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Copyright C Prologue

A long time ago earth was isolated from the rest of the galaxy. Anything outside of earth was considered an alien. Now earth is the head of a galactic alliance that works toward peace. But currently the alliance is at war with an unknown enemy called the draca. The draca are horrid creatures that feed off of any living thing. Not many people have faced the draca… and lived. The alliance has been at war now for twelve years and billions have died. An earth scientist has been assigned a job of creating a weapon that will change the course of the war.
Ch.1: Vacation
Justin was just a normal boy on vacation with his best friend, his cousin, his mom and dad with his brother. They were staying at five-star resort by the sea on alderon V. Justin comes out of one of the virtual reality game pods when he runs into his friend Jessica. “Games again?” Jess asked. “Yeah” Justin responded. “You do that at home so it’s not much of a vacation for you. Jess told him. Jessica is a fifteen year old, blonde, blue eyed girl who has been Justin’s friend since fifth grade. “Yeah, but this is the upgraded version and I had to play it.” Justin said. Justin is a sixteen year old with ink black hair and ocean blue eyes. “Well you promised not to play games the whole time.” Jess complained. “Okay, okay, what do you want to do?” Justin asked. “Let’s head to the beach.” Jess suggested. So they headed for the beach. When they got there they started building sand castles and collecting shells.
“Whew, it’s hot today” Justin said. “It’s only hot out because you haven’t gone into the water yet.” Jess explained. “Wait, is that your parents?” she asked. He turned and saw his parents walking over to them. “Hello, what are you guys doing out here?” Mrs. Frank asked. “We were just playing around.” Justin told them. “As long as you’re not causing trouble.” Mr. Frank said. “We’ll leave you two alone now. See you later.” Mrs. Frank said as they walked away. “Well, what do you want to do now?” Justin asked Jess. “Why don’t we explore the hotel?” she asked. “Alright, let’s go.” Justin said. And they headed to the hotel where they spent about two hours walking around.
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it was long long time ago....a dark boy was born....he had black hair,dark eyes,and was all the time lonely.
His family members died cause of a vampire....and he was the only surviver.in that night he was all covered with blood.allthought he didnt died he had a mark on his face because of that vampire.it was a black snake around his left eye.All the people were scared of him and he hadnt got friends.
Many times he wanted to do suicide but every time when he toght he could turn in a vampire(cause actually that mark was a seal),he stopped and continue his miserable life.allways crying.
One night he went to a castle...in the tower it was a red light and he ran to see what it was.It was the vampire who killed his parents.and everywhere was just blood.the vampire looked tirsty and he wanted to kill the boy.the boy jump qiuckly from the window.but he forgot that he couldnt escape and he felt and died.
Then the vampire seal was broken and he changed into a vampire.
He sucked much blood and lived for many years.after 153 years he met a women that was human.and she wasnt afraid of him.they felt in love with each other.and the rest is a SECRET:)
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U know, I don't want to continue with my other story so I'll make a differnt one. And those that have lest their discription in shingami world is going to be in it.
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Behindtheshadow - the story you posted could be very very beautiful and romantic if you beef it up a bit.

Lonewolf - i like the idea for your first story, sad to hear you won't be continuing. I'm looking forward to reading your new story though
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Don't worry I have a better idea for a story.
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Yey
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I'm sure everybody will like it.
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yep yep, i'm sure we will

I'm debating with myself if i should post one of my stories ... it's unfinished though, so i don't know
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Go ahead.
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hmmm.. okay

This is the first time anyone will see any of my stories though, so be nice lol
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2054

