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thank you. But it is just a part of it. I will write the second book.
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telling us you will write the second book is not a story ergo i cannot rate it :p

http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/Archangel768/pages/Mobile-Suit-Celestial-Gundam

it's my first time. don't bag it out completely

it was destined that i make page 76 of this thread.
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wow cool story. keep it up!
one bit even bought a tear to my eye.
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here is my story that's the legend, introduction AND the first chapter

http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/vinette/pages/Death_Cirlce
http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/vinette/pages/Death_Cricle_page_01
http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/vinette/pages/Death_Circle_page_02
http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/vinette/pages/Death_Circle_page_03
http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/vinette/pages/Death_Circle_page_04
http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/vinette/pages/Death_Circle_page_05
Posted 5/2/09
Um....wow i was just goofing around and ran into this heh um sorry -bows her head some- Didn't read all of it ^_^; just the first page and yeah...um...I guess I should attempt a story then I guess..

A Glimpse in the Past

A young maiden, just at the peak of her fifth year, slowly made her way through the chaotic world of her father. The world, realm in which of her father created and now rules over with an iron fist. Hell itself, her homeland and yet her prison. The one man she despised with every once of her being and yet loved for the simple fact he was her father, Lucifer himself but that another story for another time. She was searching for her mother yet again to have her daily lesson for you see her mother was a goddess, a sex slave to Lucifer and trapped within hell. For in hell her mother was nothing more and nothing less then a sex toy for her father but in her own realm, the realm of wolfing and dragon lords she was the scared goddess.
Artemis sighed softly to herself, covering her young naked body with her arms and white furry tail. Her ears pulled back slightly as she cast her eyes down to the ground before her as she walked passed the field of sins. Shivering some she heard someone calling to her, "Artemis! Artemis stop right fucking there!" She knew the voice by heart now, slowly turning to face Kealor. There he was standing over some sinner with his cock in the sinner's mouth. He was now twenty, far older then Artemis and yet her future mate and master if she stay here. Easily pushing over the sinner, Kealor rubbed his cock a bit and walked towards her.
"My dearest little angel," He spoke just above a whisper in a longing honeydew voice, causing her to shiver some. "One day when you're a bit older you'll be my little sinner and suck me dry won't you." He took another step towards her and patted her head lightly. She fought back a growl before turning away from him; she couldn't stand him or his deeds. You see Kealor was Lucifer's right hand man and the son of the dragon king. The only reason Lucifer saw it fit for his little goddess of a daughter was because Kealor was ruthless just as he was and because he was a prince.
Slowly he wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her shivering naked body to his, whispering sweet nothings in her ear. She turned from him before growling low in her throat, "Don't you dare speak to me of love, of life beyond dreams." Kealor seemed amused for a moment before pulling her closer against his chest. She turned swiftly and stared at the sinners as he leaned down to whisper softly in her ear. "Ah but Artemis love is what I have for you and love will always be within me. I am but a demon yes but I am the one that will rule over you, over your body. Your father Lucifer has already said this to be in your future."
She growled again, turning to smack his face only to have him grab her wrist hard and holding her a few inches from the ground. "Don't think it will be that easy to do harm onto your master and mate." Using her feet, Artemis quickly pushed herself away from him. Her voice seemed dark and hateful, "Don't ever touch me Kealor! I am whom I chose to be and I will mate with the person of my choice not who my father has picked. You might be his right hand man but you will never have me!" Quickly she turned and dashed off into the thick overgrowth of Insane Forest, knowing her mother would hide her there from Kealor. That was the second time he came so close to taking her heart this week and he was getting better at throwing her off guard.
He watched some only laughing to himself thinking right now it would be better not to give chase being that close to her body had gotten him worked up so he turned to the sinner he previously had forcing the sinner to continue what he started. “Harder!” He smacked the sinner across the chest rather roughly as Artemis slowly looked around, standing outside of the gate of the Forbidden Temple. She growled a little to herself as she quickly climbed through a small hole in the back of the gate entrance to the Forbidden Temple where her mother was. "Mother...mother" She clung to an young woman that merely turned some and looked at the little one. "Hello my dearest...what happened this time?" She fought back tears, her body trembling. "Kealor"
The woman nodded softly before shaking her head and carefully wrapping her arms around Artemis. “It’s alright my darling. Your safe now and no one will harm you here.” She offered a delicate smile as Artemis looked up to her. “Promise?” She nodded tenderly, “I promise baby.” Artemis gave a soft nod before looking towards a weak man in near the age of at least fifty walking towards them with a tray full of fruits and two glasses of sweet wine.
The woman sighed softly before nodding the man to lay the tray at the nearby table. Her voice seemed painful for a moment as she addressed him, “Tell the master many thanks of his kind gesture but I shall arrive late upon the hour for I am training with my child.” The man looked at Artemis hatefully before glancing towards the room, “As you wish Luna but be forewarn of his anger this day.” Luna gave a weak nod before turning her attention back to Artemis.
Posted 5/2/09
I just realized it's a bit more graphic heh sorry
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wolvenblue_01 wrote:




wow...graphic...

Posted 5/4/09
^_^ heh sorry about that
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There was a kid that had a book that could...kill people. He began to kill all of the criminals, then the power
he had got to him and he developed a sick god-complex. He decided to create a new world for him.
Then he slept with a girl and he got AIDS, the end.
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Chapter XII
http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/adats01/pages/002n

Chapter XIII
http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/adats01/pages/002o

Saddest chapters of the story, for now.
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Ahm,


...... Once there was a gay who was lonely! no one tries to love her!
then one time when he was walking along the road, he seems to have a problem, he was sad and depressed. He tries to stop crying but he cannot control his tears. Suddenly the tears rolls down his face and suddenly

A bright light shines in the place where the tear drops!. A mysterious but lovely cutie loli comes out in that bright light.

The gay fell upon his butt because of the loli girl. The loli jumps to the gays lap and hug the gay.............................................................................................................



next episode:
hehehehehehehehe If you want to know more about my story please contact me or notify me=)

Thanks
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I'd make one involving a high-school student who wants to make up his own manga story. He'd be drawing his manga using magical ink (he'd be given it by some strange mystical person) about a space-adventure with a teenage police-girl and her obnoxious android partner (who'd have a girl's voice and girl-shaped body) as they try to chase after a mad scientist and his super-robot henchman. Then they'd be brought to life and the writer would have to team up with his creations to fight the bad-guys. It'd be a romantic comedy adventure. The adventure from the situations the heros would get into in the real world and at shool. The romance would come from the rivalry between the writer, the police-girl, the most attractive guy in school and the writer's senpai ( who the main heroine was based on since the writer had a crush on her). The Comedy from the characters repeatedly hitting the writer because they dislike his stories so much (the stories were very cliched) and his character often blame him for their faults: e.g the police-girl's costume and breasts that she sees as too large (calling the writer a pervert) and tht robot's problem's trying to get a boyfriend and her need to drink fiizzy drinks to recharg.
I might even turn this into a book when I become a writer.
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