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i took your advice and heres what i've got.

A hand rested on my shoulder but I didn’t turn to see who it belonged to.
“I’m very sorry for your loss. We have an escort waiting for you outside.” The sound of the doctor’s voice faded into the background. What was he asking me to do? Leave my father and return home to what, an empty home? His hand gently began to pull me away from the bed. I clung to my father’s body planning to stay there forever. The tears came heavier and the pain came like a thousand daggers in my heart.
“Can we have a few minutes alone?” a soft voice asked. The hand left my shoulder and footsteps lead to a silent room. Another hand rested on my head.
“MeMe…I’m sorry. We’re here for you and if you ever need any thing we’ll be there.” Ayame’s voice soothed my broken spirit. Quickly I turned around and grabbed her in a hug. She hugged me back and for once today I felt a little better. Not good enough to make the tears stop or the pain go away, but good enough to think that maybe it was possible to carry on without him.
“Kana’s waiting outside. She wanted to come in but she gets squeamish in hospitals. Let us walk you home.” Slowly I pulled away and nodded once. She helped me to my feet and walked to the door. I took one more look at my father’s scarred body then dragged myself to meet her. My tears clouded my vision and Aya’s arm went around my waist to support me. We walked out of the hospital into the pouring rain. Kana sat on a bench soaked to the bone staring blankly into space. I remembered the times my father and I would sit in the park beneath the cherry blossom trees, and the times we ran through the rain jumping from puddle to puddle. Kana walked over and stood at my other side.
“Let’s get you home.” She said. We walked down the road past shops, homes, parks, and schools. Though my head was down the whole time everything we passed sent a precious memory of him running through my mind. Each one like a movie that I never wanted to end, but each one did and my heart hurt a little more every time the credits rolled. Before I knew it I was home, lying alone in my bed. Kana and Aya left so I was alone again. I locked the door, crawled into bed and cried myself to sleep.
Monday morning-

(Beepbeepbeep) I opened my eyes, awakened by my alarm. A picture of my mom and dad sat by my bed.
“Morning guys.” I greeted as I slugged out of bed. Taking my time I dressed then sat down for a small breakfast. ‘What will the other kids think of me being an orphan?’ I wondered picking at my food. I couldn’t eat so I threw out the food then headed on my way to school. Today was a sunny day and it seemed like the beautiful pink petals of the trees glowed. The suns rays warmed my face as if my parents were smiling down on me, wishing me luck on my day at school. Today was the day we got our test scores and I couldn’t wait. I walked up the brick pathway and entered the doors. As I walked down the hallway I could hear the whispered remarks around me. ’look it’s the orphan girl’, ‘She all alone now. All she has are those two freak friends of hers’. All the rumors and laughs chipped away at what was left of my heart. I pretended I couldn’t hear them, keeping my head down to hide the tears. I walked up to the bulletin board to check my scores. I could feel all their eyes on my back, staring…taunting. I heard one boy whisper to his friend,” She’s kinda cute. She may be alone but I could take care of her.” They chuckled. His friend replied,” Go over there and work your magic then.” Suddenly a fist slammed against the wall above my head. Startled I looked to my right only to see the boy from the wall. He leaned over me in a protective position glaring at the two boys who had been laughing at me. The way he stared at them was like he was going to kill them if they took one step toward me. Finally I could get a better look at his face. His hair was silver and his eyes where blue like I had remembered. The only difference was the look in his eyes. No longer were they cold like ice but calm and gentle like a deep lake. His silver hair glistened like the full moon in a dark dreary sky. All together his features were a masterpiece against a porcelain canvas. A tear rolled down my cheek then fell off my chin. The two boys saw his face and ran down the hall like they’d seen a ghost.
He turned his head and faced me with a smile so beautiful my heart skipped a beat. I stared at him in amazement and my cheeks began to get hot. He lifted his finger and wiped a tear from my eye. Quickly, I turned away hiding rosy cheeks behind my hair.
“Th-thank you for helping me.” I whispered still avoiding eye contact.
“It was no problem, I’m always glad to help. I myself am alone, so I won’t stand for you being teased for something that is out of your control.” He laughed a small laugh that reminded me of my dad’s. I looked at him and smiled. “I’m sorry, I haven’t properly introduced myself. I’m Kagome Shudo, nice to meet you.” He bowed then said, ”The pleasure is all mine Miss.Shudo. My name is Hari Minagawa.” He raised then said, ”Please feel free to ask me for help whenever people are bothering you.” I smiled and nodded. “So are you new here, I don’t think I’ve seen you before.” We began to walk down the hallway. “Yes, I just moved here from…far away. After my parents died I became a nomad, so I’ve been traveling a lot.” A flicker of sadness flashed across his face, why? “You must have seen a lot then, with all your traveling I mean. I’ve never left the state let alone the country. Must be nice.” He smiled at me and we walked to class together. Even though people were still staring at us I couldn’t help but feel…good with Hari around. Suddenly it was a lot easier to smile and the hole in my heart stopped aching for once. I felt warm inside and it lasted all day. It felt good to know that I wasn’t alone anymore, that I had someone to talk to that could relate. I was happy again. That night I went home happy, but the feeling didn’t last. Being alone in an empty house brought the pain and sadness. So I had another night of tears.
The next morning I awoke and continued with my morning routine. I slipped on my shoes and grabbed my bag. I walked out the door and was greeted by the sun shining bright. I turned to lock the door and when I turned back I was shocked to see Hari waiting at the front fence. He was staring into the sky watching the clouds pass. A slight breeze made his silver hair flow like the wind that blew it. He smiled at me and I couldn’t help but smile back. I walked to meet him and said, ”Good morning Hari. What brings you here?” He extended his arm and I took it. We started down the street and he said, “I figured I should walk you to school incase someone else decided to mess with you.” My face fell a little. I had hoped it was for a better reason than that. “Well…” he added, “I also like talking to you. You’re nice and I’d like to learn more about you.” I smiled at him. “Thank you. I’d like to learn more about you too.” That’s what I call a perfect morning. He walked me to all of my classes, carried my books and opened every door for me. He’s an absolute gentlemen mom. I think you and dad would like him….just like I do. He’s even invited me to dinner tomorrow night. Don’t worry it’s not at his house, it’s at a fancy restaurant. I can’t wait…well good night.

