I'm new here, but I'll just say my story that I am making by myself.
Sekai no Yuu'utsu
Chikao *25 yrs old*: This world, Earth, is the source of all life. Without this world, everyone would die. Or so they say. We've heard stories about gods making this world. But is that really true? This year, we were supposedly going to die *The setting's in 2012*. But guess what? We're still alive in this world. Haven't you ever asked yourself, did a god really make this world? The Universe? Not exactly. But the world we live in, Earth, isn't normal. It isn't a planet. Earth is an actual monster. It wasn't created for humans. It was for the animals. But humans of another world came from a world called Aria. That's where humans originally came from. Earth only had animals and monster that fought everyday. Until a demon and 'goddess' took one step to change this whole world. Demons and 'Gods' started to turn monsters into humans... It became so well, that everybody wanted to leave these humans alone. Figure out life themselves. And so that happened. But it became the opposite years later. That is the story that showed earthlings what the world was really made of. Hanazono Hikari her companions, Hakarata Saburo, and myself, will show you what happened 10 years ago...
Hikari: *sigh...* So freaking bored... (Hello everybody. My name is Hikari Hanazono. I am 14 yrs old. Tomorrow is my birthday. *It's actually today just that she forgot to go to school XD* I am a non-regular girl like Suzumiya Haruhi, but different. *she watches anime* I have to gp to practice.) Ittekimasu (I'm leaving the house!)!
Nanako: Where's your school uniform?
Hikari: What do you mean, Nanako? Today's not monday.
Shoko: Nanako... What're you talking about? Today's sunday.
Nanako: *just remembered something* Oh yeah! Silly me. I thought it was!
Michio: Hey big sis.
Hikari: Where's Hokuto?
Michio: He again went to teach at school.
Hikari: Today's not mon-
???: Stupid!! She's gonna notice you like that!
Hikari: What the-?!
*both suspicious people fall down the roof [The house is 3 stories but they still land safely.]*
Hikari: *sigh...* Hiko Chikao and Hakarata Saburo!!!
Chikao and Saburo: Shit!
Hikari: What the?!
Chikao: That sounded like it came from the school!
Saburo: Let's go!
???: Decendents of the greats.... heed my call...
All three: What the?! *All get trapped in a huge barrier*
----------------------------------------------------------The End???? >_>----------------------------------------
It's just a rough draft. ^^ So I know it sucks.
meh give ya a 10 !!!!!!!!
now me turn yayz ^^
Mirina was tired her head was pounding all she could think was, first day on my own my first knife fight. Grent looked at her tapping his foot and shaking his head. "Miri snap out of it!" Mirina's head came up her knife had abit of blood on it from the wound she had gotten. "s-Sorry Grent!" ,she yelled and took her position. Grent charged again. Mirina triped him the on lookers the rest of the group claped. It was a small group of wanders they stayed near by eachother. Lyanne a small dark haired girl poped up and started rooting for Grent while Koryna tried to root for Mirina. Mirina got a cut on her arm she winced and fought back barely missing Grent's face. "Not bad!",Kane said his arms were crossed his face the dragon tatto seemed life like black dim red eyes shining. Mirina turned around punching Grent in the back knocking him down she jumped up with joy. Grent was annoyed he sighed and admitted defeat. Monreal sat near by watching as his brother talked with Mirina his brother was Kane. Kane congradulated the winner of the fight. This was home and this was life for most fo them surpression close by how would they take the risks no one knows.
rating my own as a 5
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Everyone knows that there is no such thing as Monsters right? The only scary thing about them is that they're ugly-faced and roar loudly and spit in your face with their two Claws or whatever. The only Monster in anyone's life is themselves, whether it be self-consciousness or something really powerful holding them back from a goal or dream they want to pursue. Remember the first day of High-school? Shocker eh? The amount of pressure fitting in. Questions buzzing in your mind and all you want to say is "SHUT THE FUCK UP BRAIN!"- well that was my reaction.
The name's Melody, remember it and don't wear it out.
This is all irrelevant to the current story that is about to unfold, but somehow it all ties in.
8 Young-adults in 8 different locations just finished High-school, ready to face the world.
Romance, Drama, Action and a Sense of humor- you name it!
These girls were put on Earth for a reason... to tell the world what a girl wants.
Featuring Kpop stars ;]
Who likes poptarts? reow.
IF YOU WANNA READ MORE... PM THIS MESSAGE: "Hit Me Up Wif Mo' J.."
Adieu ma che'rie-good-bye my dear. Karen closed her eyes as tears crept from beneath them. She had given her last respects to her friend Angela Louise Mayfield-Grant and her husband Loren Miles Grant.
How could a love like theirs had been so wrong when it was so right? Could she herself have saved it if only she had spoken up?
