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What story will you write if you were a 'mangaka'?
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25 / F / Yokohama, Japan
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The story I'm mainly working on now is a school life-type story, I guess, A girl and a boy grow up as next-door neighbors, like brother and sister, pretty much. Their families get a little messed up as time goes on - these days, whose doesn't? - but they don't care too much because they're too in their own world to really notice.

That's while they're elementary students. When they go up to middle school, the girl kind of joins in a clique and tries to make herself one of those stereotypical popular girls. She decides she needs a boyfriend - and who better than the boy she's known all her life? Except she actually likes him . . . and he doesn't want to be dragged into the clique mess.

So she gets rejected, and they fight. Just then (perfect timing, isn't it?) the boy's mom decides she's had enough and decides to get divorced and take him with her, back to her hometown. They don't have a chance to make up, and the girl's left alone thinking he still hates her while he really wants to apologize and let her know what he meant when he rejected her.

Stuff happens. The girl stays in the same place, waiting. The guy doesn't have the best of times away from her, and when he comes back, it isn't really for her, and he isn't really the same anymore.
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dreamweaver49 wrote:

The story I'm mainly working on now is a school life-type story, I guess, A girl and a boy grow up as next-door neighbors, like brother and sister, pretty much. Their families get a little messed up as time goes on - these days, whose doesn't? - but they don't care too much because they're too in their own world to really notice.

That's while they're elementary students. When they go up to middle school, the girl kind of joins in a clique and tries to make herself one of those stereotypical popular girls. She decides she needs a boyfriend - and who better than the boy she's known all her life? Except she actually likes him . . . and he doesn't want to be dragged into the clique mess.

So she gets rejected, and they fight. Just then (perfect timing, isn't it?) the boy's mom decides she's had enough and decides to get divorced and take him with her, back to her hometown. They don't have a chance to make up, and the girl's left alone thinking he still hates her while he really wants to apologize and let her know what he meant when he rejected her.

Stuff happens. The girl stays in the same place, waiting. The guy doesn't have the best of times away from her, and when he comes back, it isn't really for her, and he isn't really the same anymore.



oooo that sounds like something i'd read! nice plot! ^.^
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28 / F / Cebu
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Posted 3/13/08
oh i dunno... something shoujo-ish with lots of fantasy and action. but mostly romance.
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22 / F / CACTUS FARM ©
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Posted 3/13/08
oooooo hmmmm i would write a story about a girl shes different, but she gets abused by her parents so she doesnt nmo where to go but this friendly guy takes her in and they fall in love etc. hmm their might be love conflict betweeen him and his brother who also lives with him ;D my characters ._________________. i dunt really now Dx cant think but w.e ;D
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26 / F / California
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Posted 3/13/08
something that falls
under Romance-Comedy genre
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30 / M / Australia
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Posted 3/13/08

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A hooker on crack who tries to get the law to bend to her will!!!!!!!!!!!


Send me a draft when your done, lol.
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26 / M / ... no way ...
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Posted 3/13/08
Do you think that moderators would allow original mangas drawn by civilians like us? ... Would they mind that it is not made professionally?
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Horror > Slaughter > Lots of blood > Crazy kids running with knives > Twisted ending

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30 / Sore wa himitsu d...
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Posted 3/14/08
Here's an idea I'm currently working on (as soon as I get the software and IRL tools, I actually plan on making it [the story])

Current working title...
Tsuki Ishi: Moonstone

Central characters...

Name: Moon Crystal
Gender: Female
Occupation: Gray Wizard/Magical Freelancer
Notes: Before the start of the series, Moon Crystal wanders the country telling stories, helping others deal with magical problems and preformed magic tricks under the stage name "Moonstone" (hence the title); is currently roommates with Paul.

Name: Paul
Gender: Male
Occupation: Accountant
Notes: Works for a large corproation, keeping their files organized and their checkbooks balanced. Is Moon Crystal's roommate and has a white Bishon puppy named Sarah.

Name: Kage
Gender: Male
Occupation: Moon Crystal's familar
Notes: A smart and calm black cat that's Moon Crystal's magical partner and best friend.

