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Posted 6/14/09

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whoa! i can only dream of making my story an anime. anime production is really, really costly.
i guess, i'll just stick to drawing a personal manga. lol. thanks again.


well it is coslty but, if a anime company likes it, they might publish it for you.


lol, that's cool. i doubt that would happen though but i'm still crossing my fingers.


so i'am i.

Posted 6/14/09

DragonTouch wrote:


misspsycho wrote:


DragonTouch wrote:


misspsycho wrote:



whoa! i can only dream of making my story an anime. anime production is really, really costly.
i guess, i'll just stick to drawing a personal manga. lol. thanks again.


well it is coslty but, if a anime company likes it, they might publish it for you.


lol, that's cool. i doubt that would happen though but i'm still crossing my fingers.


so i'am i.



thank you so much.
you're really nice:)
Posted 6/14/09

adats01 wrote:

Here's my story, i've been writing it since april...>>>



PLEASE COMMENT ABOUT IT...!


i'm currently reading it..
but your effort is really astounding.
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http://kiyalovesverrinia.deviantart.com/

that's my deviantart^^
i also uploaded two of the fanart drawings made by a fellow writer here on my profile
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Posted 6/14/09

misspsycho wrote:


DragonTouch wrote:


misspsycho wrote:


DragonTouch wrote:


misspsycho wrote:



whoa! i can only dream of making my story an anime. anime production is really, really costly.
i guess, i'll just stick to drawing a personal manga. lol. thanks again.


well it is coslty but, if a anime company likes it, they might publish it for you.


lol, that's cool. i doubt that would happen though but i'm still crossing my fingers.


so i'am i.



thank you so much.
you're really nice:)

lol thanks
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Posted 6/17/09
i dont see a story above me so ill just write mine ive been thinkin of since i was like 10

Black Panther:The revival

Chapter 1 & 2 ask for chapter 3

ankaru was born into a world without any troubles, rich family,got everthing he wanted,and he was a ladies man,But all that changed on his 14th birthday.....


It began like a regular day, Sun shining, The ocean breeze beside his house, and waking up in his water bed to smell bacon,eggs,grits,sasuage, and orange juice.Ankaru walked down the stairs "Good Morning,Honey" his mother said while cooking some eggs on the stove " Whats up Dumbass" his sister said while chomping down some cereal " Nothing Jackass" I said while imagining of punching her "SHUTUP YOU ASS" she said again this time standing up and pointing her spoon in my face " SHUTUP YO--" before I got to finish my sentence my dad came down " NOW YOU TWO BOTH SHUTUP BEFORE I HAVE TO GROUND YOU TWO ON YOUR BIRTHDAYS" you see,me and my sisters are twins,even though i hate the fact that we share the same presents, like on chirstmas me and her got new lipstick and we got a training bra isnt that great!!!, Now back to the story lets skip a bit i ate my breakfast lalala i took a shower blablabla..wait a second....here we are at the birthdat party. "I Hope we get lipstick again" my sister said " Ya right were getting video games" I said very angry at the fact i now know for sure that were getting lipstick.For hours we sat down watching tom and jerry waiting for mom and dad to come back with our gifts,they never planned for parties so they did everthing at the last moment.When dad came back without mom i knew somthing was wrong they always did everything together even open the door, When he came he said "MOMS GONE!".(Chapter 2)When i heard that my heart jumped and suddenly i felt this feeling in my stomach, instantly i became a diffrent person and i knew my sister did too because our mom was our life she was the best mom and i couldnt let her go like that " What happended?" i said in a calm voice and put a toothpick in my mouth like a detective would." I dont know"dad said but i looked at him he didnt seem like our dad my sister whispered into my ear that i didnt beileive but i had to beileive her she knew more about dad then i did.
I ran towards dad then punched him right in his face and my sister was right he wasnt our dad,his skin peeled off and he peeled the rest of it off this lady appeared, short white hair,completly black eyes, and an army jacket with a red and white katana,She was just about to kill me when my sister came in " DUMBASS!!!" she went right in front of me and got hit,i froze,the lady left and my sister was dead i didnt know what to do,i went into my moms room which i have never been in before,mom didnt like people in her room,the first thing i saw there was an black katana with words ingaved on it " Black Panther" i picked it up walked out the door and knew what i was ganna do
The black panther is back!!
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yes, finally finished the history page! to does who read my fanfic, then it's a chance to understand what the H happend before 2100...and after 2018 (Emperor Lelouch's death)...
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Posted 6/22/09