It all began September 7, 2009 the first day of school in Chicago at John One Prep H.S. Angela and Karen were returning seniors and longtime friends from kindergarten. It was Karen’s first day back from vacation where she had been visiting her newly engaged father at his home in Arizona. In her mind the engagement was just another failed attempt to make her mother jealous and woo her back. The “other woman” was merely another trick up his sleeve.
It was a cool breezy and sunny pre-autumn day. The leaves had a crisp and beautiful golden-red color that rivaled peaches in full bloom during the summertime. Every once in a while squirrels would dash across the litter free perfectly manicured lawns chasing one another or carrying fresh found foods of nuts, seeds and bugs. Parents rushed their teary-eyed pre-kindergarten toddlers off to the local neighborhood nursery as they made a mad dash to beat the morning rush hour traffic.
The scenery was poetic- and had Karen knew what she would soon to experience later that fall; she would have described the scenery as being poetic justice. Karen wore a smart looking lavender georgette blouse that was overrun with a sea of ruffles that bespoke of a nostalgic time in history. But Karen was thin with long legs and it gave her an air of class over her stylish black designer “skinny” jeans with those lavender stilettos that made her feet look like a size two. She stood on the corner of West 67th and Shore Drive; the ritzy Hyde Park neighborhood on the south side of Chicago. Just down the street from her was the infamous University of Chicago that helped give the neighborhood flair of prestige and history. The Metra trains’ bells rung loudly as they toiled the masses of people to and from work and school. She looked at her watch and impatiently tapped her foot as she watched their favorite eatery quickly fill up with college students as they stumbled out of bed and rushed to grab a bite to eat before class.
Just as she was sure she would scream, she spotted Angela in a white silk blouse sporting a new pair of her favorite Levi skinny jeans and black Nike’s. Her eyes lit up.
“Karen!” they greeted each other like they hadn’t seen each other for ages as they ran towards each other and embraced and complimenting each other’s clothes and new hair-do.
“OMG! Look at your tan.” Angela marveled. “It’s perfect... Arizona must be beautiful.”
“And the boys aren’t so bad either.” Karen quibbled as they walked into the now crowded eatery “Bread Barn” where they sold fresh baked goods and the best iced cappuccino. As they stood in line they chatted excitedly about their summers and Karen pulled out a small photo book as she narrated the scenery of each picture.
“Oooh, not bad… How could you leave this piece of paradise?”
“Not easy,” Karen responded with the quick wit. Angela had always admired her ability to have quick witty comebacks for all occasions. As a matter of fact that was how this wonderful friendship had begun. Two five-year olds waiting at the corner for the school bus on a rainy day, when a car drives by and promptly makes mud pies out of their perfectly picked out little outfits for school.
Angela was about to throw her temper, when before she knew it this pint-sized cherub hollered out in a loud but pleasant and sweet voice, “Hey, next time aim for the face…”
It was so unexpected that Angela quickly forgot her anger and they laughed together at how ridiculous they looked all splattered in mud; and they have been laughing every since.
Karen ordered a cream scone with her favorite white hot chocolate drink and Angela had a pumpkin muffin with an iced latte.
“We’ve gotta do a sleepover so I can show you all the hotties I captured on film…”
“I’m sure Mom won’t mind tonight… “Holy shit! Who is this babe and is he married?”
Hearing and seeing Angela’s reaction Karen coughed as she almost choked on her drink. Then she guiltily giggled as she leaned over and a mischievous smile broke through her perfectly rounded and pouty lips.
“Are you kidding me? Too many hotties and ooh so-so little time…” She said in her best ever impression of Anna Nicole Smith as she took a closer look at the picture that had caused her friend’s strong reaction. Her expression became if it’s possible even more “girly” as she said, “Aah Joe…” and a strange little smirk crept over her lips.
“Joe?” Angela asked with a raised eyebrow. She didn’t miss the breathless sound Karen had made as his name parted from her lips. It was like a sweet memory had suddenly taken over her thoughts and she was no longer here walking besides Angela enjoying a scone with a cup of white hot chocolate. It was like her spirit had momentarily left her body and went back in time to steal that moment in time.
“Joe,” she repeated again as if just saying his name could take her back to that moment any time she wished… “Now I know why first kisses are memorable…’
”SHUT UP!!!!” BLINK-BLINK-BLINK… “NO WAAAY!!!” Okay yes time did stop. And everything and everybody surrounding them suddenly stopped and then were swooped up and off the planet and it was just them- Karen and Angela two friends sharing one of their life's major moment events.
“First kiss?” Angela managed to ask.
woAH~ so interesting all of u!!
somehOW u already knOW the storY but so haRD to write here, hahAHA . . .
WannA tRY toO~
there was a girl is named sayuka, life is pretty easy for her, has strong family ties.
growth with free-spirit, never found anyday without knitting a beautiful smile on her face. one day she found a letter from the university she wanted to enter. . .
