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Herves was a Purifitur, a Part Angel, Part Human and Part something else, sent as warriors in the battle between the Greek Gods. Herves, deciding he didn't like his profession that much, left Mt. Olympus and came to the human world...

150 years later..

Herves has lived on Earth for the past 150 years, the battle was over, thousands of Purifiturs killed, millions of human lives, given to Hades. The war began when Zeus accidently bumped into Ares and refused to apologize. Herves, seeing it was over, tried to come back to Mt. Olympus, but was banished because he was a coward.

My anime would basically start by explaining the race of Purifiturs and then go to the life of Herves during the 150 years, and then go on with many things happening.
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Very good it's a good storry butmayby it is very long
Either way il give a 10 out of 10

and I ask again RATE MY STORY
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Shad, I rate yours 8/10, seems like a good story, but then again, catgirls are just too overused. And thanks, my story wouldnt last awhile, Explaining race of Purifiturs would take like two episodes/3 chapters.
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^^8 out of 10 A good story~
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I hate to read stories
And to make stories either ><

But.. My story ^^

There was a girl! She like to eat a lot of things
She likes Crunchyroll
And then somebody she likes want to marry her O_O
AAAAAAAAAH! ^^
And then they marry each other..\
Happy Live!! END ^^

RAte please! I hate to make stories... And it's quite good that I can make stories ^^
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^8 out of 10. An interesting story. Heheheh...
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The feel of the gruesome and soulless death still lingers on the man’s weapon. What drives a living being to slaughter another in this manner? It is not the will to live and survive; it is the madness of a demon. A madness fuelled by the scent of blood. Alexander would pray to the gods to avoid the malicious creatures if he were a religious man. However, he abandoned faith the day it failed him and the people of this land…the day the beasts came…the day his family was violently taken from him.

rawr
It's not exactly written to be an anime but it could be it could be made into one
It's a paragraph from a story i've been writing.
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Let's see, i write and think about stories and ideas, yet I'll talk about my newest one that I am still thinking about. Tell me if you like it.

Sakura High

A school that loves to complete in everything *hate losing*
School that has rating for every student and each one in a group.
So every year, each student is given a chance to get in higher ranks and groups.
Challenges like most atractive, smartest, most creative, gains more popular than anyone in a limited time and things like that.
Yet there has been no one that beat the top ten Boys and Girls.
The Top Ten Boys *The Perfect Group*- every girl knows them and every guy respects them. Each one has special "Talents" like best smooth talker which can get any girl to believe him *Haru-san*
The Top Ten Girls *The Gorgeous Group*-Everything that the their opposite group are, yet just girls with different "Talents" like the most innocent look that guys fall for *Sakura-chan* *I don't know why*
Echo Ayane- a poor girl that was forced to transfer to this school because of her parent's work. Yet this girl that loves to be alone and not bothered, get somehow bother by the The Ten Top Boys. *it's tiring to say, I gotta get a new name* She is still not use to the competition of this school. The girls are killing her and the boys are catching her and she does not know why. Until Echo finds out that she is the new challenge. The boys have to make her fall in love with them before the next semester. How can this anti-social girl handle this?

Please rate this and tell me what you think?
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Let's see, i write and think about stories and ideas, yet I'll talk about my newest one that I am still thinking about. Tell me if you like it.

Sakura High

A school that loves to complete in everything *hate losing*
School that has rating for every student and each one in a group.
So every year, each student is given a chance to get in higher ranks and groups.
Challenges like most atractive, smartest, most creative, gains more popular than anyone in a limited time and things like that.
Yet there has been no one that beat the top ten Boys and Girls.
The Top Ten Boys *The Perfect Group*- every girl knows them and every guy respects them. Each one has special "Talents" like best smooth talker which can get any girl to believe him *Haru-san*
The Top Ten Girls *The Gorgeous Group*-Everything that the their opposite group are, yet just girls with different "Talents" like the most innocent look that guys fall for *Sakura-chan* *I don't know why*
Echo Ayane- a poor girl that was forced to transfer to this school because of her parent's work. Yet this girl that loves to be alone and not bothered, get somehow bother by the The Ten Top Boys. *it's tiring to say, I gotta get a new name* She is still not use to the competition of this school. The girls are killing her and the boys are catching her and she does not know why. Until Echo finds out that she is the new challenge. The boys have to make her fall in love with them before the next semester. How can this anti-social girl handle this?

