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Can you walk whit me
Down this road
Of sorrow and death
You dont need
Its only a question
But
What will you do
What will you say

Can you stand whit me
Trough the hard times
You dont need to
That you know

You chose
You stod whit me
You walked whit me
Trough the sorrow
But when death came
The road of death
You took my hand and held
Me back

I look at you
And I see
You are scared of death
And I undearstand that
You wont follow me
But why
Do you hold back
Me

Your eyes
Begin to fill up
Whit tears
Running down your cheeks
Like rain its falling down from your
Eyes
I wish I could
Make them stop
I wish I could stroke
The tears from your cheeks
But
I know
That I cant do that cuse
The one who make you cry
Is me

You whant me to stop
You whant me to stay
I smile a littl smile
At you
You smile
As hope comes
Into your teary eyes
You let go off my hand
But then
Your smile fade
For you see
Im not her anymore
I have walked
The road now
Whitout you

Im not mad
Im not angry
At you
Cuse you didnt need to og
The road of death
Whit me
You stood whit me
Walked whit me trough the road of sorrow
But death
You couldnt make

Why Im not
Any of that
Beacuse
You tride to stop me
You tride to make me see
That death
Could wait
That I could try some more
Before I walked that path
But
As I walked away
You break down crying

I know those
Tears is my foult
But at the same time
Im happy for them
Cuse they mean
That you care
More thatn anything for me
And as you scream my name
My heart
Beats of happiness
And
Aces whit sorrow

When your door
To the road opens
I will stand innside
Allready
Cuse I
I will follow you
Trough
The road of death

another old poem!! man I really got to make some new ones really <.<
Posted 3/5/08
nice poem really sad though ......lol i have to make some new ones too
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Posted 3/5/08

kagura4 wrote:

nice poem really sad though ......lol i have to make some new ones too


yeah but first we need the inspiration * hunting after inspiration*
Posted 3/5/08

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kagura4 wrote:

nice poem really sad though ......lol i have to make some new ones too


yeah but first we need the inspiration * hunting after inspiration*


I kno .... so hard to find it these days
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OH MY FREAKING GODS!!! This is soo good >< I absolutely love it! It's soo sad though....but it's really extremely good!!
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OH MY FREAKING GODS!!! This is soo good >< I absolutely love it! It's soo sad though....but it's really extremely good!!


*Blush* thank you very much Im glad that you liked it that much !
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Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

OH MY FREAKING GODS!!! This is soo good >< I absolutely love it! It's soo sad though....but it's really extremely good!!


*Blush* thank you very much Im glad that you liked it that much !


You're welcome ^^ And do you mind if I print it out?
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Posted 3/7/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

OH MY FREAKING GODS!!! This is soo good >< I absolutely love it! It's soo sad though....but it's really extremely good!!


*Blush* thank you very much Im glad that you liked it that much !


You're welcome ^^ And do you mind if I print it out?



huh?? well not really....*never been asked that before* if you liked it that much then your welcome but dont steal it xD..jk I trust you on that =p
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Posted 3/8/08

Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

OH MY FREAKING GODS!!! This is soo good >< I absolutely love it! It's soo sad though....but it's really extremely good!!


*Blush* thank you very much Im glad that you liked it that much !


You're welcome ^^ And do you mind if I print it out?



huh?? well not really....*never been asked that before* if you liked it that much then your welcome but dont steal it xD..jk I trust you on that =p


Of course I won't steal it!! All the credit goes to Yamira-chan ^^ Please don't worry ^^
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Posted 3/8/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

OH MY FREAKING GODS!!! This is soo good >< I absolutely love it! It's soo sad though....but it's really extremely good!!


*Blush* thank you very much Im glad that you liked it that much !


You're welcome ^^ And do you mind if I print it out?



huh?? well not really....*never been asked that before* if you liked it that much then your welcome but dont steal it xD..jk I trust you on that =p


Of course I won't steal it!! All the credit goes to Yamira-chan ^^ Please don't worry ^^


I dont worry at all ^^
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Posted 3/8/08

Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

OH MY FREAKING GODS!!! This is soo good >< I absolutely love it! It's soo sad though....but it's really extremely good!!


*Blush* thank you very much Im glad that you liked it that much !


You're welcome ^^ And do you mind if I print it out?



huh?? well not really....*never been asked that before* if you liked it that much then your welcome but dont steal it xD..jk I trust you on that =p


Of course I won't steal it!! All the credit goes to Yamira-chan ^^ Please don't worry ^^


I dont worry at all ^^


Lol, good ^^ Worry = early wrinkles lol
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