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Episode 1, The Awakening
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Posted 3/24/08 , edited 4/24/08

CloudChaser wrote:

Wow i'm impressed, u did a really good job XD.... can't wait 2 read/watch it loool =P

now i gotta read the second chapter XD... the suspense is killing me =P


Lol, thanks. Glad you liked it. =)
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the girl could smell like a field of a thousand battles O.o no wait that dosent wound right maybe just something plain people aren't interrested in how she smells maybe something like expensive purfume but not one that he has ever smelt she smelt like a different world. ......*_^
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i love it!!!! the idea is great!!! but for an episode i think its too short... well thats for me.... but i really think its great.. ^__^
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bea-chan_narutolover wrote:

i love it!!!! the idea is great!!! but for an episode i think its too short... well thats for me.... but i really think its great.. ^__^


Yeah i know, havent been able to lengthen the episodes that much. They are all pretty short
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bea-chan_narutolover wrote:

i love it!!!! the idea is great!!! but for an episode i think its too short... well thats for me.... but i really think its great.. ^__^


Yeah i know, havent been able to lengthen the episodes that much. They are all pretty short


manga chapters are basically that short tho for an episode just merge 2 or 3 chapters into 1 thats wot they do
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Posted 4/16/08 , edited 4/24/08

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AkanaYukinai wrote:

A nuclear powerplant is going to have other things such as gas, not necessarily for providing their own energy, but for their trucks and other vehicles, as well as heating and such. There is more than one type of gas besides being used for power.


That's fine but you don't have a forum to tell readers' that. So either you explain clearly the cause of the accident (how was it gas?) or there are nagging questions left in some rational readers' minds. Not a good thing for a first episode. It's a major event in the protagonist's life so you can't say just blithely justify the possibility of a gas leak with an author's note or something. It has to be believable or you'll be accused of not doing your research.

http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/sci/tech/5165736.stm

http://www.themoscowtimes.com/stories/2005/12/19/015.html

http://www.ucsusa.org/clean_energy/nuclear_safety/nuclear-plant-risk-studies-failing-the-grade.html

It's not very hard. Just google and pick something more believable.


Hey, thanks for the advice, at first i wasnt so sure, but your right, i should do my research, lol. Thanks
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