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A Simple Love (completed)
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Same RULES applies in this thread.

What?!?!? you don't know the rules? please go back to this group's profile, and read the rules carefully. =D tnx


Please Continue this story. =D Lets see your talent and ability =D


Characters:

Seph (male)
Roxy (female)
Drew (male... duhr...)
Mary - Roxy's mom
Ralph - Roxy's dad
Rann (female) - Roxy's friend
Marra - Roxy's friend
Sandra - Seph's mom
Alex - Seph's dad
Nath (male) - Seph's friend
Daniel/Sal - Roxy's childhood buddy

**Remember, you can always add characters to make the story more thrilling.. and uhm, please be more... idunno... REALISTIC. lol, tnx**

How the Story started:

"Why are you up there?" Nath screamed to Drew. "Non of your business!" he screamed back. "I told you, if you like her, just freakin tell her! stop being a stalker!" Scolded Nath. "You know what? your right, i'll go straight to her face and tell her" Said Drew.


**Continue please**





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"Soon after i go for a long... long..... fishing," Drew said
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High on the roof top of the building opposite Roxy's apartment, Drew still knelt with his binoculars clasped tight in one hand. He had been watching Roxy through her bedroom window as he did every afternoon. Now he was half turned away from the low wall which bordered the roof and behind which he had been crouching to hid himself from detection. Sometimes Roxy's beautiful face would turn in that direction as though she knew someone was watching her, she'd gaze for a few moments in that direction and then turn back to her computer and continue typing.
"I'll just go and tell her that I like her. That I love her and she's my whole world. That I would rather be up here watching her then anywhere else. Yeah I'll go tell her that and then Seph will kick my face in." Drew ranted as he sunk to the floor. "You know that Seph has been dating her for the last year. You're his friend for goodness sake." He continued not looking up at Nath.
A dark cloud seemed to pass over them and for a moment the bright summer sun was hidden. The roof top became cold and a sudden breeze blew a small piece of paper from one corner of the roof to the other.
"Am I?" returned Nath, more of a statement then a question, his voice low and somehow mean.
The atmosphere and Nath's sudden metamorphosis from the bright and sunny prankster sent a chill through Drew. He stared at his friend unable to comprehend what was happening.
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Drew replied to Nath's puzzling statement by a fist in the face, stood up and said...
" Are you a what?? are you GAY!?" Drew sarcastically said to Nath
" Who's GAY? freakin wimp" Nath then trips Drew with a crouching reverse roundhouse kick to the knee

" oohh , whoa , WHOA!!!" ~BLAAAG!!!~

Drew fell to the ground and laughed out!!

" AaahW, Aw, man!! you really know how to break my mood Nath.." drew said to nath smiling
" yeah, Maybe, I'll just tell you some other time... sorry dude.." nath replied while helping drew up.

