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Post Reply {Fanfic} Hitsugaya In Love???
Posted 3/17/08 , edited 4/5/08
I'm not very good at writing, but I will do my best, I hope you like it, and tell me what do you think...

The Meeting

It's a beautiful day in Soul Society, everybody is working. Guards walk from side to side to check if there's something wrong or not. Each squad is busy with their business, yes, Hitsugaya-taichou is working hard, because he has to do Matsumoto's jobs, too. In that moment, suddenly,Matsumoto enters the room, and shout:
Matsu: Taichou!!! how are you doing?
Hitsu: Do you dare to ask me that question? Can't you see it? I'm working your part, too!!!!!
Matsu: I see, you're such a good Taichou, you're helping me, right? Thank you so much.
Hitsu: What?!!!, I have to do this, because you're so lazy, and helpeless
Matsu: Anyway, I have to report something, Taichou
Hitsu: What?!!! Another Espada attacked the Real World?
Matsu: No, no. The students of the academy are just graduated, so everybody goes to the squad that they were assigned, so I brought our new comrade
Hitsu: And? Where is it?
Matsu: she's outside waiting, I'll call her
Matsumoto called her. A little girl, the same height as Hitsugaya appeared in front of him. She has black, straight middle lenght hair, she was wearing the Shinigami's kimono, but it was different, her kimono was shorter, you can see her legs.
Matsu: Taichou, she's Higurashi Yukiko
Higu: I'm Higurashi Yukiko, Nice to meet you, Hitsugaya-taichou-sama
Hitsu: (Taichou-sama???)
Higu: I'm very happy to be able to enter to 10th squad I hope that I can learn a lot from you, Taichou-sama
Hitsu: ahhh
Matsu: I tell you something, Taichou. Yukiko is the best student this year, so she took the 3rd officer place, in the school, everybody calls her, genious, like you, Taichou.
Hitsu: Genious??? interesting.

I hope you like it, tell me what do you think, if you like it, I'll continue, otherwise, I won't. if there's some mistake, sorry.
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I think it's really good, it's easy to read and I love those smileys :D
thank u for not making this a hinaxhitsu fanfic, I am so sick of it
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Posted 3/20/08
I love this story continue please
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Something different, but I really like it, personally im a author so I can be very picky, noticed a few spelling errors, however I would love it if you continued and if you would like I would even sticky this.. Incredibly good idea well done and keep up the good work
Posted 3/20/08
I'm glad that you like it, I will try my best to write a great story.

An Amazing Discovery

Hitsugaya was working in his room, when suddenly Matsumoto entered the room shouting.
Matsu: Taichou, I heard that something is happening in the Real World, is it possible that Espadas are attacking there?
Hitsu: I don't know, but It would be a good idea if you can go and check it, then report it to me.
Matsu: Ok! so I think that you have to help me with my job here in Soul Society, right? It will be full of papers when I'm back, so can you help me a little? Taichou
Hitsu: What???
Matsu: see ya
Matsumoto leaves the room smiling.
Hitsu: oey... Wait....
Hitsu: What should I do?

In that moment, Higurashi enters the room with a cup of tea and a dessert.
Higu: Hi, Taichou-sama, where's Matsumoto-san?
Hitsu: She went to the Real World.
Higu: Ah.. by the way, I brought something for you.
Higurashi hands the cup of tea and the dessert for Hitsugaya.
Higu: This is called cake, I learned how to make it from a magazine that Kuchiki-san brought from the Real World, this is the first time that I do something like that, I'm not sure if it tastes good, would you try it, Taichou-sama?
Hitsu: (cake??? What's that?)
Hitsugaya took a little piece of cake and ate it.
Higu: Does it taste good?
Hitsugaya didn't say anything and just trying to taste the cake.
Higu: Mm... Taichou-sama, does it taste awful? Answer me, please. Say something
Hitsugaya stood up from his seat and said.
Hitsu: Can you leave alone?
Higu: Ok, but after you finish the cake and tell me how was it.
Hitsugaya pulled her to the door, and said.
Hitsu: Leave alone, ok?
Higu:
Higurashi left the room and closed the door.

