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Post Reply {Fanfic} Hitsugaya In Love???
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Posted 3/23/08
Aw...how sweet! Nice fics...
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Posted 3/24/08
So sweeet^^
I knew it, she was the one who sat there xD
Hitsugaya didn't tell her that he was worrying about her? o.O
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Posted 3/24/08
--------------------------- Omg how much are they alike!!!

Excellent story here, keeping the readers interested, lovely to seem some activeness...
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Posted 3/24/08
Oh this is so good I can't put it into words but I can say I WAS TOTALLY AWSOME !!!!
Posted 3/24/08
Discoverying A Feeling (Part III)

Hitsu: Kurosaki?
Higu: mm…, do you know where she is?
Hitsu: Ehh, she’s training with Kuchiki
Higu: could you take me there?
Hitsu: ah, Ok
Both of them leave together to go where Inoue was.
Hitsu: Inoue!
Inoue: Eh? What’s wrong? Who is she?
Higu: I’m Higurashi Yukiko, nice to meet you
Inoue: Nice to meet you, I’m Inoue Orihime, do you need something from me?
Higu: Yes, Kurosaki-san asked to tell you to come back to the Real World
Inoue: Why?
Higu: He said that you don’t have to train anymore. He’ll train with the Vizards and will become stronger. He’ll protect everyone, so you don’t have to worry about it
Inoue: No, I won’t return, I want to help him
Higu: I see, it’s a heart in love, right? You want to be useful to him, so you can be beside him, right?
Inoue: mm….
Hitsugaya was curious about what she said
Higu: Ok, I understand, but don’t overdo it, ok ?
Inoue: eh... Ok
Higu: let’s go, Taichou-sama
Hitsu: you go ahead, I have something to talk with Inoue
Higu: ok
Higurashi left
Inoue: what do you want to talk with me?
Hitsu: That.., I wanted….to ask you…something
Inoue: ahh, what?
Hitsu: can you tell me what do you mean a “heart in love”?
Inoue: ehh? That… it means when a person is in love?
Hitsu: ah? In love?
Inoue: mm… that’s when you want to be with that person all the time, when you’re not with him, you’ll him, worry about him, and when you see that person with another girl, you’ll feel sad (remembering Rukia)
Hitsu: ( she’s like speaking about me. Is it possible that I’m in love ? What an idiot I am!! How can it be, it’s just my imagination ). Ahh, I see, thank you, see ya.

I hope you like it.
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Posted 3/24/08
whoo!! love the smileys XD, continue the story pleasse XD
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Posted 3/25/08
^____^
he just realize he's in love^^
soooooo cute
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Posted 3/28/08
lolz.... now den he found out he is in luv wif higurashi ! ... lolz ... continue the story ! ... the story is so nice man ! luv it lots <333
Posted 3/28/08
Truth

Hitsugaya was going back, and thinking about the relationship that Higurashi and Byakuya have.
Hitsu: ( What relationship do they have? Lovers? Impossible, how can Higurashi, a cute girl… like him. Ehh… what am I saying? Cute? What’s wrong with me? I never use that kind of words, argg..)
One day, when Higurashi was helping Hitsugaya with his job, suddenly Byakuya appeared before them.
Bya: Yukiko, come with me, I have something to talk with you
Hitsu: ( Yukiko?, he called her by her name, what’s the meaning of this?)
Higu: Ok. Taichou-sama, I have to go for a while, I’ll be back soon
Hitsu: mm…
At that moment Hitsugaya was curious about what would they talk about. He followed her silently, and stayed outside watching what were they talking about, but he couldn’t hear anything, because he couldn’t get very close, otherwise they will become aware of his presence.
Hitsugaya got angry when he saw that Higurashi gave him a pair of gloves, because he had thought that he was the only one who had received a gift from her. In that moment, Hitsugaya couldn’t bear anymore. he got out of his hideout and stood before them.
Hitsu: Higurashi…
Higu: what?
Hitsu: I…
Bya: What’re you doing here?
Hitsugaya didn’t say anything and left running.
Higu: Taichou-sama…what’s wrong?
Higurashi chased after him. He continued running until he got to the forest then he stopped.
Higu: Taichou-sama?
Hitsu: Hey, could you tell me what relationship do you have with Byakuya?
Higu: It’s a secret
Hitsu: tell me!!
Higu: A secret makes a woman, woman
Hitsu: ehh? Woman? You’re just a child. Where did you learn that?
Higu: I learned it in the Real World, and don’t call me a child. I’m the same like you, are you saying you’re a child, too?
Hitsu: ehh...That… when will you tell me?
Higu: If you want to know, ask Byakuya-sama if he lets you know about it
Hitsu: Why should I? Tell me, I won’t tell to anybody
Higu: ehh? Why are you so interested?
Hitsu: It’s nothing, I’m curious. If you don’t want to tell me, I’ll discover it by myself
Higu: Ok, if you can, go ahead.
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Posted 3/28/08
i like the smileys!!! please continue!
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Posted 3/29/08
omg! you are so good i'm so stuck i wanna know what happens next !!!!
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Posted 3/29/08
omg, this is sooooo nice^^
Please continue writing xD
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Posted 3/29/08
continue please this fanfic is awsome come on please
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Posted 3/29/08
if you guys want fanfiction, then go on www.fanfiction.com

fantasy, your stories are pretty good
but it's kinda weird with just dialogue... it sorta seems like a play
maybe make it into a story rather than a conversation?

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Posted 3/29/08

xoxmangoxox wrote:

if you guys want fanfiction, then go on www.fanfiction.com

fantasy, your stories are pretty good
but it's kinda weird with just dialogue... it sorta seems like a play
maybe make it into a story rather than a conversation?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4161868/1/I_Live_In_Heaven <insert shamless advertising> read my friends amazing hitsuxkarin xD<end shameless advertising>


Thanks for your opinion, actually I'm not that kind of person who likes to read long, long stories, that's why I prefered to write a short story with just conversation, it makes the story easier to read and understand, and not boring at all. Besides that I'm not very good at writing, so I think if I write a long story like a novel it will confuse people and won't understand what I'm writing. Maybe you're that kind of person who likes to read a lot, anyway I respect your opinion.
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