The general story focuses at first on introducting Paul (and consequently, the reader) to the hidden magical world, its secrets and its creatures. But the story doesn't discredit science in the process, instead, scientific knowledge whould be used to complement the magical knowledge in this series (also the other way around).
As for possible comedy, Moon Crystal's actions...could make it seem that Moon Crystal's one card short of a full deck, but keep this in mind. There's always a method to her madness. Even if it's just simply to amuse herself to conteract the (so called) 'effect' of 'as knowledge goes up, happyness goes down'. One possible story arc has Moon Crystal and Paul wandering the country like before the story started.

The fact that Moon Crystal never uses the pronoun "she" is one of her (according to others) 'odd habits' (why Moon Crystal never uses that pronoun will be revealed during the course of the story).

Plus a few side-story ideas...
"Silver Fox" and "Silver Wolf", both of them will have the subtitle "A Moonstone side-story".
The full titles will be "Silver Fox: A Moonstone side-story" and "Silver Wolf: A Moonstone side-story".
"Silver Fox" will be set in the past (American Civil War era) and "Silver Wolf" will be set about a century in the future; happening in the same era as the sequle to Moonstone, "Tsuki Ishi: Moonstone-Claris".

So, what does everyone here think?
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Hmm.. Wel mine would be about a guy and a girl who never breaks her promises and really hated her family. She is really pretty, good at fighting and leader of a really strong gang. Their 1st encounter wil be when he sees her looking like she is waiting for someone who might not show up on a windy day, near a lake, under a cherry blossom tree and falls in love with her bt doesn't have da courage 2 confess so they separate their. The 2nd encounter will be at da guys highschool where she transfers 2 his class. The guy thought that she is like an pure angel bt she turns out to be sumthing far more different than how she looks. She always puts on a fake smile bt is still really popular. She is a slut bt no one seems 2 hate her + she is really attached to 3 guys. They are her bestfriend since childhood, their new homeroom teacher who is only 21 and a sexfriend. They all are gudluking and transfer at the same time, at the same class.

<i know dis story is wierd wit lots of secrets in it>

When da guy finally confesses to her n the girl says ok thinking that he wants sex, like other guy, from her. They have sex a lot bt the girl never takes of her shirt (~no boobs 4 da guy~) or a hand band whenever they have sex. When asked why by the guy, she justs gives him her a painful little smile n says it's a secret. It seems that dis secret is known by only her, the 3 guys and the member in her gang. At the new year's eve when the guy, the girl and the 3 guys gather to celebrate, the guy sees the girl with the lonliest face ever seen. The guy knows that the girl doesn't lov him bt still will do anything 4 her so he couldn't take it anymore. Desperate to find out wat r all those secrets the guy begs the girl to tell him everything about her in front of the 3 guys. The girl looks at the guy and takes off her hand band which reveales da cuts in her hand. He is so shocked that he could only say "OMFG". Then she takes her shirt off (including her bra) n reveales all the tatooes and 3 piercing in her body (belly and 2 nipples). The front riht side of her body had loads of hell butterflies in it, the front left had a skeletons face in it and she had a big dark rose at her back. They were all painfully beautiful. The guy just froze for a long time. When he finally came to his senses, the girl was gone and he was there with the 3 guys. The 3 guys then told him about her past and secrets : The girl never expierenced what it was like to be with a family. They were rich bt she still felt lonely. At that time only her big bro from her family was by her side BT when she was 9, her bro died of a brain tumer. She cried really hard when her bro died bt more than crying she hated her family for not caring for her bro, for not even showing up at the funeral. Just when she was 12, she got gang raped. After that she became addicted to sex. She made a gang with her friends and ruled over loads of place. She was with people who cared for her, were kind to her bt she wanted sumthing else. Thats when she meets her true love when she is 15. He is 23 years old and seems kind at the first look bt is a creul n harsh playboy who is really posessive. He puts all those tattoes and piercing on her, is treated really roughly during sex still she doesn't hate it. When asked by her friends why she is still with him she just gives them the eviliest but the happiest smile and says "He gives me what i want, the painfully sweet pleasure". She got into a habit of keeping each n every small promises bcuz if she ever broke her promise to him, she would not give her this painfully sweet pleasure. On her 17th new year eve, she goes to meet her true love on a windy day, near a lake, under a cherry blossom tree bt no matter how long she waits, he doesn't show up. Turns out her true love got in an accident and died on the scene. Even though she finds that out she doesn't cry bcuz she promised her true love that she will never cry in her life. Exactly one year had passed and she still carries the horible past with her.