Please rate this and tell me what you think?


mmmn not bad.
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omg it's still here? i posted this topic long ago.. lol x] welll im happy.
can anyone else rate mine? x] it's in the beginnning. first post.
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oh and that "Sakura High" story sounds so interesting! i like it xD
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A pacifist guy gets cursed and slowly turns to stone, the only way to break the curse is to kill the one he loves. IDK for some reason it popped into my head
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^7

This is the first chapter of the story I'm making with the intro.

Note: Since I'm going to publish my story once I finish it I will edit this post

Terran

By Zepher

Intro

There was a continent called Terran; it does not have many records about its history. So many sought for its secrets, but few were found, and were treasured. But later on some people of the younger generation want to find and stay at new lands while sharing their past to the total strangers they meet. This action cause the rest of Terran, now called Old Terran forced the younger generation, now called the Young alliance to stay.

There used to be ten foundations in Terran, but later split up into those two groups causing the conflict between them to grow. These foundations are the fire, sea, sky, land, and antecedent foundation; there are two same foundations of each name. They are exactly alike, but they are on the other side of Terran from the each other. It was easy for the two groups to separate because of the contrary, gemini foundations.

Albeit that the reason the foundations were like that are still unknown; people can tell why the name of that foundation because of its location, for example both fire foundations is inside a dormant volcano, both sea foundations is under the continent, but in the ocean, inside an immense underwater cave, both sky foundations is in the sky on a floating island that orbit on their own side of Terran, both land foundations is near an abyss, and both antecedent foundation change its location depending on the season so it is the only foundation that’s name is not about its location. Terran is a continent that is symmetrical in every way except the groups.

There are rumors about hidden foundations in the Pariah dessert, but no one return from that harsh desert.

Chapter 1
Beginning

I woke up at dawn every morning with the dim light appeared through my window. It seems dimmer today, but that just me. Well I guess that is like this every day because it’s always like this: clean my room, brush my teeth, change my clothes, comb my hair, read a book, eat breakfast, go to school, talk to my friend, go home, finish my homework, finish chores, eat dinner, brush my teeth, take a shower, change my clothes, read a book, go to bed, and repeat.

The only thing that varies is the books, school work, the conversation with my friend, and chores. These things are the most interesting part of my day. I always have school every day, and it seems that no one in school has ever been absent. But that just me thinking, that’s odd, but its not. I guess I think like this in the morning and evening.

I grab a book from the book shelf while I was still in my thought process, and sat on the chair in the living room. I open the book, read it until I am half way through and I find blank pages with two bottles inside. I took them out and put it in my pocket. Well this is one of the few reasons why I read books; first reason is the items inside was about the book, the second reason is these items seem to be rare objects that will save my life one day, the last reason is that I like the stories in them.

The book I just finish was about an alchemist that saves the king with a potion that is made up of hard to find items he has found in his adventures in the book. In the end he kept two potions that are special but the book does not say what they do.

The book before was about the two special lockets that will do something special, but again the book did not say anything about what it does in the end. It just left two lockets in the end.

Some of the books are informational, but they sound too fictional for informational books and they have no items in it. It’s just like a text book.

I put my findings into a stash somewhere in this foundation so I could use them later. I guess I would be a collector since these items are unique. That book was the last book that I have not read. I could be more of a book worm than a collector.

The books, the house, and the furniture belong to my father. Everyone I ask about whom owned the house said it once belong to my father. No one said anything about my mother, so the only thing I knew about her is that she is my mother, and she married my father. I did not know or have seen my parents. I ask what happen to them, but the reply I get was “I do not know.”

I was not allowed to have anyone read my books, and the library never had the ones I have so I guess it was special. Everything in this house was special, and I am the only person with out parents.

I put the book back on the shelf, and started to prepare my breakfast that I have every morning. Eggs, sausage, and cereal with toast that’s all. I just wonder if anyone will get anything different for the past thirteen years.

