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Legend has it that there was once an angel who eloped with a demon nd had a baby girl. That child was born as a fallen being - a mongrel of an angel nd a demon cursed to live for eternity. After the child's birth, the parents were sought out nd killed by heaven's shadow group. Now, thousands of years later, the child, Hikari, poses as a young 16 year old girl, seeking out a way to change her fate with the help of 2 other fallen beings, Yuzu nd Takuto, and a mortal, Ikuto. However their journey leads them through trials of fate, revenge, nd love.

heres one that my friend wrote nd i think it rox!!

Be a Man!
Aimi’s eyes looked downcast as she held out the box of chocolates to Hibiki. She inhaled sharply before looking up at him with shear determination in her eyes, and she started, “Hibiki-kun, please take my chocolate…AND MY HEART!!!”

Hibiki sweat dropped, “Uhm…Aimi-chan, I’m sorry, but…”

Aimi looked away, already knowing his answer. She pulled the box of chocolate back to her chest, her hands gripping it tighter. Then she chucked it at the unsuspecting Hibiki, who caught it and stared at her incredulously.

She exclaimed dramatically, “OH HIBIKI-KUN! YOU WOUND ME SO! How is it possible that someone could reject me, the queen of Mizushima High!” she then looked grudgingly at Hibiki, “One must be homosexual to reject someone like me!” and she stalked off, her head held high in defiance, leaving Hibiki with the box of chocolates and a confused expression.

“Homosexual…?” Hibiki murmured, “You mean like…gay?”

OOOOO

Yuriko and Kazumi walked into the empty classroom to find Hibiki still sitting in his seat, his head resting on his hand, even though most of the students would be in the cafeteria. He looked completely miffed at something, which was not noticed immediately by his best friends. But Hibiki noticed their presence, and looked away from the window and up to a faintly blushing Yuriko and an annoyed Kazumi.


He asked, “How did it go?” talking about Yuriko’s attempt to give Valentine’s chocolate to her crush, Hayate Fukui. A plan that was designed by him and Kazumi the day before.

Kazumi reported with a frown, “Fail. She didn’t have the guts to do it.” Yuriko’s blush grew…she looked utterly ashamed of herself.

He smiled comfortingly at her, “It’s okay Yuriko, you’ve still got the rest of the day…” Yuriko nodded with an ashamed expression still on her face. Then he turned to Raz, “What about you? You give chocolate to anyone special?”

Kazumi scoffed, “As if! There are no guys worth while here, no offense to you Hibiki, cause honestly they won’t be worth while until they can prove themselves trustworthy enough to not lie and cheat and keep their promises…”

Kazumi went on with the list of things guys should learn to do, but Hibiki was no longer listening. His attention diverted to the window for the second time, and Yuriko, whose focus was also slipping away from Kazumi’s rant, noticed his bothered expression.
“Hibiki?” she asked quietly, concern evident in her voice, “Is something bothering you?”

Her voice was soft, as it almost always was, but both Kazumi and Hibiki heard it. Kazumi stopped ranting and for the first time noticed Hibiki’s somber expression. He was rarely disheartened; he had an encouraging smile on his face even when breaking girl’s hearts. So…what had happened today that made Hibiki look like that.

He didn’t say anything for a moment before uttering the shocking question, “Do you two…do you two think I’m gay?”

An awkward and somewhat confused silence met his question. Then Kazumi asked with a hint of amusement in her voice, “I dunno, you seem happy…”

Hibiki looked at her with a strangled expression, and she muttered, “Oh…that gay!”

Before Kazumi exploited it further Yuriko asked in soft voice, “Do you think you’re gay, Hibiki?”

Hibiki immediately responded, “I don’t know, I realize that I’ve never accepted a confession from a girl…and maybe it’s cause I might be…But I don’t wanna be!!!” At that proclamation he looked to the window again.

Yuriko didn’t question any further and merely looked down at her hands, which were fingering the box of chocolates meant for Hayate nervously. Her mind, Kazumi mused, was obviously still occupied with the challenge of giving Hayate her chocolate. She looked back and forth in between her two friends, each one was occupied with their own conflicts and it made her feel kind of left out and useless. Then the light bulb when off in her head.

“Hey guys,” Kazumi said with a grin as Hibiki and Yuriko looked up at her questioningly, “I think I found the solution to both your problems…”

OOOOO

Hayate sauntered into the empty classroom (the trio left to finally eat lunch). It was a few minutes before the bell would ring and signal the kids at lunch to go back to class. But Hayate came early, after all, breaking up with his current girl created time to kill. He thought indifferently, she might’ve been cute but her squealing and bad kissing was getting annoying, and he slipped into his assigned seat, erasing whatever memories he had with her. Then a baby pink box caught his eye, it was tiny and petite with a little red bow to top it off. And a note, there was a note attached to it.