So what do you think? (i know it's alot to take in)


Good read. Just a few points to mention: (maybe one or two...)

Hmm.... i just would like to say that don't rush the relationship factor yet. It would be interesting if the boy hasn't quite noticed yet.

Two, story was good with descriptions. Keep up the good work!
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i planned write story about A Japanese girl and Filipino Driver
Hikari Ashira is normal girl whose boyfriend Shigeru turn be Yazuka Member
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The Charcters
Hiakri Ashira
Gian Natera
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Spring at School Hikari running to Shigeru. '''Shi-chan'' ! Hikari called his nickname Shi Me Ashira Hikari age 17 my brithdate July 21 (share future granddaughter) my hobbies were basketball and singing my boyfriend was Shi-chan. Hikari and Shigeru daiting for 2 years

Part 1
It was Spring at high school the cherry blossom blooms into wind the girl called his name Shigeru towards into him Shigeru!!! Hikari shouted at him
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These are some anime story ideas. tell me if i should make them full stories and if so can you give suggestions like this:

Story/#: blah blah blah

Character name/ story title idea: blah blah blah

anything i should add (Cloths, backgrounds(Time and setting) and extra people): blah blah blah

#1-no title yet
-Evil Mage Principal
-2,000 word essays and book report due everyday
-Five male mages ask for girls help when they come to earth
-girl becomes mage
-group of “bad mages”
-good mages and girl are in disguise in the school
-Girl finally can’t take it anymore and hits principal, realizes what she did and ran while the 5 mages try to stop
-Main mage dude can turn into 7 year old (whose name is Bougle) and is really 15 and real name is Bod