Continuously her act is so strange, like she changed to others character...she never view others eyes, and never give any feedback. then she began to acts as if there Were many people around him .
family economic situation even Worse off. . .beloved mom has passed away, her father left her in her other family house.
But the nostalgia of the happiness past life was so temped, she thought '' than continue fuzzy college life, and just be treated as a maid in my family house . . .'' after calling her first boyfriend and the only one. The next day she was found sleeping peacely under the railroad tracks.
well that is an amateur story, ~
pleas post the critic.
c u all~
An underdog named Rahul but with good heart and with good knowledge except horrible in studies .kind of an explorer kid with a dog, his best friend.
Gets power when finds a magical piece of metal...mecha type anime..powered by his internal strength....fights evil..gets stronger with each fight..the type of anime i like.......
~ Chapter 3~ "To A New Adventure.”
Yumi, “Itsuki! We just came back from Creatoria!”
Hido, “Junko be quiet…almost broke my eardrum.”
Junko runs to Itsuki office
Itsuki, “Welcome back. Haha.”
Hido, “Why did you call us for?”
Itsuki, “A preparation for your adventure.”
Itsuki, “I’ll give all 3 of you kinda like power-ups.”
Junko, “YOSH! NOW I CAN CAUSE MORE DESTRUCTION!”
Yumi, “Thank you master”
Itsuki, “All threee of you will get these pets.”
Junko, “Mine better be kickass”
*A cat came in through the door*
Itsuki, “That’s your pet, a fire cat, it utilizes in power and close combat”
Junko, “YOSH! THANKS MASTER!”
Itsuki, “And you Yumi, you get a…*Itsuki hold a raccoon wind-type pet*
Yumi, “Isssss that mine?”
Yumi, “Thank you master! I’m very grateful! hugs Itsuki
Itsuki, “It’s common for aprent to care for their child.”
Hido, “Yes, master.”
everyone hears a big noise and a gengar-like monster comes down. It looks like gegar but is black and its mouth and eyes are fully white and look like a real-life painting demon thing
Itsuki, “This is Nakaro, the dark demon. I used him in battle when I was your age and he’s a great help.”
Nakaro, “What’s Up?”
Junko, “What Up.” *as the fire cat is on his face licking him.”
Junko, “Liki, stop. Haha”
Nakaro, No your wrong up is…..
Hido, “a direction”
Itsuki, “I guess you guys are perfect for each other.”
Nakaro and Hido, “Yosh”
Yumi, “Why did you give us these cute pets?”
Nakaro, “Who’s cute?”
Itsuki, “Nakaro be quiet. And also the answer to your question Yumi is that so you guys can win battles and hopefully win the Coronta Tournament. You’’ll train with these for 3 days and you’ll set off.”
Yumi, “Are you sure, master.”
3 days past as the 3-man team train
Yumi, “Bye Master!
Itsuki, “See ya.”
Hido, “We’ll win the Coronta Tournament.”
Junko, “It’ll be easy, haha.”
walking in a sidewalk of a town
Nakaro, “Where are we going anyways?”
Yumi, “Litini, where the world largest dock is, because for the biggest lighthouse in the world.”
Hido, “500 feet high.”
Junko, “DAMN, im even scared In that height.”
Hido, “There it is, what a beautiful sight.”
Nakaro, “I’m more beautiful!”
Okay, I'm gonna write a story right now... hmm, if only I had an idea... AHA!
Part One of: Idenger's Peril-
Once, long ago, in a land known as Idenger, a kingdom of magickal beings unbeknownst to any alive today, a daughter was born to the great King Renir and Queen Sayame. Little did they know that their own child would bring about the destruction of their kingdom. For the Royals had fallen gravely ill, and their High Mage had been prepared to seize the throne upon their deaths. But, to her dismay, the heir was brought up to take her parents place. They decided to name their daughter Celestia, after their land's great deity. Their malevolent sorceress Ibellia had sensed a magickal disruption the moment the child was conceived, and she soon developed a new plan to rule the kingdom. She fooled the frail King into banishing his other mages, to be sure nobody but her knew of the child's gift. When Celestia's parents passed away, Ibellia took over her lessons. One day, as Celestia was asleep, Ibellia crept into the Princess' quarters, casting a spell on her: The evil mage used her own darkness to convert the child's magick into a torrent of uncontrollable malevolent power that would ravage the kingdom, destroying it from the inside out!
-And so ends part one of : Idenger's Peril-
Please comment on it... be brutally honest!
Wow, haven't been on in over a year xD
Okay, time for the real story to begin...