It was six o’ clock in the morning, and it was almost time for school. I finish breakfast, put on my shoes, and open the door as I head out for school today. From a distance I saw three men in uniform dashing towards my house yelling, “Come with us kid, we are taking you in.”

Suddenly I realized that I just bolted down the street as I pass a few blocks; turn right to the next street, then turn to the street that was near the forest. I am starting to lose my breath from all my running so I jump the fence near me, and hid behind the tree that is in the back yard.

This house was familiar, but I cannot remember who lived here. The was a red sand box with the usual blue house that has six square windows, two doors, a porch, a short balcony on the second floor, and the two alpine trees in the back yard. Actually all the houses look like this. I guess nobody knows a better design for houses.

Right now, I am feeling a little nostalgic right now. I still cannot remember whose house it is, until a thirteen year old girl with light blue hair, blue green eyes, a white blouse, and a red skirt came through the back door. She is my friend is school that I always talk to after school since kindergarten. She is the only person with blue hair in school. Different is the reason I am friends with her. They only let everyone have one friend. I do not know why, but it is the rules after all.

“Whose there? Stop hiding and show yourself.” asked the blue haired girl.

“Alright.” I calmly said as I walk out of my hiding space.

“Zepher?” The girl said in a surprised way.

The sound of footsteps of the men that were chasing me is starting to get closer with each second. I do not have a lot of time to stop, and catch my breath. I do not want my friend to get involve with whatever those men are up to. I know now that I can out run them like before, and the forest is near by so that where I should go.

“Sorry, but I have to… bye.” I hesitated and hope the fence, then dash to the forest.

The forest is a huge a huge place. There are a variety of trees here with a mark that you cannot pass. I do not know why there’s a mark there and everyone just said not to cross it. My stash is pass that mark so I do not care because nothing is going to happen except the men that are chasing me. A hidden stash is not against the rules according from what I read.

At least right now it is quiet; there are no animals in the forest so I am not going to be attack by a bear. It seems that those men are not going to follow me here. I guess I have some luck.

Suddenly a voice came from above me “Hey kid, we have surrounded you, now you cannot run or hide this time. Just give up. We have some questions for you.”

There are now more than the three men that were chasing me, and the mark is so close too. I guess I have bad luck right now.

Someone was coming towards the surrounded area. It was not one of those men, but I do not know who it is.

“Zepher, I have to ask you something. Just wait there.” A girl with blue hair came running without noticing the men above.

“I don’t have time there are people above us, and I don’t know who they are.” I quietly said to the girl.

“Don’t make this situation worse kid. We are just going to question you so just come with us.” One of the men advised.

It was a short time before the men was dashed toward us. Some brought out weapons and started to attack us.

It was just a slight moment when everything paused as I closed my eyes. Nothing was happening so I open my eyes. The men around us stop in mid air, the colors were distorted, and my friend was closed to me.

My friend and I can move, but we cannot hear. I took a chance and run towards to the mark. My friend can catch up to me better than the men. Once we past the mark, I pushed the rock that revealed a tunnel underneath it. We went inside, and I close the entrance with the hole under the rock I had pushed. Inside the tunnel illuminated, and showed all the items I have stash.

“What is this place?” the girl asked.

“This is my stash; a place where I put important items here.” I explained, “Don’t talk right now we have to get out of here.”

The girl nod in agreement. I put all the items in my backpack, and started to place the cubes as my friend and I proceed through the tunnel. I put a mask on, and gave one to my friend. She put it on without question then followed me.

The tunnel was five miles long, and seven feet deep. The cubes I placed were twenty feet apart. At the end was two weapons similar to the weapons the men have, but these were made by a different metal.

Colors started to come back to normal when we were at the end of the tunnel. I made an opening above us and my friend and I climbed out. I took out a remote from my backpack, open the glass case on the remote, and press the button under the case.

“Run!” I quickly said as I started dashing.

“Why?” The girl said a little later.

There was a chain of explosions behind us while the sand, and debris flew everywhere in any direction. The surrounding area was sand, and lots of it. Some sand dunes are placed a few miles around us. The heat and humidity was harsh. There was more sand than any sand box could hold. If all of this stuff was here, then this place is must be a desert. We either came to the desert, or came out of some kind of oasis city, if the was any other explanation it could be that I would be hallucinating or that this would be a nightmare.

