changmin…



CM: Yah, Yoochun hyung, help me……your wife is now transforming into a dolphin monster…ahhhh…..

JS: Yah what did you say….if I really catch you…..you’ll be dead…
CM: Ahhhh…..Help…Help…. Mi Youn ssi…help me…

-Mi Youn is laughing really hard because of the two…

YH: Oh they are acting like a kids again….
JJ: Yeah you’re right…


(chapter 5 to be continued)...

i hope you like it guyz...you can post your comment....so i will know if u like it or not....or if i should improve my english skills, i'll accept any kind of comment...i'll be glad if you will be blunt..........hehehehe....=D...
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LMAO!!! It was really good I enjoyed reading this very much can't wait for the rest! Keep up the good work! ^_^ About your English it's not that it's bad it's just the way you explain things like for example:

MY: Ohhh thanks…coz in Philippines, children are practice to speak in English in schools even if they are elementary or in preschool…..

You can try to switch it around just a couple of words need to be either added, switched or taken off! For example:

MY: Ohhh thanks…coz in the Philippines, children are supposed to practice speaking in English in all the schools even if they are in elementary or in preschool…..

But other than that it was REALLY good I would LOVE to read more! ^_^
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Mary1803 wrote:

LMAO!!! It was really good I enjoyed reading this very much can't wait for the rest! Keep up the good work! ^_^ About your English it's not that it's bad it's just the way you explain things like for example:

MY: Ohhh thanks…coz in Philippines, children are practice to speak in English in schools even if they are elementary or in preschool…..

You can try to switch it around just a couple of words need to be either added, switched or taken off! For example:

MY: Ohhh thanks…coz in the Philippines, children are supposed to practice speaking in English in all the schools even if they are in elementary or in preschool…..

But other than that it was REALLY good I would LOVE to read more! ^_^



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it's fun to read it ! im looking forward to the next chapter good job!
Posted 3/14/08
here's chapter 5

Chapter 5

While Yoochun, Yunho, Junsu & Jaejoong are playing w/ the kids…….Changmin ask Mi Youn to have some walk……While walking Changmin ask some questions to Mi Youn…

CM: Mi Youn, how old are you???
MY: I’m 19 years old…
CM: When is your birthday???
MY: February 18, 1989
CM: Ohh we have the same month and date of birth……but different year…..So it means I’m your oppa….
MY: Neh, oppa…
CM: So what are u doing in here???
MY: Oh I’m helping my cousin, coz’ she is a staff here….
CM: ohhh I see…

-Then a girl came that is carrying a baby….Her name is Jin Youn…
JY: Mi Youn can you hold Jin Hye, for awhile…..she’s crying so hard and I know that you’re the only one who can make her stop….
MY: Ok, by the way Changmin this is Jin Hye , my cousin….
CM: Annyeong haseyo noona…..
JY: Annyeong haseyo…

- Then Jin Youn gave Jin Hye to Mi Youn….
JY: Ok I’ll go now….coz I’m very busy…
MY & CM: Ok, bye….

…Then Jin Youn left….



MY: Oh, Jin Hye stop crying now……
CM: She’s so cute….is she the daughter of Jin Youn noona…
MY: Oh no, unnie adopt Jin Hye…

-Mi Youn try to cheer up Jin Hye but she doesn’t stop crying..

CM: Can I try to make her stop crying???
MY: Yes…

-Then Changmin do some funny faces…Jin Hye stop crying and started to laugh…

MY: Oh thanks Changmin…
CM: No problem…

- They didn’t know that the 4 members are following them……

YC: Oh look at them. They are so sweet…..
JS: Yeah…
YH: They look like a happy family…
JJ: Yeah..
YH: Is she Changmin’s girlfriend now???
JJ: Yah….it’s too fast…..they’ve met each other a few days ago…

Changmin and Mi Youn decided to rest first….they sit on a bench…

CM: Mi Youn, Jin Hye is sleepy now….i think you should sing a song to make her sleep..
MY: Me???? I think you’re the one who should sing coz’ you’re a singer…
CM: I also want to hear your voice…please….
MY: Araso..

- Then Mi Youn sing “To Angel”….Changmin is only looking at her…..

CM: You have a nice voice…
MY: Oh thanks..
CM: I’ve heard that you’ll perform….
MY: Yeah, I’ll play a violin….
CM: Really, oh you’re a talented person…
MY: thanks..

- It’s almost 4 pm, DBSK will perform now…

MC: Kids, do u want to see DBSK perform???
Kids: Yes….
MC: Ok let’s welcome Dong Bang Shin Ki…


-Then DBSK start to perform Balloons…..the kids are very happy….
After performing they sit beside the kids….and they watch Mi Youn ..

