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Posted 3/7/08 , edited 3/11/08
the wind
stroke so soft
as my tears go down
as the sun
thinking
the night come
but it will end
and tomrrow the day will start
agein
and I will
be the first who sees
the sun

I whis you
could be here
whit me
but I know its not
going to
Im here and you there
life cant stop
for me
or you
whe most live in our world
between those two world
as we touch the glas
dear sister

we are alike
but not twins
we are same blood
but not siblings
or family

If I could
I would cut those
chains
that hold me here
and go to you
but do you
exist

I see you
but I cant hear you
I can touch you
but I cant feel the
warm of you body
only the cold
of the glas

two world so alike but
stillthey are not the
same
are you like me
do you want
to be here
whit me
as I whit
you

tears run down our
face
as a smile
comes to our lips
I will never know
who you are
or you me
cuse I cant happen

your me
but not really
I see you
but not
feel you
same blood and same body
but not
family
I see you speak
but dosnt hear
a word
only my own
voice

cuse you

are the girl
in the mirror
traped in the cold glas
bound there
we cant reach out and touch
the cold invisble barrier
will not
let us

but I know
as i walk away you will
allways be here
somewher
and one day
I hope I will finally
touch you
and feel
the mirror girl
that is me....



Finally a new poem....but I think it makes no sens
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Posted 3/8/08
No don't worry !! It makes perfect sense! Well, to me.
Anyhow, this one's really really good too >< Becuz...when I'm alone in my room...there's mirror across from my bed and I kinda sometimes talk to myself lol >< I know, it's weird
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Posted 3/8/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:

No don't worry !! It makes perfect sense! Well, to me.
Anyhow, this one's really really good too >< Becuz...when I'm alone in my room...there's mirror across from my bed and I kinda sometimes talk to myself lol >< I know, it's weird


thank you ^^ and good that it makes sens to you =D cuse it didt really to me and I writed it >-<
Its not wierd at all! your talking to one who talks to the mirror and her shadow xD

Posted 3/8/08
AWESOME YAMIRA!!! X3,,,, >.<...not fair u wrote a new one b4 me
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Posted 3/8/08

Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

No don't worry !! It makes perfect sense! Well, to me.
Anyhow, this one's really really good too >< Becuz...when I'm alone in my room...there's mirror across from my bed and I kinda sometimes talk to myself lol >< I know, it's weird


thank you ^^ and good that it makes sens to you =D cuse it didt really to me and I writed it >-<
Its not wierd at all! your talking to one who talks to the mirror and her shadow xD



Ahahaha lol ^^ Hehe, glad I share this non-weird thing with you =P NIce job again ^^
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Posted 3/12/08
a good poem!!!...u show us the difference and the same!!!...as the same time!!! i think it's cool!!!...and the final picture was great!!!...very good yamira!!!... Congratulations
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david_k_belanova wrote:

a good poem!!!...u show us the difference and the same!!!...as the same time!!! i think it's cool!!!...and the final picture was great!!!...very good yamira!!!... Congratulations


Thank you very much !!! well it was thanks to the pic that I got the idear xD
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Posted 3/14/08

kagura4 wrote:

AWESOME YAMIRA!!! X3,,,, >.<...not fair u wrote a new one b4 me


Thank you ^^
MUHAHA!! That means Im better then you !!!
jk xD I just got the idear hope you will soon get one too!!
Posted 3/14/08

Yamira wrote:


kagura4 wrote:

AWESOME YAMIRA!!! X3,,,, >.<...not fair u wrote a new one b4 me


Thank you ^^
MUHAHA!! That means Im better then you !!!
jk xD I just got the idear hope you will soon get one too!!


lol ya i think ur right
I hope i get an idea soon
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Posted 5/10/08

Yamira wrote:

the wind
stroke so soft
as my tears go down
as the sun
thinking
the night come
but it will end
and tomrrow the day will start
agein
and I will
be the first who sees
the sun

I whis you
could be here
whit me
but I know its not
going to
Im here and you there
life cant stop
for me
or you
whe most live in our world
between those two world
as we touch the glas
dear sister

we are alike
but not twins
we are same blood
but not siblings
or family

If I could
I would cut those
chains
that hold me here
and go to you
but do you
exist

I see you
but I cant hear you
I can touch you
but I cant feel the
warm of you body
only the cold
of the glas

two world so alike but
stillthey are not the
same
are you like me
do you want
to be here
whit me
as I whit
you

tears run down our
face
as a smile
comes to our lips
I will never know
who you are
or you me
cuse I cant happen

your me
but not really
I see you
but not
feel you
same blood and same body
but not
family
I see you speak
but dosnt hear
a word
only my own
voice

cuse you

are the girl
in the mirror
traped in the cold glas
bound there
we cant reach out and touch
the cold invisble barrier
will not
let us

but I know
as i walk away you will
allways be here
somewher
and one day
I hope I will finally
touch you
and feel
the mirror girl
that is me....



Finally a new poem....but I think it makes no sens


Yamira my pc is kind of crazy so i need to replay u here to can chat with people here in cr!!!...i don't know why!!!...but well!!..., oh! and this is my favorite poem!!!...=)
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Posted 5/11/08

david_k_belanova wrote:


Yamira wrote:


Yamira my pc is kind of crazy so i need to replay u here to can chat with people here in cr!!!...i don't know why!!!...but well!!..., oh! and this is my favorite poem!!!...=)


I undearstand ^^ Im glad you liked this poem its one of my favorits as well ^^
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Posted 5/13/08

Yamira wrote:

the wind
stroke so soft
as my tears go down
as the sun
thinking
the night come
but it will end
and tomrrow the day will start
agein
and I will
be the first who sees
the sun

I whis you
could be here
whit me
but I know its not
going to
Im here and you there
life cant stop
for me
or you
whe most live in our world
between those two world
as we touch the glas
dear sister

we are alike
but not twins
we are same blood
but not siblings
or family

If I could
I would cut those
chains
that hold me here
and go to you
but do you
exist

I see you
but I cant hear you
I can touch you
but I cant feel the
warm of you body
only the cold
of the glas

two world so alike but
stillthey are not the
same
are you like me
do you want
to be here
whit me
as I whit
you

tears run down our
face
as a smile
comes to our lips
I will never know
who you are
or you me
cuse I cant happen

your me
but not really
I see you
but not
feel you
same blood and same body
but not
family
I see you speak
but dosnt hear
a word
only my own
voice

cuse you

are the girl
in the mirror
traped in the cold glas
bound there
we cant reach out and touch
the cold invisble barrier
will not
let us

but I know
as i walk away you will
allways be here
somewher
and one day
I hope I will finally
touch you
and feel
the mirror girl
that is me....



Finally a new poem....but I think it makes no sens


Can you sign up in hotmail!!!...my pc doesn't want to work with cr!!!...i don't know why!!!...this sucks!!!...and i really want to talk with u!!!...and i'm chatting there with marcela!!!...come on sign up please!!!TT_______TT [even i can't put faces like the one with a drop in his head, or with glasses...any of them!!!]
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