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Posted 3/8/08
walking here
alone
betwen
thos dark tombs
this place is my
prison
my prison of dead
dreams

I sometime
kneel down
infront
of one
and blowe
away the dust
to see
what that dream was
just to see
alittl
light
but those dreams
are dead
I dont think
I can reborn them
still
if I could
they would not be the same
as they was back then

Why did
I end up here?
why cant I get
this darkness
out of my head....
why did this happen
I didnt whant that

walking into a
room
new faces
I see
they all look nice
walking to my
new desk
and all was nice
but I dint know
that shadows
was folowing me
shadows
whit
the abilety
to hurt

One day
you and those
frinds
talk whit me
I talk back
I dint feel
the danger thet
was luring
behind those
smiling mask
you wher wearing

I told you
much
I told other too
and you lisned
and that
was my first step
into
my grave

Talkin so loud
about
those things
I write
and draw
making fun
of what I think
and how I speak

Im not crying
but
Im breaking
why
do you do this
why can you just
shut up
I know
I like those dark stuff
and
I know
I talk about
such things
and
I know
Im not interested
in those things
and
that I dont uderstand
but one thing
I do uderstand
is
that you are not right
to say such things

I dint break
infront of you
I ignored you
I dont trust you
and I hate you
I never say that
up in your face
but
sometime
I just whant
to kill you

You made
some of my dreams
break
and they died
and Im
walking
in the graveyard
of those dreams

pepole
ask sometime
are you really sane?
am I sane...
or
am I crazy
do I need help....
I dont whant help
I whant to be me
I whant pepole to
accept me

I had dark
troughs
that I knew
but they got stronger
when those pepole came
and
thenk to them
Im not so easy
to trust others
I know
that Im not the only one
that have such a prison
in my head
but
some
hide that behind
a mask
well....
I wont do that
mayby
sometime
I do
but I whont hide it
I will
not let you destroy me

you can break
me
and
give me scars
but I wont
let you kill
me
I wont let you kill
the tru me

This prison is my home now
you chased
me insid
and
forgott me ther
but...
I dont care
I like it here
here I know
who I really am
and
you cant get in
and
destroy this
world

I dont know
who won
but
I tell you
you didnt win
cuse I still
are here
and
I will fight
to the end......
Posted 3/8/08
great poem once again yamira, i really like this one, i had an experience like that with a friend once
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Posted 3/14/08

kagura4 wrote:

great poem once again yamira, i really like this one, i had an experience like that with a friend once


Thank you =)
oh really thats sad too hear.....is it just me or have I writed many things that ppl have experienced T.T
Posted 3/14/08

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kagura4 wrote:

great poem once again yamira, i really like this one, i had an experience like that with a friend once


Thank you =)
oh really thats sad too hear.....is it just me or have I writed many things that ppl have experienced T.T


ya i think u have...thanx 4 doin that!
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Ah! I just had a friend like that last year T_T It was such a dramatic moment in school =P
Anyhow.........AMAZING AWESOMELY KILLER FANTASTIC POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really liked it. It's amazing you can write like this....I"M SOO JEALOUS =P hehehe
Good job!!!
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moonwarrior485 wrote:

Ah! I just had a friend like that last year T_T It was such a dramatic moment in school =P
Anyhow.........AMAZING AWESOMELY KILLER FANTASTIC POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really liked it. It's amazing you can write like this....I"M SOO JEALOUS =P hehehe
Good job!!!


that was the longes name thet I ever have gotten to one of my poems ^///^ so thenk you!
no need to be jelous just try and write !! and then It will go....but a warning its just happen one time i think I have never made any new poem as this one TT.TT..
and ther we have it agein >.< ppl have had just like my poems said...
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Posted 3/19/08
Wow, very cool poem and very long!
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WhitePlazma wrote:

Wow, very cool poem and very long!


Thanks! if you read more of poems I have made you will get juse to the longness
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Posted 3/19/08

Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

Ah! I just had a friend like that last year T_T It was such a dramatic moment in school =P
Anyhow.........AMAZING AWESOMELY KILLER FANTASTIC POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really liked it. It's amazing you can write like this....I"M SOO JEALOUS =P hehehe
Good job!!!


that was the longes name thet I ever have gotten to one of my poems ^///^ so thenk you!
no need to be jelous just try and write !! and then It will go....but a warning its just happen one time i think I have never made any new poem as this one TT.TT..
and ther we have it agein >.< ppl have had just like my poems said...


You're welcome ^^ And long name = really good poem xD. Hmm, I bet you'll have even more better ones then this in the future. And then you'll get the published and become famous!! Hehe =P
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Posted 3/20/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

Ah! I just had a friend like that last year T_T It was such a dramatic moment in school =P
Anyhow.........AMAZING AWESOMELY KILLER FANTASTIC POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really liked it. It's amazing you can write like this....I"M SOO JEALOUS =P hehehe
Good job!!!


that was the longes name thet I ever have gotten to one of my poems ^///^ so thenk you!
no need to be jelous just try and write !! and then It will go....but a warning its just happen one time i think I have never made any new poem as this one TT.TT..
and ther we have it agein >.< ppl have had just like my poems said...


You're welcome ^^ And long name = really good poem xD. Hmm, I bet you'll have even more better ones then this in the future. And then you'll get the published and become famous!! Hehe =P


yeah let us dream let us dream xD
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Posted 3/21/08

Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

Ah! I just had a friend like that last year T_T It was such a dramatic moment in school =P
Anyhow.........AMAZING AWESOMELY KILLER FANTASTIC POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really liked it. It's amazing you can write like this....I"M SOO JEALOUS =P hehehe
Good job!!!


that was the longes name thet I ever have gotten to one of my poems ^///^ so thenk you!
no need to be jelous just try and write !! and then It will go....but a warning its just happen one time i think I have never made any new poem as this one TT.TT..
and ther we have it agein >.< ppl have had just like my poems said...


You're welcome ^^ And long name = really good poem xD. Hmm, I bet you'll have even more better ones then this in the future. And then you'll get the published and become famous!! Hehe =P


yeah let us dream let us dream xD


Dreaming's never a bad thing =]
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