#2-no title yet
- Girl has family bike
- Does magic but when she doesn’t use wand it takes a year away from her life
- Girl thinks she can ran away for village diese
- Dieses= legs can’t move, starts at once to twice a month( happens from minutes to all day), then to every week, then every 3 months for whole month, then till you can’t move legs anymore
- Girls name is Juli, she is a orphan lives with stepmom, stepdad (A.K.A her aunt and uncle)
- People with active legs in her village get it, people near people with it get it(But if you get it from someone else you can’t past it to other people, including if you have kids) 1 in 10 people get it
- Her outfit=long socks, normal shoes (my skull shoes), shorts, shirt west, floating small magician hat, magic wand
- Boy=Rino, long red hair tied back, works for agency, climbs stuff (trees, rocks, buildings) Very well
- Girl after big battle gets high fever and loses 10 years of her life and then Rino (when he has to watch her to make sure she doesn’t get worse at night) she wakes up, they talk and he tells her he loves her then they become BF and GF

#3-Hospitalized!
-normal girl has her heart start hurting, it happens for 2 months and gets worse before she tells her mom and they go to the doctor. She has Heart cancer. She tells her friends, at first they don’t believe she then she starts to cry and they believe her. She can’t do P.E. anymore (Her Fav. Subject) then loses hair but gets wig she her friends don’t know she’s bald. She has a 50% of being cured if she gets a heart surgery but it cost $75,000 and her family can’t pay so she takes a pill with Min. water every time before and after eats. She meets and guy at hospital with broken leg (he is 15) and they fall in love and do “it” so she can have a family and more reasons to fight the cancer. In the end she lives then dies and 34


#4-Secert Sweets
-Girl goes to new candy shop and buys the last “Secret Sweets” Candy and when she ate the first one she transforms into hero and fights evil then before big battle she runs out then goes back to shop but its not their any more so she goes 3 towns over to where it is and on the way the evil follows her and she helps people with her own power then she reaches store tells the owner what happened but the owner had the same thing happen to and the owner before her etc. she the owner helps her fight the evil the then shop goes back to the girls town and the girl helps out at the shop and in the end she becomes owner and helps the next girl etc.

#5-Hautned Love
-Girl’s (awesome at drawing) Friends get powers (see future, talks to plants/animals, time travel) and after going to spa with her. Girl gets power to see, talk to and touch ghost, meets ghost at friends house and first she doesn’t know if he was a good ghost or a bad ghost but because of scary murder face he makes she thinks he is bad. Then she gets and chance to talk to him because she hears door open then she hears her name called she goes to the other room. He is Boris D. (Blood D. + Cat ears) and he kisses her and they fall in love. She can make other people see ghost by holding ghost hand but if she lets go they can’t see the ghost anymore till she holds its hand again. Boris has dog, Axel and B.D. he, is twenty-three. Their love will only work if they find his body (Because he has no memory of his life) or any other body and goes into that body or she has to die.
#6-Mini story “No title yet”

-girl gets bear from mom (from when she was a kid) Then when ever girl whispers “I love you” and blows into bears ears it turns into hot guy.
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Well i had something in my head i just want to lrt go so here!!!


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That's a story in my head somewhere between 3 months into the story.
Glad that's off my chest.













i love this story! you should make more! X3
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in the darkness at the start of time and space the nothing the black nothing evolved into one partical called the GOD partical no one exactly knows why or how but the partical began a stage of evolution no one now beleived possible but it did it formed a vass fantasy or dream and its dream became reality the reality we no as the universe the GOD partical mede use of its knowledge of the nothing evolution and evolved all around it into the univers but its mind grew too large and it implode and started the big bang the particals remains scattered across its universe when a peice landed on a planet it fertelized it because of the reality of the circle of life earth was created in that process and man came to be... in the year 200,000,000,056 since the begining of the universe or on earth the year 2156 we try to study and understand the evolutin of nothing but fail the religess rebel against us and fight us for trying to undo their beleifes in the year 2136 exactly 20 years ago a war called the last rebelion began and it hasnt ended since i am zeke essencen and i wonder if we discover the truth will it destroy us should i leave it be or will it bring hoe to a natrual resorce of energy and bring hope to us. this is the study of geo fusion!

the truth will set you free. is their a twist to that?

well what do ya think guys is it plausable???
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heres another idea i had bak when i was bullied and only had my imagination as comfort

btw sorry for the fullmetal alchamest aquivilency thing hehe

the saying life is like a box of choclates is a lie because with the right knowledge youll know exactly what will happen when you wake or go to work or.. when you die... knowledge has its uses and it is a weapon at times but aquivilincy is a factor no one can escape you cannot change when you die and if you know then theirs really no point in the knowledge you have as i said you cant change when you die but... you can change how!

