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Posted 3/11/08
Days go by in the sorrowed zone

Shivering spine to the core of your bone

Phoenix bring back your life today

But there's a price that you must pay

Starting now you're under me soldier

What I say is your specific order

Do my biding and die an unforgivable life

Disobey and you'll die without children or a wife

You will show no mercy or emotion to this place

Never forget my words incase

You have no reputation or soul

In life you have no hope no goal

You are my chivalior my retainer my fighter

Remember this , you are a soldier
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Posted 3/11/08
AWESOME.... an A.A - B.B rhyme is so hard for me lol. but yours is flawless
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Posted 3/12/08
Thanks
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