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oh, and i got impatient so the Dream of Nobody's Princess is starting now!

Chapter 1

The princess sat boredly on her cushion as the snotty prince yattered on and on about his "grand debut" or whatever. She faked a smile, and excused herself. {Thank god that stopped!} Was the first thought that came as she leaned on the bathroom door. She sighed frustratedly. {I hate being royal. I hate being a princess. But I have to. I was born to be a royal pet. But I still hate it.} The princess seethed in her thoughts, and quietly slipped out of the party. She breathed in the morning air gratefully, and watched as the ninjas across the field from me train with their sensei. {I had never felt so envious in my life.} Princess of the Rain village, slave and daughter of the Ame prince, 6 year old Zirukya Aita . {Why can't I just go off? Go be a ninja myself?} Aita suddenly thought. She slapped her forehead and groaned. {Now I realize that? This is the perfect moment!} She excitedly but cautiously looked in the equipment bin for the ninja, the bin that supplied quick necessaries for the nin when they went on missions. She grinned happily at the equipment that she had trained with when she often cast genjutsu over the guards.


Aita's Pov
There were kunai, shurikens, other weapons, dried food and water, clothing, scrolls, maps, and all sorts of things that helped nin. I grabbed a pair of shorts, a pack, some shurikens and kunai, lots of food, and a black shirt with two jackets, light and warm. I changed my clothes clumsily, and fell onto a katana rack. I froze, and listened. The adults were too drunk too notice. I felt something bump my head, and I winced. It was a sharp weapon. I grabbed it off, and stared. It was a weapon with a smooth handle, and arm-length, sharp twin blades lying parallel to each other, one on top of the other. I flipped the blade, and caught it expertly. This was going to be my weapon. I grinned, and strapped the rest of the paraphernalia onto my body. I cut my long, black hair with a kunai, stuffed the hair and kimono into my pouch, and rushed away from my village, hoping, wishing, that I would never see its cursed walls again.


I stopped at a fork in the road I was following, and looked at the sign pointing either way. One said Suna, and the other said Konoha. I threw my new katana up in the air, and it fell, pointing to the Konoha. I shrugged, picked it up, and, ran off to the right path to Konoha. It was going to be my new home...

"This had better be a good village," I muttered to myself. The greenery sure was nice, but looks weren't everything. Konoha's gates loomed up before me, and I saw two guards standing, alert of my arrival.
"Hey little girl, what are you doing here?," a guard asked curiously.
I panicked. If I told them I was a princess runaway, they'd send my back to where I had just came from. "I came from the village of the Mist-Sea," I replied nervously. "My parents will probably send...someone to me soon."
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oh, never mind. btw, Wolf-Waves Chapter 22 may not be up for a while, sorry!

on with the story!



Chapter 2

I gave them my innocent little girl look and they exchanged glances with each other, and smiled at me. "OIIII, WHAT'S GOING ON?!," I heard someone yell. I saw a blond boy my age running towards us. He tripped, but stood up again, grinning and giving a peace sign. I sweat dropped. {What a strange guy.} One of the guards exclaimed, "Oh, right on time Naruto! Can you escort young...er..." he looked at me. "Aita, “I stated. "Zirukya Aita." "Then, Naruto, please escort Aita-chan to the Hokage." Naruto scrunched his face up a little, grinning, and saluted. "ALRIGHT!"

He turned to me and grinned. "My name is Uzumaki Naruto and I'm going to be Hokage someday BELIEVE IT!,” he yelled ecstatically. I smiled warmly, and said,” I’m sure you will Naruto." He turned to me, surprised. I grinned evilly. "But not before I kick your butt." He pouted irritably, but I saw traces of a smile tugging at his lips. "YOU WISH!!" We laughed and joked around the whole way to the Hokage's office, having a great time.

Naruto whispered,” Go on!" and pushed me into the large office. I stumbled, but regained composure quickly (me: she had gone through royal do's and don’ts all her life duh). I looked up and saw an old man behind a huge desk (me again: she is of course only 6). His eyes sparkled warmly, and he folded his hands.

"I presume you wish for a place to live in Konoha little one?," he asked. I nervously fidgeted with my hands. I didn't do very well with adults. "Yes, my parents will s-send a person to watch over me soon...they told me to stay here,” I lied. The Hokage looked thoughtful. "What is your name and age child?," he asked curiously. "U-um, my name is Zirukya Aita, and I-I'm 6 years old."

His expression cleared, and he smiled mysteriously. "Tell your parents there is no need to send a guardian. I will provide for someone to care for you. Courtesy of the Hokage to the Mist-Sea country." I sighed softly, relieved that I would not have to make my lie reality. The Hokage pulled a key out of a cabinet, and handed it to me.
Your apartment is on Aoi Street, on the left side, number 132." He looked at the door. "Naruto will show you, won't you Naruto?" I snapped my head towards the door, and saw Naruto walking in, unembarrassed by the fact that he had been found out. The Hokage glanced back at his papers, and shooed us off. "Go see your apartment Aita, and I hope you like Konoha!"

