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Posted Sep 23 2009
BOOK ONE: BEGINNING: CHAPTER ONE: THE CREATURE.
BUKKU ICHI: AKEBONO: BUNDAN ICHI: ZA SEIBUTSU.

A long time ago the world was filled with creatures that had supernatural powers. there were millions of creatures who used their powers to kill each other, whichever creatures survived this battle was given the power to control reality of the future. the surviving creature wanted was given immortality as well. the creature wanted the world to stay the same so it refused the power. for 10 years the creature yelled as loud as it could hoping that one day someone would answer back to him. the creature was all alone with nothing but a red sky and ashes of the dead bodies of the creatures. the creature had no food,water,air,sun,moon,light, and there was no weather. the world was suppose to be empty for the battle that the creatures had. the world was not yet created. one day the creature saw a light in the sky and he knew that he was given another chance to take the power to control reality. the light told the creature that he could no longer control the reality of the future, but he could create a battle of the future that was similar to the battle of the creatures. the creature gave hundreds of people of the future powers. the creature gave these people a choice, they could either use there powers to live there lives, or they could be in a war to see which power is the strongest. not one person wanted to be in this war so the creature chose 12 people of his own to be in the war. the 12 that were chosen knew deep down that they were chosen, as soon as it comes completely clear to them that they were chosen they will accept it, but some of them will try to deny it. these 12 people must split into 4 groups of 3 and fight to the death

the story will get better after a while this is just the beginning so it's a little boring right now. the story i made about the creature was just a thought that i had, i was making a story about the creature but i ended up mixing it with a different story i was making.

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Posted Sep 24 2009
Take a look at the latest chapter of my story...please do rate it.

http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/adats01/pages/002ah
Posted Sep 26 2009
please go to my pages to read my stories. click on my name roxannaf under the picture
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Posted Sep 28 2009
i will son finish my anime story and when I do I will share it here
by the way nice story keep on like that
Posted Sep 29 2009, edited Sep 30 2009
i haven't been writing my story but since someone says that they like it i will continue writing it again but it might take a few days before i put a new chapter on this website. the story will change as i write it so tell me if you don't like it. thank you! Image
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Posted Oct 14 2009, edited Oct 14 2009
The Werewolf and the Demon Saber Tooth Tiger Episode 1 :

Once upon a time lived a Werewolf named John, he and his Best Friend Zack ( Who is a Demon Saber tooth Tiger ) went for an adventure in a magical world In their first day of traveling they were attacked by a blood Elepantaeous they fought the beast greatly using their Sword, Claws, Fangs and Magic Powers and they thought they won but the battle wasn't Over the Beast attacked them from the back but before the attack landed John and Zack have already dodged it. Zack was getting Bored so he Used his magical assault : Flame Fang. The Beast turned to dust, but John hit Zack in the Hat saying "Why'd you have to turn that thing to dust we could eat its meat you know?", " Sorry I was just getting Bored" Said Zack.
John : Oh well no point crying over spilled Milk.
Zack : What Milk ?
They Continue their Journey and arrived at the town of Little Axe, there they eat like there is no tomorrow at the Food Stand.
While they were eating John Didn't realized that he was robbed,
John : Hey someone stole my wallet !?!
Zack : What ? Then That means I have to pay for all of this food . * Starts Crying anime tears *
They see a suspicious looking Character and John saw his wallet being held by that person
John : Hey that's my wallet .
Zack : Yeah, yeah it is.
Zack payed the man for their foods and followed John Chasing that Person.
John : Hey wait up, Give me back my wallet
after that person was Caught and John has he's wallet back that person's hood was taken off and she was a Vampire
??? : Sorry for stealing your wallet but I need the money inside for my mother's Operation
Zack : Hey dude why don't you give her some of your money for her mother
John : But she stole my wallet in the first place.
Michelle : my Name is Michelle. and I'm sorry that I stole your wallet
Zack : Come on dude she needed the money
John : But, but .... Oh well.
John takes out a little a bit of money, but Michelle didn't took it rather she took John's and Zack's Money
Michelle : Hahaha, I can't believe you fell for it
Zack and John : Hey Our wallet
Michelle run through the crowd, because of the crowd John and Zack Couldn't Find her
Zack : I'll get her Back For this.
John : Told ya, now all we have is about 300 zalas (The Currency in this Magical World)
Zack : UUnngh, I hate that Girl.

To be Continue...
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Posted Oct 26 2009, edited Oct 26 2009
Somehow im having a hard time reading whats going on....maybe its just me.....

And since a new one hasnt been posted in.... *looks up* About two weeks....
And since i missed the deadline for the shinkomi contest for this year, i've been trying to make a new story to enter.
The genre is.....i have no clue, can someone tell me? -_-;;

"Complex"(Heroine's POV Prologue)


Well yeah, its the end of winter...again. The chilly breezes are gone, the kotatsu are locked up, and schools about to restart. I wish i could restart my winter, relive all those events that.... (o////o) ...Well, maybe not all of those memories I've had with him....

"So, did you hear what happened?"

"Yeah, how someone found a bunch of bloody chains on the ground....."

"You two there, stop talking! Or better yet, pitch some ideas!"

The classroom was quiet, except for the often warm breeze that flowed through the broken glass window. Even the 30-student class didn't seem to have even one enthusiastic student willing to help me out, the (forced) class representative, Minami Harukaze.

"What were we talking about again."

Wow.....that was like a taboo in this situation.