- part two of: Idenger's Peril-
For five years Celestia's power disrupted the kingdom, destroying everything she was born to protect. But on her thirteenth birthday, everything changed:
Celestia stood in her chamber, allowing Qwip, her maid, to fit her gown for the celebration that was to take place that evening. "Qwip," she whispered. The maid only replied with a respectful, "Yes, Milady?" Celestia smoothed imaginary wrinkles in her dress, gazing down at her dancing shoes. " There is something... wrong with me, isn't there? Everyone has experienced the destruction that appears to come from nowhere." Qwip blinked in surprise, wondering what made the Princess think any of it had something to do with her. "I mean, every time something horrible happens... every time someone ends up hurt... I'm there," she continued. Before she could say another word, Ibellia burst in commanding the maid to bring Celestia out immediately. Qwip did as she was told, leading the Princess to the palace ballroom. As Qwip turned to head to the kitchen, Celestia smiled slightly, curtsying to her faithful lady in waiting. The Princess took the first step into the room, marveling at the grandeur of her celebration: Lords as well as peasants filled the ballroom, having traveled from all over the kingdom to attend. A crystal chandelier hung from the ceiling, filled with candles. Celestia ambled over to the tavern-style bar, climbing into a high-backed wooden chair. As she gazed around the room curiously, she locked eyes with a handsome youth. Celestia squirmed nervously, hardly behaving like a Princess. She swept her gaze across the crowd again, noticing that the boy was headed her way. At that moment, the room grew intensely dark, as if all the candles had been snuffed out at once.
- and so ends part two of : Idenger's Peril-
Wow, haven't been on in over a year xD
I am like a script writer. I wrote some stories on my pages. I only have three of them. If anyone would like to read them just go to my pages. Click on my picture and go to my pages. World Of Power is the on;y story I have completed the first chapter to. It's basically about people who discover they have super powers and the epic adventure of how they became superheroes. It's kinda like the series Heroes. He's a list of superpowers used.
Technopathy: Able to talk to and control any type of Machine.
Power Mimicry: Touch people and get their power.
Phoenix: Fly, Fire, reincarnation.
Mediumship: Able to communicate with the dead.
Shapeshifting: Can only become other people.
Space-Time Manipulation: Control Time.
Biological manipulation: Touch people and they die.
Biological Manipulation: Touch people and they're healed.
Spirit time travel:
Dimension Bending: Complete control over all dimensions and can travel to any one of them.
Evil time control: Bad things that have happened throughout time come to the present in whatever area the user wants it to go, such as making a plane crash hit in another point in time causing as much damage as it did when it first hit just in a different location. Doing this does not change the course of history.
fetch me their souls
I forgot to mention Hanru Sazuki. This is the only story that I made with my own ideas in a way. Hanru is one of my best stories in a way. You can read it but know it is not finished. Each chapter is too long, so you should still read it before I add to much.
fetch me their souls
What? 500 credits to make a topic? Really?
Oh well, here's the start of the Manga series I'm writing. It's the background mythology and the summary of the first story arc.
Genre: Action, Adventure, Comedy, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Tens of thousands of years ago, a mysterious, non-corporeal entity (from here on to be simply referred to as "God") arrived at Earth. This entity feeds off of pure "existence", so it set up a system with humans: it gave them a "soul", which basically means a non-corporeal basis for a human's existence. After a human's biological tie is severed, i.e. after they die, the compassionate "God" sends them to a plane of existence, "Heaven", where basically imagination influences reality (if you can imagine it, you can make it exist). Here, in "Heaven", the soul does whatever it wishes until it "dies" out after a few thousand years. In return, "God" feeds off of all the emotions the soul collected; emotions generated by a soul are qa form of consumable energy for "God".
However, it is not a perfect system. There exist "demons". Demons are formed when a fraction of one's soul breaks off, along with rudimentary amounts of random emotions. For every 400 human souls, about 1 demon exists. Demons, initially, wish nothing but to survive. So, they feed off the souls and emotions of humans. It is possible for one's soul to be completely consumed. This does not result in death, but it means that your existence is completely biological; when you die, you cease to exist. They feed in various ways:-
-1. They can directly suck souls. They often go to populated areas to do this. Fortunately, even the most powerful demons can't completely consume a soul in less than a few hours. The more dangerous demons are ones that quickly feed off of one person; however the average demon will take about a week until it can completely consume a person.
-2. They can directly feed off of the stored emotions. Initially, this is the least harmful sort of demon. However, it still can cause problems if it is left unattended.
-3. They can inhabit a person and cause him/her to generate a lot of emotions in the people around him/her. Usually these are negative emotions, since those generate faster. Very powerful demons can rip out a soul from its body and then inhabit the body. Both are how "bad" people can be formed. There is no such thing as an evil human soul, just a tainted one. "God" does not give evil souls to humans.
