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In a time separate from the past, present, or future, there was an academy for people who didn't go along a path, but made their own.

Kamiya Rin was a 15 year-old student who decided to became a detective. Detectives here work in pairs against forces that rival the gods. Her friends chose similar destinys.

Fauna Aira, a calm and petit girl of 12 who was a bit dense. Koyama John, a wacky lech that isn't very smart. Sakurai Jin, a laid-back genius that still works hard. And Veran Mira, a ditzy girl that messes up a lot.

One fateful day, Rin encounters a boy chased by demons and helps out. Afterward, as they talk under the star-less sky, Rin asks if he will be her partner and strangely, he agrees right away.

We made a promise, under that endless sky, to work hard together, as the aquatic moon dyed the snow crimson.

Finally the teams were decided the next morning at the graduation ceremony. First Team: Rin and the boy, Zen. Second Team: Jin and Aira. Third Team: John and Mira.

As they set out on different paths, the wheel named time starts moving, and can't be stopped.

We choose this world where it shakes and roars, for without knowing pain, one cannot know love.

NOTE: Genre: Romance, Comedy, Action, Sci-fi, Supernatural, and Random.
I made a REALLY long introduction.

In a world very much like our own, humans become corrupted and choosse a path of darkness. They summon demons messing with a force they know nothing about for there very own deep purposes or just out of curiosity. The demons or devils possess the soul of the human and uses them as a vessel. as time passes devils dont need to be summoned in order to place themselves amongst us. the negative energy surrounding their world causes nooks and crannies where the demons can resurface.

a girl who started out with nothing no one in her life, lost the most precious people in her life. She dies alone from a demon after she loses her brother and her lover. She wakes up later on and sees a young man around 18 sitting next to her, but thats impossible? she DIED. somehow she was given a new life and when she realizes that her untimely demise was destined by fater she also realizes that she is linked by fate to the worlds salvation.

In this story FATE and DESTINY plays a big part in the life of Hikari Kyosaka who is destined to send the devils back to hell and fullfill gods wish.

she meets people along the way is is also a fighter for god and mankind. together they battle against hell and evil.

an exorcist, a hunter, a vampire(sort of demon), and an angel...
must fight along side one another..
is that possible..?

IM ACTUALLY WRITING A MANGA ON THIS (= its turning out nicelyyyy !!!! im such a goood drawerrr AHHAHAHAHPWAHAHA

ill post it up next time (=

did you like the story?

Heather and her annoying friend Arisa were on a walk done with the stupid
paper work there god damn taichous made them do. heather sighed " after this i'm
in for a days worth of paper work god do i want to kill izuru-taichou" yep it finally happend
After ichimaru gin left for the huco mundo with Azin and tousen. shuuhei,kira,and momo took over there captains place, Heather was izuru's fukutaichou and Arisa became Momo's fukutaiachou Heather got along with kira just fine but he cramed the poor girl with paper-work and Arisa being as lazy as she is just wanted to burn it in a bond fire and dance around the burning papers.
Heather had her interests in Hitsugaya but would rather jump of the building then crap all over her pride to say it to his face. Arisa liked Abrai Renji and was not afraid to show it being the pervert she was told the load mouthed fukutaichou he had a nice ass and Heather wished that she wasn't friends with the stupid perverted girl . after there walk they bumped into Hitsugaya and Renji . Heather just wanted to jump into the nerest broom closet there was why? because whenever she was near the young
taichou she always blushed or if they talked the girl would studder and say somthing
stupid. Arisa would always call renji somthing stupid like sweet ass or somthing.she wispered to
Arisa " don't you dare" the look on the young girls face was if you say that word again ill rip your
face off and shove it up your ass. "ok fine jeeze" she wisperd back but as Renji was
walking past she grabed the red heads ass. renji glared at the pervert below her "BAKA!" Heather
shouted as she hit the taller girl on the head " ow for a prawn you sure hit hard" what Arisa said
probably caused her death as Heather started to strangle the girl with her feet "i would rather
appreciate you didn't kill my fukutaichou" hinamori said smiling " HINAMORI TAICHOU"
Arisa screamed and glomped the female taichou " ok ok i get your happy to see me but i can't
breath!" said the smaller girl under her said " hehe sorry hinamori taichou"Arisa laughed nervously
and Heather just slaped her forhead and called her a dipshit as always.Heather sighed "izuru taichou is going to be on my ass if i don't finish my paper work"
"i bet you like that don't cha" Arisa smirked slyly "burn in in hell you perverted dog!'' Heather hissed '' oh so scared shrimpy is going to hurt me" Arisa rolled her eyes " thats it " but before she could chop the smart mouth fukutaichou head of Renji luckly saved the stupid girl from Heathers hot temperd actions " ok thats enough we don't want to kill each other just yet"Renji said camly " Arisa why don't you finish your paper work before you spend one night with no sleep and Heather why don't you go confess to Hitsugaya-taichou" Renji smirked yes he knew
one of the worst things that could ever happen because while Arisa was laughing her ass off Hinamori was hugging her saying how cute it was
having a crush on whity-chan."oh i'll confess to him when you confess to Rukia"HA! like killing two birds with one
stone Renji and Arisas face were bright red both of them for defferent reasons one Renji had been with rukia since
childhood he had small feelings for the small girl but was willing to make a bet "fine i'll ask Rukia on a date but you have to confess to Hitsugaya-taichou'' now that turned Arisa a brighter red why? because as i told you in the biginning she liked Renji but she HATED Rukia people don't really know why though i guess since people think that Renji loved Rukia so when she heard about it right infront of her face she heard a crack probably her heart shattering or somthing."ok deal" Heather said unfortunatly it's easier said then done espeacily to your best friend
~*~*~*~Flashback~*~*~*~

