Post Reply The secrets within
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only one commented my work.... ... but thanks to those who read it

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at the coffee shop

"are you sure they will be okay?" eriol ask
"yes, they really need to talk " tomoyo said "so you've been around syaoran for about?" tomoyo added

"for about 2 years now and its been two years since they seen each other right?" tomoyo was little bit shocked "so syoaran told you" tomoyo said

"not everything but will you tell me?" eriol said in a sarcastic way
"I will tell you but you will tell me why did syaoran leave 2 years ago" tomoyo said

"okay, i will telll you but promise me that you won't tell sakura?" eriol said
"why?"
"he wanted that he should be the one who tell sakura" eriol showed his sad face

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at the park

"its been 2 years" syoran said with a little dismay
"so, what do you want?" sakura said, as if she didn't know syoran
(why did you leave me?) sakura thought

"I love you sakura! I wanted to tell you want happen but-" sakura embrace him tight, it was like in the past.

"WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME!" sakura shouted, she was crying
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at the coffee shop

it was a long silence between them both

"how about sakura? what will happen to her?!" tomoyo said, crying

eriol is still in silence
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"ANSWER ME!" sakura shouted again

syaoran embrace her back....

sakura is still crying...
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hope you all like it
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whoa im curios right now about the secret..
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ah this is so nice can't wait for the next one
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what will happen next? ^_^
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Posted 4/13/08
can't wait for the next chapter.....
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i wonder why he won't answer her... O_o
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