-4. They can inhabit a human woman and become incarnated as her child. A baby takes a "marker" (a small fraction of soul) from its mother, and "God" eventually detects these markers and gives the new human a proper soul. A demon consumes this marker, inhabits the baby, and passively feeds off the people around it during it's biological life. These are the most difficult demons, since it is completely fused with its biological body. They feed slowly, and can become very powerful. However, it does require having to inhabit a woman for several months.
-5. It can directly attack detached souls and quickly consume them, since they are not attached to a biological body. To completely consume a "ghost" (a soul whose body has died but who has also not been collected yet) only takes a few minutes. These are the most dangerous and frightening demons ("ghosts", unlike biological humans, can see all this stuff, since they've passed on to a slightly different sort of existence. Thus, they get confused and frightened*). Ghosts cannot defend themselves from predatory demons and can only run away.
(*Note that confusion and fear are both consumable emotions, however emotions cannot be stored without the biological body).
The more emotion and soul a demon consumes, the more powerful it gets. They get more intelligent, can consume faster, can defend itself from and deal more damage to "janitors" (to be explained later), and are overall both harder to deal with and more dangerous to leave unchecked.
Of course, "God" does not like having neither its food source being leeched on, nor its flock of souls being preyed on ("God" is a very compassionate entity and cares about the souls it creates. Souls are not like cattle, but more like sheep, since "God" only feeds off what the souls produce).
"God" is not omnipotent, and now with millions of humans dying and being born in rapid succession, it just can't keep up. A baby that doesn't receive a soul in time will have its marker dissipated, making it impractical to give a soul (a marker is basically a seed. The baby might also be possessed by a demon. A human without a soul is very easy to possess). A ghost that is not passed on could be targeted and consumed by a demon. Demons are formed from soul shards more frequently, since there are more humans around.
Since "God" (not really a "God" in the conventional definition) can't keep up, it set up an organization of "janitors" (other names are sweepers, agents, angels, etc.) These are basically humans whose souls have various qualities (note that "God" can't control the properties of souls he creates), who were asked by "God" to not go to heaven but instead help the souls of Earth, and who accepted. This was started at around 1500 CE.
Janitors are given various powers from "God". Their job is to deliver souls to infants, send ghosts off to heaven, repair souls damaged by demons, and fight demons and send them to "hell" (basically, to be absorbed by "God"). Those that can qualify to be janitors are fairly rare, and only a few ten thousand exist. Their powers are as follows:-
-1. They can eat stored emotions. They can also eat demons (absorb their power), but can't completely consume them.
-2. They can create a portal to "heaven" (a portal to "God", who then takes over from there). Only ghosts can enter these portals.
-3. They are given various forms. First is their human form, which is often used for communication with ghosts. Second is their "general purpose" form, which is a body designed by the janitor's own imagination. Third is the "heavy combat" form, which is used for fighting powerful demons (this is also designed by the janitor, and is usually similar in anatomy to the GP form but larger).
-4. They can send demons to "hell".
-5. A medley of other tools of the trade. This includes messaging other janitors, ability to produce raw souls for implantation in babies, ability to use the energy they've collected to repair souls, acute sensing of where they're needed, and so on.
Fights with demons generally go as follows:-
-1. Engage the demon to weaken it. It looks likes normal, physical combat, and it pretty much works the same.
-2. The janitor beats the demon into submission. Damage done works on the same basis as corporeal injuries.
-3. After the demon is subdued, the janitor eats the power that the demon has collected. This is both for the janitor's benefit and to make the next step easier. Since the power of a janitor is continually replenished, it is practically immortal as long as it eats. It can, however, be defeated by a demon and consumed. This is pretty much the only way a janitor can die, but it is rather rare.
-4. After the janitor finishes its meal, it sends the demon to "hell". A demon that still has its power left is more difficult to send, even if it is subdued (analogous to "too fat to fit the door".)
For demons inhabiting a human body, janitors are able to forcibly extract demons from human bodies. If a human soul is still inhabiting the body with the demon, it receives damage and the janitor must repair it. If the demon ripped out the human soul and was the sole occupant of the body, there's nothing the janitor can do; the biological existence is left empty. If the demon is attempting to be born as a human baby, it is actually fused with the woman's soul. It must be detached very carefully, and the damage done to the woman must be carefully repaired as well, or she might not be able to produce a child with the requisite marker.
Janitors are in a very closely-knit but unorganized society. There isn't any hierarchy; it's pretty much just a free-for-all, with janitors simply managing what they come across. Janitors usually work in two or three.
There is no governing body, though the more knowledgeable janitors can be asked for advice. Occasionally, they will hand out very specific jobs, such as guarding specific humans from demons (usually because they're eligible for the team) or apprenticeships. Everything else is common knowledge for janitors: flock to large disaster areas, get a group for very powerful demons, don't crowd an already well managed area, etc.