the orb of all knowledge is a library in the sky an archive of every tiny detail of life and existance itself of both past and future with that kind of knowledge we have a perfect society criminals dont emerge or actualy ever come to be because of the orb people live in fear that their acts will be recorded or are already their and will be caught no matter flawless their plan, thogh the everyday thought of stealing or greed comes to mind but washed away by the truth of knowledge. it is an unescapeable truth and reality people have commited suicide, homocide and family maseceres because of it we let them because we the law enforcement will now destroy the orb and rid us of the "perfect" society we have become and that is how we will change the way we die.

characters: main: zatch mayolade sidekick: thomas brewer misc: evan heartworthy, melony heartworthy, the orb, the archive, the being,
blake noringtone, chief, leutenant comodore wright, mr., mother rose.
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"sir"

"yes brig gnrl zatch"

"ahhh brigadere general .....zzzzzz"
"huh ahh i slept in crap, crap, craaappp!!!"
"im on patrol in what!!! 1 hour ago im so dead!"

hi i'm zatch mayolade im in the law enforcement im
lt colonel yes i know these are military ranking but last year "2098"
the military and the police squads combined into a superforce
called the law inforcement horde. yeah pretty weird name anyway today
i hope to be pomoted on my patrol.... despite the "perfect" society thing sigh

"cheif sir! lt. colonel. zatch mayolade reporting for duty sir"

"oh zatch you no by now not to adress me as cheif but as chief davies"
he said it all in an agitaded voice oh no im really dead

"y-y-yyy-yes s-s-ssirr i mean chief d-d-davies s-sir!"

"now lt. get oooon PATROLLLLL!!!!!!!"
geez you could here it echo all over the city.
"uh lt. your also forgetting today is the day you pick out your cy-kick"
yeah funny name for a side kick cy kick means cyborg side kick robotically enhansed
animal companions.
"seeing as you were late you get thomas brewer"
hmm such a human like name i wonder what type of animal it is...

"huuuuuuuuh!!! a-a komodo dragon but their realy slow!"

"dont fret lt. maybe thats why he didnt get picked but because of his cyborg parts-
he is adiquately fast well fast enogh to outrun a bullet train from the start of the 21st cen-
tury also he is intelligent and can speak ever language possible even computer language...
uh speaking of which umm youll have to figure out computer language because his setting dial is jammed
if we moved it too roughly he might die..."

"soooo dizy.... i hate karma.. uhhh for me it comes bak 10 fold!"

"1,0,3,5,109,56,HA,OVERIDE9."=" no your karma comes bak at you at aproximately 309% more than it's original capacity"

PLUNK

"lt.comodore get this man to the infirmary... zatch next time try not to throw up on my uniform..."



so far i think i've done well but thats about 1 chapter in chapter ... 4 contains the orders for the attack on the orb after
the heartworthy family homocide... zatchs close friends they also leave a video message of why they did it holding secrets about the orb.



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Well there is this Girl Named Sophia (me) who turns into a awsome Super hero named Sola! She has a giant hammer as a weapon and her pesonality is that she is very tall (6'0) kinda a crybaby, doen't like to fight, ditzy, has guy problems, doesnt like skool, hot headed, oh and hates skirts. her friends Kelsi, Brooke, and Nicole are always at her side. Kelsi turns into Luma Star, shes a kitty who can be very calm but very wild who likes to be sneekey. Nicole is Luna Moon who is a wolf, she is very cool and calm but if you make her mad she will attack. Brooke is Shebalee X she is very shy and girl but is very nice. Brooke and Nicole are twins in real life but when they trans form Luma(Kelsi) and Luna(Nicole) are twins. Tewe nova Sola's Gaurdian angel but doesnt look like an angel but always tell the brutal true. Alos is Sola's dream guy who saves her when she is in trouble. and Zen he is the make fun of you type of guy, he always teases Sophia about her height even though he is still taller than her.

