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"oh my god!!! drew!!"screamed roxy
"hmmm"...drew looks at roxy wonder y she scream"
you killed him!!!":with that she ran. in a hurry shetried to pullher cell phone out of her back pack..
"roxy! roxy! roxy what's going on?!" marra screamed.But roxy was too far to hear her. She look at drew..
"why did you pull that trick on her?"
drew looks dumfounded--"What trick (he looks over at everything once more and with a shock on his face he scream) Noooooooo!!!! it's a misunderstanding...i did not kill him...he's alive..this old man always do this when a pretty girls come by!!! i mean it " he franticcaly explain to her
"What are you going to do now? Now that roxy thinks ur a murderer,she's sure to call the police on you.."
"HElp me"still screaming
marra sig--" ur hopeless..heres wat were gonna do--your trying to win her heart right?
"yes" drew replied
"well i got an idea...an idea that will not fail"
"please let it be fool proof" drew whispered


uglyasian18 What happen in this scrip?
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Posted 3/7/08
this is the point where their relation ship starts to blossom very very very slooooowwlyy..lol
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Posted 3/7/08
i think i get it actually =D lol, me like =D lol... so drew is kinda have that little chance of winning over roxy =D
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uglyasian18 wrote:

After school ended Jack walks home..he stop by one of the many fountain in the park. he takes out a coin in his pocket.and made a wish
Jack: oh please let it work this time (with that he toss the coin.).
sheriff : hey this is not a wishin pen...come back here!!!! (jack look over shock and scared) hahaha just messin' wit ya..so ur a new face..a cute one ..rare...so wat's ur name....
Jack: it's jack sir ( damn you old man u scared me)
meanwhile Roxy and seph who were on a date at the time sees jack..
seph" yo jack-o-lantern c'mon join us!!...
Jack..no it's ok..wouldn't want to bother ya!!
Roxy: no we just finish...help us look for a nerd..
jack: nerd? how could call someone like that?...he might be a nerd..is he?...but he's still human
Roxy: i know..but he's been missing for four weeks..i have a feeling something bad happen..his name is drew.
jack turn to look at roxy in a surprise way: drew?....i befriend someone at the station this morning..does he wear glasses?
Roxy: yes.
Jack: i see..'said he was leaving he couldn't take it anymore...couldn't take what?..i don't know
Roxy's eye suddenly shed tears: I knew it..that time ehrn i thought he killed someone i called the cops and now he thought we think he's a murderer..(roxy started sobbing while seph tries to comfort her)
Seph: what did that nerd say?
Jack: come to think of it..he did say something about friend not trusting him anymore..wait..4 weeks!!!!..how in the world did he manage to hide himself from you guys?
Seph: more like he might be beside us the whole time but no one cares for his pressence..
Jack went home. It seems he too was affected by the sadness they were feeling.
Seph: let's go...he's gone now..forget about him


so what happened to Drew?
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jack: (confuse)..wat da heck he's change since last time i was here....
Seph and roxy look at jack... from laughter to serious face..
Roxy: last time u were here?...just who are you?
Seph: drew?..is that you?
Roxy: (slaps jack)..drew..how could you..
Jack: so it's really true you really did not remember me..i thought u guys were just playin' around..
Roxy: remember what? (she looks at seph) know 'em?
Jack:..9 years ago . it was us,sal,you,seph,nath and anni...we were young, we use to play tag behind's nath's house.until one day..
Roxy: tell us something we don't know!!
Jack: i am telling you something you don't know!!! How can i tell u these things if i did not know you!!! ( roxy was shock to realize)..now let me continue.we were playing tag as always,but i step on the bear trap we set days before..u remember yet?..(yelling) i was rush into the hospital losing alot of blood!!!!...my mom told you i was dead..but was?I!!!!.Suddenly this so called nerd shows up three days after i dissapear!!!..who do you think that nerd was..i may have lost my memory from the fall after that trap set off..but my heart certainly did not


so.... Jack is Drew, right??? Anni? I forgot, whose Anni?
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Posted 3/10/08
yes jack is drew and anni is one of the friend..wow i just realize she needs more story time..lol
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Posted 3/10/08
i'm taking all the suspense..i'm gonna take a break.now it's ur and everybody's turn now..lol
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Posted 4/11/08

Shimia49 wrote:

........ ya lost me when u started to write in paragraghs. o.o


which one got you confused? my writing or the other writer's?
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