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Himiko wrote:

Let's see, i write and think about stories and ideas, yet I'll talk about my newest one that I am still thinking about. Tell me if you like it.

Sakura High

A school that loves to complete in everything *hate losing*
School that has rating for every student and each one in a group.
So every year, each student is given a chance to get in higher ranks and groups.
Challenges like most atractive, smartest, most creative, gains more popular than anyone in a limited time and things like that.
Yet there has been no one that beat the top ten Boys and Girls.
The Top Ten Boys *The Perfect Group*- every girl knows them and every guy respects them. Each one has special "Talents" like best smooth talker which can get any girl to believe him *Haru-san*
The Top Ten Girls *The Gorgeous Group*-Everything that the their opposite group are, yet just girls with different "Talents" like the most innocent look that guys fall for *Sakura-chan* *I don't know why*
Echo Ayane- a poor girl that was forced to transfer to this school because of her parent's work. Yet this girl that loves to be alone and not bothered, get somehow bother by the The Ten Top Boys. *it's tiring to say, I gotta get a new name* She is still not use to the competition of this school. The girls are killing her and the boys are catching her and she does not know why. Until Echo finds out that she is the new challenge. The boys have to make her fall in love with them before the next semester. How can this anti-social girl handle this?

Please rate this and tell me what you think?


omg i was reading the posts and this one stuck out its amazing and it should should be a comedy/romance lol
i would love for this to become a real anime
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Hmmh, a good story eh.

Okay- One day there was a teenager walking down a street, and suddenly a mutant comes out of the sky and walks down the street with the teenager. As they walk down nearing the intersection, something catches the newly created duo's eyes, a ninja. This ninja drops his kunai and walks down the street with them. So the teenager, the mutant and the ninja finally reach the intersection they meet a turtle and it's like "WTF?"

=D Did you get the hint that I'm an aspiring author?

Here's the real thing (I did it in 2:00 in the morning after eating a pepto bismol sandwich expect it to be messed) Also this isn't even the type of genre I write in...I don't know why the heck I did this(if it weren't detailed maybe it could make a good horror anime). Oh and btw it's nowhere near done =D probably will never be done...

We are the Lost Cause
'We are the lost cause', remember us? The ones you neither cared for, nor knew even existed. Abandoned, we stood together to support one another, to be there for one another, for in this world; the poor are abandoned because they couldn't be taken care of, while the rich are loved so much they are allowed to go and do whatever they wish without their parents. The poor huh, I am one of them. It would be truly great if this city I attend school in was a communist city seperate from all other cities in North America, but that was asking for the impossible in a capitalist country. But then again communism would still lead to a horrible life for me, take the words of Frank Zappa:
"Communism doesn't work because people like to own stuff." I wanted to own stuff so badly.

Blood gushing out of their bodies, what hath they done to deserve such a fate as to become the providers of a billabong of blood. Their screams unheard, in the dead of night, the hollow night it had been until ataraxia had been achieved with their deaths. He was finally satisfied, he sat down on the sofa in the living room, watching their bodies squirm slightly; spinal reflexes, one would guess.


I could remember only bits and pieces of when I first got enrolled into Spaeler Academy, it was a highly respectable Boarding School that was itself a hierarchy system, the high ranks being those sexy, and smart guys or girls that excelled at everything, the subordinates being the less capable, the less beautiful. This hierarchy system caused great conflict between 'The Beautiful People' and 'The Things' ultimately resulting in the bulding of two seperate school buildings, one for the 'Beau Peau', and one for the 'Things'. However 'The things' did not necessarily consist of 'things' some were actually handsome and beautiful people, who did not excel at all subjects, who were not as popular. This school, donned a Navy shaded uniform of a dress shirt and dress pants for men, and blouses and skirts for women. One could easily suspect this school to be filled with rich, powerful and wealthy snobby kids; this is true by the way but despite that recently (just last term) they have begun enrolling those who are not rich or powerful; for reasons unknown.

