ummm... interesting thread...
mauigrown: 9.5 nice story but i found it similar to mine....

heres mine... mine is a story of a young boy whos addicted to anime (watching it in the internet) then 1 stormy night while hes watching animes his house were struck by a lightning and mysteriously sucked into anime world and appear in the middle of a War (were good character fights evil ones) then both opposing league stopped then..... (think about it!!)

simple story
There was this princess and one day she got angry and killed everyone. The End

9

Will was a very timid dwarf. He wouldn't practice his magic with the other dwarves, as they would laugh at him because his power level was not compatible to enter the training ground. Little did he know about the things that would happen in the near future. “It's not fair!” Will said to himself while stomping the ground.
“Your power level is obsolete to our level, go home before I get mad!” the trainee said while throwing Will out the door.
In his rage Will yelled, “Tsunami..... Glacier..... Punch!” The trainee turned to look at the timid dwarf again, but it was too late, Will’s fist held the strength of a glacier and the force of the tsunami. By the time the trainee faced the enraged dwarf, his stomach practically had been turn inside-out, the trainee coughed up some blood and yelled, “Thorny.....Vine.....Grip!!” The young dwarf felt something moving under ground, and then 4 extremely thorny vines strapped Will down to the ground, the vines slid around his body as if they were chain saws, then the trainee said, “You're a disgrace, get out of my sight......”

Will ran into the forest away from the training ground. He suddenly stopped in the middle of the forest as if there was something in front of him, and then a small dark figure emerged from out of the darkness. It was Tee-Wee! Will ran to the wixard. He asked Tee-Wee, "Why are you here?" Tee-Wee replied, "Never mind that, we don't have much time. D.H. 3.65 is coming!"
"Do you mean the Dwarf Hunter 3.65, the restless killing machine!?!" Will yelled in terror.
Tee-Wee said, "It's on its way to the village! We need to stop it! We need to run as quickly as possible!"

Without warning, Tee-Wee grabbed Will and darted through the forest like a bullet. When they got there they were too late. The village was on fire. Suddenly out of the blood and ash arose a silver bodied figure. It stood up turned its head towards them, its eyes lit up with an eerie luminescent glow of blue. Four metal tentacles pulled Tee-Wee underground, and then the silver creature jumped into the air, hovered with its jump-jets and yelled, "Death to dwarves!"

to be continued...

I give you a nine out of ten crishot, but here is one of my many stories, its more of a preview though
Dark Saint-Rise of the Silver Moon
Amber Rose's secret past all of a sudden comes back to haunt her. After thirteen years of waiting for someone (or something?) to come to her during full moons, after thirteen years of silence, of confusion, of secrets and of shadows everything comes back into the light, just as she wished.
It is then that she learns one of her first hard lessons of life- Be careful what you wish for.
Seventeen year old Amber realizes that she is chosen as a Saint-to-be, and in order to make sure everything goes right and to fufill Maria's wishes, she has to become a Saint-period.
Hey, it's nothing big. All she has to do is find a book of terrible and dangerous secrets that if others find before her may lead to the end of the world, and hey, the book may or may not even exist. With only Awakened Crossed Ones, deadly and mad purebloods, unfinished wars, and secret conspiracies to stop her, she has nothing to worry about, right?
-Right?-

I would type my story up here...
but I cannot, because I really am writing a story...
I plan on publishing it and having it copyrighted...
I hope everyone enjoys the story though ^^

9 on your story by the way...

Lol ! I bet that took you long enough to make that !

On Hoshi's fifteenth birthday, the will of her deceased grandmother is opened. It was her last dying wish that it be opened on this day. Everyone believes that Hoshi, grandma's favorite is going to get the money, the house, the everything. but that is soooo not true.
she gets three things.
a strange necklace called a "matrix crystal"
a suitcase that can make anything magically appear, like a dress, books, shoes...
and the knowledge that her siblings and parents are not her own. instead they are her aunt, uncle and cousins. Hoshi runs away to a specified location and using the crystal, enters another world. The world that she thought were just child stories told by her grandmother. She enrolls in the school of Belle-Witch Academy, a school just for girls.
but you have NEVERRRRRR seen witches like this.
this is the next generation people.
you have NEVER seen witches fight like this, look like this, or get together like this.
hoshi, the only human, is the weakest...until she finds that her powers are beyond imagination, as she is the only one who can unlock the secrets of the Three Seals of Life, Death, and Birth.
but not without a few friends of course:
the three blood witches
a Seer from an old clan
and boys boys boys

sorry, this is the shortest i could make it, i wish to explain you more, so you get a better idea, but that'll just ruin it.

....... nice

dkstamberose i rank u a 8 :D

Super sorry this is super long

There was a high school junior girl named Reina. She fell in love with a sweet kind wickedly hot guy. It turns out that the guy she likes is the leader of the Kiss Bandits. The Kiss Bandits are like a host club, except the only ones who can come are the pretty girls at their school who receive an invitations to a "meeting". From the girls that have gotten an invitation the Kiss bandits pick one they want to spend time with and get really close to. They call these girls "valuable", or "objects to steal." When they get to that one step away from loving her they toss her aside and go after another girl. When Reina finds out about this she still doesn't give up hope. Even when her friends tell her she's only going to get hurt. Well Reina thinks seriously hard about this and gets a huge plan. Also it turns out that Reina is the hottest girl in her class. She's been getting invitations like crazy. Finally she answers to the 26th invite she's gotten and goes to the Kiss Bandit Meeting. When her dream boy sees her, he knows that she isn't that same ditsy pretty girl that they usually invite. And he announces "I, Kashima Neo, have chosen a valuable object to steal." This surprises the kiss bandits because as their leader Neo has always taken care of parties and enchanting women with his amazing looks. It especially surprises, Meikashi, the mysterious lover boy of the bandits. (Let's just say he takes his time tossing the "object.") Meikashi was eye'ing Reina since she walked through the kiss bandit doors. This is the first time Neo has ever picked a object to steal since the Bandits was established. From that point they go on one or two dates, and get close to each other. One day Ryoku (the member that gives the definition to pretty boy) says to Neo "Hey King, isn't it time you ditched the cutie pie? It seems like you gettin too close to her." That gave a little smile to Meikashi. "Man i think Reina is different from those other sluts you guys invite." Meikashi walks out of the Kiss Bandit boardroom while Neo and Ryoku argue about Reina. He opens the door and there stood Reina. Meikashi gave a big smile and left the doors open so that she could hear them argue and quickly grabbed Reina. Ryoku and Neo stop arguing and looks at the entrance doors. There at the wide open entrance doors stood Meikashi holding Reina tightly in his arms kissing her passionately.

I'll leave the end to your imaginations ;D

I want to be a Servant for a beautiful girl.....hahahaha...

A story that has these genres always does well
Harem,Romance
School life
Comedy
Drama

examples ouran high school, school rumble, Perfect Girl Evolution ( Yamato Nadeshiko Shichi Henge), my wife is a high school girl, boys be, lovely complex, ichigo 100% the list goes on

*screams in pain*"its cliche enough to kill someone 5 times over" *has a heart attack*

an anime that all the cast will be killed in the end.

i spend my spare time doing that

that sounds like a story from my english textbook called those three wishes. this girl sees a snail and decids to crush it. the snail stops her and gives her three wishes in exchange for his life. she wishes for a thousand wishes. at the end she accidentaly wishes to die.