>>>At your new home

Naruto's eyes widened as he saw the door to Aita's apartment. He started to jump up and down, screeching," YOU LIVE NEXT TO ME AITA-CHAN, DATTEBAYO!" Aita covered her ears, and painfully squeaked out," Thanks for taking me here Naruto, I can take it from here." She leaned over and kissed his cheek, then slipped inside of her room. Naruto just stood there, touching his cheek, suddenly quiet and kind of pink. "S-sure Aita-chan..." he opened his door, and went dazedly into his room for some ramen.

Aita’s Pov~
I happily leapt onto the comfy mattress in the corner of the room. I rolled around and around on it like an idiot, reveling in the new something that was mines and mines alone. I had a new, freer life now, and I loved every second of it. I grabbed the little cash I had, and went out to buy clothes and toiletries. I pumped my fists in the air, and yelled, "I FEEL AWESOOOOME!!"
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READ THIS I DID NOT MAKE THIS STORY I COPIED IT FROM QUIZILLA BUT I WANTED YOU GUYS TO READ IT!!

It was a special day today, and we had it all planned out. However, our plan depended entirely on one little thing...

[[[And a very important smidget it is!]]]

Please ignore that. That's the voice in the back of my head. Wait- there's Naruto!

[[[We're going for a completely casual appearance, so he doesn't suspect anything. O.K. now, in 3-2-1-]]]

"Hey Naruto-kun!"

"HEY KAIYA!!!"

"Naruto, you know what today is?" I held my breath. If he knew...

"Yep!" Damnit. There goes our whole plan...


[[[Calm down. Act cool.]]]

"It's CHRISTMAS! I brought you a present, too!" He held out a gift card to Ichiraku's.

"........."

"...Do you like it?"

"Naruto... Christmas is in eight months..."

"...Oh"

"On the plus side, I get a present for no reason!" Pocketing the card, Naruto and I walked, chattering about randomness. However...

Our plan was a success! Naruto didn't know it was his birthday today! Well He was the village idiot for a reason. But isn't that why we all love him?


[[[Hells yeah!]]]

Great, the voice is back. But I don't mind. It actually has pretty good ideas... Anyhow, we had been planning this day for months. The whole village was in on it, and it all boiled down to today. It was a special day for our #1 knuckle-headed ninja, and we were totally going to make it memorable...

[[[Oh yes we will, won't we now?]]]

Is it bad that I hear a little voice in the back of my head? However, disregarding that, I led Naruto to a large grassy field. I flopped down on the grass, staring up at the sky, and soon Naruto sat down too. It was a perfect day, no clouds. We were counting on this weather also. A perfect blue sky...

[[[Go in for the kill now, Kaiya! Over and out!]]]

"Naruto, don't you love just staring at the sky?"

"Meh... Ramen is better."

B"ut the sky is sooo pretty, like a glass dome..."


[[[Thats their cue!]]]

"I never really thought about that... Kaiya-chan what is the sky like?"

"I think it's like a ball of glass, looking so fragile, it could shatter and fall on us!"


[[[Don't you think you hinted a little to heavily?]]]

Nope. Thats their cue... any second now... Come on... this is vital to the plan... Oh!

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!"


[[[Ow, my ears! Loud, much?]]]

"What happened Naruto?" He was staring at something in his hand... something blue... Success!

"Kaiya, like, you were just saying the sky was like glass, and I think a piece of it FELL!!!"

"Omigosh- let me see!" As he handed me the piece of sky, I masked my giggles with a look of shock.

"Naruto, this is really bad! I really think this is actually a piece of the sky- oh no... the sky... it's..."

"ITS FALLING! Kaiya-chan, the sky is falling- the sky is falling! We have to tell the whole village, or they could be in great danger!"

"You're right Naruto! Oh no, this is terrible!" I stood up, then faked dizziness, falling to my knees, one hand clutching the piece of the sky and the other hand clutching Naruto's jacket.


[[[You're totally milking this, you sly fox.]]]

It took every ounce of willpower not to laugh as Naruto knelt down besides me, assuming the role of the 'protector'.

"Its alright Kaiya. No matter what happens, I'll protect you. Believe it!"

Giving a 'weak' smile I struggled to keep up with Naruto as he ran to the Hokage's office at breakneck speed.


[[[Dude, like, that kid can, like, totally run! Peace out bro...]]]

My inner self sounds stoned...