Prologue
It is the year 2054. Almost thirty years ago a string of gruesome murders has gripped the world in fear. They called them vampire murders, because the victims were always found exsanguinated. However, when one of the creatures was captured it reminded more of the savage werewolves then the aristocratic vampires from the pages of books. Experiments on the caught specimen revealed a weakness in the otherwise perfect killing machine. UV rays. Something within the creature’s blood reacted violently to them and caused almost immediate and apparently painful death. That’s when the scientists also found out that the creature was once human, and the thing that was reacting to the rays was the virus that caused the change in physiology and mental activity. Since then an agency was established that was responsible for keeping the vampire population at bay, as well as was in charge of anything that concerned the creatures. This agency is called The High Order. The location of its headquarters is kept a secret from the public for security purposes. It is here where the top students from Academies are gathered as Agents to deal with the most difficult and dangerous missions. Academies are schools for those who wish to become vampire slayers … or you know, something less Buffy related. There are many of these schools across the world and most graduates are sent to branches of The High Order that are located in major cities on the planet. The cream of the crop however are recruited by the Headquarters where they learn valuable field experience as a partner of an already active Agent. And although these soldiers have proven to be the most effective counter measure against the vampires, there is still no known cure for the virus and since it is transmitted through saliva to blood contact even a single puncture of skin by the creature’s teeth is enough for an almost immediate transformation into a bloodthirsty monster.
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Ch.1: The begining

Lee sat on a bench in the park under the pale moon light. His blue hair covered his icy blue eyes that were focused on an ant crawling just inches away. He wore long, dark blue jeans with a blue under shirt and a black trenchcoat. The night breeze felt good and he was overall relaxed. He sat there for what seemed like hours when he heard light footsteps behind him. "Time to go back." a voice behind him said. "Why? It's a beautiful night tonight." Lee respnded. "It's dangerous to stay out to long what with the vampires and the humans. You could be easily killed by either of them" An elderly man sat next to him. "I could stand my own." Lee said confidently. "Against our own yes. But humans are smarter than you may think. And vampires are twice as strong. You just havn't had enough training yet. Now follow me, and quickly." the older man told him. The old man turned into a grey wolf and sprinted into the night. Lee turned into a blue wolf and followed.
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ooooooohh ..... *is intrigued*
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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2054

Ch 1. pt1.

THO Headquarters

Johnson: This is him, sir.
A man in a gray suit put down a folder of papers on the table in a big office where only a lonely table stood by the window.
Mr. Russo: Ah, Cody Hale. He looks promising.
Johnson: Indeed, sir. Frankly, I believe that this is the closest that anyone has ever gotten to Kira’s scores.
Mr. Russo: I think you’re right. Well, then, Johnson, send out the invitation.

Pancost Academy

Dale: Damn Cody, I can’t believe they want you to join the Headquarters! You’re so lucky!
A group of excited boys stood on the stairs in front of the entrance to a large building, all looking at pieces of paper taken out of personally addressed envelopes.
Cody: I know. This is awesome! Where are you assigned?
Asked a boy with ear length brown, slightly wavy hair. The term “boy” is used loosely since the attendees of Academies were all eighteen or older. Cody was twenty two. His curious brown eyes looked at his slightly taller friend.
Dale: The Madrid Precinct.
Dale had black spiky hair and sly green eyes.
Cody: That’s really good too.
Dale: Not as good as your assignment.
Sef: Yeah, you lucky bastard. Hey may be you’ll get to meet Kira.
Said a blue eyed blond
Cody: I hope so.
Sef: All we’ve been hearing since the first day of classes is Kira this Kira that. If you meet her you can see if she’s really all that.
Cody: Oh I don…
Sef: I bet she’s hot.
Dale: Sef!
Sef: What? I mean a chick like that has to be hot. Right? What do you guys think? D cup? Double D?
A slap upside the head from Dale sent ringing in his ears.
Cody: Is that all you can think about?
Dale: Where are you assigned to anyway?
Sef: Umm…. I gotto repeat this year. I did okay on the physical, but I completely bombed my written exam.
Dale: Oh, dude, no way.
Sef: It’s alright though, since I get to browse the freshmen girls one more year.
Cody: Somehow, I think you failed on purpose.
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