" do tell me some other time, taekwondo freak"
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Next morning, Drew made some extra lunch for Roxy, although it was a little burnt, it still looks good to fill her appetite. "Roxy!" Drew screamed at the top of his lungs. Roxy stopped and gazed at Drew, whose heading her way. "Uhm... Excuse me, do I somehow know you?" Roxy asked. "Uhhh....I.. uhm... I...." A little pause. "....I go to your school." Drew claimed. "Sorry, but you don't look familiar, at all" Roxy said as she walks as fast as she can.
"Roxy... I uhm.... I uuuhh.... made you lunch" Drew said patiently. "Ok dude, i don't know you, so please... uhm... i don't know... f*ck off!" She screamed. All of a sudden, Nath and Seph popped out of no where. "Drew? Whats with you? trying to hit on my girl?" Seph said sarcastically. "No... uhm... i just want to give her...." Roxy interrupted and say "No! We don't know each other, and i can see, that you do. Please explain." She begs. "Roxy, since I didn't really introduce you to my friends, This dude right here is Nath and that stalker looking guy is Drew."
Then an awkward silence began.
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..minutes after the silence...drew looks oddly happy,altough it was clear that he was angry,he scream to the top of his lungs "Yahoo!!!".Every one wonder wat was up with him... "you okay drew?,calm down buddy it was just a reject" ask nath..."reject?...don't know about that".. everyonae just look at him as if he has lost his mind..."quick call 911...thers something wrong with him" yell seph..just at that moment Anni enters...."wat was that loud scream"anni ask. " it was drew..he's gone mad!!!"..reply seph.." wat happen?"...ask anni.."roxy rejected the fool!!..then he suddenly scream yahoo!!"..reply nath..anni laugh "oh that's y"..she continued to laugh as if she know wat was going on.."it seems u know something we don't" ask nath.." i do" reply anni...
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"See, all he ever wanted is to talk to Roxy and make Seph mad." Anni said, Nath looks at Anni with a hopelessly confused face. "I know your going to ask a dumb question like 'What? Why? How come?' so, i'll tell you before you make a fool outta yourself" Anni explained. "We all know that Drew likes Roxy. thats very obvious, and Roxy is currently dating Seph. So, In Drew's point of view, having Roxy notice him is a very awesome experience, and making Seph mad, is a good thing.... even tho we all know they are friends. well, not so close friends." Anni said. "Wait, so your saying that Drew is being stupid because of 'LOVE'???" Nath was confusedly and left while scratching his head. (lol, what a dork) After school, Roxy was walking with Marra, her best friend. "Roxy, have you noticed that theres this one dude who always follows us where ever we go?" Marra asked. "You mean that dork Drew? Puh-leez Marra, Drew is a nerd, i will never go out with a guy like him!" Roxy said annoyed. "Ok, but don't you think his kinda cute?" Marra said.
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As Drew was filling a small pool out of no where. "Hey," a stranger was talking to Drew, "if you want to use my pool, pay up." Drew of course, over heard their conversation. "A long... long.... fishing would help me get over this."
Then he ask someone near for a fishing rod. "Ha ha ha ha, a long fishing should do the trick." He stuck his head in the pool. As the two girl watched for hours.
"Um...." Marra said, "is he dead?"
"No," said Roxy, "he isn't dead"
"Are you sure?"
"Why don't you check for yourself," she walked away.
She went over to Drew, as he saw an air tank in the pool going to Drew. He was using the air tank just for a small pool.
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"oh my god!!! drew!!"screamed roxy
"hmmm"...drew looks at roxy wonder y she scream"
you killed him!!!":with that she ran. in a hurry shetried to pullher cell phone out of her back pack..
"roxy! roxy! roxy what's going on?!" marra screamed.But roxy was too far to hear her. She look at drew..
"why did you pull that trick on her?"
drew looks dumfounded--"What trick (he looks over at everything once more and with a shock on his face he scream) Noooooooo!!!! it's a misunderstanding...i did not kill him...he's alive..this old man always do this when a pretty girls come by!!! i mean it " he franticcaly explain to her
"What are you going to do now? Now that roxy thinks ur a murderer,she's sure to call the police on you.."
"HElp me"still screaming
marra sig--" ur hopeless..heres wat were gonna do--your trying to win her heart right?
"yes" drew replied
"well i got an idea...an idea that will not fail"
"all right, that's it don't you think this joke has gone far enough already?'
"wat joke?"
"how can she misunderstood it was murder when it's clearly visible that he is using air tanks?"
"but that blood?"
"wat blood?" marra point to a place where it was red, blood red for that matter..drew look over and gasp foolishly as if sarcastically..
"enough with the prank drew!!" ,marra yells
" wat the, it's only paint!" drew confirms
"u mean u weren't kidding that you actually thought it was blood?.."
"yeah"
"ur really hopeles" with that marra left
" wait!! wat about the idea u were gonna tell me to win her?"
"ur on ur own!" marra footstep echoed in drews ear
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And so, Drew was all alone... While walking home, he saw Roxy, she looks drunk. "Roxx... Whats up?" Drew asked... All of a sudden, Roxy fell into him and they both fell to the ground, causing their lips to touch (WWAAHHH!!! cute huh? lol) A few minutes later, Roxy screamed claiming she was being harassed. "Dude! What are you doing? Why did you kiss me?" Roxy said. "I didn't.. You fell on me... Are you ok tho?" Drew Said.
"Me? Ok? Are you kidding? Being kissed by the nerdiest guy in school!!!"
"Hey... I ain't nerdy. I'm just being me."
"Dude, get real. your a geek"
"And that makes you?"
"A Princess of course!"
"Pheww.. You know what? I think I'm done here"

As Drew turned back, Roxy fell in the ground.. Drew immediately run towards her and pick her up.
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The next day, Roxy was all confused and she didn't even remember what had happened between Drew and her.
After school, Roxy was day dreaming... as always...... while crossing the street or whenever she gets into it. The crossing light turned red and she still kept on walking. All of a sudden, a car almost hit her. A guy, whose from nowhere popped out and pushed her away, nobody got injured. "Hey!! What was that for?" Roxy said. "Your welcome" the mysterious guy replied, then he took off. "Wa-wa-wait! Wha-wha-whats your...." Roxy said, but the guy didn't hear her.

The next morning (I know its kinda fast, but whatever..) Roxy was walking down the stairs towards her next class. She was reading a few pages of her notes for the upcoming quiz. The mysterious guy was texting on his phone and not paying attention to where his going. Unluckily Roxy tripped over 1 stair and fell over, the mystery guy just caught her and left, just like before, Roxy forgot to ask his name before he took off.

