Post Reply ICHIRUKI (i dont own bleach but dis is my version)
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Posted 3/13/08
many of my friends in friendster really like it.. i dont know if u like it or not
CHapter 1 : ichigo and rukia's date:(while walking) [RUKIA]:ichigo..so... where is our destination]
[ICHIGO]:just follow me..you'll see *grin* (rukia quickly follows ichigo.walking beside him)..(ichigo glance a little to rukia and when he look at her hands ,he suddenly hold it)..(rukia was suprised at first ,she stare at ichigo and just smile..(they arrived at their destination).........[RUKIA]:the theater?...so we gonna watch a movie?..(ichigo is speechless and blushing hard ..rukia wondered why..she run to see wat movie is it [RUKIA]:*shocked* a love story?! (looked at ichigo with a teasing grin).....[RUKIA]: i never knew dat ur so romantic ......[ICHIGO]: (0_oIII) i forgot dat the sci-fi movie was a week ago..very well were here so lets just watch it ...(after watching the movie they setp out from the theater).....[RUKIA]:dat was a good movie isnt it? *wiping tears* ...[ICHIGO]: *denying look at his face* dont know.[RUKIA]:dont deny it..i can see the look at ur face dat u liked it...[ICHIGO]:shut up! *turn around hiding his blushing face* lets go to the restaurant im hungry! [RUKIA]: *half round eyes* changing the subject! *whispering* .......(after eating to the restaurant there next destination is the zoo)...[RUKIA]:look at the monkey its looks funny *laughing* [ICHIGO]:yeah *smile a little* (ichigo is silent while rukia is enjoying looking at diff animals)
im glad she's having a good time her thoughts away from hollows,deathgod jobs,she deserves some rest from it (ichigo was thinking deeply about it..ichigo look around when he saw a familiar face..he recognized him its rukia's brother beside the wall. looking at him like a hungry wolf [ICHIGO]:a-aghh bya~kuya...RUKIA]:wats the matter?(ichigo looked at rukia and look at byakuya again he's gone)..[ICHIGO]:no..nothing *grab rukia hands pulling her to the exit* we've better go home *sweating heavily,looking everywhere* (rukia's face is clueless)
walking back home the clouds suddenly become dark and it rain hard ..it took a while before they find shelter..[ICHIGO]:man! it rain all of the sudden?! (ichigo notice rukia is shaking)..[RUKIA]:so~co..cold *she whispered heavily* (ichigo cant stand watching rukia so he suddenly hug her tight).to be continue

sorry if im not good at english cuz its rare to speak english in our town..i only graduated highschool so my english is not good enough
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Posted 3/13/08
hahahah its looks like i miss type step (step out from the theater) hehehe
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Posted 3/13/08
hehehe I really like it.... just leave a double space I suggest... I get my ideas in www.fanfic.net.... check it out!
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Posted 3/13/08
yeah. i think too much...close ness of the words,,,next time with much space hehehe
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Posted 3/19/08
ow by the ways dis is the opening of this story watch it


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UOavHBwkghc
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