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Posted 3/29/08

ga_syiena wrote:


Lamia_PhantomPhoenix wrote:


ga_syiena wrote:

i have composed lyrics but too bad it wont match for this group....but its all about friendship(too bad, i have written it coz im broken hearted~~to my friend and NOT to my BF......lol.....) if you want to see it, i can submit it here and tell me if its ok or not...though im not that good in writing lyrics..... just tell me so that i will know.....^_^

don't b afraid abt ur composition, try 2 submit it, or if u want 2 edit it, u can do it if u desire



ok..i will submit it...but i cant really know how to edit this...if its ok...can u be the one who will edit it..... so, here it is:

I STILL WANT TO BE YOUR FRIEND

It's so hard when you
Have a very close friend
And yet she suddenly disappear
Right infront of you.

Deep inside my heart
I'm calling out to you,
But you didn't respond.
I want to talk to you,
But you wouldn't listen.

Now, I really want to cry,
But I can't and I won't cry,
'Coz you know why?
'Coz I don't want my "friend"
To know that I'm guilty and not guilty.....
of something...

I don't know why
You won't talk to me.
Have I done something wrong?
Have I said something that would hurt you?
Or is it that I'm always acting so childish
when I talk or I'm with you?

I'm writing this song to make
Myself better,
And my heart will be at ease.
Hoping that someday you can hear this song.
Hoping that you would realize that...
I still want to be your friend.



>>you can tell me or comment if theres something wrong with this lyrics.....
thnx....^_^


I can't edit it, u r d 1 hu can edit it, u can do it

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wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^
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ysabel_30 wrote:


wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^


i like it
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ohh really thank you! ^^
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rucilful wrote:


ysabel_30 wrote:


wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^


i like it


wow..i like it..im just a new member of this grup but this is fun..but i didnt made it up to the deadline..the submission is over..haha.. but i like this..

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Posted 4/23/08

forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


ysabel_30 wrote:


wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^


i like it


wow..i like it..im just a new member of this grup but this is fun..but i didnt made it up to the deadline..the submission is over..haha.. but i like this..



so r u gonna past now... we r stil not thinkng of d winner & 2 jus pass, u can stil pass
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Posted 4/23/08

rucilful wrote:


forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


ysabel_30 wrote:


wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^


i like it


wow..i like it..im just a new member of this grup but this is fun..but i didnt made it up to the deadline..the submission is over..haha.. but i like this..



so r u gonna past now... we r stil not thinkng of d winner & 2 jus pass, u can stil pass



reli reli?...wee~ yay..okays..thnks so much!!!!!
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Posted 4/23/08

forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


ysabel_30 wrote:


wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^


i like it


wow..i like it..im just a new member of this grup but this is fun..but i didnt made it up to the deadline..the submission is over..haha.. but i like this..



so r u gonna past now... we r stil not thinkng of d winner & 2 jus pass, u can stil pass



reli reli?...wee~ yay..okays..thnks so much!!!!!


no prob & its 4 d skul as wel
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Posted 4/23/08

rucilful wrote:


forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


ysabel_30 wrote:


wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^


i like it


wow..i like it..im just a new member of this grup but this is fun..but i didnt made it up to the deadline..the submission is over..haha.. but i like this..



so r u gonna past now... we r stil not thinkng of d winner & 2 jus pass, u can stil pass



reli reli?...wee~ yay..okays..thnks so much!!!!!


no prob & its 4 d skul as wel



yeps..hehe again..thnks..
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Posted 4/23/08

rucilful wrote:


forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


ysabel_30 wrote:


wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^


i like it


wow..i like it..im just a new member of this grup but this is fun..but i didnt made it up to the deadline..the submission is over..haha.. but i like this..



so r u gonna past now... we r stil not thinkng of d winner & 2 jus pass, u can stil pass



reli reli?...wee~ yay..okays..thnks so much!!!!!


no prob & its 4 d skul as wel


can i ask agen?..sorry for the trouble..but any song wud do?..or u know, like love songs..something like that..thnks..

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Posted 4/23/08

forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


ysabel_30 wrote:


wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^


i like it


wow..i like it..im just a new member of this grup but this is fun..but i didnt made it up to the deadline..the submission is over..haha.. but i like this..



so r u gonna past now... we r stil not thinkng of d winner & 2 jus pass, u can stil pass



reli reli?...wee~ yay..okays..thnks so much!!!!!


no prob & its 4 d skul as wel


can i ask agen?..sorry for the trouble..but any song wud do?..or u know, like love songs..something like that..thnks..



pass anything as long as u create it urself
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Posted 4/26/08

rucilful wrote:


forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


forbiddenmystery wrote:


rucilful wrote:


ysabel_30 wrote:


wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^


i like it


wow..i like it..im just a new member of this grup but this is fun..but i didnt made it up to the deadline..the submission is over..haha.. but i like this..



so r u gonna past now... we r stil not thinkng of d winner & 2 jus pass, u can stil pass



reli reli?...wee~ yay..okays..thnks so much!!!!!


no prob & its 4 d skul as wel


can i ask agen?..sorry for the trouble..but any song wud do?..or u know, like love songs..something like that..thnks..



pass anything as long as u create it urself



ok thnks...

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ysabel_30 wrote:


wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^


wow.....sugoi!!!!!!!!it is saying dat dont give up..try and try again until u reach ur goal...and if u belive dat u can reach ur goal u can....sugoi!!!!ur a great composer!!! honotni!! i like it!!

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jam4155788 wrote:


ysabel_30 wrote:


wee! this looks fun okay then i'll put one of the lyrics i made ^^

Never and Always

Chorus:
never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

sometimes once in your life
you feel like giving up
you sit down in a corner
and start to cry
but if you look
at the bright side of the day
you will find you can do it your own way

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

there's such thing as failure
but no one said to stop
there's such thing as victory
so bop and reach the top

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

never give up till you reach your goal
you know you can shoot it in the hole
cause you know you can achieve
whenever you believe
always keep your head up high
never ever say goodbye
raise your hands up high
and reach towards sky

its not nice but it makes me happy singing it!! ^^


wow.....sugoi!!!!!!!!it is saying dat dont give up..try and try again until u reach ur goal...and if u belive dat u can reach ur goal u can....sugoi!!!!ur a great composer!!! honotni!! i like it!!



ohh really thanks!!
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