Janitors are originally human souls, so they do still have the same behaviors. They do have rivalries and friendships and romances, and some can be even be jerks. Luckily, despite the existence of normal human behavior, no serious violence occurs between the janitors, though relationships can be rather negative and tense.
Janitors do sleep, for hours at a time even. This is to repair any damage and to reverse the stress on the body from normal use. Janitors also eat. The bottled emotions from humans is the main source of food; about an average two week's worth of collected emotions will last a day. As previously mentioned, they do absorb energy from defeated demons. However, such second-hand energy becomes rather lightweight after it's consumed. Thus, the primary energy does come from emotions. Janitors can inherently consume emotions much faster than demons.
Stored emotions look similar to lines of fog coming off of people. Emotions are easy to quickly consume if they are recent. It takes several minutes for the emtion to become "fixed" to a person's soul.
Demons have a human, bipedal shape but are still monsterous-looking. They are attracted to schools especially, due to the number of people in close proximity and the speed in which emotions are generated.
Some humans can clearly see all of this, and they will become janitors. All humans with this sense will become janitors, but not all janitors had this ability.
"God" requires about 20 average years of emotions to make one soul. Janitors require two week's worth of emotions daily to function normally. God has amassed an inconcieveable amount of energy, but its intentions are unknown. It will probably be sticking around with humans until their extinction.
Janitors and very powerful demons can corporealize themselves, at the cost of a lot of energy. They can make themselves visible and audible, or they can give themselves a Ceramic Doll like body, which will shatter upon losing too much energy or can become cracked/shatter completely if damaged by the real world.
First story arc
STORY ARC ONE: Angel for Suzu and Suzu the Angel
A human with a supernatural sense meets a janitor. After the janitor notifies her existence, he is assigned to protect her. They become great friends and fall in love, but must wait decades until they can really be together.
MAIN CHARACTERS: Suzu Izumi (Human), Kyou Rei (Janitor)
SUMMARY: Suzu is working as a teacher at age 23. She has long brown hair and is fairly tall. She has a supernatural sense that she has considered a curse for as long as she can remember. Though she doesn't know what it all is, she sees the emotions that wrap around people and she sees ghosts that must be passed on. Then, she starts witnessing demons feeding off of people, and even consuming panicking ghosts. She tries to block it out, imagine that none of it's real, until a demon starts feeding off of her. She tries to ignore that, but fails, and starts trying to get away from the demon (humans have no way to defend themselves from a demon, and must run or hide). Luckily she is saved by Kyou, the janitor.
Kyou died at age 17 in a car accident and has been a janitor for 5 years now. His general purpose form is that of a graceful, snake-like Asian Dragon, about 15 ft long, with two horns, two longs whiskers, two legs, and a feathery mane. At the end of his tail is a dense, triangular scale. He makes a portal to heaven by circling his body and biting his tail, and a portal to hell by slashing the ground. He communicates with distant janitors with his whiskers; he writes in the air with one of them and sticks the other one in his ear when the tip glows.
Suzu trys her best to ignore Kyou as well, even as Kyou repairs her soul (which involves circling her with his whiskers). Kyou doesn't know that she can see him yet. Days later, a demon inhabits her body while in her classroom (which she sees) and she just can't ignore it any longer, but she is able to remain calm. Then, Kyou enters the classroom (janitors can phase through walls) and tears the demon out, which involves entering the body as well, and repairs her soul again. He didn't realize it the first time he repaired her soul, but notices the odd qualities of it the second time, and based on the subtle reaction of Suzu, he believes she can see him despite the rarity of such people. He sits on the nervous teacher's desk as she remains calm during all her lessons, and then confronts her after school.
He asks if she can see him, but she promptly ignores him, though can't completely hide that she does. After some explanations he coaxes her to admit, at which point he messages the "Soul Experts" about her existence, and is then assigned to protect her. He tells her this, and then explains souls, heaven, passing on, demons, ghosts, emotions, janitors, and finally the fact that she'll become one. Protecting someone is more like being in their general area at all times and checking up on them occasionally.
Over time they get along together, and eventually become good friends, and even love eachother; however Suzu does get married, since she can't really be with Kyou yet. Various major events ensue, like Suzu becoming pregnant and Kyou promising to give her baby a soul, Kyou promising to pass her to "God", etc, and Suzu/Kyou promising to always be with him/her after she dies (note that there is a lot of years that are skipped).
Suzu gets cancer at age 59, and despite her son's and husband's protest she refuses treatment; Kyou has always been with her yet been out of reach, and she's ready to join him. At a heartfelt scene, with Suzu being very weak and at her deathbed, Kyou tells her that her soul is becoming detached and she'll die within the hour. Precious dialogue ensues, and then with no sounds, Suzu dies, her soul becomes detached, and Kyou bites his tail and makes a portal to heaven. Upon contact with Suzu's soul, the portal changes color and becomes a portal to the Department of Souls, where humans souls are made into janitors (they're given the chance to create their form, learn how everything works, etc). Both Kyou and Suzu enter.