"The school festival, the school festival!!!! Everyone's getting lazy since its almost summer!"

The shout echoed through the room, soon to be overpowered by the ticking of the overhead clock.

"Mina-- I mean class rep....."

" Yes?"

"Can we go home?"

The teacher, whom also was getting tired of these (futile) efforts to make plans, signaled to the class that they could go home. In a rush that lasted less than a moment, the classroom was left in its silent shell.

"Minami-kun, you may go home too."

The teacher, whom was so bored he was sleeping, picked up his personals and also left the classroom.

" *sigh* I guess im leaving too......"

Reaching for her things, Minami's eye passed "him"....... Tenka Kogarashi, staring out the window with his blue eyes, though black hair covered most of his face.

"Tenka Kogarashi, please sit dull-eyed from boredom somewhere else...."

"?"

Is he part mime or something? o_e .....

After a few minutes and about 500 hand gestures, the classroom was finally empty.

Even those little memories, which in turn may have hurt me, are still but precious memories.....


Which sums up how they met....but the real question is.....

WHOS POV IS IT BEST IT!?!?!?!?

-Tenka (the boy) is a (planned to be) quiet but obviously hidind something type. In the end, he will (probably) save Minami. This is fiction, so he will have the "super special ability thats limited to him and people alike" and also support Minami's (and if continued, other people's) change.

-Minami (the girl/ class rep) is going to be a (sort of) stressed (due to various things) but at the same time, a willing person. In the end, i want to make the moral along the lines of "Everyone must break through their fears and emotions" or "memories can change depending on how you look at it." and have her learn that, which explains how its in her POV when i wrote it.

Of course, i could make it Tenka since its going to be him thats running around changing people, or keep it Minami, since she probably will be a better main character (unless this turns into an all battle story :P)

P.S. im not sure which moral to use yet, so its a little awkward in the beginning and end.....
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Posted Nov 7 2009, edited 1 day ago
the original one waz yaoi and retarded[supposed 2 be Image ] but still retarded so heres the new one:
ONCE UPON A TIME THERE WAS A CAT....AND IT GOT EATEN BY A BOWL OF RAMEN...THE END
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Posted 17 days ago, edited 17 days ago
ok mine is a wierd but here goes

set in the late 1900
in london the town which had slums and the victorain age of trading with south african countries

yep and wars did happen at about that sort of time....wich killed numoures famillies destroyed people lives and the livestock they once had.

once there was a boy named Skyler windfield aged 16 who lived in north london he wanted to become soldier in the purpose of protecting his nation. But his father who is a farmer hated the idea of his son joining the military and wanted him to carry on the familly tradition of farming. One day he came past a poster outside his street wich said

the school of millitary

he then took this to his parents in hope that they might agree with him his parents dint and threw the poster in the bin

im going to cut the story short

Basically its about a boy trying to persue his dreams but obsticals keep going in his way

he has two friends


-Bob (the fat pervy kid)--aged 16
-Jerad (the one who dissagrees with everything)--aged16

and a childhood crush on a pretty french girl named leona aged 16 she looks down on him becouse he comes from a poor background but she does like his admiration to persue dreams even if people are soo negative.
She tries to join the school as well becouse her mother who owns a textille industry thinks females should stay at home and wait to get married she completly disagrees and decides to join what men would most likely become which is a soldier.
leona comes from a rich background as the father is the kings accoutant she has numoures mansions situated in the country of france and her where she lives now London.


there it is more but you know its only the beggining and i might change some of the ideas to make it more intressting not to me but for all people

i will continue to write more chapters and put some gory blood scenes in it lol Image


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there was a really sad guy.after a while he became happy . HAPPY END Image Intereresting isn`t it?



nope its not lol
is that how creative you are xD
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i was still in bed when the ground starts to shake. i got up and went downstairs immediately when there was a portal that suddenly pulled me to another dimension. at first, i thought i was dreaming, but, when i pinched myself, i know i wasn't dreaming anymore. i'm stuck in a land full of unexplainable creatures. that day is also the start of my unfortunate adventure. while wandering the strange world, i met a strange old man with a strange pet. he called me. i was scared because he might do something to me. i grabbed a stick and went to him slowly. "You think i could still do something at you with my age?" he said, "If you want to go back, kill yourself". i was surprised to hear that thing. "kill? myself? but... will i still be alive at my world?" i asked. "may i ask your name young woman?" he replied. "its... Rai sir...". "okay, Rai, many people have come here, being pulled by some weird portal like you. i told them the same thing but all of them didn't believed me, so, they died here, in this world.". upon hearing such thing, i was doubting the old man. he might be telling the truth or he's lying. i sat on a stone in front of him. his pet - i don't know what kind of pet - went near me and licked my foot. i'm still thinking about what the old man said. "time is running young lady. i must go now.". i'm looking at him from behind, waiting for something amazing. i'm still in the middle of arguing with my self, believe or not to believe. then an arrow struck me. i don't know who it is but i saw a figure, with long ears and hair. i didn't really see the whole figure because i've already passed out. later, i was totally surprised to find myself in the hospital. my mom is crying. dad said i have been comatose for almost a month. i asked what's the cause of my coma. mom said when the earthquake occured, the stairs collapsed while i was running downstairs. when i thought about it, that was the time i was sucked in a weird place. 'comatose for a month?' i thought. but i only stayed at that world for almost 8 hours. but one thing's for sure, i'm still lucky to be alive....

thanks... hahah.... i know there are so many wrong grammars but, thank you! ^_^
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