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They were childhood sweet hearts,but evil tore them apart. But they will fight against all odds,because true love never dies. Masahiro Murakami, owns an important company. He leads a happy life with his wife Yokomi and their five children Akio,Nariaki,Botan,Hideaki and hitomi (emiko). Yet he would never suspect that he has a powerful enemy. Zenaku Shintaromo is determined to steal away his fortune and destroy his entire family.
Zenaku's voice: "every move must be a precise, accurate blow to destroy Masahiro Murakami and his entire family".
His secret weapon, Hinama Saitama a heartless young women who will obey his every command.
Zenaku's voice: "The time has come for you to seduce Masahiro Murakami...make him a widower...Take his business to the very top, and then to total ruin."
Hinama: i will.
Hinama gets hired as Masahiro's personal assistant.Then Hinama is ordered to kill Yokomi, masahiro's wife. But Masahiro's oldest daughter, Akio suspects her.
Akio: " i didn't kill my mother! It was Hinama Saitama, my father's assistant!"
Hinama: "you must realize everything points to akio,the junkie!"
Hinama drives suspicion away from herself my convincing everyone that Akio is dangerously insane and that it was akio, who had murded her own mother.
Akio: "I don't need a doctor,dad! Make him leave!"
Akio ends up being sent to insane asylum, with everyone thinking she is mental
Hinama's lives on, with her long- term plain.Then Zenaku requests hinama use her daughter to destory emiko ( masahiro's 11 year old daughter).At this time, Emiko has fallen in love with Hiroshi. Hisa is sent to destory emiko and hiroshi's love. Hisa makes emiko think, hiroshi is cheating on her.emiko brakes up with hiroshi, thinking hiroshi was cheating on her. To make matters worse, hiroshi's parents have been thinking of moving. Hiroshi didn't want to move, until emiko broke up with him. HIroshi moves and emiko never sees him again. 6 years goes by,and emiko has grown into a beautiful young 17 year old girl who has not forgotten her love for Hiroshi. But never having herd from him, emiko moves on with her love life and gets a boyfriend named Tahara hayahi. Tahara Hayahi, Hisa's secret lover and also works for Zenaku. At this point, Hisa's mother is now married to Emiko's father. Hisa and Tahara have worked for 6 years to keep emiko and hiroshi away from each other. Hiroshi returns,In search of revenge for the injustices of his life and the lives of those around him. Taking on the identity of Densuke kuchiki, he develops a plan to reveal Hinama and hisa's true identitys and intentions,and once again to win the heart of his love ,Emiko.
A voice: "Akio knows a terrible secret and they've kept her quiet with all those drugs they give her. If the secret is revealed, everyone will know, whose evil shadow has been cast over the murakami family."
Hiroshi soon realizes that emiko, the love of his life does not recognize him and that has a boyfriend.
Hiroshi: " Emiko forgot me"
Hiroshi is now determined to unmask Hisa and her mother, and win back emiko's love.
Zenaku: "every minute must be another step closer to bankruptcy,misery,and pain."
Hiroshi: "Now more than ever, no one must know I 'm here".
Brave hearts fighting for a love that not even time could destroy..


Please tell me if you liked it, and please rate it on a scale of 1-10. Thanks for reading!



