i dreamt this o__O but writing it with some editing, added a little echhi theme

A young man is on the run from the law, he was being framed by a dirty cop to steal his sister. He ran and ran for days on end. Collapsing at a small town, he awoke hearing people fight. It was a young girl and a scruffy looking huge man fighting and breaking things along their path. The young man with his remaining strength tried to help the girl. He completely knocked out the huge man. Whistles and alarms sounded as he was discovered. He had no energy left and fainted. Waking up in a room filled with atleast 50 young women. A tall woman with long tanned legs made a kicking motion and stopping just an inch from his face. She was the leader of the little town.

Leader: "who the hell u think u are interfering with our match", the man was confused and barely remembering the night before. Leader: "were the town's represantives in the battle tournament, you know we dont need help from a man" Then the young girl from last night appeared thanking the young man and pleading leader for his forgiveness.

Leader: "fine, fine! but hey u fight pretty good" "OK ur gonna be the first male member of our town!" "Every week we fight other rival towns and cities, hoping to win the grand prize" "So get ready! tomorrow ull start training!"

And so starts the young hero's life man-slave in a town filled with a hundred women, and his fights lie ahead against the toughest opponents on earth. He still remembers his younger sister and hopes someday to be free.

But the young hero doesnt know, is that the dirty cop who framed him will be one of his opponents in the future

DUN DUN the end~ i should copyright

yeh gonna regret postin my story but yeh, new here so why not?

They were twins, one boy and one a girl. Acted like best friends even though they were related, never fought. One day when they both were nine, she told him that she was going to go to Japan and promised to come back. Before she left, she gave him a necklace identical to hers, leaving him clueless of the true meaning of what she gave him. Five years later he finds out that she died in an accident and goes to Japan to attend her funeral. But during the flight something happens. While he’s asleep his body fades away and he’s awakened by a voice. He sees a silhouetted version of his sister standing atop a building. She tells him that she had recently died and that he shouldn’t come to see her.
“If you come to see me then you shall die along side me.” Leaving him baffled she puts her two fingers on her necklace.
“You’re my only sister!”
“It doesn’t matter!
“You’re my twin.”
“It doesn’t matter!”
“I can’t just stand here knowing I can talk to my sister even in death. That’s something every person would want. To talk to a deceased loved one!”
“Go now! I cannot have you trying to pry into my life now.”
“There has to be a way I can see you and be with you as long as I can!”
“There is a way but it is quite drastic.”
“What is it?”
“You’re going to have to find my corpse, then and only then will I be able to be in close contact with you.”
“That shouldn’t be that difficult you died in Japan-”
“Wrong. I didn’t die in Japan, I only told you that to draw you closer to the real origin of my death. You see I didn’t die in another country much less on another planet. I died in another dimension. You’re going to have to travel to multiple dimensions to find my corpse.”
“How can I do that?”
“The necklace of coarse, it can teleport you to any dimension but in order to find my corpse you will have to summon Zateru. You will find out who she is later. Use the light of the pendant and travel to the dimension of which you believe is the origin.”
“What about you?”
“I will be able to contact you through your dreams that way you can find it easier. One dream could give you all the answers you need. Now go!”
“Serena…”
“Do be careful Joshua…do be careful.”

Now Joshua is left with the predicament trying to figure out how to use the pendant and how to find Serena’s corpse. How will he find her and what will he do if he does?

yeah it's stupid but yeh

omg i was reading the posts and this one stuck out its amazing and it should should be a comedy/romance lol
i would love for this to become a real anime

Hmmh, a good story eh.

Okay- One day there was a teenager walking down a street, and suddenly a mutant comes out of the sky and walks down the street with the teenager. As they walk down nearing the intersection, something catches the newly created duo's eyes, a ninja. This ninja drops his kunai and walks down the street with them. So the teenager, the mutant and the ninja finally reach the intersection they meet a turtle and it's like "WTF?"

=D Did you get the hint that I'm an aspiring author?

Here's the real thing (I did it in 2:00 in the morning after eating a pepto bismol sandwich expect it to be messed) Also this isn't even the type of genre I write in...I don't know why the heck I did this(if it weren't detailed maybe it could make a good horror anime). Oh and btw it's nowhere near done =D probably will never be done...