The next three days happened the same thing, when Higurashi brought the cake, Hitsugaya said that he wanted to be alone. One day Higurashi wanted to know if Hitsugaya ate the cake or threw it away, so when she brought the cake, she left the room and peeked at the door and saw something interesting, Hitsugaya liked the cake a lot, he ate it quickly, but he doesn't want that people know that, because he thinks that this kind of food is for child. (Remembering Yachiru). Knowing that, Higurashi made more, and more cakes everydayHitsugaya's face doesn't show it , but he was happy inside to be able to eat so many cakes.
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Posted 3/20/08
Hay, that's really nice!^^
good work! =)
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yay!!! Shiro chan is so cute :3
Posted 3/20/08
An Important Person

Hitsugaya and Higurashi were walking to go to the Captain's meeting, on the way they met with Byakuya. He glared at Higurashi, he was like asking her"what are you doing here?" with his eyes. Hitsugaya thought that something was happening, but he didn't say anything and continue his way. Hitsugaya and Byakuya entered the room, while Higurashi was waiting outside. After they finished everyone returned to their rooms. That night Higurashi left her room and went out, Hitsugaya wasn't sleeping, he knew when she left, but he didn't care. Higurashi went out everynight.Hitsugaya started thinking that something was happening, so one night, when she left, Hitsugaya followed her, then he knew that the person who she was meeting with was Byakuya, he even know that Byakuya ate the cakes that Higurashi made, at that moment, Hitsugaya felt a little sad.
Hitsu: (What's going on here? What relationship do they have?)

Next day, Higurashi brought many cakes for Hitsugaya. When he saw the cakes, he felt sad. He thought that they weren't made for him, they were leftovers, and without eating them, he left running.
Higu: the cake.... aren't you going to eat them...?
Higurashi started worrying about him, because it's already night, and he hasn't returned, yet.
Higurashi went out to search for him. After a while, she found him beneath a tree, sleeping. She got close to him, at that moment, he woke up.
Higu: ahh...mmm did I wake you up, Taichou-sama?
Hitsu: No
Higu: ahhh. What's wrong with you?
Hitsu:
Higu: Tell me, please, did I do something to make you angry?
Hitsu:
Higu: Tell me, please, I know that something is happening.
Hitsu: D..do..yo..you...li..like..him?
Higu: Him? Who?
Hitsu: the one that you have meeting every night.
Higu: mm ahh!! Byakuya-sama? :lol:, of course not. Why?
Hitsu: Don't you like him? so, why do you meet him at night?
Higu: because he doesn't want anybody to know about our relationship.
Hitsu: what kind of relationship do you have with him?
Higu: I can't tell you that, I promise him not to tell to anyone about it, sorry.
Hearing that, Hitsugaya's face changed from a cool face to a sad face, he started thinking that they do have a relationship, but she doesn't want to tell him.
Posted 3/21/08

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An Important Person

Hitsugaya and Higurashi were walking to go to the Captain's meeting, on the way they met with Byakuya. He glared at Higurashi, he was like asking her"what are you doing here?" with his eyes. Hitsugaya thought that something was happening, but he didn't say anything and continue his way. Hitsugaya and Byakuya entered the room, while Higurashi was waiting outside. After they finished everyone returned to their rooms. That night Higurashi left her room and went out, Hitsugaya wasn't sleeping, he knew when she left, but he didn't care. Higurashi went out everynight.Hitsugaya started thinking that something was happening, so one night, when she left, Hitsugaya followed her, then he knew that the person who she was meeting with was Byakuya, he even know that Byakuya ate the cakes that Higurashi made, at that moment, Hitsugaya felt a little sad.
Hitsu: (What's going on here? What relationship do they have?)

Next day, Higurashi brought many cakes for Hitsugaya. When he saw the cakes, he felt sad. He thought that they weren't made for him, they were leftovers, and without eating them, he left running.
Higu: the cake.... aren't you going to eat them...?
Higurashi started worrying about him, because it's already night, and he hasn't returned, yet.
Higurashi went out to search for him. After a while, she found him beneath a tree, sleeping. She got close to him, at that moment, he woke up.
Higu: ahh...mmm did I wake you up, Taichou-sama?
Hitsu: No
Higu: ahhh. What's wrong with you?
Hitsu:
Higu: Tell me, please, did I do something to make you angry?
Hitsu:
Higu: Tell me, please, I know that something is happening.
Hitsu: D..do..yo..you...li..like..him?
Higu: Him? Who?
Hitsu: the one that you have meeting every night.
Higu: mm ahh!! Byakuya-sama? :lol:, of course not. Why?
Hitsu: Don't you like him? so, why do you meet him at night?
Higu: because he doesn't want anybody to know about our relationship.
Hitsu: what kind of relationship do you have with him?
Higu: I can't tell you that, I promise him not to tell to anyone about it, sorry.
Hearing that, Hitsugaya's face changed from a cool face to a sad face, he started thinking that they do have a relationship, but she doesn't want to tell him.