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Posted 6/25/09
there was this stalker following me around and he wont leave me alone. so i hired some ninjas to arrest him. the ninjas were team 8. um hinata was way to shy and wouldnt talk much. but she did ask about the person stalking me. kiba and akamaru kept sniffin at my stuff tring to find a trail at the scene were i last saw the man. shino was the body guard that was suppost to keep me safe incase the guy showed up again. shino wasnt suppost to leave me until the guy was caught. two days later and shino has never let me leave his sight except for the bathroom. he was nice but when that stalker came back and the others didnt show up, shino took action. i had to hide and watch the whole fight. it was awsome, and shino won. but the man was not arrested he was killed. im glad that guy isnt following me anymore. shino said [come on we got to find my comrades] i said but we dont know where they are. [i know what im doing] okay boss man. he looked at wierd. [your different] what? then he used a bug jutsu. the bugs faned out over my house. then shino [come] ran to my bedroom closet. i tried to keep up with him. i think he slowed down on perpose. there they were in my closet hinata and kiba. they were tied up with ducttape on their mouth. when shino got them loose. were is the man. [he's dead i made sure of it] i saw them shaking. i said calm down you guys. i saw this guy fight it wasnt that bad. it was pretty cool. they were staring at me like i was crazy. what i say? [kiba: you think shino is cool?] yah why? [hinata: oh nothing] [shino:stop playing around we got to tell the lady tsunade that the mission is done] [kiba: sure shino and we'll take your fangirl with us] [shino: you better stop it] [hinata: kiba this is not the time for games] im not a fangirl? [quit it now!] clearly shino is mad. [oh fine] they reported the mission. and i thanked them. well one of them. when shino and i was alone again asked why did you say i was different? [why was that guy stalking you] i wouldnt go out with him. [why not] he harrassed my family. [thats why] why what? [why i said your different] i dont get it. [you dont judge people until you give them a chance. you gave him a chance with your family and he blew it. you gave me a chance to protect. i did that. and now you trust me] true...but why say to me? [cause you need to know who you are] i dont believe you. [what why] cause it sounds like bullshit [well what do you want me to say? i like you] it would make more sence. [im not flirting okay] i didnt say anything like that. you did. [im not good pressure] what pressure? im not doing anything! [your going to reject me] why would i do that? [cause i want to date you] i stared at him in shock. um uh you you do. blushing now. i want the same. we just stared at each other.

it may not have chapters and some of it maybe spelled wrong. but it is both shocking and embarrising.
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Posted 6/27/09 , edited 6/27/09
ahh! i just realized one of my storys sounds like another story crap! can anyone help me fix the story so it sounds different?
Posted 7/1/09


Or something like that.
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Hi!, can anyone read a novel I made? It's only chapter 1 but I'm currently making the chapter 2 now. SO if you have time, would you mind reading it and giving some comments and suggestion,,.. Here's the link http://asakuranovels.blogspot.com/
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Uhm, yea this is my story... hope you like it...

We had to run now. The creatures behind us weren't slowing down and they would catch us any moment now. They would be here by now if we hadn't killed their friend on our way. I suddenly fell but Daniel was there to catch me, like always. Even now, when we were so close to death I couldn't help to feel that pleasant feelin of my hart spinning to life and accelerating when he tuched me. I could feel that he was tence and scared. No matter how brave he was, how tough he was, he always freaked out when I was in danger. His love for me was making him crazy. I looked up at him as we ran. His green deep eyes were as beautiful as ever, even though they where filled with plain terror. I couldn't imagine that the life in them soon would die. His perfect face was shining in the moonlight and his black hair looked stunning as always. I was the luckiest girl in the world to ever seen a beautiful person like him. And to be able to love him, was almost to much for me to think about. It was almost fair that I would die now. I had my part of happiness and it would end now. It started to rain. It poored down dramatically and made it harder to run. I relaized that I wouldn't be able to run out them behind us even if I treid. So I just stopped. My legs bent over and I found myself sitting on the stoneground. Daniel stopped abruplty as soon as he saw me sitting there. He understood directly and did the same. He pulled me closer and put my hand on his hart. Then we sat there quitly as we had been doing many times before.
There was so much I wanted to tell him, to thank him for. But I didn't now where to start. I looked up at him. He nodded once, as he understood what I wanted to say.
"I love you" I said weakly
"Me two my loved, always will and always have" He said with his perfect voice.
He bent down and kissed me at my forehead. I smiled when his lipped tuched my pale skin. We stopped talking then, and just waited for the creatures to come. This was the end for us, but I couldn't be more happy. I closed my eyes, I was in my happy place.


Please rate it '_' I'ts kind of emarassing if you don't like it xD
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Posted 7/6/09
hmm...i'll give it an 8.
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~Secret Memories~
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