"Class, we have a new student from Xiave High, as we all know, that high school is private, so try not to be mean to him. So.... plea..."
"I'm Daniel" As he interrupts
"Daniel.... The guy from the stop light and the stairs... He goes here now????" Roxy whispered to herself.
"Daniel, I know that for you, this school might be easier, but please don't forget your manners" The teacher nag.
"Teacher, can i sit over there" Pointing to the vacant sit, in front of Roxy.
"Ms... Teacher, please!! Not here, someone sits here!" Roxy claimed.
The teacher looks at her sitting chart and say "No, Go ahead Daniel, no one sits there."
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Daniel: Thanks pretty teacher, who is naturally old
Teach: Excuse me, Daniel, today is your 1st time in this school, don't make me hate you.

Roxy: Alright, teacher, didnt you told us to be nice to him?
Daniel: Roxy, shut it.

Wondering how Daniel knew her name, Roxy slammed her book to him. "Hey! books are for learning" Daniel said. "Alright, Roxy babe, just chill" Seph butted in. "You have a boyfriend?" Shockingly asked Daniel. "Dude, Fuck off. Roxy is my girl, and i believe that no one will make her dump me." Seph said. A few minutes later, Drew came in the door with a whole bunch of stuff in his arms. "Let me help you." Seph said. "Marra, can you take that back pack off my seat" Drew said. "I sit there now, so please, take another seat." Daniel blabbered. Drew immediately sit on the chair near the teacher while she said "Alright, class begins"
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...After school...Drew felt confuse on wat was going on. as soon as the bell rang, he ran straight home with a dissapointment expression on his face. The next day drew did come to school
nath: yo seph,seen drew?
seph: nah i was hoping you did,
nath: i see..let's ask the new guy...
nath and seph in unison with an accent ..oye daniel...seen drew?
daniel: wat the hell r u...a bunch of mexican?..and no i haven't seen drew..most of all...have u been to the circus? I got ticket
roxy: no!! i don't want to go..
Roxy: seems bothered. This of course bugs seph.
seph: u 'kay babe?
roxy: hmm? of course i'm okay y would i not be..
Seph was extremely bothered for some reason..he could not place his finger on it..three weeks has gone by and drew has been missing since..theres been a search for him,but he was nowhere to be found. Meanwhile roxy has been acting strange for the past three weeks...the door open..Nath enters
Nath: u were inlove with drew right from the begining weren't you?
Roxy was shock: no!!! i've been feeling an easy feeling when drew is here..but wen he disapear...
roxy could not finish the sentence....
finally 4 weeks later enters a hunky fit man as a school transfer..this of course steals all the girls heart..he states that his name was..jack
Jack: 'ello 'vryone!!
Everyone daze at his face, to roxy nath seph and daniel there was an uneasy feeling
Roxy: by the way daniel..y did u know my name 4 weeks ago wen we first met here?
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"Roxy, remember that guy you once called Sal?" Daniel reminded her. "Sal... oh, yeah that one whimp who always gets in trouble..." Roxy remembered. Daniel interrupted her by saying "Yeah, then you always save his little butt by trying to take the blame?"..... an awkward silence begin.... Roxy burst out and say "Sal... so, your Sal.. Daniel... Your Sal?!?!?" After a few seconds Daniel nodded and Roxy jump into laughter. "I was trying to save you, because of what you did when we were still kids. I suddenly notice that you didn't remember me, so i kinda played a trick on you." Daniel stated. "Damn Sal, its been years..." Roxy said.
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After school ended Jack walks home..he stop by one of the many fountain in the park. he takes out a coin in his pocket.and made a wish
Jack: oh please let it work this time (with that he toss the coin.).
sheriff : hey this is not a wishin pen...come back here!!!! (jack look over shock and scared) hahaha just messin' wit ya..so ur a new face..a cute one ..rare...so wat's ur name....
Jack: it's jack sir ( damn you old man u scared me)
meanwhile Roxy and seph who were on a date at the time sees jack..
seph" yo jack-o-lantern c'mon join us!!...
Jack..no it's ok..wouldn't want to bother ya!!
Roxy: no we just finish...help us look for a nerd..
jack: nerd? how could call someone like that?...he might be a nerd..is he?...but he's still human
Roxy: i know..but he's been missing for four weeks..i have a feeling something bad happen..his name is drew.
jack turn to look at roxy in a surprise way: drew?....i befriend someone at the station this morning..does he wear glasses?
Roxy: yes.
Jack: i see..'said he was leaving he couldn't take it anymore...couldn't take what?..i don't know
Roxy's eye suddenly shed tears: I knew it..that time ehrn i thought he killed someone i called the cops and now he thought we think he's a murderer..(roxy started sobbing while seph tries to comfort her)
Seph: what did that nerd say?
Jack: come to think of it..he did say something about friend not trusting him anymore..wait..4 weeks!!!!..how in the world did he manage to hide himself from you guys?
Seph: more like he might be beside us the whole time but no one cares for his pressence..
Jack went home. It seems he too was affected by the sadness they were feeling.
Seph: let's go...he's gone now..forget about him
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