'The rich and the poor, there's no longer a difference between the two when they're dead'

I can remember entering classroom B-3, seeing a bunch of kids who seemed normal enough. These kids were a colourful bunch, not by skin colour, but by their personalities. Some had preppy personalities, some had delinquent personalities and some had 'I wanna be as smart as The Beau Peaus' traits in them. I immediately made friends with one kid, who was brought in recently with a scholarship from Japan; Shin Igami, 14. I thought him neither preppy, nor delinquent, and it seemed he had no desire to be a 'Beau Peau'. Maybe I just didn't know him enough; it was my first day attending Spaeler after all. I decided to take the seat behind Shin and beside the window, overlooking the lake that resided only 3 kilometres from the school. The teacher then entered the room, upon his entering a strange smell tingled between my nostrils; a familiar smell. I couldn't quite get my thumb on what it was.
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^9.5 looks really cool but you got to give me a story line instead of just a intro (I'm a little of a harsh critic), and who cares about pretty skin!

okay here goes, serial experiments lain style: 1st ep: a man is walking down the street and sees a huddled, bearded man gibbering to himself, the 1st man sighs and says something like "pour, madman" as he finishes a third man brushes by him and responds "you reached a conclusion of madness rather quickly, are you certain?". the 1st man begins arguing with the 3rd about insanity with the 3rd man implying it is actually the first man that is mad while sudden odd outbursts come from the madman interjected. episode ends with the third (educated) man saying that it is really the second man that is mad and the first that is sane however the second and third man are simply submissive split personality's of the madman and they are doomed to watch as the mad man presents themselves to the world.

series unfolds as dynamics between the three main character/(characters???) change and grow. Though all this the viewer/reader tries to dissipher reality from fevered imagination with the madman.

(please rate and give criticism)
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wow i cant believe i wrote a story here, i musta been really bored o_o
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=D Same here
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Hmmh, a good story eh.

Okay- One day there was a teenager walking down a street, and suddenly a mutant comes out of the sky and walks down the street with the teenager. As they walk down nearing the intersection, something catches the newly created duo's eyes, a ninja. This ninja drops his kunai and walks down the street with them. So the teenager, the mutant and the ninja finally reach the intersection they meet a turtle and it's like "WTF?"

=D Did you get the hint that I'm an aspiring author?

Here's the real thing (I did it in 2:00 in the morning after eating a pepto bismol sandwich expect it to be messed) Also this isn't even the type of genre I write in...I don't know why the heck I did this(if it weren't detailed maybe it could make a good horror anime). Oh and btw it's nowhere near done =D probably will never be done...

We are the Lost Cause
'We are the lost cause', remember us? The ones you neither cared for, nor knew even existed. Abandoned, we stood together to support one another, to be there for one another, for in this world; the poor are abandoned because they couldn't be taken care of, while the rich are loved so much they are allowed to go and do whatever they wish without their parents. The poor huh, I am one of them. It would be truly great if this city I attend school in was a communist city seperate from all other cities in North America, but that was asking for the impossible in a capitalist country. But then again communism would still lead to a horrible life for me, take the words of Frank Zappa:
"Communism doesn't work because people like to own stuff." I wanted to own stuff so badly.

Blood gushing out of their bodies, what hath they done to deserve such a fate as to become the providers of a billabong of blood. Their screams unheard, in the dead of night, the hollow night it had been until ataraxia had been achieved with their deaths. He was finally satisfied, he sat down on the sofa in the living room, watching their bodies squirm slightly; spinal reflexes, one would guess.


I could remember only bits and pieces of when I first got enrolled into Spaeler Academy, it was a highly respectable Boarding School that was itself a hierarchy system, the high ranks being those sexy, and smart guys or girls that excelled at everything, the subordinates being the less capable, the less beautiful. This hierarchy system caused great conflict between 'The Beautiful People' and 'The Things' ultimately resulting in the bulding of two seperate school buildings, one for the 'Beau Peau', and one for the 'Things'. However 'The things' did not necessarily consist of 'things' some were actually handsome and beautiful people, who did not excel at all subjects, who were not as popular. This school, donned a Navy shaded uniform of a dress shirt and dress pants for men, and blouses and skirts for women. One could easily suspect this school to be filled with rich, powerful and wealthy snobby kids; this is true by the way but despite that recently (just last term) they have begun enrolling those who are not rich or powerful; for reasons unknown.