"Come on, Toshiro!'' Heather whined, dragging her friend by the arm. "We’ve been studying too long! It’s time for a break!"

"I don’t need a break!" Hitsugaya protested. "I’ve got a test on bankais tomorrow and I need to study for it.''

she turned around and pouted. "Come on, Toshiro. We haven’t hung out in forever. Can’t I spend at least one afternoon with my best friend?"

Hitsugaya looked down, refusing to make eye contact with you due to the fact that he was breaking underneath your irresistible pout. "I’ve got studying...."

"Please?" Heather pleaded, turning up your pouting power.

Finally, he snapped. "Alright, fine!" he exclaimed, throwing his hands in the air. "You win this time."

She instantly lit up. "Thanks, Toshiro!" Heather replied, practically glomping him before continuing to drag him to her secret place. After entering your sacred domain, she released Hitsugaya’s arm and cartwheeled through the fallen petals, giggling like an idiot.

Hitsugaya, however, merely walked over to where she sat, which was at the base of the giant cherry blossom tree. He sighed and shook his head. "Can I go now?"

Heather frowned at him. "You know, Hitsugaya, you seriously need to remove that stick shoved up your ass and have some fun at least every now and then. You’re so serious! Life isn’t all about work, you know."

"It is if you wanna be the best," he retorted.

Heather scoffed and started climbing the tree. Hitsugaya watched her until she were completely shielded by the branches as she climbed higher and higher. Soon, he couldn’t even hear the rustling sound she made as she ascended the tree. "Heather, get down here so we can leave already!" he shouted up at the branches.

Silence was his response. "Heather, this isn’t funny. Get down here now."

Still no response. He sighed in aggravation and ran his fingers through his hair. "This had better be good, Heather" he muttered darkly before climbing up the tree. Every now and then, he cursed under his breath when a stray branch scratched him or poked him in the eye. But he kept going up, looking for her.

"Goddammit, Heather! Where the hell are you?!" Hitsugaya yelled angrily.

His reply was Heather tackling him out of the tree.

Hitsugaya let out a cry of surprise as they both went flying out of the tree. But his shouts were drowned out by her laughter. Luckily, the grass and fallen blossom petals cushioned there fall. she rolled on the ground, laughing so hard and clutching her sides. "You should’ve seen your face!" Heather cried, tears almost spilling from her eyes.

"Shut up!" he yelled, face hot with embarrassment.

Heather sat up, still grinning. “Why don’t you make me?” she dared.

Hitsugaya narrowed his eyes at her before lunging. Heather instinctively dodged and stuck her tongue at him. "You gotta be quicker, Whitey-chan!"

"Stop calling me that!" He got to his feet and chased her. Heather just laughed and ran around the tree with Hitsugaya hot on her heels. Heather was so busy having fun that she didn’t notice him getting closer and closer until he finally tackled her to the ground. He pinned down her shoulders and smirked in triumph.

Heather just returned his smirk with a breathless smile. "Oh no. The almighty Toshiro Hitsugaya has caught me. Whatever shall I do?"

"You’re crazy," he muttered, releasing her.

she sat up and looked at him. "And yet, you hang around me. Face it, Whitey-chan. Without me, your life would be dull and boring."

