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betrayal would be an interesting element of the story, a twist i guess, but, a betrayal of wat?
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Yes, I remember when I first started my story, and didn't have a title, it took me a while to even begin to get things right in the first chapter, and boy I still have a lot of work. I need to rewrite the first four chapters with stronger words to make it even more interesting than it already is. Anyway, I remember changing the first chapter quite a few times before I finally settled on the way it is today. And once I had a couple of chapters down with a few characters thought of and created, I finally thought of a fitting title, which also in part did make me change a certain part of the plot to match it. I think I was on the third chapter when I finally created the title which is The Phoenix of Torgonia. It is a shonen type story, but as you all said, it is mixed with some romance and drama. I don't think I've really covered the comedy side of it yet, but there will be in chapters to come.
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Romance + comedy + action can be all mix in. A twisted and unexpected plots/events are needed and there should be a mastermind (main villain) behind this killing. You might consider the death of Yyuusei's parent to be related to the mastermind evil plan/action. Is the woman actually working with mastermind who wants to spy on Yyuusei? Betrayal can be one of the theme. For example like when Aizen betray the whole Soul society.



It isnt that original so tell me what you think. She is sent to spy and keep watch over him. Slowly she becomes drawn to him. And then she is told to kill him because he is too dangerous. And then i am not exactly sure how it should unfold from there because it is a pretty big decision.
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Akana, i am having trouble with the comedy part too. I dont really know how succesful you can be with just a script you know? But tell me if you get any ideas.
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Ichigo-bankai wrote:


harrisan123 wrote:

Romance + comedy + action can be all mix in. A twisted and unexpected plots/events are needed and there should be a mastermind (main villain) behind this killing. You might consider the death of Yyuusei's parent to be related to the mastermind evil plan/action. Is the woman actually working with mastermind who wants to spy on Yyuusei? Betrayal can be one of the theme. For example like when Aizen betray the whole Soul society.



It isnt that original so tell me what you think. She is sent to spy and keep watch over him. Slowly she becomes drawn to him. And then she is told to kill him because he is too dangerous. And then i am not exactly sure how it should unfold from there because it is a pretty big decision.


That's what i think too. Either she will betray the relation between Yyussei or the relation between the villain. But the story dont have to go this direction, there are still a lot of choices for the storyline
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I think i have a cool idea, but i wont spoil it.
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Akana, i am having trouble with the comedy part too. I dont really know how succesful you can be with just a script you know? But tell me if you get any ideas. :D


I am not really having trouble with the comedy part, it is just that the comedy part has not yet had the opportunity to present itself. I created Garschel in somewhat for comical relief to the story. And sure, I'll let you know if I come up with any ideas, just at the moment I am busy with drawing commissions.
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Ichigo-bankai wrote:

Akana, i am having trouble with the comedy part too. I dont really know how succesful you can be with just a script you know? But tell me if you get any ideas. :D


I am not really having trouble with the comedy part, it is just that the comedy part has not yet had the opportunity to present itself. I created Garschel in somewhat for comical relief to the story. And sure, I'll let you know if I come up with any ideas, just at the moment I am busy with drawing commissions.


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And once I get the chapter up in my own group in which Garschel is in, then you'll sort of see what I mean better than just knowing the character's name.
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put some mystery, the twist and betrayl in it and add some horror scens, with vampire of course, some action will be great (more fighting, less shoting)... I would like to be comedy/romance (note: just put it in some sceans, because you said it's difficult to pull it of) in it the series to get everyone (both boys and grils) more into the story... It would be better for you to do how you did in the first episode, to make everyone to wait what will hapen next... like pulling off a cliff hanger for some episodes
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romance,sad,happy :=) something like that
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vaikepois wrote:

romance,sad,happy :=) something like that


no offense but I think it's kinda lame to put there just romance, sad, happy or anything like it... I mean I can get realy boring with to much drama, freacking emos...
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vaikepois wrote:

romance,sad,happy :=) something like that


no offense but I think it's kinda lame to put there just romance, sad, happy or anything like it... I mean I can get realy boring with to much drama, freacking emos...


huh?
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vaikepois wrote:


RihgisKhan wrote:


vaikepois wrote:

romance,sad,happy :=) something like that


no offense but I think it's kinda lame to put there just romance, sad, happy or anything like it... I mean I can get realy boring with to much drama, freacking emos...


huh?


what?
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