Suzu wants to choose the same form as Kyou but with a different color scheme, but Kyou asks her not to. Suzu has always had a dog with her and loved them too, so Kyou suggests the form of a wolf. Suzu ends up with a wolf-like form: twice the size of a normal wolf, with dark fur (dark purple, but there's no color in Mangas). Her right eye has a golden circle around it with 4 diamonds-shapes on it, like cross-hairs but nothing in the middle. Her tail is long and bushy. She creates a portal to heaven by digging, and a portal to hell is in her throat (she sends demons to hell by swallowing them). She communicates with distant janitors by "activating" the circle around her eye. She receives messages by reading them and sends them by talking with the eye activated.
They go back to Earth and more dialogue is said. They start their new lives together and that is the end of the arc.
This arc skips forward many years at a time.
It may seem "romantic shoujo" but it's going to be very comedic. Most of the janitors that appear are rather goofy and unique. Also note that this first story arc is the largest, and there's several micro-arcs in it.
Oh, and what I have so far for the second.
STORY ARC TWO: Corporeal Chaos
The existence of a society of ultra powerful demons is discovered with the following event: a demon corporealizes itself in the middle of a populous city, in order to cause an explosion of consumable emotions.
MAIN CHARACTERS: Kyou Rei, Suzu Izumi, Taylor Ray (janitor), Constantine (janitor)
Kyou and Suzu have been working together as janitors for several months now. An incredibly powerful demon comes into a crowded city and corporealizes itself, causing panic, fear, confusion, etc in its wake. Kyou and Suzu investigate and decide to send a signal to all janitors to come immediately. Police and whatnot to try to control the situation. The demon destroys objects around it but leaves humans alone, since it needs their emotions to be generated. The humans find that any damage they do to the ceramic-like body is immediately repaired, since the demon has and is acquiring a lot of energy.
Kyou tries to restrain the demon, but finds that since it now has both a spiritual and corporeal basis of existence, the janitors must do the same in order to combat both properties at the same time... meaning they'll be visible to humans. Kyou corporealizes himself and wraps his body around the demon. Suzu corporealizes herself as well (she's in wolf form) and tells the police commander to ignore the demon and focus on getting every single human, including the forces sent to control the situation, out of the area as quickly as possible. The police ask why them too and Suzu says it feeds off of human souls, which is sort of right. The police realize that's the best course of action and Suzu goes to distract the demon, waiting for other janitors to arrive. The demon knocks Kyou off of itself, and with a powerful blow it deals a critial amount of damage to Kyou. Suzu focuses on protecting Kyou, and just in time the first janitor, Taylor Ray, arrives.
Note that corporealization takes too much energy if they use heavy combat form. HC is a very rare form to use.
Taylor Ray's form is a centaur, but instead of a horse she has a tiger's body. She fights with a sword, creates a heaven portal by drawing a triangle with the tip of her sword, and sends demons to hell by stepping on them with her front paws. Her sword works much like Suzu's eye circle thing for communication.
Note that this arc is unfinished.
(It's a hot summer day in the suburbs.)
Jeromy: So you're the new girl in the neighborhood, huh?
Amanda: I am. I was wondering if you could tell me about the house I just moved into. I heard that no one's ever lived in there for more than two weeks.
Jeromy: Please don't freak out when I tell you this. Many years ago this suburban neighborhood use to be a town. One night a demon tried to destroy the town. The towns people were able to capture him and burn him at the stake. They say everything was reduced to ashes. All except his face. His turned into a mask. Whoever wears the mask will be taken over by him. And he will be able do accomplish his dark deeds by the use of body of whoever wears the mask. They said that he always goes to this house to kill whoever lives there. But, If someone has a strong spirit and they live in the house. They will be given the gift of communicating with the dead. Spirits roam this neighborhood and everyone here knows it. They just can't communicate with them. But the spirits can manipulate the lives of others. Each spirit has a goal for a human. If they succeed in that goal, the spirit takes control over the human's body and their given an ability. Me and my team of mediums hunt down the ones that have taken over human bodies and we send them back to Hell. I can sense that you're a medium as well. Am I wrong?
Amanda: Wow. You just threw it all out there. I just wanted to know about my house. But I have been seeing dead people lately. But I never knew why. Now I do.
Jeromy: Do you agree to join my team and hunt down these evil spirits?
Amanda: When do I start?
A man is in his bedroom alone... Or is he?
John: I'd recognize that voice anywhere. Susan?
Susan: I'm here, John. I've been with you since the day I died.
John: I'm sorry for what happened, Susan. But I was angry, Susan. You have to understand.