He took the box out of the desk and opened, having a pretty good idea what it was. Three delicate chocolates sat inside, looking very nice with their cherry red hearts in the middle of each. As he picked one up and popped it in his mouth, he read the note attached.

Please come to the roof after school. –Yuriko Masaki

He leaned back in his chair with a smirk and thought, Yuriko, huh?





nice I will give you a 10 if you make Hibiki gay LOL !!! JOKING !
I was laughing so badly when Aimi made the comment, I so going to say that to the person who reject me LOL! (kidding again)
hehehe Kazumi is so innocent when she said gay for happy! awww
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okay... umm okay.. im working on this story now...
sakura, got a call from her closest, childhood friend, saying thats he'll be leaving and hung up... at first she fought he was joking then, as weeks past she knew he wasn't joking, so she packed her things... (flute) and left... but doesn't have a clue where he is... until she met a women at 1:00am after midnight and (suspicious) and she took sakura to her house... there she explains that theres another world, filled with people who has abilities, those people are born with a star in their heart... and from earth. (sakura really doubts this)
so the next day, sakura was led upstairs, to a closet... "if u are the key (a person who can travel between the 2 worlds, hold two stars in your heart, and has the ability to manipulate one element) the the closet will glow and lead you to another world"
sakura laughs, but stops when she sees the closet glowing.... "woah" she muttered, then the girl pushed her down... and in the other world...
there is more forest then buildings and cities. no cars, electricity, just the buildings. like a village with houses that we live in now!!!
then she meets a girl, who looks exactly like the the one that pushed her down... she explains things to her...
she gets an egg that will hatch once she finds her element, two gaurds (boys... cute ones!! >_<) and she set off to travel to a far off kingdom, to learn how to control her element...

but once she found her elements, there was a supraise to it!!! not only did the egg hatch into sumthing extordinary, but a companion living inside her.. the sorce of the element... there on sakura travels facing danger to get to the far off kingdome to see her childhood, close friend... but once she does she finds a supraise that shocked her....

if u don't get it, i won't blame you, it's hard to explain it and stuff, but it's really interesting to me... i think it's a masterpeice to me so yeah..... please don't rate anything bad... it hurts lots
i'd rate the top one a 10 !!!

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Ajousama wrote:


MaggieNomi wrote:

Legend has it that there was once an angel who eloped with a demon nd had a baby girl. That child was born as a fallen being - a mongrel of an angel nd a demon cursed to live for eternity. After the child's birth, the parents were sought out nd killed by heaven's shadow group. Now, thousands of years later, the child, Hikari, poses as a young 16 year old girl, seeking out a way to change her fate with the help of 2 other fallen beings, Yuzu nd Takuto, and a mortal, Ikuto. However their journey leads them through trials of fate, revenge, nd love.

heres one that my friend wrote nd i think it rox!!

Be a Man!
Aimi’s eyes looked downcast as she held out the box of chocolates to Hibiki. She inhaled sharply before looking up at him with shear determination in her eyes, and she started, “Hibiki-kun, please take my chocolate…AND MY HEART!!!”

Hibiki sweat dropped, “Uhm…Aimi-chan, I’m sorry, but…”

Aimi looked away, already knowing his answer. She pulled the box of chocolate back to her chest, her hands gripping it tighter. Then she chucked it at the unsuspecting Hibiki, who caught it and stared at her incredulously.

She exclaimed dramatically, “OH HIBIKI-KUN! YOU WOUND ME SO! How is it possible that someone could reject me, the queen of Mizushima High!” she then looked grudgingly at Hibiki, “One must be homosexual to reject someone like me!” and she stalked off, her head held high in defiance, leaving Hibiki with the box of chocolates and a confused expression.

“Homosexual…?” Hibiki murmured, “You mean like…gay?”

OOOOO

Yuriko and Kazumi walked into the empty classroom to find Hibiki still sitting in his seat, his head resting on his hand, even though most of the students would be in the cafeteria. He looked completely miffed at something, which was not noticed immediately by his best friends. But Hibiki noticed their presence, and looked away from the window and up to a faintly blushing Yuriko and an annoyed Kazumi.


He asked, “How did it go?” talking about Yuriko’s attempt to give Valentine’s chocolate to her crush, Hayate Fukui. A plan that was designed by him and Kazumi the day before.

Kazumi reported with a frown, “Fail. She didn’t have the guts to do it.” Yuriko’s blush grew…she looked utterly ashamed of herself.