He just rolled his eyes at her and chuckled under his breath. she stared at him. He raised an eyebrow at her. "What?"

Heathers face broke into a fresh wide smile. "I actually made you laugh!"


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Hitsugaya's P.O.V~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


i was working on my paper work as always, matsumoto was being a lazy drunk as usual trying to convince
me to take a break "comon Taichou, your such a workaholoc take a break for once maybe go out with a girl
OH! How about Heather"Matsumoto said i could feel all the blood rush to my face

"Matsumoto i have no time for going out with girls being captain means being responsable and i'm not interested in her"i said i saw Matsumoto grin" Really then why is your face red when i said Heather"I swear my face turned a little more red

Matsumoto had a sly smile on her face ok not a good sign"I bet Heather likes you though i bet she is going to come
right though this door and...''

speaking of the sarcastic fukutaichou"Ummmm....Hitsugaya-taichou can i speak with you?"Heather said looking very shy, matsumoto grinned "I'll leave you two alone" as she left she closed the door, just as she was just about to speak there was a crash and a scream" Goddamnit,Matsumoto" i sighed,
"i bet she trying to clean the closet and probably faling meserabley" Heather started to laugh, i sighed "No surprise there"
"i better leave before Matsumoto kills us all"Heather said as she left, i started to help Matsumoto clean the closet


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Normal P.O.V or however normal it gets~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

" Hey Taichou look at this" as she picked up a book of demon arts and spells " facanating" Hitsugaya said sarcasticly

"hmmm Atra gulai n ilian tauthr ono un atra ono waise skolir fra rauthur" she said, as she read one spell
" weird huh taichou" " Hitsugaya taichou where did you go?" ‘Did he leave without me noticing it?’ she thought.
That’s when she heard a muffled cry coming from a few feet away from her spot. She went over and looked down. There, she saw her captain’s clothes and zanpakutou abandoned on the floor. ‘What the? Is Hitsugaya taichou running around naked?!’ she thought frantically. Then she calmed down. ‘No, Taichou Hitsugaya is thankfully not that type of person. So then where can he be?’
At that moment, she looked at the pile and jumped back. Rubbing her eyes, she looked at it again. Was it just her imagination, or did the pile of clothes just....twitch?

The clothes suddenly gave a jerk. ‘Something’s in there,’ thought Matsumoto. As it continued to move, she put her hand on Haineko, prepared to fight if necessary. She braced herself as the clothes were flung aside.....

....revealing a small white cat sitting in the center of the pile.

Caught completely off guard, Matsumoto’s hand fell to her side as she stared at the small, seemingly innocent cat before her. “What’s a cat doing here?” she asked herself.

The cat stared back at her with piercing green eyes. As Matsumoto looked on, she noticed that this cat resembled Hitsugaya in a way. The piercing look, the way its fur spiked, resembling Hitsugaya’s hair
Thats when she finally got it
"Hitsugaya taichou?"
“Why are you looking at me like that?” asked the cat.

An awkward silence followed............

......then came Matsumoto’s hysterical laughter.

“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!” she howled, clutching her side.

“What the heck are you laughing at?” Hitsugaya demanded. “And come to think of it, why are you suddenly ten times my size?”

Still laughing to tears, she took out Haineko and removed it from its sheath halfway, letting Hitsugaya see his reflection on the blade.

He stared at his reflection in utter disbelief. “WHAT IN THE NAME OF ALL THAT’S HOLY HAPPENED TO ME?!?!?!?!?!”

there if you like it tell me kk

Once I walk on the street then suddenly on the sky flew some weird girl and she fell straight on me and say hello my name is Eveliina and I just thinking what just happened....
I just made up that story opening... and I'am not going to continue on that.

