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Posted 3/16/08
Okay so this is the place where you place you ideas of the upcoming story.. we've discussed a lot(well not really) of ideas but we would also like to hear your opinion. If by any chance you want something to be modified feel free to speak here..
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Hmmm....well I'm new to the group, and I like your idea so far! I really appreciate the details you put into the summary. I could almost see the slow motion sequence when the girl walked by Yyuusei. (Btw, I like the name, its original and I haven't heard it or read it anywhere.)

I don't know about specific exotic smells, but I really love the clean and crisp scent that lingers in the air after it rains. There is no other smell like it and you can't reproduce it articifically!
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Haha, thanks a lot. It was what i was going for. And rain hm, not a bad idea. And welcome to the group, hope you like it. And if you need any help with your own anime or anything, go ahead and ask.
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Like it a lot.. can't wait for episode 3
It would be fun if it turned to an anime or manga
But keep up the good work
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Have you thought much farther beyond the exposition, to say an antagonist or villian for the story? I think two obvious antagonists for the story that's been set up so far would be either another vampire character (with an opposite outlook or personality to create conflict and friction) or something like a "vampire-hunter", who can be supernatural as well (ie werewolf) or human. In the second case you get the whole "hunter and hunted" thing going on, although, who would be the hunted and who would be the hunter........?
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DichotomicJ wrote:

Have you thought much farther beyond the exposition, to say an antagonist or villian for the story? I think two obvious antagonists for the story that's been set up so far would be either another vampire character (with an opposite outlook or personality to create conflict and friction) or something like a "vampire-hunter", who can be supernatural as well (ie werewolf) or human. In the second case you get the whole "hunter and hunted" thing going on, although, who would be the hunted and who would be the hunter........?


>>Thanks, that idea helps alot.
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for the third chapter, u could like reveal that the brother is part of an organization out 2 cleanse the world of human beings and make the world where night-walkers rule... sumtin like that. Oh and Rin was part of this organization but left because she thought they were taking this to far. The older brother, not liking what she has done, is trying to kill her but his first attempt in the second chapter failed, so he might go back to the leader of the organgization(not reveal who it is, probably just a guy on a thrown hidden in the shadows) and the leader sends out minions to do what Makai(a name i made up for the older brother.... means Collection of Souls or Hell) has failed 2 achieve. XD

i'm not sure if its a good idea, or that it might be jumping a little 2 far in the anime, like it might be 2 much information for the 3rd episode =P.... but its just an idea XD
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for the third chapter, u could like reveal that the brother is part of an organization out 2 cleanse the world of human beings and make the world where night-walkers rule... sumtin like that. Oh and Rin was part of this organization but left because she thought they were taking this to far. The older brother, not liking what she has done, is trying to kill her but his first attempt in the second chapter failed, so he might go back to the leader of the organgization(not reveal who it is, probably just a guy on a thrown hidden in the shadows) and the leader sends out minions to do what Makai(a name i made up for the older brother.... means Collection of Souls or Hell) has failed 2 achieve. XD

i'm not sure if its a good idea, or that it might be jumping a little 2 far in the anime, like it might be 2 much information for the 3rd episode =P.... but its just an idea XD


Lol, the whole organization i thought of about 3 days ago. I just think it is really funny you thought of the same thing. Might be a little to far for the 3rd episode, but you never know. I dont want it to be really slow like some other series i know... (wont mention names)
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CloudChaser wrote:

for the third chapter, u could like reveal that the brother is part of an organization out 2 cleanse the world of human beings and make the world where night-walkers rule... sumtin like that. Oh and Rin was part of this organization but left because she thought they were taking this to far. The older brother, not liking what she has done, is trying to kill her but his first attempt in the second chapter failed, so he might go back to the leader of the organgization(not reveal who it is, probably just a guy on a thrown hidden in the shadows) and the leader sends out minions to do what Makai(a name i made up for the older brother.... means Collection of Souls or Hell) has failed 2 achieve. XD

i'm not sure if its a good idea, or that it might be jumping a little 2 far in the anime, like it might be 2 much information for the 3rd episode =P.... but its just an idea XD


Lol, the whole organization i thought of about 3 days ago. I just think it is really funny you thought of the same thing. Might be a little to far for the 3rd episode, but you never know. I dont want it to be really slow like some other series i know... (wont mention names)


LMFAO... kool XD Yea i thought so, o well... we'll just wait till later in the anime for that idea, hopefully XD
loool yea sum animes r really slow... oh and watcha think about he name =P
Posted 3/24/08

CloudChaser wrote:

for the third chapter, u could like reveal that the brother is part of an organization out 2 cleanse the world of human beings and make the world where night-walkers rule... sumtin like that. Oh and Rin was part of this organization but left because she thought they were taking this to far. The older brother, not liking what she has done, is trying to kill her but his first attempt in the second chapter failed, so he might go back to the leader of the organgization(not reveal who it is, probably just a guy on a thrown hidden in the shadows) and the leader sends out minions to do what Makai(a name i made up for the older brother.... means Collection of Souls or Hell) has failed 2 achieve. XD

i'm not sure if its a good idea, or that it might be jumping a little 2 far in the anime, like it might be 2 much information for the 3rd episode =P.... but its just an idea XD


agree. I think this could just be one of the main point of series, good idea... evil organization.. I was thinkig of that to but I wearen't that specific about it... keep up the good work, It could be just enugh for the one episode... but it seems that we are copying things... this is the reason why, firs of all when I think of her older brother, trough my mind passed Itachi or Byakua, snice they are both older brother, and idea of a evil vampire organization it's sounds so familiar I just can't put it. anyway I just hope It would be uniqe for that matter. Good job.
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vampire clan! like different ones and each should have there own symbol! rin could be there tracking one like really bad clan down when she meets Yyuusei n gets him involved! Il get back to you with ideas for symbols but they shud either have some sort of jewelery with their clans sybol on or a tattoo of it on their body!
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These are Yyu's eyes when he changes XD

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vampire clan! like different ones and each should have there own symbol! rin could be there tracking one like really bad clan down when she meets Yyuusei n gets him involved! Il get back to you with ideas for symbols but they shud either have some sort of jewelery with their clans sybol on or a tattoo of it on their body!


o i made a tattoo... i could show it 2 u, if u like?
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FallenAngel159 wrote:

vampire clan! like different ones and each should have there own symbol! rin could be there tracking one like really bad clan down when she meets Yyuusei n gets him involved! Il get back to you with ideas for symbols but they shud either have some sort of jewelery with their clans sybol on or a tattoo of it on their body!


o i made a tattoo... i could show it 2 u, if u like?

ooh yes please that wud be gr8! Iv got some that Iv done but no Idea wr they are lol
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These are Yyu's eyes when he changes XD



Thats very uh.... creepy?
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