Back at the tunnel while we were crossing, I saw a silver light pass by, then there were black and white flashes for a mere second. I wonder what that could mean. But right now, all I could see is miles, and miles of sand. We continue on through the desert.

“Here.” I said while giving the girl one of the weapons I was holding.

“What is this?” the girl asked.

“According to my studies, this is a swallow. A weapon with two blades at each end, and a hilt is on the middle of it.” I explained

“These have a different design, and look from the guards. Some people will probably say it’s beautiful. The blades on mine look likes wings, but yours have a different look; it has a blade that looked like some kind of beak, the other look like talons. Why are you giving this to me?”

“I gave it to you so you could protect yourself.”

“From what?”

“Anarchist.”

“An-what?”

“Creatures that will relentlessly attack anything that moves or anything that bothers it. It has no remorse. They will eat anything. Their carcasses do not rot, so they send some kind of harsh scent. Their meat are not edible, and cant use the bone on it for anything. Most People burn it to ashes. The ashes can be sold at a high price, since it’s a very good fertilizer. There are more than one species of them here. But I get this information from a book. Even though they are sound fictional, it seems they could be real.”

“How do you make these swallows?”

“I found some two very rare alloys in a book. So I melt them, put them into molds that I made, and tempered them with a hammer I found in a book. Most items in my stash have been inside of books.”

“When will an anarchist attack us?”

“Anytime, so be ready ok?”

A sandstorm started to arise from the horizon. It looked fierce, but I had a feeling we would be safe if we go through it. This reminds me of the book I finish: A sandstorm started to arise from the horizon. So the alchemist took out the two potions he had secretly made as he disappears into the sandstorm; the end.

“Drink this.” I told blue green eyed girl as I gave the brown, thick glass bottle from my pocket to her.

“What is this?” the girl asked.

“I do not know, but I will drink it with you if you are uncertain.” I explained as I took the other bottle from my pocket.

We both drank the bottles simultaneously, but nothing happen. It just tasted funny. There were no signs of any anarchist so my hunce was right. We were pulled into the sandstorm. Surprisingly it looks like I could withstand the force of the storm.

I check on the girl and she could also endure the winds of the storm. If both of us could out run the men, then I guess they can’t go through the sandstorm. We started to dash through the scraping winds until we start to see solid, rocky ground, and further, I saw green grass. The both of us stop to take a rest on the green field, and stare at the clouds.

“Even though the sky here is the same at home, the sky looks calmer don’t you think.” I said.

“Yeah, I agree it seems calmer here.” The girl answered.

“Rain” I softly said as I look at the sky.

“Rain?” the girl said like she never heard of the word.

“It’s going to rain soon. This will be the first time I will see it, but we should hurry.”

“Rain?” the girl repeated.

“You’ll see.” I replied.

We started to run strait through the sea of grass. There was something in sight near the sun set. It was a foundation; a different foundation from the foundation that I am from. I started to dash straight towards it like it was a start of a new life, something interesting. The light sapphire haired girl followed.

The sky darkens as dark clouds cover the sky as we get closer to the foundation. A strike of lightning appeared behind us as we rush, and the humidity started to change. Once we are at the gates, it started to pour on us, and thunder continued to roar.

“Here” I said while I gave the girl a locket, as I put on a similar one myself.

The girl puts on the locket without saying anything. The locket sort look like a circle shaped pendent with a yore symbol on it. It is made of pure silver. I gave it to her so she would remember me.

I started to dash the other away from the foundation. One reason was that I saw a foundation miles away. The second I could go there since it things should be safe if we are not together.

“Don’t follow me. It’s better if we separate for now.” I said while running as fast as I could run.

“Zepher! Where are going Zepher? Zepher!” The girl yelled across the plains at me as I ignore her. “Zepher! Zepher...the voice slowly change to my friend Bane as my sight faded out…Hey Zepher you’re going to be late to school if you don’t wake up. Zepher!”
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its based on a gg character so its true.

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Poor bridget, I still don't know why He wears that
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I give Zepher 10 because that's the story we are trying to make since we're little.
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