<OKAAY, this is longer than i thought it would be>

The guy is told the truth about the girl. Now he can't help bt cry. Turns out that the 3 guys were all involved in this past.
Her best fren since chilhood was with her since they were only 3 years old and were never apart.
The 21 year old homeroom teacher is the guy who saved her that day when she was gangraped and thrown in the street.
Her sex friend turned out to be the small bro of her true love.

That wasn't the only secret, it turned out that the girl was gonna die today bcuz of brain tumer. When the guy found out, he searched for her everywhere bt couldn't find her. It was windy. Then he remembered that place 'IN A WINDY DAY, NEAR A LAKE, UNDER A CHERRY BLOSSOM TREE'. He ran as fast as he could and he was right. The girl was sitting there. The guy goes and hugs her. Then she tells him that she is sorry for not telling him about her. The guy tells her, crying, that he forgives her and that he loves her. The girl then gives him her real smile, looking like an angel, tears streaming down her face. Her last words were 'me too...'

Facts
=The girl fell in love with the guy's gentleness.
=All 3 guys were so deeply in love with the girl that they made sure she was satisfied until the end.
=The guy jumps into the lake and dies.
=Before jumping into the lake, he scars "LOVE NEVER DIES" in the cherry blossom tree.


<umm.... probably some of u..no make that most of u r unhappy with the ending bt that's the ending that never ends .^_^ hehe. thnx 4 reading>

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Mine would be about a romance tragedy mystery that took place in the underground hospital underneath my school in the 1950's. There would be a group of 4 students. 1 girl and 3 guys. they would find the hidden entrance to the underground hospital and would then stumble upon documents that would show how the founder of the school and the founder of the hospital were connected through the wife of the school founder. She was cheating on him with the hospital founder. they had a son who was murdered in the hospital by the wife's husband out of jealous rage. the group of students would then find a body and then it becomes crazy weird when the body gets up and talks to them about the mystery's of our school and the love that destroyed the lives of all the patients in the underground hospital; and then the boy who died--is he actually gone? may he actually be one of the 3 guys in the group? what about the corpses? why is it that they are suddenly awake? is the school really safe? Did the group accidentally set loose what would lead to the death of the school and all that the group finds precious? And what of the wife? is she still alive and out to find her son?



good? yea i know. it's patented already. [although i dunno if im actually gonna make something out of it]
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i'm actually working on one right it's uploaded on smackjeeves at http://fallen-angel.6te.net
it's about a cold and heartless demon called Videl that was cursed by her rival lucifer when he died, it's set around 50 years after that event where she searches for the one who would remove the curse. When she hears of the existence of lucifer's reincarnate she goes after him. She then finds out that wasn't true and the two join up to search for a way to remove the curse and to find out the reason why the child's presence was similar to Lucifer.
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Posted 3/16/08
im not working on one presently , but i want a storyline about:

a outgoing teenage girl who loves fashion makeovers, and enters highschoool and she meets a shy,nice, boy who has a low esteem.He wants a girlfriend , but doesnt feel he can get one. Her, being nice, decides to give him a makeover , so he can be more confident and get a girlfriend. They spend more time together, and while getting to know each other better and completing their makeover mission, the guy starts to fall for the girl after seeing her generousity towards him. .She is near finished with the makeover and realizes that she could accidently fall for him.But thinks he desires an attractive girlfriend with a different personality from her's , and not necessarily her. She decides to just forget about it, and support him in achieving a girlfriend . when she tells him , that she's finished with her makeover and he can surely get a girlfriend cause of his good looks, he replies by saying that the only girlfriend he wants is her.
----and thats where i stop and a romance story begins. :)

its probably bad though
Posted 3/16/08
umm...i'll write romance..
like...twins.
liking the same guy.
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sypris wrote:

A hooker on crack who tries to get the law to bend to her will!!!!!!!!!!!


i wanna read tat..lol
bAD MICHEAL!
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