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Posted 3/17/08 , edited 3/17/08
I wish

I wish that I could tell you all the things that float within my head
How sometimes I feel so hopeless like my life is filled with dread
I wish that I could stop pretending that this smile of mine is real
So that maybe for once I could tell you how it is I really feel
I wish that I could open up for once instead of harboring all this hate
Maybe if I believed a bit more I’d have more control of my fate
I wish that I could get rid of all this anger that I feel inside
It drives me insane sometimes all this pain I cannot hide
I wish that I could be stronger so none of this would faze me
I’d go on and shoulder all of this, my problems no one could see
I wish that I could cry a bit to relieve my pain at least just a bit
So that at least I’d have something to fill this giant pit
I wish that I could just do something before this void tears me up inside
At least I’d have a clue and not feel so hopeless like my tries have been denied
I feel like I’m gonna burst I just need someone to see
That I can’t shoulder this alone, please someone help me

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Posted 3/18/08

kagura4 wrote:

I wish

I wish that I could tell you all the things that float within my head
How sometimes I feel so hopeless like my life is filled with dread
I wish that I could stop pretending that this smile of mine is real
So that maybe for once I could tell you how it is I really feel
I wish that I could open up for once instead of harboring all this hate
Maybe if I believed a bit more I’d have more control of my fate
I wish that I could get rid of all this anger that I feel inside
It drives me insane sometimes all this pain I cannot hide
I wish that I could be stronger so none of this would faze me
I’d go on and shoulder all of this, my problems no one could see
I wish that I could cry a bit to relieve my pain at least just a bit
So that at least I’d have something to fill this giant pit
I wish that I could just do something before this void tears me up inside
At least I’d have a clue and not feel so hopeless like my tries have been denied
I feel like I’m gonna burst I just need someone to see
That I can’t shoulder this alone, please someone help me



Waaaaah!!! I love this !! =D its really great good job, and welcome back to writing xD
Posted 3/18/08

Yamira wrote:


kagura4 wrote:

I wish

I wish that I could tell you all the things that float within my head
How sometimes I feel so hopeless like my life is filled with dread
I wish that I could stop pretending that this smile of mine is real
So that maybe for once I could tell you how it is I really feel
I wish that I could open up for once instead of harboring all this hate
Maybe if I believed a bit more I’d have more control of my fate
I wish that I could get rid of all this anger that I feel inside
It drives me insane sometimes all this pain I cannot hide
I wish that I could be stronger so none of this would faze me
I’d go on and shoulder all of this, my problems no one could see
I wish that I could cry a bit to relieve my pain at least just a bit
So that at least I’d have something to fill this giant pit
I wish that I could just do something before this void tears me up inside
At least I’d have a clue and not feel so hopeless like my tries have been denied
I feel like I’m gonna burst I just need someone to see
That I can’t shoulder this alone, please someone help me



Waaaaah!!! I love this !! =D its really great good job, and welcome back to writing xD


thanx glad u liked it
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Posted 3/18/08
AAAAH!!!! This was awesome!! And it fit the picture perfectly!! (in my head) I really really really really liked it! (i guess it's easier to say I LOVED IT) hehehe =]
Nice job!!!!!!!!!!!
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