'The rich and the poor, there's no longer a difference between the two when they're dead'

I can remember entering classroom B-3, seeing a bunch of kids who seemed normal enough. These kids were a colourful bunch, not by skin colour, but by their personalities. Some had preppy personalities, some had delinquent personalities and some had 'I wanna be as smart as The Beau Peaus' traits in them. I immediately made friends with one kid, who was brought in recently with a scholarship from Japan; Shin Igami, 14. I thought him neither preppy, nor delinquent, and it seemed he had no desire to be a 'Beau Peau'. Maybe I just didn't know him enough; it was my first day attending Spaeler after all. I decided to take the seat behind Shin and beside the window, overlooking the lake that resided only 3 kilometres from the school. The teacher then entered the room, upon his entering a strange smell tingled between my nostrils; a familiar smell. I couldn't quite get my thumb on what it was.


u shouldnt have drifted off putting ur own comments in there as the story goes, i started to lose interest lawl, how u described the blood etc was good but i didnt get how that started, was it that ninja doing it? yea i know its just suppose to be a short story but u drift off without explaining urself enough

and u describe the guys too much, who cares about the guys, make that ninja a hot chick
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=D fine
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i dreamt this o__O but writing it with some editing, added a little echhi theme

A young man is on the run from the law, he was being framed by a dirty cop to steal his sister. He ran and ran for days on end. Collapsing at a small town, he awoke hearing people fight. It was a young girl and a scruffy looking huge man fighting and breaking things along their path. The young man with his remaining strength tried to help the girl. He completely knocked out the huge man. Whistles and alarms sounded as he was discovered. He had no energy left and fainted. Waking up in a room filled with atleast 50 young women. A tall woman with long tanned legs made a kicking motion and stopping just an inch from his face. She was the leader of the little town.

Leader: "who the hell u think u are interfering with our match", the man was confused and barely remembering the night before. Leader: "were the town's represantives in the battle tournament, you know we dont need help from a man" Then the young girl from last night appeared thanking the young man and pleading leader for his forgiveness.

Leader: "fine, fine! but hey u fight pretty good" "OK ur gonna be the first male member of our town!" "Every week we fight other rival towns and cities, hoping to win the grand prize" "So get ready! tomorrow ull start training!"

And so starts the young hero's life man-slave in a town filled with a hundred women, and his fights lie ahead against the toughest opponents on earth. He still remembers his younger sister and hopes someday to be free.

But the young hero doesnt know, is that the dirty cop who framed him will be one of his opponents in the future

DUN DUN the end~ i should copyright


It's a good idea, kind of reminds me of what I heard of Claymore, but eh, anime isn't 100% original. Not unoriginal like the kid who based lots of things off Bleach, it's a good idea, I'd say really (I haven't seen a similar anime?.) I'd guess you're planning on the coppers to appear while the guy is while he's at the town, so him running away along with the fighting girls is kind of neat. We could watch the smart ways he escapes, and stuff. And girls fighting like men usually do, yay! I hope the character isn't a scrawny piece of shit, and he beat up this huge muscular dude (who's may be dumb as hell) to save that girl cause, that'd really really be stupid. I'm sorry but this is done in anime I've seen before, and it's quite annoying... Well as you noticed, I'm also judging your anime by things I'm THINKING may happen, so you're thoughts can be different than what I think may happen.

So yeah, it's a good idea, I'm just not going to say it'll be one of the greatest things ever made. And you probably didn't work like 3 months editing and editing this like not in just thought but on the computer or paper and stuff, so you could do a better job. Ey, before I'd put tons and tons and tons of work into a story, I'd have to make sure I got some company that will make it if they like it lol. And rawr... Hokie be critic!! Me come to critic!! rawr... (I really don't know what number score to give, I'll just give my thoughts.. not numbers lol)

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I write lot's of stuff...

