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Posted 3/17/08
Looking out the
window
wher the world
lies to sleep
so peacful it seems
as the snow falls down
as we cuddle together
infront
if the fireplace
that lets its warm glow
come over
I can only smile
as I lay here
whit you
I stroke your
hair
watching you sleep

it has been
a hard year
we are alone
now
in this house
I look over the place
wher the warm
dosnt come
as I reameber
I shake my head
I wont
reameber
I dont want to
but I must and that
I know

thet night
was just as this
its been some weeks ago
but the town
dose reameber
dosnt they
but they dont
reameber
what I do

I and her
wher just like
this
our parents wher
in a other place
in the house
we all wher happy
but that happines
would soon break

that guy
came in
a stranger
a friend of father?
cuse I see them talk
I feel somthing move
as I look down
two brown eyes
looks at me
as she looks scared
just as I feelt
cuse we feelt ther
wher somthing
wrong

A shot
and we wtach
dad fall
mom screams,
and run
to us but before
our hands could met
she falls down

seacing protection
as the man came
she buried her head
and held her ears
but I said
" I will be here for you"
"dont be scared"
and then....

I feel somthing
as I open my eyes
she looks at me
and ask
"what are you thinking about?"
I look
and then smile
"nothing" I wisper
as I made her sleep agein

she dont
need to know
that we are not in
the real world anymore
we are dead
just as mom
and
just as dad
I held her tightly
As i wisper to her
" I will be her whit you,"
"allways and forever,"
"and one day"
" we will be free"
" to fly to the sky"
" I will never leav you"
" alone in this"
" world"
" I will protect you"
" My Dear Little Sister"

whre did I get thsi from?? o.O but I just wanted to write somthing cute so...mayby it that =.=u
Posted 3/17/08
nice poem...again u wrote more b4 me .....T^T...i'm experiencing an inspiration drought
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Posted 3/18/08

kagura4 wrote:

nice poem...again u wrote more b4 me .....T^T...i'm experiencing an inspiration drought


*inocent smile* well it was late when i wrote it the other one too so i dont know if any of they are good but its just thinking like now i want to write and than you start thinking .... thats whit me
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Ack! This one was amazing as well ><
I loved the ending, it was sad and adorable >< But I'm happy they died together...it would've been cruel for one of them to live and the other to die *sniff* It was a good poem!!
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Posted 3/19/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:

Ack! This one was amazing as well ><
I loved the ending, it was sad and adorable >< But I'm happy they died together...it would've been cruel for one of them to live and the other to die *sniff* It was a good poem!!


Thank you!
I so trough about that and I just got the idear when I looked outside its snowing (agein!!!) and then I just got that sister and brother love thing in my head >.<
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Posted 3/19/08

Yamira wrote:


moonwarrior485 wrote:

Ack! This one was amazing as well ><
I loved the ending, it was sad and adorable >< But I'm happy they died together...it would've been cruel for one of them to live and the other to die *sniff* It was a good poem!!


Thank you!
I so trough about that and I just got the idear when I looked outside its snowing (agein!!!) and then I just got that sister and brother love thing in my head >.<


Lol, inspiration comes from the most interesting things ><
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