Anyways, Naruto burst into the Hokages office, where oh-so-coincidentally, a meeting was being held! The room fell silent as we ran in, and I took pride in seeing that no face held even a ghost of a smile. As I said, we totally planned this day.


[[[He's still catching his breath. Plug your ears, in 10-9-8-7-6-]]]

"OLD GRANNY TSUNADE, OLD GRANNY TSUNADE! THEY SKY IS FALLING, THE SKY IS FALLING!"

"What do you mean Naruto?"

"Look, I was in a meadow when a piece of the sky fell on me and Kaiya! Look!"

He held up the 'sky', and Tsunade-sama inspected it gravely.


[[[She is so trying not to laugh]]]

"Naruto, thank you for warning me. This poses a great threat to the village, and I need two ninjas to go warn everybody to evacuate immediately and gather in front of the Hokage's monument, where the people will be informed of this imminent threat."

"Me and Kaiya will do that!"


[[[It's supposed to be Kaiya and I will do that. Grammar is pitiful among this younger generation.]]]

Not waiting for an answer from Tsunade-sama, Naruto grabbed my wrist and ran out the door. This day has gone by perfectly so far, and all according to plan.

As we ran from house to house, the same scene was repeated over and over again. Naruto would bang on the door, scream, "The sky is falling, the sky is falling!" shove the piece of sky in the people's faces as 'proof', direct the people in the house towards the base of the Hokage's monument and run to the next house, where we would repeat this all over again.


[[[87 houses and he's still not tired? Time to intervene- it's past noon already!]]]

The voice had common sense, too! I was panting, and totally out of energy...

"NARUTO!"

"YEAH?"

"I'm sure everyone in the village knows by now... you know that word spreads fast here!"

To my relief, Naruto nodded.

"To the Hokage's monument now to save Konoha BEFORE THE REST OF THE SKY FALLS!!!!!!! AAAAHH!!!'


[[[yellow][Does that kid never get tired of screaming?]]]

We ran to the top of the Hokage's monument, where we saw, clustered below, the entire village. Naruto stepped to the edge, held up the piece of sky, took a deep breath, and...

[[[Plug your ears, and then push him off. Now or never, sweetheart.]]]

See, I told you the voice has good ideas! Back to Naruto, he took a deep breath and...

"THE SKY IS FALLING, DATTEBAYO! BELIEVE IT! THE SKY IS FALLI- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!"


[[[I didn't really think you'd push him off! Hats off to you! Bravo!]]]

Stepping to the edge, I yelled down to the falling Naruto,

"Naruto, the only thing falling here is YOU! Oh, and by the way- HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!"

After everyone pitched in to save Naruto's retarded ass and had a nice long laugh at him, we celebrated. It was his 16th birthday, and we had certainly made this day memorable. Although I doubt I've ever seen someone turn as red as Naruto did when he figured out that the sky wasn't falling...


[[[One day, honey, when he's older, he'll look back on today and laaauugghh...]]]

After everyone gave Naruto his presents, feasted on cake, and finally left to go back home, I sat by him at the top of the Hokage's monument, watching him turn over the painted glass piece of the sky in his hands.

[[[Haha, the imbecile fell for it! We did plan it out quite well though, dahling.]]]

Hehe, I'm so evil

"Kaiya... So the sky wasn't really falling?"

"For the last time Naruto, no!"

"Hmph... I'm going to hang this up in my room."

"You go ahead and do that. Oh, and by the way..."

"What?"


"Happy birthday to you,
You thought the sky fell on you!
You looked like an idiot..."


Here Naruto lunged towards me, but I sidestepped, sending him flying off the monument again...

"...AND THE ONLY THING FALLING IS YOU!"

"KAIYAAA!!! I'MM GOING TO KIIILLLL YOOOOUUUUU!!!!!!!!!"

[[[And this is where you run for you life...]]]
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ahh mistery water...ur wolf wave is really nice...love it so much!! so so..whens the 22nd chapter coming out?? cant wait for it^^ thumbs up for u..cheers!! i will support u trhu the end^^
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i will read ur princess story tmr^^ hehe...
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read~ u must really like konoha and naruto^^ haha!
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Wow, your wolf wave is really good i want to read the rest!!! when r u making chapter 22 !! ??? hehe ^^
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good princess story!! cant wait till Ch.22 of W.W nd da rest of da princess story comes out!!^-^ da story dat u got 4rm quizilla iz good nd funny!!^-^
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THANKS PPL!

you guys have no idea how much that means to me! or maybe you do...

oh, and, I'm a girl.
not mister waters.
hehe...
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Oh, and chapt. 22 is almost done, so plz wait ppl!^_^
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ur welcome!!^-^ lolz!! itz miss waters XP okie dokie!! ill wait^-^
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ahaha~ cant wait..missywaters! haha
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O.O mis- terywaters.

mystery and miss combined. ^-^
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