We are the Lost Cause
'We are the lost cause', remember us? The ones you neither cared for, nor knew even existed. Abandoned, we stood together to support one another, to be there for one another, for in this world; the poor are abandoned because they couldn't be taken care of, while the rich are loved so much they are allowed to go and do whatever they wish without their parents. The poor huh, I am one of them. It would be truly great if this city I attend school in was a communist city seperate from all other cities in North America, but that was asking for the impossible in a capitalist country. But then again communism would still lead to a horrible life for me, take the words of Frank Zappa:
"Communism doesn't work because people like to own stuff." I wanted to own stuff so badly.

Blood gushing out of their bodies, what hath they done to deserve such a fate as to become the providers of a billabong of blood. Their screams unheard, in the dead of night, the hollow night it had been until ataraxia had been achieved with their deaths. He was finally satisfied, he sat down on the sofa in the living room, watching their bodies squirm slightly; spinal reflexes, one would guess.

I could remember only bits and pieces of when I first got enrolled into Spaeler Academy, it was a highly respectable Boarding School that was itself a hierarchy system, the high ranks being those sexy, and smart guys or girls that excelled at everything, the subordinates being the less capable, the less beautiful. This hierarchy system caused great conflict between 'The Beautiful People' and 'The Things' ultimately resulting in the bulding of two seperate school buildings, one for the 'Beau Peau', and one for the 'Things'. However 'The things' did not necessarily consist of 'things' some were actually handsome and beautiful people, who did not excel at all subjects, who were not as popular. This school, donned a Navy shaded uniform of a dress shirt and dress pants for men, and blouses and skirts for women. One could easily suspect this school to be filled with rich, powerful and wealthy snobby kids; this is true by the way but despite that recently (just last term) they have begun enrolling those who are not rich or powerful; for reasons unknown.

'The rich and the poor, there's no longer a difference between the two when they're dead'

I can remember entering classroom B-3, seeing a bunch of kids who seemed normal enough. These kids were a colourful bunch, not by skin colour, but by their personalities. Some had preppy personalities, some had delinquent personalities and some had 'I wanna be as smart as The Beau Peaus' traits in them. I immediately made friends with one kid, who was brought in recently with a scholarship from Japan; Shin Igami, 14. I thought him neither preppy, nor delinquent, and it seemed he had no desire to be a 'Beau Peau'. Maybe I just didn't know him enough; it was my first day attending Spaeler after all. I decided to take the seat behind Shin and beside the window, overlooking the lake that resided only 3 kilometres from the school. The teacher then entered the room, upon his entering a strange smell tingled between my nostrils; a familiar smell. I couldn't quite get my thumb on what it was.

^9.5 looks really cool but you got to give me a story line instead of just a intro (I'm a little of a harsh critic), and who cares about pretty skin!

okay here goes, serial experiments lain style: 1st ep: a man is walking down the street and sees a huddled, bearded man gibbering to himself, the 1st man sighs and says something like "pour, madman" as he finishes a third man brushes by him and responds "you reached a conclusion of madness rather quickly, are you certain?". the 1st man begins arguing with the 3rd about insanity with the 3rd man implying it is actually the first man that is mad while sudden odd outbursts come from the madman interjected. episode ends with the third (educated) man saying that it is really the second man that is mad and the first that is sane however the second and third man are simply submissive split personality's of the madman and they are doomed to watch as the mad man presents themselves to the world.

series unfolds as dynamics between the three main character/(characters???) change and grow. Though all this the viewer/reader tries to dissipher reality from fevered imagination with the madman.

(please rate and give criticism)

I'm not really creating my own story here. But, I kinda wanna change Ouran's ending. >..<

Haruhi has an oppurtunity to study abroad in america to become a lawyer. :]
I imagine this part:

*sakura kiss on piano palys* ^-^ (imagine the music is playing :D)
It stars out as Haruhi is infront of Tamaki and the others and she says she wants to stop being a host. Everybody goes shocked and Tamaki pauses and opens his mouth and says "If that is what you really want, I can't stop you.." Haruhi turns around and heads for the door and then Hunny Senpai grabs her hand and comes up with her in tears in his eyes and asks "Haru Chan, Why are you leaving the host club?" But Haruhi doesn't answer and all she says is "Hunny Snepai, Let go of my hand." Haruhi opens the door and then says "Otsukama Deshita" ( I think) then, she leaves and the door shuts behind her.