YC: Changmin she is very talented…
CM: Yes…that’s why I’m attracted to her….
YC: Your very lucky coz’ you’ve met her…..
CM: Yeah…

- after the performance…

CM: Mi Youn, you did a great job…
MY: Oh thanks, you too…
CM: Mi Youn, can I get your number???
MY: Sure..

-- Then Mi Youn give her number to Changmin, and Changmin also give his no. to Mi Youn…

--It’s almost 10 pm when they left the orphanage….


-- When they are in their apartment…


YH: Oh, it’s a tiring day for us…
JS: Yeah, for us, but for Changmin, this day is a wonderful day…
YC: Yeah, coz’ he had a time to talk w/ Mi Youn and he got Mi Youn’s number…
YH: Really..
CM: Yes..
YC: See Junsu, Changmin is now matured, so you should be matured also…
JS: Yah, I’m already matured…(and he do his very cute angel pose *-*)
YC: Is that what you call matured??? Ohh..whatever…

Posted 3/16/08
Chapter 6

-The next day, they have a very busy schedule…..They have interviews, recording, and fan meetings…
-While they are having a break.. Changmin text Mi Youn….

CM: “Hi, Mi Youn, how are you??/I hope you’re fine….”

-Then Mi Youn replied…

MY: “ I’m not feeling well because I have a fever…but don’t worry oppa…I guess you have a busy schedule now, right??

-then Changmin replied…

CM: Yes, we have busy schedule…..Yah Mi Youn don’t forget to take your medicine….Ok???

-then Mi Youn reply…

MY: Araso…

-Then Yoochun saw Changmin smiling..


YC: Yah Changmin….why are you smiling???
CM: Ah nothing…

-Then the manager came and gathered them…

Manager: You will hold a comeback concert here in Korea…so we should prepare for it..
DBSK: Really…
Manager: Yes we only have 3 weeks to prepare for your concert…Guys you should do your best in your concert….
DBSK: Yes, we’ll do our best…

-Then the manager left them…

YC: I’m excited now in our concert…..
JS: Yeah me too…


-After their busy schedules, they went home……
…..Jaejoong is cooking their dinner, while the other members are surfing the net….
-Then Changmin sneak in Junsu’s pc…Changmin saw that Junsu joins a fan site and pretend to be a fan…..

CM: Yah, hyung stop praising yourself….
JS: Yah, mind your own business….

- Then Jaejoong called them…

JJ: Dinner is ready…
CM: Dinner??? Hyung I’m coming…

-After they eat their dinner….they gathered in the living room, suddenly Junsu suggest to play a game..

JS: Hyung let’s play a game..
YH: What game???
JS: 31 game…
YC: Ok…who ever will be the dolphin; he will be hit 3 times….
JS: Ok…..
CM: Ok….i agree with that.......i feel sorry for the person who will be the dolphin…..
JS: Yah….are you talking to me???
CM: Yah hyung , I didn’t say a name….
JJ: Ok let’s start….
YH: I’ll start first…..1,2,3
JJ: 4,5
YC: 6
JS: 7,8,9
CM: 10, 11
YH: 12, 13, 14
JJ: 15, 16, 17
YC: 18, 19, 20
JS: 21
CM: 22, 23, 24
YH: 25
JJ: 26, 27, 28
YC: 29,30

- Then they look at Junsu…..
JS: 31
CM: Ok he’s the dolphin……I’ll hit him first….
JS: Yah….Changmin don’t hit hard….
CM: Ok, I promise….
-Then Changmin hit Junsu….
JS: Ahhhhh…..
- Junsu kneeled down…
CM: Yah, hyung what’s the matter???
JS: What’s the matter???? You hit me very hard…..
- Junsu almost cry….
CM: No, I don’t hit you very hard……
JS: You do…
CM: Ok, Bianhe….
JJ, YC, YH: Ok where next…
JS: Hyung please, I’m begging all of you….please don’t hit me….i’m really hurt by Changmin’s hit….
JJ,YC,YH: Ok
JJ: Instead of hitting you, you’ll do a consequence…
JS: What is it???
YH: You’ll wash the dishes for 1 week….so it means that you’re the dishwasher for the week…
JS: Ok I’ll accept the consequence…

-After the game, they went in their rooms………..
- In Changmin and Junsu’s room……….Junsu is now sleeping while Changmin is thinking about Mi Youn….he feels that he met Mi Youn a long time ago….then he receive a text message from Mi Youn….

MY: “ Oppa, goodnight and sweetdreams”

-then Changmin replied…
CM: “ Mi Youn ssi, goodnight and sleep tight…”

-Then Changmin fell asleep….

























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