Very good! plz make more :D
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Posted 3/21/08
Pls. continue it!!! Eventhough I'm a HitsuHina Fan, I don't mind Higurashi!!! XD
This is getting really, really interesting!!! LOL!!!
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Thats real nice!^^ Want to read more! =D
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Discoverying A Feeling (Part I)

It’s afternoon in Soul Society. Hitsugaya is working in his room, as always. At that moment, Higurashi enters the room with a piece of cake and a cup of tea. She put them on the table, when Hitsugaya saw the cake, he remembered that it was the same cake that Byakuya ate, at that moment, he felt sad , and angry.
Higu: Taichou-sama, I brought a piece of cake for you.
Hitsu: I don’t want it, take it away from me.
Higu: ehh?, I thought that you liked it so much
Hitsu: Since today, don’t bring me cakes anymore, because I won’t eat them
Higu: why?
Hitsu: I hate them
Hearing that, Higurashi started crying , and left the room.
Three days have passed and Higurashi hasn’t come to visit Hitsugaya. He started to miss her, and her cakes, too. One day he went out to search for her. He searched many places, but he couldn’t find her. He looked for her for many days, and he was already tired. He didn’t know what to do. He only had one choice and is asking Byakuya. One day, Hitsugaya went to Byakuya’s room to ask him where she was.
Hitsu: Byakuya, I have searched many places, but I couldn’t find her, tell me where she is.
Bya: she? Who?
Hitsu: of course Higurashi, you’re the only one who knows where she is
Bya: why should I tell you? Aren’t you the one who made her cry? Do you want me to tell you where she is, so you can hurt her again? Do you think that I would tell you? Are you kidding?
Byakuya said that with an emotionless tone, but at the end he didn’t say where Higurashi was so Hitsugaya couldn’t find her.
Next day, Hitsugaya is working as always, but he looked so sad , and he’s not as serious as he used to be with his job. Many days have passed and Higurashi hasn’t returned yet.
One night, Hitsugaya fell asleep, because of his work. Next day, when he woke up, he found a familiar face, smiling at him.
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Posted 3/23/08
So she's back? :)
I wanna know who it is!!!!^^
So nice story ~^_^~
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Keep going i love it so far
Posted 3/23/08
I'm glad that you like it, here's the second part.

Discoverying A Feeling (Part II)

Higu: Good morning, Taichou-sama. Did you sleep well?
Hitsugaya felt relief inside when he saw her
Hitsu: ehhh??!!! Higurashi!!! Why are you here?
Higu: Ah, Why? You don’t want to see me?
Hitsu: No, it’s not that.
Higu: Hey, did you miss me?
Hitsugaya didn’t accept that he missed her
Hitsu: Of course not
Higu: ahh… what a disappointment!! Because I did miss you, Taichou-sama
Hitsu: Ehh??
Higu: I missed you so much, so I brought a present for you
Hitsu: Ahh, Thanks
Higu: Open it
Hitsu: Ok.
Hitsugaya opened it, and it was a white scarf, after he saw it for a while, he put it on.
Higu: How cute!!! Taichou-sama
Hitsu: Shut up, don’t use “cute” to describe me, use “ cool”, ok?
Higu: Ok, Taichou-sama is so cool, haha .
Hitsu: By the way, where have you been all this time?
Higu: Ehh? Me? I went to the Real World.
Hitsu: Why?
Higu: Because Matsumoto-san called me
Hitsugaya interrupted her.
Hitsu: An Espada?
Higu: No, she said that she wanted to show me something.
Hitsu: so, what was it?
Higu: I don’t know, she said that she forgot, but anyway, I wanted to go to the Real World since a long time, finally I could see how it was.
Hitsu: mmm, I see, why didn’t you tell me that you would go to the Real World?
Higu:That’s because… I thought that you were angry with me, so I didn’t tell you
Hitsu: ( Idiot, I was worried about you)
Higu: Eh... Could you tell me why were you angry?
Hitsu: Ehh… That’s because…..
Higu: What??
Hitsu: Nothing, just forget about it
Higu: But…
Hitsu: It’s nothing.
Higu: mmm…. ah!!
Hitsu: What?
Higu: I almost forget about it, Kurosaki-san asked me to tell Inoue-san to come back to the Real World
Hitsu: Kurosaki?
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