The latest I finish was about an introverted girl who turns out to be a master thief. She steals stuff just for the kick of it. Her day job is a cafe co-manager as well as a match maker. She has a crush on the clerk in a nearby video rental but is too shy to tell him so she sends him weird letters that look like ransom notes... this way he won't find out who she is while conveying her feelings. The guy thinks otherwise... he assumes her to be some nut stalker.

Later on, the guy figures it all out by investigating. He discovers that the little hand writing on the notes are similar to the penmanship on the menu board of a certain cafe. He asks the managers on duty and finds out who his stalker is.

The girl gets figured out and decides to throw away her timid nature so that she can finally convey her feelings to the guy properly. The guy and the girl get together for the first time... but at the same time the police had figured out who was doing all the major heists in the past few years.

The girl gets discovered as the thief... the guy helps her escape but gets shot in the midst of gunfire. The thief ends up in jail and ends up with a broken heart as well. She blames herself for his death and submits to her fate.

The end... or is it?
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At 17, and as heirs to two of the most influential familes in Japan, two students named Sasame and Shuji were forced to marry by their parents.

He was the class-president in their school and she was the muse. He believes in the importance of responsibilities and studies while she believes in the art of being random and absurd.

If anything else, they hated each other at first sight. She thinks he's a cold hearted money whore, while He thinks she's nothing but a brainless doll meant for display. On their wedding night, Sasame met a strange creature who allowed her one wish. She wished for a way to better understand her brand new husband. Unknown to her, the same creature also gave her husband a wish and Shuji, wished for the same thing.

The next day, they woke up in each other's body. Shuji in Sasame's and Sasame's in Shuji. Aside from their marriage, how will they handle school? Their family and their friends?

Especially since they agreed to keep their marriage a secret to everyone. Will their enemies find out? Will Sasame's best friend who's in luve with Shuji ruin everything? or will they finally realize that the only way for them to return to normal is when they finally realize that understanding comes in the form of love.

I actually have no idea what the hell i'm writing. Someone whould suggest to add this Topic in the Onigiri issues. I mean, people making up and passing their own anime (format) stories.
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ummm.....let's see...this is one of them...

As a young girl, Amayo was orphaned & has always wished for something to happen. One day, a mysterious woman named Setsko tells Amayo that she is the descendent of one of the chosen ones. Amayo is perplexed by this, & as Setsko continues, Amayo decides to join Setsko.
Setsko then tells her about the link of dimensions, & then, for demonstration & as a test of Amayo's powers, teleports Amayo to Void, a dimension used as a prison or the safekeeping of important ppl. There, Amayo meets two dragon brothers: Akira(half human, half dragon), a cold distant person, & Kanoe(full dragon), the total opposite of Akira.
Akira & Kanoe are important to Setsko's goal, which is something about the key to the survival of the dimensions' balance. Amayo helps, & along the way, discovers more about her past, her so-called "missing" sister, her powers of purifacation, & also finds the other descendents.
Just the thing is, Akira's stone, the Ice Blood Crystal is the key to this, but now the shards are in various dimensions, a result becuz Setsko refused to give it to the enemy, & broke it.
But when Amayo finally comes face to face with the enemy, it's discovered to be the alter ego of Akira, Akito. Akito, want's to do sumthing, sumthing bad, & with the help of the bodily forms of the other alter egos, Akito get's closer to his goal. It's up to Amayo & the other descendants & Akira & Kanoe to stop Akito.
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Let's see....

In a time separate from the past, present, or future, there was an academy for people who didn't go along a path, but made their own.

Kamiya Rin was a 15 year-old student who decided to became a detective. Detectives here work in pairs against forces that rival the gods. Her friends chose similar destinys.

Fauna Aira, a calm and petit girl of 12 who was a bit dense. Koyama John, a wacky lech that isn't very smart. Sakurai Jin, a laid-back genius that still works hard. And Veran Mira, a ditzy girl that messes up a lot.

