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Posted 3/17/08
Well, this is a side to the emo stereotype I embrace, personally. Come share your works, and don't be too self-conscious; I think mine's crap too. Oh yeah, credit the creator of the work at the end of your post. If it's yours, say so. If it's someone else's, say that too. If they/you don't want you to use their/your name, credit it to Anonymous. If the author is on cr, userlink to their profile.

So, to start things off, I take this from my own profile:

Would anyone miss me if I were gone?
...Doubt it
I'm alone and lonely
Can you hear me scream?
You'd never find me in time
Does anyone else hear the symphony of blades?
Do you know the sweet melody of pain?
Life's hardly worth the effort
And neither am I
Don't even try
Feel the wind's caress
As you fall
The siren your final lullabye
The deathbed embrace of pavement
Mine was a life
Whose story began
Engraved in black ink
Until the ink ran dry
Then the rest was mapped in blood
Unmissed

NerakanDrac

*sighs at self* This one's not any good, I know...
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Posted 6/8/08 , edited 6/8/08
no! i think yours is really good !

heres mine


I look around me
But all I seem to see
Its people going nowhere
Expecting sympathy
It's like we're going through the emotions
Of the scripted destiny
Tell me where's our inspiration
If life won't wait
I guess it's up to me
No we're not gonna waste another moment in this town
Whoahh
We wont come back, the world its coming out
Whoahh
Leave the past in the past gonna find the future
And misery loves company
Well so long
You'll miss me when I'm gone
You're gonna miss me when I'm gone


lol just joking .. i'm not good at this kind og stuff .. but really , yours is REALLY good though !
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Posted 7/30/08
"when you are really tired being you
or someone really important person just left you...
what can you do?
should you jump off the bridge
and fly away like a bird?
lets try it..
The wind touches gently at your hair...
Maybe it wants to heal your wounds that nobody doesnt see...?
.....but its too late..Your already flying away..
Maybe oneday she can see what she did to you,
and see your sad daisies on your grave.."



i now it sucks..but at least i tried..
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Posted 7/30/08
UglyFilth...loser of me, but I was actually entranced my your imagery...of course I'm always looking for an excuse to escape, but something in it is touching...but here's another of mine

Run away from me
And do not speak to me
I cannot hear you
You cannot heal me
And you do not feel
The scream that I feel
And you will never know
Even if you listen
To the rain
To the tears that fall
To the dust
To the nothing I have left
Behind

NerakanDrac
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Posted 9/7/08
Soo...Here are my shitty poem....Their not that good...Toook me 5 minutes okaii..? > .>

Alone in the darkness,
Nothing but loneliness,
I feel restless,
And so hopeless,

I am waiting for death to take me away,
No matter what you'll say,
I'll be leaving anyway,
'Cuz there is no reason for me to stay.

This time I won't lie,
I really want to cry,
I don't want to die,
But it's my only way to say Goodbye

Finally, I took out a knife,
By stabbing my chest,
I took away my life,
And forever in peace I shall rest.


-Anjuu
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Posted 9/7/08
Here's another one~..... =____=..

There is nothing I can gain,
By just sitting in the rain,
Thinking of this pain,
That will always remain.

Still loving you,
Still missing you,
There is nothing I can do,
To once again hold you.

Guess I will die,
Without saying Goodbye,
Myself, I shall kill,
This time I'm for real.

Afterall, I only live for you,
But you threw me away,
What more can I say,
Than "I love you"?
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Posted 9/7/08
Oh yeaa...Its by mee too .. o.o
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Posted 9/8/08
Standing among the crowd
Huddled against you
Against the beating of the speakers
Losing everything but your touch
Your fingertips on me
Cold inside
Despite the heat
The fevered energy that has me sweating
Guilty in my own apathy
Nestle my cheek into the crook of your arm
Wrapped around my shoulders
Let your body block the aching sound
Press my hand to your chest
Fingers splayed deserately
Afraid that I have lost
Your heart
To the amplified drum
But I feel it beating though striped fabric
I trust you to hold me on my feet while I cry
Wondering how wrong it is
To feel so alone
In the press of bodies
And held close in your arms

NerakanDrac
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Posted 9/9/08
With our hearts wrapped in Saran-
Are we here to hear hollow words
or sincere verbs taking flight to fan the silence?
damn the silence!
as it smothers the violence of a ghost locked and chained
in solitude engaged in caged enraged soliloquy
the words reaching out like desperate hands
gnarled and grasping for even the lightest featherlike touch
well deep within digital prisons
snarling and gasping across chasms from our telephones
too afraid of voices making us three dimensional
intentional connection scares us crawling back into the void
avoidance fits us so well
well worn torn and wholly alone

Drao
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Posted 3/13/10 , edited 3/13/10
I'm not good at poetry but I'll try...

If you're gonna kill me do it fast so I don't suffer the pain
If you're gonna kill me do it in my sleep so all I feel is a fading nightmare
Would it take away the pain I suffer in my wake...

What is it like to truly be at rest?
Give me the feeling
Slip away my fears and worries
Wash me away but leave the darkness
Let me fall asleep at last



I am NOT a poet!!!
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Posted 3/13/10
Okay... second try!


You left me alone and I wonder why
You play me on and on and let me suffer
Why did you go and leave me in the bright
Where you protected me from the sun long ago
Put me back in the dark where I belong
Let me fade to nothing
You can't change the way things are
Back to what they were
I'm not what I used to be
So go!
I realize now you're not the one
I'm happier in the darkness
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