All these ppl (except Alos) Go to S.A.M High (Secret Assotiation of Magic) where they learn how to control there poweres but these 4 are in the Special Elements Class. Where Sola has the power of fire, Luma the power of air, Luna the power of water and Shebalee the power of earth. see these the 4 go through a life of weirdness
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Well there is this Girl Named Sophia (me) who turns into a awsome Super hero named Sola! She has a giant hammer as a weapon and her pesonality is that she is very tall (6'0) kinda a crybaby, doen't like to fight, ditzy, has guy problems, doesnt like skool, hot headed, oh and hates skirts. her friends Kelsi, Brooke, and Nicole are always at her side. Kelsi turns into Luma Star, shes a kitty who can be very calm but very wild who likes to be sneekey. Nicole is Luna Moon who is a wolf, she is very cool and calm but if you make her mad she will attack. Brooke is Shebalee X she is very shy and girl but is very nice. Brooke and Nicole are twins in real life but when they trans form Luma(Kelsi) and Luna(Nicole) are twins. Tewe nova Sola's Gaurdian angel but doesnt look like an angel but always tell the brutal true. Alos is Sola's dream guy who saves her when she is in trouble. and Zen he is the make fun of you type of guy, he always teases Sophia about her height even though he is still taller than her.

All these ppl (except Alos) Go to S.A.M High (Secret Assotiation of Magic) where they learn how to control there poweres but these 4 are in the Special Elements Class. Where Sola has the power of fire, Luma the power of air, Luna the power of water and Shebalee the power of earth. see these the 4 go through a life of weirdness
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I'll let you know when I have one after I come out my mental screening room
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Once there was a boy who was rejected by the whole world for having supernatural powers. Although people hate him, he always tries to help. But whenever he helps, he's still rejected and called a 'monster'. One day, he saves an old woman from being crashed by a car. His body slowly disappears and then suddenly becomes encased in magic. In a few minutes, he is given a new body to live in. His life continues this way, when one day he meets a pretty person and falls in love. But too bad, that person didn't love him, and so he had to spend the rest of his life saving lives and reincarnating.

Pretty pathetic huh?
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I got a story of my own, I didn't finsh the story yet and I don't know if it's good or not.
BAKEYOUSHI

Semester 1: Geography, Math, Computers, History
Semester 2: Art, English, Gym, Science
Characters:
Hue Tomachi-14 years old student, hyper, quiet, short hair, artist, hidden powerful, chikara(power), glasses
Natsuko (summer) Satoru- 14 years old, fire chikara, quiet, hyper, short hair
Fuyuko (winter) Satoru- 14 years old, water chikara, quiet, hyper, long hair
Kazuki Hiruko – an old friend of Hue, artist, perverted

Episode 1
During the Grade 9’s Barbeque Day, Hue have come to Hakasen Academy to pick up his timetable. He decided to go to the washroom before going home. When he was out of the washroom, he sensed someone behind me and he turned around. There are 2 people, they’re twins and they’re the same size as him. They asked him in a small quiet voice, he can barely hear them.
“ummm excuse me can you show us where the barbeque?”
He nodded “yeah I know where it is.” He point at the door. “It’s beyond that door”
“Oh thank you” they were about to entered the door. “what your name?”
“Me? I’m Hue Tomaki”
“Natsuko Satoru nice to meet you”
“I’m Fuyuko Satoru”
“Well have fun”
“You are not going?”
“Nope I’m going home”
Hue walked away.
“He’s the one”
“Yeah I know he’s ……” “He’s cute”
“That not what I meant Fuyuko.” “I meant I sense a powerful chikara within him”
“Oh yeah, yes I did sensed his chikara.”
“Well let’s go to the barbeque”
“Fine” they went outside.
Hue is in the bus, thinking
“Do I have met those two?” “Weird”
The bus suddenly stopped.
“What’s going on?” “Broken tired?”
A huge monster pops right in front of the bus. It was sniffing.
“I smelled it” “It’s here”
“What here?”
It broke the roof of the bus. It was staring at Hue.
“I found you”
“Who me”
“Hold still” It was about to grab him till its arm got sliced.
The monster turned. “Who are you?”
“We’re bakeryoushi”.