over the genrations there was a martial arts that was kept in the shadows because of its strength.. it has almost died out throught the history of the world because it is so hard for somone to become a succesor.. there are 3 rules one must pass to become a succesor.. 1, must be a direct bloodin from the master of the style.. 2 must defeat all other successors in a fight.. 3. must create there own style that surpasses that of the current master..Kenji at the age of 6 is being trained to become the succesor his father was once proclaimed to be the strongest man in the martial arts world so people come to challenge him..So he goes to america leavin kenji, kenji's mom, and kenji's older sister behind, but about a month later they got into a crash and kenji was saved but his mom and sister died,, now its 7 years later and kenji has lost his memories from the the time of the accident on, and only somehow rembers his father who he know lives with in america. also his father is now a special world goverment agent sent to assinate troublesome people in the world and to help nations control conflicts. So japan ask him to come and help as of now japans economy is falling and highschools have gone out of controll as they have territory fights and school level systems for the fighters.. although its would seem they are origanizing well innocent people are getting hurt so japan is asking for kenji's father help,, but kenji's father declines and said he is retiring from his position and is giving it to his son who has just succeded as becoming master of there martial art style.. so he sends kenji to japan to solve the crisis. theres just one thing kenji wonders as he arrives in japan.. since he was told he has never been here how come he understands the language and also when does he get to eat the Great food they talked about. kenji doesnt know what will happen in the future but he does know which school is gonna be his base and its time for him to start the mission.. now what will happen to kenji will he succed or fail.. who knows but u can tell he's gonna have fun as he enters fukoki high or as the towns people call it DEMON HIGH!! (AHAH had to do that)..

One day there was a toxic explosion underground at Dimont university a guy and his girlfreind of 2 months escape the dorms by jumping from the second floor. Due to the girls hurt ankle the guy carries her to what they think is a safe distance away only for an electrical line to hit them. They both go to the hospital and are unconsious for a day . The guy wakes up with his girlfriend by his bed. They are released from the hospitol after a weekof observation only to find strange things are going on. People from Dimont university are showing signs of physcic powers. It was cause by the gases released in the eruption. The 2 soon find that they have phsycic powers aswell and due to the electric shock are much stronger than others. A gang of the phycics comes together and comit crimanal acts. During the final infiltration of the gangs hideout the two are hurt pretty bad but suceed in cancelling the gangleaders phycic powers. The rest by the side of the calm Airihoy river.
The guy wakes up with a start only to find himself in the hospital and finds that everything was a dream. He leaves the hospital and can not get in contact with his girlfriend. In a strange series of de ja vo he finds himself in the exact positionas in his dreams, with phycic powers but is without his girlfriend. He tries to stop the riminal activities of the gang but it is considerably harder without his love. He invades the gangs hideot and everything is the sam he barely defeats the ringleaders but as he defeats the last one his girlfriend appears and the ringleader on the verge of conciousness says "help boss" the guy is shocked and confused. She says its a lie. They go to imbrace and she stabs him. She leaves him in his own blood. He barely survives but is devestated by what has happened and doesn't know what to do.
Frankly I do not know where to go with this story anymore so please someone make a suggestion or two.

once there was a guy. He woke up did some stuff and went back to sleep....the end.
j/k lolololol.

there once was a kid and...
i have on idea what the kid did so that is my story


poor an't it?

once upon a time there was a GUY who is writing a story for a forum about a guy where his cousin is writing a stroy for a forum about a guy where his friend is writing a story for a forum about a guy where his cousin's friend is writing a strory for a forum where that guy's friend's grandmother is writing a story for a forum about how that grandma's son-in-law have a bride who's writing a story for a forum about the way her mother write a story in a forum about her sister's grandchild wrote a story for a forum...then that GUY got too sleepy to continue his story and decided to end it...THE END

SUMMARY:
they all wrote a story for a forum....

5. maybe you'll create something better with that concept. (^_^) Okay

A cute student about 19 (which is a boy) likes little girls since he always wanted a little sister. He befriends 6 cute girls (about the ages of 10-12) and they got along well together playing and having fun. Suddenly, he had a car accident which caused him to have a coma. He then wakes up after 7 years and soon sees his "little friends" not so little anymore. And worse, they all have feelings for the guy! Who will he chose? What will happen? And how would you rate this?
(Based on my own life experience) (^_^)

hmm.. a harem type of story.. hmm, all the same ages?.. that would be a problem.. how about some girls being more matured then the others.. some being the shy type.. some the clingy type.. hmm.. 7 years.. thats too long.. that would make him 26 years old.. and the girls 19.. hmm.. i guess thats far to mature for a harem anime.. usually its around middle-high school.. or during high school..

i'll give ur story a 4.3/10

Actually, It's a coma so he aged but not physically. At least in my perspective. (^_^) Thanks for the comment. Really helpful.

and yea.. if u need to refer on stuffs like this, watch Shuffle!, perfect example of a harem anime.. although theres quite a number of girls.