One fateful day, Rin encounters a boy chased by demons and helps out. Afterward, as they talk under the star-less sky, Rin asks if he will be her partner and strangely, he agrees right away.

We made a promise, under that endless sky, to work hard together, as the aquatic moon dyed the snow crimson.

Finally the teams were decided the next morning at the graduation ceremony. First Team: Rin and the boy, Zen. Second Team: Jin and Aira. Third Team: John and Mira.

As they set out on different paths, the wheel named time starts moving, and can't be stopped.

We choose this world where it shakes and roars, for without knowing pain, one cannot know love.

NOTE: Genre: Romance, Comedy, Action, Sci-fi, Supernatural, and Random.
I made a REALLY long introduction.
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In a world very much like our own, humans become corrupted and choosse a path of darkness. They summon demons messing with a force they know nothing about for there very own deep purposes or just out of curiosity. The demons or devils possess the soul of the human and uses them as a vessel. as time passes devils dont need to be summoned in order to place themselves amongst us. the negative energy surrounding their world causes nooks and crannies where the demons can resurface.

a girl who started out with nothing no one in her life, lost the most precious people in her life. She dies alone from a demon after she loses her brother and her lover. She wakes up later on and sees a young man around 18 sitting next to her, but thats impossible? she DIED. somehow she was given a new life and when she realizes that her untimely demise was destined by fater she also realizes that she is linked by fate to the worlds salvation.

In this story FATE and DESTINY plays a big part in the life of Hikari Kyosaka who is destined to send the devils back to hell and fullfill gods wish.

she meets people along the way is is also a fighter for god and mankind. together they battle against hell and evil.

an exorcist, a hunter, a vampire(sort of demon), and an angel...
must fight along side one another..
is that possible..?

IM ACTUALLY WRITING A MANGA ON THIS (= its turning out nicelyyyy !!!! im such a goood drawerrr AHHAHAHAHPWAHAHA

ill post it up next time (=

did you like the story?
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Heather and her annoying friend Arisa were on a walk done with the stupid
paper work there god damn taichous made them do. heather sighed " after this i'm
in for a days worth of paper work god do i want to kill izuru-taichou" yep it finally happend
After ichimaru gin left for the huco mundo with Azin and tousen. shuuhei,kira,and momo took over there captains place, Heather was izuru's fukutaichou and Arisa became Momo's fukutaiachou Heather got along with kira just fine but he cramed the poor girl with paper-work and Arisa being as lazy as she is just wanted to burn it in a bond fire and dance around the burning papers.
Heather had her interests in Hitsugaya but would rather jump of the building then crap all over her pride to say it to his face. Arisa liked Abrai Renji and was not afraid to show it being the pervert she was told the load mouthed fukutaichou he had a nice ass and Heather wished that she wasn't friends with the stupid perverted girl . after there walk they bumped into Hitsugaya and Renji . Heather just wanted to jump into the nerest broom closet there was why? because whenever she was near the young
taichou she always blushed or if they talked the girl would studder and say somthing
stupid. Arisa would always call renji somthing stupid like sweet ass or somthing.she wispered to
Arisa " don't you dare" the look on the young girls face was if you say that word again ill rip your
face off and shove it up your ass. "ok fine jeeze" she wisperd back but as Renji was
walking past she grabed the red heads ass. renji glared at the pervert below her "BAKA!" Heather
shouted as she hit the taller girl on the head " ow for a prawn you sure hit hard" what Arisa said
probably caused her death as Heather started to strangle the girl with her feet "i would rather
appreciate you didn't kill my fukutaichou" hinamori said smiling " HINAMORI TAICHOU"
Arisa screamed and glomped the female taichou " ok ok i get your happy to see me but i can't
breath!" said the smaller girl under her said " hehe sorry hinamori taichou"Arisa laughed nervously
and Heather just slaped her forhead and called her a dipshit as always.Heather sighed "izuru taichou is going to be on my ass if i don't finish my paper work"
"i bet you like that don't cha" Arisa smirked slyly "burn in in hell you perverted dog!'' Heather hissed '' oh so scared shrimpy is going to hurt me" Arisa rolled her eyes " thats it " but before she could chop the smart mouth fukutaichou head of Renji luckly saved the stupid girl from Heathers hot temperd actions " ok thats enough we don't want to kill each other just yet"Renji said camly " Arisa why don't you finish your paper work before you spend one night with no sleep and Heather why don't you go confess to Hitsugaya-taichou" Renji smirked yes he knew
one of the worst things that could ever happen because while Arisa was laughing her ass off Hinamori was hugging her saying how cute it was
having a crush on whity-chan."oh i'll confess to him when you confess to Rukia"HA! like killing two birds with one
stone Renji and Arisas face were bright red both of them for defferent reasons one Renji had been with rukia since
childhood he had small feelings for the small girl but was willing to make a bet "fine i'll ask Rukia on a date but you have to confess to Hitsugaya-taichou'' now that turned Arisa a brighter red why? because as i told you in the biginning she liked Renji but she HATED Rukia people don't really know why though i guess since people think that Renji loved Rukia so when she heard about it right infront of her face she heard a crack probably her heart shattering or somthing."ok deal" Heather said unfortunatly it's easier said then done espeacily to your best friend
~*~*~*~Flashback~*~*~*~