Susan: It was not your fault. I used you for your money. That is the only reason why I married you. But when we had our child, you lost sleep. And you were fired. I left you because you were broke. Once I found out you hit the lottery, I tried to come back to you. But you knew I was using you. So you rejected me. As I left from your apartment I was attacked. And sadly shot. I died that day. And you blame yourself everyday for my death. That is why my spirit stayed with you. You must let me go, John. You can't be afraid to find another woman to marry.
John: Our daughter's been saying the same thing.
Susan: I know. I've been watching her as well. So where is Amanda?
John: She went outside to check out the neighborhood.
Susan: You don't seem frightened of me, John.
John: I've seen dead spirits before. Every time I went to a funeral or a cemetery. It doesn't surprise me anymore. You're right, Susan. I must move on with my life. I will try to date again. But only for you.
Susan: I would really like that. So, tell me about the mask you found this morning.
John: I just found a mask in my closet. I wonder if it fits me.
Susan: You should try it out.
John: I should, shouldn't I? Alright, I'll try it on now.
Detectives on a crime scene
Ryan: Ryan Alex, detective. Ma'am, I'm gonna have to ask you to leave the crime scene.
Ryan: No? What's your name?
Gina: Gina Bennett.
Ginger: Who are you talking to, Ryan?
Ryan: (Turns around and she's gone) Nobody. I'm talking to nobody. It's this heat. It gets to me sometimes. So do we have a name for the victim?
Ginger: We do. Of course she was stabbed multiple times in the chest. Surprisingly the stab wounds aren't what killed her. She lost too much blood. Oh I almost forgot. Her name is Gina Bennett.
Ryan: Gina Bennett?
Ryan: Ginger, please tell me you see a woman standing behind me.
Ginger: Nope, I don't see anybody.
Gina: You are the only one who can see me. I will leave you and move on to my next destination in life. But first, I want to make sure the man who killed me is put behind bars.
Ryan: Who killed you?
Someone's at the door.
Kalisa: Hi, I'm Kalisa. But some people call me Kay or Lisa. You can call me whichever.
John: My name's John.
Kalisa: Well hello, John. I couldn't help myself, I just had to come over here and welcome you to the neighborhood.
John: Well thank you.
Kalisa: I live right beside you. So if you ever want someone to show you around the neighborhood just come get me.
John: That would be great if you could show me around. Thank you.
Kalisa: Oh my gosh, what is that in your hand?
John: What? Oh this? It's just some mask I found in my closet this morning.
Kalisa: I know exactly who's that is. I would be more that happy to return it to them.
A boy stands behind John.
Timmy: Well If it isn't Kay. How are you, Kay?
John: What you know each other?
Kalisa: Wait, you can see him?
John: You can see him? This guy's been messing with me and my daughter since we moved in here. But I know he's harmless. How do the two of you know each other?
Timmy: Let's just say Kalisa is responsible for some of the spirits roaming this neighborhood. Kalisa has some skeletons in her closet. And I mean that literally.
TO BE CONTINUED...
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here a scary story that i wrote...hope u like it
There was girl named Tama (had to made name up), she just got back home from the school. Everything was like a normal day for her, go school, come back home, eat, do homework and take a shower. The sun went over the horizon, the moon was up and stars shine brightly. It was time to go to sleep. Tama wore her PJ and slip in to bed. She puts her head on the pillow, and then suddenly she hears a loud "Thump-Thump" in the attic. She woke up, look up, it stop. She turns to look at her door it was open wide. She thought "didn't i close the door before i went to sleep". She saw a woman with pale face with a long black hair pass by her door slowly. She called out "Mom!! You there?.” Tama jump out of her bed to go check. She went out to the hallway. "Mom?" said Tama. Her door room, close quickly. She turns, she starting to hear footsteps running in the attic toward her. Tama got scare, she ran downstairs fast and went outside. She went to the street, calling out her family's names. Tama saw a cat meowing. (Know how cat meowing sometimes sound like a baby's crying). She turn around, no ones was there. Tama look back at the cat. There was no cat except a little boy standing with red eyes looking at her. She felt a Goosebumps on her spine. The boy point to her house "go back" said the boy. She looks back at her house behind her. It was dark, gloomy, and lifeless. "Why?" said Tama, while turn back to see the boy. He wasn't there. She felt weird and thought about the boy's words,” Go back..." Tama murmured. "My room!" thought Tama. She began to run quickly back to her house. She opens the front door of her house. Tama began to run upstairs. While running upstairs, she saw the pale woman crawling up to her, she got to the hallway. She heard loud footsteps, "BUMP-BUMP-BUMP" running after her. She hesitated, got to her room, close the door, into her bed and cover the blanket over her. The doorknob turns slowly. She woke up, panting fast "it was a bad dream" she said.....
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