Episode 2
“A bakeryoushi”
“Yep we’re a bakeryoushi and we are here to slain you.”
“Damn you bakeryoushi”
It fire a fireball, they dodge it. Natsuko sliced him in half. It begins to dissolve.
“You should let me finish it Natsuko”
“Oh well, come on Fuyuko”
“Hey who are you?”
“We are bakeyoushi, we’re here to protect you”
“Protect… me?” “Why?”
“Because Bakemono will hunt you down ok.”
“Hunt me why?”
“They can sensed your chikara”
“Chikara?”
“Chikara is a mahou power which can be any type of element fire, water, wood, thunder, darkness, wind and light”
“Ok”
“Now will you accept us?”
“…. Yeah sure”
“Awesome” Fuyuko hug him.
“What the…”
“Well see you later.” “Come on Fuyuko.”
“See ya.”
He went home and went to sleep. The next day Hue started school. He looked at my timetable and it say room 114, Geography. He went into his class and saw his childhood friend Kazuki Hiruko. They were happy until the bell ranged. They got to their seat and had to wait for their teacher.
“Hooray you’re in my class, this is awesomeness”
“This gonna be the best year ever.”
“Yeah I know right, check it out Hue.”
“Huh”
“Those twins are the cutest girl in this class ever.”
They walk up to them.
“This is our seat boy.” “Move it.”
“What we don’t have an assigned seat.”
“I said move it.” She throws him at the chalkboard.
“Hello Hue”
“Hello?” Fukuyo hug him which remind him something.
“You girls are… a….” Natsuko’s hand covers his mouth.
“Quiet Hue.”
Our Geography teacher, Mr. Fukuyama came to our classroom.
“Sorry I’m late, I have been overslept and now get back to your seat.” “We will now begin our Geography lesson”. He turned and looked at the board, he’s started to get angry. “Who the hell did this” “alright class you will all write a 100 essay.”
“WHATTTT!!!!!!”

Episode 3
The bell ranged and it’s time for lunch. Hue got up with a sighed and headed to the roof.
“Wait Hue, wait for me”
“Me too wait for me”
Hue, Fuyuko and Natsuko all got to the roof.
“So you brought your lunch with you?”
“Yes we have our lunch but…. You don’t have your lunch”
“Oh that, I not that hungry” “I’m just here to chill” “So are you the ones I have met yesterday.”
“Yes we are”
“So I have a powerful chikara with in me.” “What element do I have?”
“You have all 8 elements.”
“What?” “Really wow!”
“Yes but to bad.”
“What?”
“Your chikara is hidden within you and you need to unlock them.”
“How can I unlock my hidden power?”
“Well…” blushed.
A giant bakemono emerged, it was staring at him.
“Ahhh, I found you boy.” It coming to Hue.
“I’ll hold it up” “Go Natsuko, perform Soshikai.”
“Whatt?” blushing.
“What’s Soshikai.”
“Welll um um, we had to perform our element dance”
“How do we do it?”
“I will enchant and we will kiss.”
“What?” blushed “That what we have to….”
“Watch out” Natsuko pushed him out of the way.
“Uhhh ow” he opened his eyes. “Huh”
“Are you okay?” Hue nodded. “Come on let us perform Soshikai”
“Akuseputo Kono Seppun” She begin the enchantment.
They kissed.
“Mahou Kengen Anrokku” Natsuko finish the enchantment.
“What this?” “I feel power up as if I’m on steroids.” “Alright I’m pumped, let’s go”
“So how do I get a weapon?”
“You just imagine what kind of weapon do you want” “Then it’ll appeared but choose carefully you will get stuck with the weapon for the rest of your life.”
“Damn choose one okay” “I know” raised his hand “a shield looking sword with a chain on it.”
“Alright that is cool.”
“Are you gonna name it”
“NO!” “why would I name a sword.” “Alright let’s go.”
He came charging at him.
“Take this” “Phoenix Inferno”
A fiery bird went straight the bakemono.

I'm still thinking and I want your opinion.
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Posted 3/20/10
there was a girl name amu <<<,<, and she had charas name ran miki su and dia and they were her true self ran is sporty miki is artistic and su is a great cook dia is her always no yellling smiling chara once she lost them and tryed to find them with her help smexy kitty ikuto and then win amu looked in this dark and scarey house she heard screaming it sounded like su so she open the door and ..................there was a ded girl screaming saying i want to be human and the ded girl look at amu very scarey and amu ran and found her charas in a tree the end
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