He smiled comfortingly at her, “It’s okay Yuriko, you’ve still got the rest of the day…” Yuriko nodded with an ashamed expression still on her face. Then he turned to Raz, “What about you? You give chocolate to anyone special?”

Kazumi scoffed, “As if! There are no guys worth while here, no offense to you Hibiki, cause honestly they won’t be worth while until they can prove themselves trustworthy enough to not lie and cheat and keep their promises…”

Kazumi went on with the list of things guys should learn to do, but Hibiki was no longer listening. His attention diverted to the window for the second time, and Yuriko, whose focus was also slipping away from Kazumi’s rant, noticed his bothered expression.
“Hibiki?” she asked quietly, concern evident in her voice, “Is something bothering you?”

Her voice was soft, as it almost always was, but both Kazumi and Hibiki heard it. Kazumi stopped ranting and for the first time noticed Hibiki’s somber expression. He was rarely disheartened; he had an encouraging smile on his face even when breaking girl’s hearts. So…what had happened today that made Hibiki look like that.

He didn’t say anything for a moment before uttering the shocking question, “Do you two…do you two think I’m gay?”

An awkward and somewhat confused silence met his question. Then Kazumi asked with a hint of amusement in her voice, “I dunno, you seem happy…”

Hibiki looked at her with a strangled expression, and she muttered, “Oh…that gay!”

Before Kazumi exploited it further Yuriko asked in soft voice, “Do you think you’re gay, Hibiki?”

Hibiki immediately responded, “I don’t know, I realize that I’ve never accepted a confession from a girl…and maybe it’s cause I might be…But I don’t wanna be!!!” At that proclamation he looked to the window again.

Yuriko didn’t question any further and merely looked down at her hands, which were fingering the box of chocolates meant for Hayate nervously. Her mind, Kazumi mused, was obviously still occupied with the challenge of giving Hayate her chocolate. She looked back and forth in between her two friends, each one was occupied with their own conflicts and it made her feel kind of left out and useless. Then the light bulb when off in her head.

“Hey guys,” Kazumi said with a grin as Hibiki and Yuriko looked up at her questioningly, “I think I found the solution to both your problems…”

OOOOO

Hayate sauntered into the empty classroom (the trio left to finally eat lunch). It was a few minutes before the bell would ring and signal the kids at lunch to go back to class. But Hayate came early, after all, breaking up with his current girl created time to kill. He thought indifferently, she might’ve been cute but her squealing and bad kissing was getting annoying, and he slipped into his assigned seat, erasing whatever memories he had with her. Then a baby pink box caught his eye, it was tiny and petite with a little red bow to top it off. And a note, there was a note attached to it.

He took the box out of the desk and opened, having a pretty good idea what it was. Three delicate chocolates sat inside, looking very nice with their cherry red hearts in the middle of each. As he picked one up and popped it in his mouth, he read the note attached.

Please come to the roof after school. –Yuriko Masaki

He leaned back in his chair with a smirk and thought, Yuriko, huh?





nice I will give you a 10 if you make Hibiki gay LOL !!! JOKING !
I was laughing so badly when Aimi made the comment, I so going to say that to the person who reject me LOL! (kidding again)
hehehe Kazumi is so innocent when she said gay for happy! awww


haha ill tell my friend that. i bet shell be so happy XD
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well, since you insist to get a 10 then I have nothing more to add.

Anyway my turn, hmm... which story should I say...

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I shall be back after the exam which I am suffering now first then I will refresh my memory of my old storieS!
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icarus923 wrote:

once there was an ugly barnacle....he was so ugly, that everyone died...The End....


HAHHAHAHAHAHA HILARIOUS!
but poor Barnacle !

oh ya people we need to rate the person above us's story, hmm... well I will give you a 9 since it makes me laugh!


i got that from Patrick Star from spongebob...hehehehe....lol...should have said i was quoting him...

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very nice thread.
i would so post my story on here if it wasn't for the fact it's too long
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here my , but i don't had a Story....well a little, The year 2501, A another alike plaent earht they call it 2ed earht, poelple live there life like a city and one day a big mysterious explosion kill all the poeple in the city .He the only one alive in city but find some people didn't die , he find some fuel but he find mysterious powers comeing from his body and some other too ,and a another mysterious, evil inhabiants shibito enemis killing who is alive . He and the other must go to another city for help, but they soon find out they all really dead. He must find out what is behind the terror and use that power to fight and must go to 1st eatht.They try to stay alive. There is no one hero . There is little hope . want the darwing and make it a story ...
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I give that picture a 9.5 out of 10
Here's my story...