"Come on, Toshiro!'' Heather whined, dragging her friend by the arm. "We’ve been studying too long! It’s time for a break!"

"I don’t need a break!" Hitsugaya protested. "I’ve got a test on bankais tomorrow and I need to study for it.''

she turned around and pouted. "Come on, Toshiro. We haven’t hung out in forever. Can’t I spend at least one afternoon with my best friend?"

Hitsugaya looked down, refusing to make eye contact with you due to the fact that he was breaking underneath your irresistible pout. "I’ve got studying...."

"Please?" Heather pleaded, turning up your pouting power.

Finally, he snapped. "Alright, fine!" he exclaimed, throwing his hands in the air. "You win this time."

She instantly lit up. "Thanks, Toshiro!" Heather replied, practically glomping him before continuing to drag him to her secret place. After entering your sacred domain, she released Hitsugaya’s arm and cartwheeled through the fallen petals, giggling like an idiot.

Hitsugaya, however, merely walked over to where she sat, which was at the base of the giant cherry blossom tree. He sighed and shook his head. "Can I go now?"

Heather frowned at him. "You know, Hitsugaya, you seriously need to remove that stick shoved up your ass and have some fun at least every now and then. You’re so serious! Life isn’t all about work, you know."

"It is if you wanna be the best," he retorted.

Heather scoffed and started climbing the tree. Hitsugaya watched her until she were completely shielded by the branches as she climbed higher and higher. Soon, he couldn’t even hear the rustling sound she made as she ascended the tree. "Heather, get down here so we can leave already!" he shouted up at the branches.

Silence was his response. "Heather, this isn’t funny. Get down here now."

Still no response. He sighed in aggravation and ran his fingers through his hair. "This had better be good, Heather" he muttered darkly before climbing up the tree. Every now and then, he cursed under his breath when a stray branch scratched him or poked him in the eye. But he kept going up, looking for her.

"Goddammit, Heather! Where the hell are you?!" Hitsugaya yelled angrily.

His reply was Heather tackling him out of the tree.

Hitsugaya let out a cry of surprise as they both went flying out of the tree. But his shouts were drowned out by her laughter. Luckily, the grass and fallen blossom petals cushioned there fall. she rolled on the ground, laughing so hard and clutching her sides. "You should’ve seen your face!" Heather cried, tears almost spilling from her eyes.

"Shut up!" he yelled, face hot with embarrassment.

Heather sat up, still grinning. “Why don’t you make me?” she dared.

Hitsugaya narrowed his eyes at her before lunging. Heather instinctively dodged and stuck her tongue at him. "You gotta be quicker, Whitey-chan!"