Then the twins turn to Tamaki and say "Tono! Are you jsut going to let her laeve like that?!" And Tamaki sees Haruhi outside the window walking with tears in her eyes and replies to the twins with "If its what haruhi wants, I can't stop her." Then Kyouya says "Ma, just to let you guys know, she's no longer going to be here after today." And everybody's eyes goes big. "She's going to America to study to become a lawyer." Then Tamaki looks outside th window again to see Haruhi gone and he gets up off his chair and walks to the window.

Haruhi and her dad are packing up to leave and everythings about set in the car. Its time for them to go and Haruhi give the house one last look and they drive away. Then Its back to the host club and the twins turn to tamaki again, and say "TONO. we won't be able to see haruhi again, and neither will you. If you want to tell her to not go, then tell her! All the happy times, the fun times, the sad times, they all happened in the HOST CLUB!!!!'" And Mori senpai and Hunny senpai nod in agreement. Tamaki smiles and pictures Haruhi's smile in his mind and he jumps up and yells "HARUHI! Otousan wa, urusaina!!" (Daddy won't forgive this)

*sakura kiss on string plays here* >.<

Then the host club runs out the doors and the head towards the Fujioka house. In the car, haruhi's dad worries about the look on her face and questions her if she's ok. Suddenly the car stops because there's a girl standing there, and its Renge Chan. Haruhi is shocked to see her ane Renge runs up to her and tells her "Haruhi- Kun! Why are you laeving, if you do, everybody's going to be sad. What about the HOST CLUB? Aren't they your special people?!" And then it strieks Haruhi and she imagines everybody smiling and calling her name. Then she turns to her dad and yells "Sumane!" and then she runs back to the school.

The dad just tells the driver to keep going. And he tells the driver that Haruhi has a strong heart. It come back to the Host Club, and it shows Tamaki and everyone smiling and running. (a cutesie scene when Hunny senpai gets tired and Mori senpai piggybacks him. :D) The twins yell "HARUHI!" when they reach her house.
Its back to Haruhi, and she reaches the 3rd music room and she pulls the handle, but they don't open. She laughs and reminds herself that school's over and smiles.

Back to the others, they open the door, to find the room empty. And Hunny Senpai mumbles "Haru Chan, isn't here...Does that mean she's gone now.. and not coming back?" Tamaki puts his hand on Hunny's senpai's head, and says "We'll see Haruhi again. She really brought more joy to the Host club...... Ja, let's go home now." The head down the stairs and Tamaki turns back and looks up to the sky and thinks to himself, where are you, Haruhi...?

Kukuku *Sakura kiss on piano plays again* :}

Then Kyouya's on the phone and he smirks a smile at the others. Now its set when school starts again. You see the back of a girls body with her long hair swinging and she heads towards the school. You see guys whispering how pretty she is, and if she is new. The schools offers to give her a tour around the school, but she declines and says she can manage herself. And then you see her head towards the 3rd music room. It then zooms up from the girls body from bottom to top, and you find that it is HARUHI, looking more feminine. (Wooh~) She opens the door and then roses fly and you hear "Irrashimasu~!" And You hear Hunny Senpai's voice saying "HARU CHAN!", and the twins go "HARUHI!". Then Haruhi says "Tamaki Senpai!" and laughs, and you see Tamaki's face slowly smiling and he says "Irraishimasu."


And that part with Kyouya smiling on the phone is when Haruhi's Dad calls him to tell them that Haruhi did not go to America with him and she went back to the school. Kyouya didn't tell the others, cause he thought it would be interesting to see how things would end up like.


WOOOOH. END. :]

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wow i cant believe i wrote a story here, i musta been really bored o_o

=D Same here

u shouldnt have drifted off putting ur own comments in there as the story goes, i started to lose interest lawl, how u described the blood etc was good but i didnt get how that started, was it that ninja doing it? yea i know its just suppose to be a short story but u drift off without explaining urself enough

and u describe the guys too much, who cares about the guys, make that ninja a hot chick

=D fine

It's a good idea, kind of reminds me of what I heard of Claymore, but eh, anime isn't 100% original. Not unoriginal like the kid who based lots of things off Bleach, it's a good idea, I'd say really (I haven't seen a similar anime?.) I'd guess you're planning on the coppers to appear while the guy is while he's at the town, so him running away along with the fighting girls is kind of neat. We could watch the smart ways he escapes, and stuff. And girls fighting like men usually do, yay! I hope the character isn't a scrawny piece of shit, and he beat up this huge muscular dude (who's may be dumb as hell) to save that girl cause, that'd really really be stupid. I'm sorry but this is done in anime I've seen before, and it's quite annoying... Well as you noticed, I'm also judging your anime by things I'm THINKING may happen, so you're thoughts can be different than what I think may happen.