There was once a big "freeze" in time on the western part of the world. Time continued and the citizens lived normal lives but what they didn't know was they they were living a life of denial. People wouldn't age, nothing would become old, and everyday was almost the same. Meanwhile in the Eastern part of the world, something started to happen to many different people. The people that gained new powers were called by different names by the "normal" people. They were given names like "lost ones" "death walkers" or "demons of satin". They did not look any different than a regular human, however when in battle or using their powers, they did not have a soul or heart. They had no feeling whatsoever for anything, and they could kill anyone, even if it was their own friend without a second thought. On a fall day, a boy named Takashi (16 ) goes into the city of Tokyo to meet his friends at a ramen shop. When he goes into the building, he finds another "lost one" murdering his friends right in front of his eyes. Takashi then goes berserk and then he unleashes his powers that he didn't know that he had. He unleashed a big powerful gust of wind that cut the mans body into pieces. After the terrifying moment, Takashi runs back to his apartment, with mixed feelings and horror. A week later after the incident, Takashi encounters a mysterious girl while he is on his way to school. Who that girl is , where ever she came from, and what she is will only be known in the future of this story. ^_^

a love story taht i made it up~:'! just a though come to my maind XD..

once upon a time....
there was a kid living alone in apartment, he was unhappy kid
his parents die and he was living in his uncel house...but he was betreet him like a server to him..and he couldn't take it any longer so he moved on without knwing any body..he stold some mony to build his own life.
he become a complecated person..he hate his life and his uncel indeed..but i gus he start to live normaly as any person live alone..and some time's he feel lonly but he get use to it..any way in his school he meet some friends and he was happy with them..ofcourse in the begenning he had some trouble but it's ok now..and he make a femal best friend..they was talking of every thing that happend to them and they help each other they r close friends..and he saw some girl from the first time he saw her he fall in love with her but she didn't so he take a try to talk to her..and it works..they now dating and see each other.
some day they go to resturant and they was talking whil they eating and suddnlt his BF show up he surprized and he was making some signs to tell her to get a away..so she left,after that day he saw her in school and come to talk to her abput what happend she walk away she look to him with sad eyes..and when he saw that he felt somthing wrong he felt hurt becasue she get hurt..and he now what was the problom so he went to say sorry about what he said
and she said ((i'll forgive you but i'll take that as a sign to me so i'll never do that with you again)) so he said ((it's dosn't matter any more as long as we r best friend and nothing will change it right)) she smiled silly and said ((right))..after 2 weeks ago she disepert suddnly..and he was like crazy she been disaperd for 4 days and no 1 nows about her any thing exsept he was the last one..so he talked to his girlfriend to search with her..and she said ((do u really care a bout her that much)) he said ((ya i like her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)) and she was shocked..he was to he didin't realize that..they didn't talk they were just looking at each other..and she said suddnly ((what do u meen about that u liked her))? he said ((i don't even my self it just came up like a word that i couldn't tell it but i just did now..i don't now what this feeling but i'm in hurry i talk to u later..and he left, he said those word and he left her without a sign that he make a mistake..he was just thinking of her.. and he went to search for her in street and look her and thire but no answer to him and he though of some place that they to come to it in 3 month ago..that was a garden place..they put thire names in tree and they wrot under it ((best friends)) so he went thire and he saw her he come to her and grab her arms and said ((why did u disperd like this what happend to you did u get hurt r u ok)) he said those word and he grab her arms again..and she back off naicly and she said ((why r y her why r u worried about me..go and be with u r GF)) and he said ((it's not the time to say such things like this come i'll take u home..and she left his hand and she said ((i don't wanna go abck i don't wanna be u r BF i don't wanna now at all u just casued me pain all my time with u was painful to me..and she start cry,so he come to her and said ((i'm sorry)) ad he hug her and he said ((i'll never ever gonna leave alone now i'll be there 4 u)) and she said ((what used of u u casued me pain how can u wann a be with me againe.. don't u understand)) and he look into her eyes and said (( how can i casued u pain and we were just having fun and talk))
i never did something bad to unless that i couldn't understand u))
and she said ((taht's right u didin't))
he said ((will u eather..don't U see me now loking into ur eyes with sadness face just like u gave me all the time..don't u see how much i care a bout u..don't u see how much I LOVE U)) and she stop cry and look at him and she said..what did u just said,and he said ((i didin't realized that untell now i've been like crazy searching for u in street lookin for u..i even call my friend to search for even my GF..but i think she is not now i got some one i love more than her..and he suddnly kiss her..and said, i'm sorry i relized that late)) she said ((don't be sorry))..then they left home but befor this they erase that that word ((best friend)) from the tree and they said near it (( first true love))

The End~..