"Stop calling me that!" He got to his feet and chased her. Heather just laughed and ran around the tree with Hitsugaya hot on her heels. Heather was so busy having fun that she didn’t notice him getting closer and closer until he finally tackled her to the ground. He pinned down her shoulders and smirked in triumph.

Heather just returned his smirk with a breathless smile. "Oh no. The almighty Toshiro Hitsugaya has caught me. Whatever shall I do?"

"You’re crazy," he muttered, releasing her.

she sat up and looked at him. "And yet, you hang around me. Face it, Whitey-chan. Without me, your life would be dull and boring."

He just rolled his eyes at her and chuckled under his breath. she stared at him. He raised an eyebrow at her. "What?"

Heathers face broke into a fresh wide smile. "I actually made you laugh!"


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Hitsugaya's P.O.V~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


i was working on my paper work as always, matsumoto was being a lazy drunk as usual trying to convince
me to take a break "comon Taichou, your such a workaholoc take a break for once maybe go out with a girl
OH! How about Heather"Matsumoto said i could feel all the blood rush to my face

"Matsumoto i have no time for going out with girls being captain means being responsable and i'm not interested in her"i said i saw Matsumoto grin" Really then why is your face red when i said Heather"I swear my face turned a little more red

Matsumoto had a sly smile on her face ok not a good sign"I bet Heather likes you though i bet she is going to come
right though this door and...''

speaking of the sarcastic fukutaichou"Ummmm....Hitsugaya-taichou can i speak with you?"Heather said looking very shy, matsumoto grinned "I'll leave you two alone" as she left she closed the door, just as she was just about to speak there was a crash and a scream" Goddamnit,Matsumoto" i sighed,
"i bet she trying to clean the closet and probably faling meserabley" Heather started to laugh, i sighed "No surprise there"
"i better leave before Matsumoto kills us all"Heather said as she left, i started to help Matsumoto clean the closet


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Normal P.O.V or however normal it gets~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

" Hey Taichou look at this" as she picked up a book of demon arts and spells " facanating" Hitsugaya said sarcasticly

"hmmm Atra gulai n ilian tauthr ono un atra ono waise skolir fra rauthur" she said, as she read one spell
" weird huh taichou" " Hitsugaya taichou where did you go?" ‘Did he leave without me noticing it?’ she thought.
That’s when she heard a muffled cry coming from a few feet away from her spot. She went over and looked down. There, she saw her captain’s clothes and zanpakutou abandoned on the floor. ‘What the? Is Hitsugaya taichou running around naked?!’ she thought frantically. Then she calmed down. ‘No, Taichou Hitsugaya is thankfully not that type of person. So then where can he be?’
At that moment, she looked at the pile and jumped back. Rubbing her eyes, she looked at it again. Was it just her imagination, or did the pile of clothes just....twitch?

The clothes suddenly gave a jerk. ‘Something’s in there,’ thought Matsumoto. As it continued to move, she put her hand on Haineko, prepared to fight if necessary. She braced herself as the clothes were flung aside.....

....revealing a small white cat sitting in the center of the pile.

Caught completely off guard, Matsumoto’s hand fell to her side as she stared at the small, seemingly innocent cat before her. “What’s a cat doing here?” she asked herself.

The cat stared back at her with piercing green eyes. As Matsumoto looked on, she noticed that this cat resembled Hitsugaya in a way. The piercing look, the way its fur spiked, resembling Hitsugaya’s hair
Thats when she finally got it
"Hitsugaya taichou?"
“Why are you looking at me like that?” asked the cat.

An awkward silence followed............

......then came Matsumoto’s hysterical laughter.

“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!” she howled, clutching her side.

“What the heck are you laughing at?” Hitsugaya demanded. “And come to think of it, why are you suddenly ten times my size?”

Still laughing to tears, she took out Haineko and removed it from its sheath halfway, letting Hitsugaya see his reflection on the blade.

He stared at his reflection in utter disbelief. “WHAT IN THE NAME OF ALL THAT’S HOLY HAPPENED TO ME?!?!?!?!?!”

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