So yeah, it's a good idea, I'm just not going to say it'll be one of the greatest things ever made. And you probably didn't work like 3 months editing and editing this like not in just thought but on the computer or paper and stuff, so you could do a better job. Ey, before I'd put tons and tons and tons of work into a story, I'd have to make sure I got some company that will make it if they like it lol. And rawr... Hokie be critic!! Me come to critic!! rawr... (I really don't know what number score to give, I'll just give my thoughts.. not numbers lol)

I write lot's of stuff...

The latest I finish was about an introverted girl who turns out to be a master thief. She steals stuff just for the kick of it. Her day job is a cafe co-manager as well as a match maker. She has a crush on the clerk in a nearby video rental but is too shy to tell him so she sends him weird letters that look like ransom notes... this way he won't find out who she is while conveying her feelings. The guy thinks otherwise... he assumes her to be some nut stalker.

Later on, the guy figures it all out by investigating. He discovers that the little hand writing on the notes are similar to the penmanship on the menu board of a certain cafe. He asks the managers on duty and finds out who his stalker is.

The girl gets figured out and decides to throw away her timid nature so that she can finally convey her feelings to the guy properly. The guy and the girl get together for the first time... but at the same time the police had figured out who was doing all the major heists in the past few years.

The girl gets discovered as the thief... the guy helps her escape but gets shot in the midst of gunfire. The thief ends up in jail and ends up with a broken heart as well. She blames herself for his death and submits to her fate.

The end... or is it?

7.

At 17, and as heirs to two of the most influential familes in Japan, two students named Sasame and Shuji were forced to marry by their parents.

He was the class-president in their school and she was the muse. He believes in the importance of responsibilities and studies while she believes in the art of being random and absurd.

If anything else, they hated each other at first sight. She thinks he's a cold hearted money whore, while He thinks she's nothing but a brainless doll meant for display. On their wedding night, Sasame met a strange creature who allowed her one wish. She wished for a way to better understand her brand new husband. Unknown to her, the same creature also gave her husband a wish and Shuji, wished for the same thing.

The next day, they woke up in each other's body. Shuji in Sasame's and Sasame's in Shuji. Aside from their marriage, how will they handle school? Their family and their friends?

Especially since they agreed to keep their marriage a secret to everyone. Will their enemies find out? Will Sasame's best friend who's in luve with Shuji ruin everything? or will they finally realize that the only way for them to return to normal is when they finally realize that understanding comes in the form of love.

I actually have no idea what the hell i'm writing. Someone whould suggest to add this Topic in the Onigiri issues. I mean, people making up and passing their own anime (format) stories.

9(awesum)

ummm.....let's see...this is one of them...

As a young girl, Amayo was orphaned & has always wished for something to happen. One day, a mysterious woman named Setsko tells Amayo that she is the descendent of one of the chosen ones. Amayo is perplexed by this, & as Setsko continues, Amayo decides to join Setsko.
Setsko then tells her about the link of dimensions, & then, for demonstration & as a test of Amayo's powers, teleports Amayo to Void, a dimension used as a prison or the safekeeping of important ppl. There, Amayo meets two dragon brothers: Akira(half human, half dragon), a cold distant person, & Kanoe(full dragon), the total opposite of Akira.
Akira & Kanoe are important to Setsko's goal, which is something about the key to the survival of the dimensions' balance. Amayo helps, & along the way, discovers more about her past, her so-called "missing" sister, her powers of purifacation, & also finds the other descendents.
Just the thing is, Akira's stone, the Ice Blood Crystal is the key to this, but now the shards are in various dimensions, a result becuz Setsko refused to give it to the enemy, & broke it.
But when Amayo finally comes face to face with the enemy, it's discovered to be the alter ego of Akira, Akito. Akito, want's to do sumthing, sumthing bad, & with the help of the bodily forms of the other alter egos, Akito get's closer to his goal. It's up to Amayo & the other descendants & Akira & Kanoe to stop Akito.