The clash of good and evil existed since the time when the world was still young. The existence of the four divine entities and their counter parts had been in conflicts to decide who will reign over their time in the mortal world. They were from four different families: Seiryuu, Suzaku, Byakko, and Genbu. Every generation were born in pairs. When the demonic sideof the families wins, the world was thrown into despair. On the other hand, when the divine side of the families wins, they lead the world into prosperity.

The year is 1988. The next generation of the divine entities was born in Taiwan. However, this time, the Seiryuu family did not give birth to twins. Only one child was born into the family. Everyone was shocked when they first hear of this. The baby had one dragon looking scar engraved on each arm: a light blue colored dragon on his right arm and a black dragon on his left. The family members did not wish to put this child through any hardship and thus sealed the power of Seiryuu up within the baby’s body.

Eighteen years had passed since that fated day. Fang (last name) Yu-Loong (meaning “protected by dragon”), had just graduated from UCLA at the age of 18 with a biology degree. He is about six feet tall with semi-short black hair. His appearance seem to be liked by others since he always wear a smile on his face.

He has always been a very dependant person; however, due to jealousy from fellow coworkers and the fact that he is still young and inexperienced, none of the companies are willing to hire him. Thus he moved back to Taiwan with the rest of his family. One day, as he was surfing the internet, he found a job opening in Japan off Saitama. The pay was not too bad but it seems as if there had been a lot of people who quit the job after three days. However, at the time, Yu-Loong did not pay attention to the details. He just wanted to get the job and try to earn some money.

Yu-Loong left Taiwan and headed to Japan a week after he applied for the job. As he arrived at his destination, he realized that he had just applied for a job to teach at a high school. As he stood in front of the campus, he started to think to himself this might have been a bad choice. However, he couldn’t just go back because there is no transportation near by. It took him four hours to walk there from the closest bus station. There was no other choice but to visit the campus.

To be continued...

(Yea I kinda have a little doujin project going...)
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hehehhee, nice 9! I like the details on the boy!

Ok mine, well brefly, looong ago (Hey I like ancient type story) there was a prince (now don't you go think he is prince charming cuz u will be dead), well mostly there is a very prosperious kingdom and within the castle walls lay 13 siblings. Though according to the oracle, there are supposed to have only 12. Therefore, the king and others doubt the last child, our prince, isn't his son and mistreat him unfairly. Soon, his older siblings joined in to bully him, while some ignored the fact that they even have a 13th brother. Only one of his older sister helped him around. Through the mistreatment, the prince began feeling angry and act cold and so, but sadly, he wasn't able to unleash his hatred because he is the weakest among the siblings. Fustrated, he left for hunting (His favorite sport because he can kill animal to burst out his anger) and this time, he decided to enter his father, the almighty king's territory in which none are allow. Once enter, he heard knocking sound coming BENEATH the lake. At first, he fled back but the next day, curiousity kills him, so he went back again to the lake...
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person above you get 9/10 cool story


more improved stor...


Earth is near destruction rumor is when the earth is near to end 4 legendary hero will arrive and save the earth this 4 legendary hero represent the 4 elements of the earth:

FIRE:




EARTH:



LIGTH:



DARK:


the 4 heroes are struggling to defeat the migthy demons Legend says there will be a hero that will save his comdrades in the time of abomiation.



AFTER 2 HOURS :


The legendary hero arrive from no where the heroes name is .........." fumoffu "


fumoffu











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No hehe..
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hayashi aki is a 23 year old underacheiver who works a mediocre 9-5 job, and has no aspirations in life. it'll be christmas in 3 days, and in 3 days, his fiance of 2 years will leave him for another man. in 3 days he'll drink himself to sleep with a bottle of liqour and a bottle of aspirins.
-back track two weeks-
wearing glasses for nearsightedness for most of his life, aki is in the opotomitrists office for a routine checkup. here is where the doctors make a life changing discovery. aki has a disease known as macular degeneration, a desease that will destoy his eye sight. this disease can usually be prolonged with the use of vitamins, but with the rapid rate of degeneration, the doctors tell him he only has until the new year before his sight it gone.
- 28th december-
aki wakes up in the hospital and takes a look around. the disease is working fast, there's a huge portion of his sight missing, and he litterally cannot see what's in front of him. a soft voice calls his name, and he turns to his left, even without being able to see who it was he already know who it is, kyuuseishu ai, a friend of 10 years. (in fact the only friend he has since graduating highschool)
that's basically it for the intro, story would be about aki overcomming his handicap to run (thats right a blind man) in marathons.
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22 / F / Insane Asylum.
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This is what you basically do in my guild. It's a roleplaying guild. ^^ Join now~! Heh..
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A Harem with me as the main Character
Than all of a sudden the King of God's and King of Demon's daughter wants to marry me
And I live happily ever after because they give me the power to be immortal
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